Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AlcoholHic: [[spoiler:Twilight and Cadance]] in chapter 42.
Added DiffLines:
* CantHoldHisLiquor: [[spoiler:Twilight]] and Peter, both.
Added DiffLines:
* HardDrinkingPartyGirl: [[spoiler:Cadance]] is one, apparently.
Added DiffLines:
* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: [spoiler:Shining]] to Peter.
Added DiffLines:
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Shining Armor in chapter 42.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 83 (click to see context) from:
** Also, the SugarBowl land of Equestria is a very nice change of setting from Peter's [[Franchise/MarvelUniverse home]] [[CrapsackWorld world]].
to:
** Also, the SugarBowl land of Equestria is a very nice change of setting from Peter's for Peter, considering how his [[Franchise/MarvelUniverse home]] [[CrapsackWorld world]].world]] tends to be.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* FightingYourFriend: Occassionaly, Peter will spar with Rainbow Dash. There's also the time he have a duel with [[spoiler:Princess Celestia and Luna]].
Added DiffLines:
* FriendToAllChildren
Added DiffLines:
* JustInTime
Added DiffLines:
* LeParkour: Since the buildings in Ponyville tend to be only two stores high, this is Spider-Mane's main form to move around.
Added DiffLines:
* LightheartedRematch: In chapter 41, between Peter and [[spoiler:Spitfire]].
Added DiffLines:
* PunchedAcrossTheRoom
Added DiffLines:
* RapidfireFisticuffs: Used by Spidey to break [[spoiler:Celestia's glaive]] during their fight.
Added DiffLines:
* SicEm: Chapter 30.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 77 (click to see context) from:
* LetsGetDangerous: While Equestria citizens greatly admired Spider-Mane, they were not aware of his full power until his seemingly hopeless [[spoiler:duel with the Princess of the moon and the sun]]. [[SarcasmMode Hopeless, indeed]].
to:
* LetsGetDangerous: While Equestria citizens greatly admired admire Spider-Mane, they were not won't become aware of his full power until his seemingly hopeless [[spoiler:duel with the Princess Princesses of the moon and the sun]]. [[SarcasmMode Hopeless, indeed]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* BlindedByTheLight: When Spider-Mane uses miniature crystal hearts to blind [[spoiler:King Sombra]].
Added DiffLines:
* CharacterDevelopment: Peter, particularly. While he is still prompt to moments of self-loathing and doubt, he has come a long way from the BrokenHero that we are all familiar with.
Added DiffLines:
* LadyAndKnight: [[spoiler:Twilight and Peter]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* GreenEyedMonster: [[spoiler:Blueblood]] is quite jealous of the attention Peter receives from mares, namely the Mane Six.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* JerkAss: [[spoiler:Prince Blueblood]].
** Also, [[spoiler:Trixie]], at first.
* [[spoiler:KnightIng: Peter Pony Parker, personal knight of Princess Twilight Sparkle]].
** Also, [[spoiler:Trixie]], at first.
* [[spoiler:KnightIng: Peter Pony Parker, personal knight of Princess Twilight Sparkle]].
Added DiffLines:
* RagsToRoyalty: [[spoiler:When Peter is made into a knight, he also receives the title of prince]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: [[spoiler: Prince]] Peter Pony Parker
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 8 (click to see context) from:
* AGodAmI
to:
* AGodAmIAGodAmI: [[spoiler:NormanOsborn]], after his transformation.
* AllLovingHero: Spidey. And everypony loves him too.
Changed line(s) 40 (click to see context) from:
* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler:Discord]] seemed to be quite disturbed after hearing that [[spoiler:the [[NormanOsborn Green Goblin]]]] wouldn't think twice about blowing up innocent bystanders.
to:
* EurekaMoment: [[spoiler:When Lyra deduces that Peter Parker and Spider Mane are one in the same]].
* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler:Discord]] seemed to be quite disturbed after hearing that [[spoiler:the[[NormanOsborn Green Goblin]]]] Goblin]] wouldn't think twice about blowing up innocent bystanders.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler:Discord]] seemed to be quite disturbed after hearing that [[spoiler:the
Added DiffLines:
* FishOutOfWater
Added DiffLines:
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: [[spoiler:Trixie]], as shown when she starts to open up to others.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added line(s) 9 (click to see context) :
* AGodAmI
Changed line(s) 9 (click to see context) from:
* AlternateContinuity: The Spider-Man of this fanfic seems to have elements from both, the mainstream Marvel universe, and the Ultimate universe, as well as some elements from the films.
to:
* AlternateContinuity: The Spider-Man of this fanfic seems to have elements from both, the mainstream Marvel universe, and the Ultimate universe, as well as some elements from the films. It is also an alternate continuation of MLP Season 3, since it takes place after Sombra's first defeat in the Crystal Empire.
Added DiffLines:
* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: [[spoiler:Norman Osborn]].
--> [[spoiler:'''Osborn''': It is God's will that I kill Peter Parker, and whose will is above mine now?]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Osborn''': It is God's will that I kill Peter Parker, and whose will is above mine now?]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* DarkAndTroubledPast
Added DiffLines:
* SecurityCling: Happens quite a lot.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 24 (click to see context) from:
* ComfortingComforter:
to:
* ComfortingComforter: ComfortingComforter
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AnOddPlaceToSleep: Twilight mentions that she once found Peter sleeping on the ceiling of her house...
** ... And that Pinkie Pie had managed to duct herself to the ceiling, next to him.
** ... And that Pinkie Pie had managed to duct herself to the ceiling, next to him.
Added DiffLines:
* AsleepForDays: Peter, after [[spoiler:the accident in the Manehattan race]].
Added DiffLines:
* ComfortingComforter:
Added DiffLines:
* ExhaustedEyeBags
Added DiffLines:
* [[spoiler:FailuretoSaveMurder]]
Added DiffLines:
* [[HoldingHands Holding Hooves]]
Added DiffLines:
* NotAMorningPerson: Peter, much to Twilight's annoyance.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Happens a few times:
** In chapter 4, when Peter [[spoiler: knocks out a dragon with one kick]].
** His fight against [[spoiler: King Sombra]] in chapter 30.
** Also, defeating [[spoiler: the two ruling princesses of Equestria]] causes this reaction on the ponies.
** In chapter 4, when Peter [[spoiler: knocks out a dragon with one kick]].
** His fight against [[spoiler: King Sombra]] in chapter 30.
** Also, defeating [[spoiler: the two ruling princesses of Equestria]] causes this reaction on the ponies.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* HeroicWillpower: It should be obvious by now.
* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Peter's career as a hero, [[spoiler:as shown to the ponies via his flashbacks]].
Changed line(s) 49 (click to see context) from:
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]]. They don't actually get inside of his head, but rather, they just take look at his memories.
to:
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]]. They don't actually get inside of his head, but [[spoiler:but rather, they just take look at his memories.memories]].
Changed line(s) 57 (click to see context) from:
* MentalPictureProjector: Used by the ponies to look into Spidey's memories.
to:
* MentalPictureProjector: Used by the ponies to [[spoiler:to look into Spidey's memories.memories]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 15 (click to see context) from:
* BigBrotherMentor: Peter for the Cutie Mark Crusaders.
to:
* BigBrotherMentor: Peter for the [[spoiler:the Cutie Mark Crusaders.Crusaders]].
* LetsGetDangerous: While Equestria citizens greatly admired Spider-Mane, they were not aware of his full power until his seemingly hopeless [[spoiler:duel with the Princess of the moon and the sun]]. [[SarcasmMode Hopeless, indeed]].
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler:King Sombra]].
Changed line(s) 75 (click to see context) from:
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: The ponies often remind Peter of this, when he's in one of his HeroicSelfDeprecation moments.
to:
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: The ponies often remind Peter of this, when he's in one of his HeroicSelfDeprecation moments.moments.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:Osborn]]'s declaration to the Sinister Six after he starts absorbing [[spoiler:Discord]]'s powers.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:Osborn]]'s declaration to the Sinister Six after he starts absorbing [[spoiler:Discord]]'s powers.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* HowDoIShotWeb: Peter, while trying to learn uicorn magic.
