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%%* TheHero: Rudy.
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* BreakTheCutie: Mr. Cosmo does this to both Rudy and Snap. With Snap, he tortures the poor guy both physically and mentally until he is a hollow shell of his former self. He does this to hurt Rudy where it hurts the most so he could more easily manipulate the boy into joining him. This actually does work, and if it had not been for [[spoiler: Mr. Wilter's rescue]], Mr. Cosmo would have won.
** He manages to break Snap in one scene. He straps Snap down, cuts his head open, and drops ''real world water'' on his head to dissolve it, and then forces a nail into the open wound. It's just as horrible as it sounds.
** He manages to break Snap in one scene. He straps Snap down, cuts his head open, and drops ''real world water'' on his head to dissolve it, and then forces a nail into the open wound. It's just as horrible as it sounds.
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* AffablyEvil: Mr. Cosmo. He is generally polite and well-mannered throughout much of the story. Although it can cross into FauxAffablyEvil.
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* BerserkButton: [[spoiler: After seeing what Mr. Cosmo had done to Ms. Saffron and why]], Snap loses control of himself and, in a fit of rage, attacks the man. He causes them both to fall off the cliff, which in turn causes Mr. Cosmo to lose his left eye.
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* BerserkButton: BerserkButton:
** [[spoiler: After seeing what Mr. Cosmo had done to Ms. Saffron and why]], Snap loses control of himself and, in a fit of rage, attacks the man. He causes them both to fall off the cliff, which in turn causes Mr. Cosmo to lose his left eye.
** [[spoiler: After seeing what Mr. Cosmo had done to Ms. Saffron and why]], Snap loses control of himself and, in a fit of rage, attacks the man. He causes them both to fall off the cliff, which in turn causes Mr. Cosmo to lose his left eye.
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* BigBad: Mr. Cosmo.
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* [[spoiler: CharacterDeath: Ms. Saffron and Mr. Cosmo.]]
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* CliffHanger: Several of the story's chapters end with these.
* CorruptTheCutie: This is what Mr. Cosmo has been trying to do to Rudy throughout the story.
* [[spoiler: TheCorruption: Rudy experiences this when he grabs the black chalk. The experience is icy cold and sharp, as every bit as unpleasant as its side effect, which is permanent corruption if in use for too long. During the corruption, Rudy hears eerie voices from everywhere who tempt him to use the black chalk in disturbing ways. While Rudy is at first able to resist, his will rapidly weakens and the black chalk takes him over. Thankfully, Skrawl knocks the chalk out of his hand before it was too late.]]
* CorruptTheCutie: This is what Mr. Cosmo has been trying to do to Rudy throughout the story.
* [[spoiler: TheCorruption: Rudy experiences this when he grabs the black chalk. The experience is icy cold and sharp, as every bit as unpleasant as its side effect, which is permanent corruption if in use for too long. During the corruption, Rudy hears eerie voices from everywhere who tempt him to use the black chalk in disturbing ways. While Rudy is at first able to resist, his will rapidly weakens and the black chalk takes him over. Thankfully, Skrawl knocks the chalk out of his hand before it was too late.]]
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* {{Determinator}}: Rudy.
* TheDragon: Draow.
* TheDragon: Draow.
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* [[spoiler: EvilSoundsDeep: Draow.]]
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* [[spoiler: FallenHero: Mr. Cosmo had once been a lot like Rudy until he encountered the black chalk.]]
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* [[spoiler: FallenHero: Mr.[[spoiler:Mr. Cosmo had once been a lot like Rudy until he encountered the black chalk.]]
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* TheHero: Rudy.
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* LackOfEmpathy: Mr. Cosmo. On oh so ''many'' levels.
* [[spoiler: LaserGuidedAmnesia: In order to stop Mr. Cosmo's reign of terror from when he was a child, he was given amnesia and kicked out of [=ChalkZone=]. Unfortunately, thanks to a photograph of Snap and the black chalk, Mr. Cosmo regained his memories.]]
* [[spoiler: LaserGuidedAmnesia: In order to stop Mr. Cosmo's reign of terror from when he was a child, he was given amnesia and kicked out of [=ChalkZone=]. Unfortunately, thanks to a photograph of Snap and the black chalk, Mr. Cosmo regained his memories.]]
