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** Contessa filling in Cauldron about Captain Snow's knowledge of Cauldron and Scion, and her plans to avert Hero's death.
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** Contessa filling in Cauldron about Captain Snow's knowledge of Cauldron and Scion, Scion[[note]]Doctor Mother is ''not'' thrilled to hear about this.[[/note]], and her plans to avert Hero's death.[[note]]Unsurprisingly, Hero is ''totally in favour'' of this.[[/note]]
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* InternalReveal: There are several during the course of the narrative.
** Taylor to her friends:
*** Her status as a time traveller.
*** Her technically being Danny and Anne-Rose's daughter.
*** Behemoth's emergence, and her intentions concerning him.
** Informing Aster about Scion.
** Aster informing Contessa about Behemoth and the other Endbringers.
** Contessa filling in Cauldron about Captain Snow's knowledge of Cauldron and Scion, and her plans to avert Hero's death.
** Taylor to her friends:
*** Her status as a time traveller.
*** Her technically being Danny and Anne-Rose's daughter.
*** Behemoth's emergence, and her intentions concerning him.
** Informing Aster about Scion.
** Aster informing Contessa about Behemoth and the other Endbringers.
** Contessa filling in Cauldron about Captain Snow's knowledge of Cauldron and Scion, and her plans to avert Hero's death.
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* DeathByAdaptation:
** Basically ''everyone'' who attended the New Delhi fight in the original timeline, plus all the capes in Brockton Bay.
** Nice Guy, of the Slaughterhouse Nine (shot by Lisa).
** Winter, of the same team (given a lethal dose of poison by Taylor).
** Heartbreaker (shot by Gladys).
** Mama Mathers and Valefor (shot by Kinsey and Taylor respectively).
** Eidolon (manipulated into suicide via Behemoth, by Taylor).
** Sophia Hess (will ''never be born'' due to Taylor's manipulations).
** Basically ''everyone'' who attended the New Delhi fight in the original timeline, plus all the capes in Brockton Bay.
** Nice Guy, of the Slaughterhouse Nine (shot by Lisa).
** Winter, of the same team (given a lethal dose of poison by Taylor).
** Heartbreaker (shot by Gladys).
** Mama Mathers and Valefor (shot by Kinsey and Taylor respectively).
** Eidolon (manipulated into suicide via Behemoth, by Taylor).
** Sophia Hess (will ''never be born'' due to Taylor's manipulations).
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** Mrs Knott from canon is first introduced to Taylor as 'Gladys Harvey'.
** Greg Veder's parents are given the names Nina and Greg.
** Ms Blackwell is given the first name Carrie.
** Danny's parents are given the names George and Dorothy.
** Crawler (canonically named Ned) is given the surname Hollows.
** Mrs Knott from canon is first introduced to Taylor as 'Gladys Harvey'.
** Greg Veder's parents are given the names Nina and Greg.
** Ms Blackwell is given the first name Carrie.
** Danny's parents are given the names George and Dorothy.
** Crawler (canonically named Ned) is given the surname Hollows.
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--> '''Taylor:''' Shit. Andrea's gonna kill me, isn't she?\\
'''Lisa:''' [Laughing and holding two fingers close together] Little bit.
'''Lisa:''' [Laughing and holding two fingers close together] Little bit.
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It's notable that Kinsey [[spoiler:stands by calmly during the whole diatribe]] and even [[spoiler:takes Andrea's side]] later in the conversation.
And then, [[DramaticIrony not fifteen minutes later]], [[spoiler:Taylor gets alerted to another problem she has to go deal with]].
And then, [[DramaticIrony not fifteen minutes later]], [[spoiler:Taylor gets alerted to another problem she has to go deal with]].
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It's notable that Kinsey [[spoiler:stands by calmly during the whole diatribe]] diatribe]], and even [[spoiler:takes Andrea's side]] later in the conversation.
