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* HiddenHeartOfGold: As much of an asshole Byakuya can be, [[spoiler:he's been secretly giving money to outcasted members of his family]], not that he would ever admit it.

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* HiddenHeartOfGold: As much of an asshole Byakuya can be, [[spoiler:he's been secretly giving money to outcasted members of his family]], not that he would ever admit it. [[spoiler: He even saves Sayaka when he catches pillow she threw at Monokuma, who would've executed her for such a minor offense!]]
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* *Leon crosses it the moment Makoto discovers the meaning behind Sayaka's dying message.

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* *Leon ** Leon crosses it the moment Makoto discovers the meaning behind Sayaka's dying message.
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* Leon crosses it the moment Makoto discovers the meaning behind Sayaka's dying message.

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* Leon *Leon crosses it the moment Makoto discovers the meaning behind Sayaka's dying message.

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** Sayaka, not only was she the first one to break down and try to commit murder, she later becomes very remorseful of her actions on top of being unable to walk because of her injury and blood loss.

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** Poor Sayaka, not only was she the first one to break down and try to commit murder, she later becomes very remorseful of her actions on top of being unable to walk because of her injury and blood loss.loss.
* Leon crosses it the moment Makoto discovers the meaning behind Sayaka's dying message.



** Celeste fall completely into despair after the truth of the Bullying Trials is revealed and she confess without a fight.

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** Celeste fall completely into despair after the truth of the Bullying Trials is revealed and revealed, she confess without a fight.
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* ChekhovsGun: At the start of Chapter 3, [[spoiler:Mondo put anything that could potentially be use to harm an unconscious Chihiro inside the locker in the Nurse's Office and seal it with duct tape. Towards the end of the chapter, this would be yet another SpannerInTheWorks for Celeste's plan.]]
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* AmbiguousGender: Played with. After the students [[UnsettlingGenderReveal discovered Chihiro is actually male]] during the second trial, everyone avoids using gender-specific pronoun [[HeartwarmingMoments out of respect for Chihiro]] since they don't know how Chihiro identifies herself.

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* AmbiguousGender: Played with. AmbiguousGenderIdentity: After the students [[UnsettlingGenderReveal discovered Chihiro is actually male]] during the second trial, everyone avoids using gender-specific pronoun [[HeartwarmingMoments out of respect for Chihiro]] since they don't know how Chihiro identifies herself.

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* HeadsIWinTailsYouLose: [[spoiler:The Bullying Trials]] are ultimately reveal to be this, [[spoiler:only a 'blackened' can graduate and said trials don't have a blackened culprit]], but the entire class is completely unaware of this until the third trial where [[spoiler:Toko reveal the secret to everyone and causes Celeste to confess.]]

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* HeadsIWinTailsYouLose: [[spoiler:The Bullying Trials]] are ultimately reveal to be this, [[spoiler:only [[spoiler:as only a 'blackened' can graduate and said trials don't have a blackened culprit]], but the entire class is completely unaware of this until the third trial where [[spoiler:Toko reveal (of all people) reveals the secret to everyone and causes Celeste to confess.]]


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*** [[spoiler: And that's before she discovers even if she wins the bullying trial, she won't be allowed to leave as (having not actually killed anyone) she's not a blackened.]]


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** [[spoiler: She also loses her composure during the subsequent trial, with the narration describing it as her mask exploding.]]
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** [[The biggest WhamLine in the story is delivered by Toko when she reveals the real purpose behind the Bullying Trials, the revelation hits everyone like a fucking train and causes Celeste to give up and confess]].

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** [[The [[spoiler:The biggest WhamLine in the story is delivered by Toko when she reveals the real purpose behind the Bullying Trials, the revelation hits everyone like a fucking train and causes Celeste to give up and confess]].
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* {{Transgender}}: Chihiro identifies herself as a female despite being biologically male, unlike in the game where Chihiro explicitly identified himself as male. Interesting enough, Chihiro is sexually attracted to girls.

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* {{Transgender}}: Chihiro identifies herself as a female despite being biologically male, unlike in the game where Chihiro explicitly identified himself as male. Interesting enough, the fic averts the TransEqualsGay trope as Chihiro explicitly mentions that she/he is sexually attracted to girls.

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* AttractiveBentGender: Chihiro is a very skillful [[WholesomeCrossdresser crossdresser]], so much that Mondo can't take the idea that Chihiro is a girl out of his head even after he discover her/his secret. This is probably a reason why Hifumi has a crush on Alter Ego.
* BaitAndSwitch: During the third trial, when the students are [[spoiler:unable to determine wherever Hifumi or Celeste is lying]] Monokuma propose to do a [[VisualNovel/NewDanganRonpaV3 Scrum Debate]] only for [[spoiler:Mukuro]] to reject the offer.