Added DiffLines:
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]]. They don't actually get inside of his head, but rather, they just take look at his memories.
Added DiffLines:
* MentalPictureProjector: Used by the ponies to look into Spidey's memories.
Added DiffLines:
* SpitTake: Peter makes use of this trope in chapter 35, due to a comment from Twilight's mother.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AngerBornOfWorry: Twilight is quite prompt to do this.
Added DiffLines:
* HumbleHero
Added DiffLines:
* MagicIsMental
Added DiffLines:
* PsychosomaticSuperpowerOutage: Peter starts losing his powers after getting to Equestria, due [[spoiler:to him not having a Cutie Mark]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 52 (click to see context) from:
* PairtheSmartOnes: Peter and Twilight. The nerd and the dork, the chemist and the bookworm, etc.
to:
* PairtheSmartOnes: PairTheSmartOnes: Peter and Twilight. The nerd and the dork, the chemist and the bookworm, etc.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* GuiltComplex: Peter, and, as always, taking it to ludicrous levels.
Added DiffLines:
* HeartbrokenBadass
Added DiffLines:
* PairtheSmartOnes: Peter and Twilight. The nerd and the dork, the chemist and the bookworm, etc.
Added DiffLines:
* TalentedPrincessRegularGuy: This is how Peter feels about his relationship with Twilight during chapter 31.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 8 (click to see context) from:
* AlienAmongUs: Been a human in the guise of a pony, Spidey gets to learn a lot from Equestria and it's society.
to:
* AlienAmongUs: Been Being a human in the guise of a pony, Spidey gets to learn a lot from Equestria and it's society.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 52 (click to see context) from:
* ShipperOnDeck: Applejack and Cadence for PetexTwilight.
to:
* ShipperOnDeck: Applejack and Cadence for PetexTwilight.Peter x Twilight.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 51 (click to see context) from:
* SecondLove: Twilight, especially since WordOfGod states that she serves as the Mary-Jane of this story (except that Twilight is more capable of defending herself).
to:
* SecondLove: Twilight, especially since WordOfGod states that she serves as the Mary-Jane of this story (except that Twilight is more capable of defending herself). Funnily enough, Applejack, who has had the least ShipTease with Spidey (aside from Pinkie Pie), reminds him of Gwen.
* ShipperOnDeck: Applejack and Cadence for PetexTwilight.
* ShipperOnDeck: Applejack and Cadence for PetexTwilight.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* ButtMonkey: Lyra, in her everlasting quest to prove Peter a human.
* CassandraTruth: Lyra, as per fanon, is obsessed with humans. She saw Peter in his human form on the first day, but nobody believes that he's a human. Still applies even AFTER Spidey becomes a pony.
* TheChewToy: Peter. Constantly curses his 'Parker Luck' for every insane shenanigan he suffers.
* CassandraTruth: Lyra, as per fanon, is obsessed with humans. She saw Peter in his human form on the first day, but nobody believes that he's a human. Still applies even AFTER Spidey becomes a pony.
* TheChewToy: Peter. Constantly curses his 'Parker Luck' for every insane shenanigan he suffers.
Changed line(s) 20 (click to see context) from:
* DefrostingIceQueen: There is a non-romantic example, with Peter trying to win [[spoiler:Princess Luna's]] trust, and even teaching her to loosen up a little in the process.
to:
* DefrostingIceQueen: There is a non-romantic example, with Peter trying to win [[spoiler:Princess Luna's]] trust, and even teaching her to loosen up a little in the process. The non-romantic part [[ShipTease starts to get a little iffy]] after he succeeds, especially in chapter 35.
Changed line(s) 28 (click to see context) from:
* FantasticArousal: Pegasi ponies.
to:
* FantasticArousal: Pegasi ponies. ponies[[spoiler: and alicorns.]]
Changed line(s) 36 (click to see context) from:
** To be fair, [[spoiler:she]] uses magic to weild it and fight with it.
to:
** To be fair, [[spoiler:she]] uses magic to weild wield it and fight with it.
* InterspeciesRomance: Played with, as Spidey becomes a pony. Understandably, he still freaks out over it, [[spoiler:especially after he hooks up with Twilight.]]