And then,conversation. Of course, [[DramaticIrony not fifteen minutes later]], [[spoiler:Taylor gets alerted to another problem she has to go deal with]].
And then,
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--> '''Andrea:''' You listen to me, Taylor Snow. You getting hurt even ''once'' is once too often. The Brotherhood of the Fallen damn near ''killed'' you, and that monster in Seattle would have if Kinsey hadn't been there. And that's not even counting that damn Mathers woman in Chicago, the idiots in that gas station, that thing with Marquis, and …
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--> '''Andrea:''' You listen to me, Taylor Snow. You getting hurt even ''once'' is once too often. The Brotherhood of the Fallen damn near ''killed'' you, and that monster in Seattle would ''would'' have if Kinsey hadn't been there. And that's not even counting that damn Mathers woman in Chicago, the idiots in that gas station, that thing with Marquis, and …
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* AngerBornOfWorry: Andrea yells at Taylor because of this.
--> '''Andrea:''' You listen to me, Taylor Snow. You getting hurt even ''once'' is once too often. The Brotherhood of the Fallen damn near ''killed'' you, and that monster in Seattle would have if Kinsey hadn't been there. And that's not even counting that damn Mathers woman in Chicago, the idiots in that gas station, that thing with Marquis, and …
It's notable that Kinsey [[spoiler:stands by calmly during the whole diatribe]] and even [[spoiler:takes Andrea's side]] later in the conversation.
And then, [[DramaticIrony not fifteen minutes later]], [[spoiler:Taylor gets alerted to another problem she has to go deal with]].
--> '''Andrea:''' You listen to me, Taylor Snow. You getting hurt even ''once'' is once too often. The Brotherhood of the Fallen damn near ''killed'' you, and that monster in Seattle would have if Kinsey hadn't been there. And that's not even counting that damn Mathers woman in Chicago, the idiots in that gas station, that thing with Marquis, and …
It's notable that Kinsey [[spoiler:stands by calmly during the whole diatribe]] and even [[spoiler:takes Andrea's side]] later in the conversation.
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* MortonsFork: When Taylor is needed to help [[spoiler:extract PASS from Colombia]], she gives Kinsey a choice: to either stay in Brockton Bay and cover for her, or to come with and ''forget anything he sees''. [[spoiler:He takes the latter option]].
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* CasualDangerDialogue: Ned 'Crag' Hollows and Joanne 'Jazz' Sanderson have a little of this in the rescue scene. Somewhat [[JustifiedTrope justified]] due to the fact that she's [[ImmuneToBullets bulletproof]] and he just did a DeathFromAbove move that took out three of the opposition.
--> '''Crag:''' Hey, Jazz! Learn to share, will you?" [Grabs two men by their arms and swings them around in a circle, hurling them at their comrades]\\
--> '''Crag:''' Hey, Jazz! Learn to share, will you?" [Grabs two men by their arms and swings them around in a circle, hurling them at their comrades]\\
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* CasualDangerDialogue: Ned 'Crag' Hollows and Joanne 'Jazz' Sanderson have a little of this in the rescue scene. Somewhat [[JustifiedTrope justified]] due to the fact that she's [[ImmuneToBullets bulletproof]] and he just did a DeathFromAbove move that took out three of the opposition.
opposition. Oh, and they're both [[SuperStrength super-strong]].
--> '''Crag:''' Hey, Jazz! Learn to share, willyou?" you? [Grabs two men by their arms and swings them around in a circle, hurling them at their comrades]\\
--> '''Crag:''' Hey, Jazz! Learn to share, will
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* CasualDangerDialogue: Ned 'Crag' Hollows and Joanne 'Jazz' Sanderson have a little of this in the rescue scene. Somewhat [[JustifiedTrope justified]] due to the fact that she's [[ImmuneToBullets bulletproof]] and he just did a DeathFromAbove move that took out three of the opposition.