* DespairEventHorizon: Even without deaths, the students are still prone to fall into despair.
** Mukuro fall into despair after she's betrayed by her sister and is abandoned to her fate in the Killing Game. [[HeelRealization She does not enjoy the pain]] [[VillainousBSOD of betrayal at all]].
** Sayaka, not only was she the first one to break down and try to commit murder, she later becomes very remorseful of her actions on top of being unable to walk because of her injury and blood loss.
** Mondo completely breakdown out of regret for attacking Chihiro and having betray the group by trying to graduate.
** Celeste fall completely into despair after the truth of the Bullying Trials is revealed and she confess without a fight.



* EnragedByIdiocy: Yeah, the students aren't particularly amused by Hiro's level of intelligence, especially during the trials.



** It's very clear that the students don't really like Hiro, even [[NiceGuy Makoto]] tolerate him at best. It doesn't help that he tends to make very insensitive comments at the other students, wherever they’re intentional or not. And his stupidity only a source of annoyances for the rest of the group.



* HeadsIWinTailsYouLose: [[spoiler:The Bullying Trials]] are ultimately reveal to be this, [[spoiler:only a 'blackened' can graduate and said trials don't have a blackened culprit]], but the entire class is completely unaware of this until the third trial where [[spoiler:Toko reveal the secret to everyone and causes Celeste to confess.]]



* LateArrivalSpoiler: Despite being an alternative retelling of the first game, the author assumes you're already familiar with the original story. As such, the fic doesn't bother to hide secrets like Chihiro's gender, Celeste's real name, Mukuro disguising herself as her sister, and Junko being the mastermind.

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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Despite being an alternative retelling of the first game, the author assumes you're already familiar with the original story. As such, the fic doesn't bother to hide secrets like Chihiro's gender, Celeste's real name, Mukuro disguising herself as her sister, and Junko being the mastermind.mastermind, etc.
** However, the story does spoils two mayor plot points from LightNovel/DanganRonpaZero: [[spoiler:Ryoko Otonashi’s real identity as Junko Enoshima and Junko killing Yasuke Matsuda]].



* MamaBear: [[spoiler: The moment [[ShrinkingViolet Chihiro]] discovers that Alter Ego was confiscated by Kiyotaka [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness she becomes very furious]].]]



** During the third trial, Monokuma propose the students to do a [[VisualNovel/NewDanganRonpaV3 Scrum Debate]] only for [[spoiler:Mukuro]] to reject the offer.



** [[spoiler: 'Junko', Sayaka and Kyoko would later share a scene together in bathhouse later in the story.]]
* RealityEnsues: Mukuro holds the title of Ultimate Soldier because she has never received a wound in combat, but that also means she has low pain tolerance. So, when her hand gets impaled by Monokuma's trap it hurts, a ''lot''.



* ShoutOut: In chapter 3, Mukuro uses a [[VideoGame/MetalGear cardboard box]] as a decoy to distract Mondo long enough to sneak past him, and can't believe it actually works.

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* ShoutOut: “[[PleasePutSomeClothesOn Public indecency is]] ''[[WebVideo/DanganRonpaAbridgedThing not]]'' [[WebVideo/DanganRonpaAbridgedThing welcome in a school environment!]]”
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In chapter 3, Mukuro uses a [[VideoGame/MetalGear cardboard box]] as a decoy to distract Mondo long enough to sneak past him, and can't believe it actually works.



* WhamLine: [[spoiler:After Chihiro wakes up from her coma, she calls Celeste by her ''real'' name. She's understandably shocked.]]

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* WhamLine: [[spoiler:When Kyoko bring Mukuro to the secret room, she confront 'Junko' about her lies.]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Kyoko''': I know you've been lying to us. Tell me who you really are.]]
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[[spoiler:After Chihiro wakes up from her coma, she calls Celeste by her ''real'' name. She's understandably shocked.]]



* WhatAPieceOfJunk: The laptop where Alter-Ego is installed looks like an old computer, but as noted by Chihiro it's actually more powerful than even her own high-end computer back at her home.

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** [[The biggest WhamLine in the story is delivered by Toko when she reveals the real purpose behind the Bullying Trials, the revelation hits everyone like a fucking train and causes Celeste to give up and confess]].
--> [[spoiler:'''Toko''': W-Well, it doesn't make sense that e-either of them would w-want to h-have a class trial right n-now!]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Junko''': And why's that? Why wouldn't either Celeste or Hifumi want a class trial?!]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Toko''': B-Because neither of them are b-b-blackened! Th-That's why it d-doesn't make s-sense!]]
* WhatAPieceOfJunk: The laptop where Alter-Ego is installed looks like an old computer, but as noted by Chihiro it's actually more powerful than even her own high-end computer back at her home.