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* [[spoiler: NeckSnap: Just out of spite, Mr. Cosmo does this to Ms. Saffron after she was ''already'' dead.]]
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* [[spoiler: NeckSnap: Just [[spoiler:Just out of spite, Mr. Cosmo does this to snaps Ms. Saffron Saffron's neck after she was ''already'' dead.]]
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* [[spoiler: SacrificialLion: Ms. Saffron.]]
* {{Sadist}}: Mr. Cosmo.
* {{Sadist}}: Mr. Cosmo.
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** [[spoiler: '''Rudy''': Shut up! How stupid do you think I am, Mr. Cosmo?! All your lies...why should I believe anything you say?! You're wrong about everything you've said! This isn't my fault! It isn't Snap's fault! And while I'm at it, it's not Ms. Saffron's fault! It's all you! It's always been you! You are the one who decided to invade [=ChalkZone=] and kidnap zoners! You are the one who put me and others through so much pain! You are the one who killed Ms. Saffron for no good reason, and you are the one who tortured my best friend! And now he is laying on his deathbed! And it is all...because...of you! You are the only one at fault here! So don't you ever...ever trash talk my friends again!]]
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** [[spoiler: '''Rudy''': Shut up! How stupid do you think I am, Mr. Cosmo?! All your lies...why should I believe anything you say?! You're wrong about everything you've said! This isn't my fault! It isn't Snap's fault! And while I'm at it, it's not Ms. Saffron's fault! It's all you! It's always been you! You are the one who decided to invade [=ChalkZone=] and kidnap zoners! You are the one who put me and others through so much pain! You are the one who killed Ms. Saffron for no good reason, and you are the one who tortured my best friend! And now he is laying on his deathbed! And it is all...because...of you! You are the only one at fault here! So don't you ever...ever trash talk my friends again!]]again!
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* [[spoiler: TheseHandsHaveKilled: Rudy is utterly horrified when he finds out that, while under the black chalk's control, he had taken the life of three zoners.]]
* [[spoiler: TheyDiedBecauseOfYou: When Mr. Cosmo reveals that Ms. Saffron is dead, he plays the blame game on Snap. He blatantly tells Snap that it was his fault that Ms. Saffron had died.]]
* [[spoiler: TheyDiedBecauseOfYou: When Mr. Cosmo reveals that Ms. Saffron is dead, he plays the blame game on Snap. He blatantly tells Snap that it was his fault that Ms. Saffron had died.]]
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* [[spoiler: TheseHandsHaveKilled: Rudy [[spoiler:Rudy is utterly horrified when he finds out that, while under the black chalk's control, he had taken the life of three zoners.]]
*[[spoiler: TheyDiedBecauseOfYou: When [[spoiler:When Mr. Cosmo reveals that Ms. Saffron is dead, he plays the blame game on Snap. He blatantly tells Snap that it was his fault that Ms. Saffron had died.]]
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* [[spoiler: YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: After Ms. Saffron's betrayal, Mr. Cosmo kills her off. He has some regret in doing so, but the only reason is because he is disappointed she couldn't have been more useful to him.]]
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* [[spoiler: YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: After Ms. Saffron's betrayal, Mr. Cosmo kills her off. He has some regret in doing so, but the only reason is because he is disappointed she couldn't have been more useful to him.]]
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** It's worse involving Snap. Not only does he have the body shape and size of an 8 year old, but, chronologically, he's even younger, only 7. Despite this, Mr. Cosmo has no problem with torturing him within an inch of his life.
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** It's worse involving Snap. Not only does he Snap have the body shape and size of an 8 year old, but, chronologically, he's even younger, only 7. Despite this, Mr. Cosmo has no problem with torturing him within an inch of his life.
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''Sinful Behaviors'' is a dark ''WesternAnimation/ChalkZone'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/57985/DarkHououmon DarkHououmon]]. The story can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9683968/1/Sinful-Behaviors here]].
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''Sinful Behaviors'' is a dark ''WesternAnimation/ChalkZone'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/57985/DarkHououmon DarkHououmon]].Creator/{{DarkHououmon}}. The story can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9683968/1/Sinful-Behaviors here]].