--> '''Crag:''' Hey, Jazz! Learn to share, will you?" [Grabs two men by their arms and swings them around in a circle, hurling them at their comrades]\\
'''Jazz:''' Hey, I brought enough for everyone! [Grabs another one and sends him flying into the trees]\\
'''Crag:''' Good! [Hooks a thumb back toward the clearing] Go. We got this.
--> '''Crag:''' Hey, Jazz! Learn to share, will you?" [Grabs two men by their arms and swings them around in a circle, hurling them at their comrades]\\
'''Jazz:''' Hey, I brought enough for everyone! [Grabs another one and sends him flying into the trees]\\
'''Crag:''' Good! [Hooks a thumb back toward the clearing] Go. We got this.
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*** However, since Eidolon [[HeroicSacrifice bit it]], the name now fits.
* GondorCallsForAid: Joanna's belated satphone call to Taylor.
* GondorCallsForAid: Joanna's belated satphone call to Taylor.
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* JustInTime: Things are looking pretty dire for PASS and their rescuees, until [[TheCavalry high-tech tilt-rotors]] literally swoop in and disgorge [[GunshipRescue a bunch of gun-buggies]] driven by [[HiredGuns Andrea's mercenaries]].
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* ConvenientlyUnverifiableCoverStory: Phir SÄ“ drops Taylor in the ocean right in the middle of a boating accident where two yachts sank with no survivors. With a hasty claim of amnesia, it's assumed she was the only survivor of one of them.
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* ConvenientlyUnverifiableCoverStory: Phir SÄ“ drops Taylor in the ocean right in the middle of a boating accident where two a bunch of yachts sank with no survivors. With a hasty claim of amnesia, it's assumed she was the only survivor of one of them.
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* MyOwnGrampa: Some readers were worried that Taylor meeting her alt-father would spark this trope. [[WordOfGod Nope. Just nope]].
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** Sergeant [[KinseyScaleOfTropes Kinsey's]] name was deliberately chosen as a reference to the different ranges of sexual preference in the story.
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** Sergeant [[KinseyScaleOfTropes [[JustForFun/KinseyScaleOfTropes Kinsey's]] name was deliberately chosen as a reference to the different ranges of sexual preference in the story.
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* MyOwnGrampa: Some readers were worried that Taylor meeting her alt-father would spark this trope. Nope. Just nope.
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* MyOwnGrampa: Some readers were worried that Taylor meeting her alt-father would spark this trope. [[WordOfGod Nope. Just nope.nope]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10286919/1/Recoil Recoil]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Ack (also known for ''FanFic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'' and ''FanFic/SecurityWorm''). It has discussion pages at ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/recoil.299321/ SpaceBattles]]'' and ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/recoil.3805/ Sufficient Velocity]]''.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10286919/1/Recoil Recoil]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Ack Tropers/{{ack1308}} (also known for ''FanFic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'' and ''FanFic/SecurityWorm''). It has discussion pages at ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/recoil.299321/ SpaceBattles]]'' and ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/recoil.3805/ Sufficient Velocity]]''.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Marquis WouldNotHitAGirl. But [[spoiler:abducting and harming a male comrade to use as leverage]]? Perfectly fine in his book.
* MagicFeather: [[spoiler:The tapes Taylor use to put herself into the state needed to contact Lisa aren't actually needed.]]
* MagicFeather: [[spoiler:The tapes Taylor use to put herself into the state needed to contact Lisa aren't actually needed.]]
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* LoopholeAbuse: LoopholeAbuse:
** Marquis WouldNotHitAGirl. But [[spoiler:abducting and harming a male comrade to use as leverage]]? Perfectly fine in his book.
** Kinsey [[spoiler:has been using self-hypnosis to condition himself to kill anyone who tries to make him hurt Taylor. When he falls under Valefor's power, Mama Mathers announces her intent to have him do just that -- without realising that there was any need to specifically tell Kinsey not to kill herself.]]