Changed line(s) 48 (click to see context) from:
* ShoutOut: Peter does this quite a few times, much to the confusion (and in Twilight's case annoyance) of Equestria's denizens, since they can't get any of the references.
to:
* ShoutOut: Peter does this quite a few times, much to the confusion (and in Twilight's case annoyance) of Equestria's denizens, since they can't get any of the references. True to his usual style, he continues LONG after Twilight voices her displeasure... or because of it.
Added DiffLines:
** As of chapter 34, [[spoiler: Twilight joins in, even lampshading that she understands how Fluttershy feels.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 9 (click to see context) from:
* AlternateContinuity: The Spider-Man of this fanfic seems to have elements from both, the mainstream Marvel universe, and the Ultimate universe, in his character history, as well as some elements from the films.
to:
* AlternateContinuity: The Spider-Man of this fanfic seems to have elements from both, the mainstream Marvel universe, and the Ultimate universe, in his character history, as well as some elements from the films.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 9 (click to see context) from:
* AlternateContinuity: The Spider-Man of this fanfic seems to have elements from both, the mainstream Marvel universe, and the Ultimate universe, in his character history.
to:
* AlternateContinuity: The Spider-Man of this fanfic seems to have elements from both, the mainstream Marvel universe, and the Ultimate universe, in his character history.history, as well as some elements from the films.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 10 (click to see context) from:
* AmazinglyEmbarrasingParents: Twilight's mother, Velvet, shows signs of this in chapter 35.
to:
* AmazinglyEmbarrasingParents: AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents: Twilight's mother, Velvet, shows signs of this in chapter 35.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* AlternateContinuity: The Spider-Man of this fanfic seems to have elements from both, the mainstream Marvel universe, and the Ultimate universe, in his character history.
* AmazinglyEmbarrasingParents: Twilight's mother, Velvet, shows signs of this in chapter 35.
* AmazinglyEmbarrasingParents: Twilight's mother, Velvet, shows signs of this in chapter 35.
* BeQuietNudge
Changed line(s) 16 (click to see context) from:
* DarkerAndEdgier: When compared with MLP, although, for the most part, it's a pretty soft story.
to:
* DarkerAndEdgier: When Obviously, when compared with MLP, although, for MLP:FIM, especially since it incorporates some elements from the Ultimate Marvel universe (which loves this trope). For the most part, however, it's a pretty soft story.
** And Lyra, and [[spoiler:her obsession with proving that Spider-Mane is a human.]]
Changed line(s) 24 (click to see context) from:
* FantasticArousal: Pegasi ponies.
to:
* FantasticArousal: Pegasi ponies.
* ImplausibleFencingPowers: Apparently, [[spoiler:Celestia]] has a sword of [[spoiler:her]] own, and is ridiculously proficient with it.
** To be fair, [[spoiler:she]] uses magic to weild it and fight with it.
** To be fair, [[spoiler:she]] uses magic to weild it and fight with it.
Changed line(s) 41 (click to see context) from:
* ShoutOut: Peter does this a few times, much to the confusion (and in Twilight's case annoyance) of Equestria's denizens, since they can't get any of the references.
to:
* SecondLove: Twilight, especially since WordOfGod states that she serves as the Mary-Jane of this story (except that Twilight is more capable of defending herself).
* ShoutOut: Peter does this quite a few times, much to the confusion (and in Twilight's case annoyance) of Equestria's denizens, since they can't get any of the references.
* ShoutOut: Peter does this quite a few times, much to the confusion (and in Twilight's case annoyance) of Equestria's denizens, since they can't get any of the references.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AnythingYouCanDoICanDoBetter: Rainbow Dash, while trying to prove herself as a better hero than Spider-Mane in chapter 4. [[spoiler:Or so she believes...]]
Added DiffLines:
* EmbarrassingNickname: Peter likes to call Rainbow after a certain candy...
Added DiffLines:
* ShoutOut: Peter does this a few times, much to the confusion (and in Twilight's case annoyance) of Equestria's denizens, since they can't get any of the references.