* MagicFeather: [[spoiler:The tapes Tayloruse uses to put herself into the state needed to contact Lisa aren't actually needed.needed after the first few times.]]
** Marquis WouldNotHitAGirl. But [[spoiler:abducting and harming a male comrade to use as leverage]]? Perfectly fine in his book.
** Kinsey [[spoiler:has been using self-hypnosis to condition himself to kill anyone who tries to make him hurt Taylor. When he falls under Valefor's power, Mama Mathers announces her intent to have him do just that -- without realising that there was any need to specifically tell Kinsey not to kill herself.]]
* MagicFeather: [[spoiler:The tapes Taylor
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* AboveTheInfluence: Taylor gets smashed and Kinsey has to help her to bed where she admits she's lonely and needs comforting. Kinsey gently stops her from kissing him and lulls her to sleep.
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* AboveTheInfluence: Taylor gets smashed and Kinsey has to help her to bed bed, where she admits she's lonely and needs comforting. Kinsey gently stops her from kissing him and lulls her to sleep. (Then has a very cold shower.)
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** Taylor's attempt to stop Ned being wrongfully sentenced and triggering in jail leads to him encountering Night Terror and triggering as a result.
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** Taylor's attempt to stop Ned being wrongfully sentenced and triggering in jail leads to him encountering Night Terror and triggering as a result. [[spoiler:But with the PRT on the scene immediately, and no jail sentence, he's quickly set on a less villainous path.]]
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* LoopholeAbuse: Marquis WouldNotHitAGirl. But [[spoiler:abducting and harming a male comrade to use as leverage?]] Perfectly fine in his book.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Marquis WouldNotHitAGirl. But [[spoiler:abducting and harming a male comrade to use as leverage?]] leverage]]? Perfectly fine in his book.
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* GrandfatherParadox: Taylor does her best to ensure that her parents still meet and get together, despite her presence disrupting things. [[spoiler:She's thrown for a loop when her birth date arrives only to learn they had a ''son'' named Tyler]].
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* PitySex: Captain Gordon prefers more attractive women but mentally justifies trying to bed Taylor as a show of pity to "help" her self-image.
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* ButtMonkey: Gordon suffers one humiliation after another due to his vendetta against Taylor, going from a senior intelligence agent to [[spoiler:working at a fast food restaurant with a teenager boss]].
* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Gordon believes Taylor has absolutely no business being in the intelligence division, let alone having so much sway with the wider PRT, chalking her accomplishments up to luck and favoritism. He immediately trusts [[spoiler:Mama Mathers]] and refuses to hear anything bad about her, and he instantly jumps on a job offer from [[spoiler:Calvert]] seeing him as a kindred spirit.
* HumiliationConga: [[spoiler:Gordon]] suffered one off-screen after getting [[spoiler:booted from the PRT]], failing job interview after interview until he finally ended up stuck working at a fast food restaurant. [[spoiler:Calvert helped arrange this to put Gordon in the right frame of mind to accept his offer]].
* HumiliationConga: [[spoiler:Gordon]] suffered one off-screen after getting [[spoiler:booted from the PRT]], failing job interview after interview until he finally ended up stuck working at a fast food restaurant. [[spoiler:Calvert helped arrange this to put Gordon in the right frame of mind to accept his offer]].
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* MoralGuardian: Dorothy Hebert, [[RacistGrandma Taylor's alt-grandma.]] [[HolierThanThou Fervently Christian]], fervently anti-gay.
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** Dorothy Hebert, [[RacistGrandma Taylor's alt-grandma.]] [[HolierThanThou Fervently Christian]], ferventlyanti-gay.anti-gay.
** One of Taylor's college professors tries to interfere with her early graduation as an unspoken punishment for her relationship with Andrea.
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** One of Taylor's college professors tries to interfere with her early graduation as an unspoken punishment for her relationship with Andrea.
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* TheAce: Between her natural intelligence, Lisa's hints, and knowledge of the future, Taylor soon becomes well-known in the PRT as the lead cybersecurity expert and foremost analyst. She's also an expert marksman with pistols and a formidable opponent in hand-to-hand.
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** Two instances in 8-0. Andrea, on Taylor's orders, incites riots against the Los Angeles Protectorate and PRT in order to keep Alexandria busy during a key meeting. During said meeting, Taylor uses a drug, explanation, and body language to [[spoiler:convince Eidolon he created Behemoth and the only way to make amends is by dying against him]].
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* FrameUp: A patrolling Protectorate hero hears somebody yelling "Stop! Thief!" and assumes the only running person he sees is a purse snatcher. When he tries to grab them, the man throws himself to the side so his arm is crushed by a passing car and begins yelling the hero threw him into traffic. Turns out there was no purse and nobody can find the person who was yelling. The man was a gangbanger paid to take the fall by Andrea's mercenaries.
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** She has to stop herself several times from referring to the Protectorate leaders as the "Triumvirate" since there's still ''four'' of them.
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* HeroicSuicide: [[spoiler:Eidolon]] charges straight into Behemoth's kill zone without any defensive powers in hopes of stopping him. [[spoiler:It works as his last thoughts essentially ordered Behemoth to stand down]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10286919/1/Recoil Recoil]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Ack (also known for ''FanFic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'' and ''FanFic/{{Security}}''). It has discussion pages at ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/recoil.299321/ SpaceBattles]]'' and ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/recoil.3805/ Sufficient Velocity]]''.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10286919/1/Recoil Recoil]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Ack (also known for ''FanFic/HopeComesToBrocktonBay'' and ''FanFic/{{Security}}'').''FanFic/SecurityWorm''). It has discussion pages at ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/recoil.299321/ SpaceBattles]]'' and ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/recoil.3805/ Sufficient Velocity]]''.
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* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:Lt Gordon]]'s vendetta against Taylor that started over the fact that she wouldn't sleep with him ultimately gets him court-martialed, and only gets off with a other-than-honorable discharge rather than jail time because some of his crimes were done while Mastered (which only happened because he ignored Taylor's protocols on how to avoid, detect and/or resist Mastering). He still think's everything is Taylor's fault.
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* BreedingSlave: Taylor deduces that the proto-Fallen cult has been abducting [[spoiler:teenage parahuman girls]] in an attempt to breed parahumans.
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* GoodGirlsAvoidAbortion: Subverted when the victims of the [[BreedingSlave parahuman breeding]] program of the [[BreedingCult Brotherhood of the Fallen]] decide that some of them don't actually ''want'' to go through with the unwanted [[ChildByRape pregnancies]] resulting from their ordeal. Given that about half of them are [[TeenPregnancy teenagers]], this is actually not unexpected. There is also a HandOnWomb moment.
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* GoodGirlsAvoidAbortion: Subverted when the victims of the [[BreedingSlave [[spoiler:[[BreedingSlave parahuman breeding]] program of the [[BreedingCult Brotherhood of the Fallen]] Fallen]]]] decide that some of them don't actually ''want'' to go through with the unwanted [[ChildByRape pregnancies]] resulting from their ordeal. Given that about half of them are [[TeenPregnancy teenagers]], this is actually not unexpected. There is also a HandOnWomb moment.
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* NormallyIWouldBeDeadNow: Taylor plays a key role in the battle outside Waco despite having been impaled with a piece of debris before it started. The doctors note it's a miracle the debris didn't hit a single vital organ and that the metal was able to keep her from bleeding out for as long as it did. Only some parahuman-assisted surgery saves her life afterwards.
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* SuperBreedingProgram: The proto-Fallen cult was attempting this by recruiting parahumans and [[spoiler:kidnapping young female parahumans for the more willing ones to rape]].
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* UnknownRival: Taylor was largely oblivious to Gordon's machinations even as she casually bested him.