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--> '''Leon''': Okay so, let's pretend for a second that you’re right, and I'm not saying you are, but hear me out on this one! How would Toko locking herself in her room solve anything? I mean, if she did have a split personality, and I'm not saying she really does! What would stop her other personality from unlocking the door from the inside? [[FridgeLogic It doesn't make any sense!]]

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--> '''Leon''': -->'''Leon''': Okay so, let's pretend for a second that you’re right, and I'm not saying you are, but hear me out on this one! How would Toko locking herself in her room solve anything? I mean, if she did have a split personality, and I'm not saying she really does! What would stop her other personality from unlocking the door from the inside? [[FridgeLogic It doesn't make any sense!]]sense!]]
** Hiro, who is a dumbass in general, is the first one to vocalize that if Toko is correct that bullying trials have no blackened, nobody can graduate from them.


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* LoopholeAbuse: Mukuro figures out that culprits in bullying trials will not graduate since they are not blackened, but Monokuma threatens her into silence. This does nothing, however, to stop Toko from figuring it out on her own and telling everyone.
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* PornStash: Turns out Leon's secret is that he has a ''huge'' porn stash, apparently large enough to fill an [[UpToEleven entire section of a library]]. His secret is arguably the most harmless within the group.
** [[spoiler: Sayaka also has a porn stash and is a YaoiFangirl, much to Leon's shock.]]
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* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:On Chapter 3, Mondo would unintentionally end up ruining Celeste´s plans by knocking Hifumi out [[TheDoorSlamsYou with a door]] before he could attack Kiyotaka.]]

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* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:On Chapter 3, Mondo would unintentionally end ends up ruining Celeste´s Celeste's plans by knocking Hifumi out [[TheDoorSlamsYou with a door]] before he could can attack Kiyotaka.]]
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* HeelRealization: [[spoiler:After Celeste's first plan failed, Hifumi is starting to have second thoughts on their action and try to encourage Celeste to turn themselves in and confess.]]

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* HeelRealization: [[spoiler:After Celeste's first plan failed, fails, Hifumi is starting starts to have second thoughts on their action actions and try tries to encourage Celeste to turn themselves in and confess.]] ]]
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* CatchPhrase: Makoto Naegi's iconic ''No, That's Wrong!'' gets frequently lampshade, poke fun at and even sometime borrowed by the other students.
* CreepyCrossdresser: Right before the second motive is reveal, [[spoiler:Monokuma ends up dressing up as a terrifying drag queen, much to everyone’s disgust. This was just to torment WholesomeCrossdresser, Chihiro.]]

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* CatchPhrase: Makoto Naegi's iconic ''No, That's Wrong!'' gets frequently lampshade, poke lampshaded, poked fun at and even sometime sometimes borrowed by the other students.
* CreepyCrossdresser: Right before the second motive is reveal, revealed, [[spoiler:Monokuma ends up dressing up as a terrifying drag queen, much to everyone’s disgust. This was is just to torment WholesomeCrossdresser, WholesomeCrossdresser Chihiro.]]

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Also, [[IThoughtItMeant do not confuse]] this fic with a song from a [[Music/JustinBieber certain’s singer]].

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Also, [[IThoughtItMeant do not confuse]] this fic with a song from a [[Music/JustinBieber certain’s certain's singer]].



** Byakuya is still the same InsufferableGenius as he is in the game, but most of his jerkass moments have [[JerkassHasAPoint good reasoning behind it]]. Him altering the crime scene in chapter 2 [[spoiler:was actually a gambit to expose Toko's identity as Genocide Jack/Jill and to test Makoto’s intelligence.]] His secret is that [[spoiler:he's been financially helping outcast members of his family]].
** The story downplays some of Celeste’s NoSympathy moments, having most of them aimed at the culprits of their respective trials. She’s still a massive bitch however.

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** Byakuya is still the same InsufferableGenius as he is in the game, but most of his jerkass moments have [[JerkassHasAPoint good reasoning behind it]]. Him altering the crime scene in chapter 2 [[spoiler:was actually a gambit to expose Toko's identity as Genocide Jack/Jill and to test Makoto’s Makoto's intelligence.]] His secret is that [[spoiler:he's been financially helping outcast members of his family]].
** The story downplays some of Celeste’s Celeste's NoSympathy moments, having most of them aimed at the culprits of their respective trials. She’s She's still a massive bitch however.



* TheAtoner: After she's betrayed by her sister, [[HeelFaceTurn Mukuro]] gains the determination to keep everyone alive to atone for the crimes she committed to them and to beat her sister in her own twisted game.
** [[spoiler:Mondo is so remorseful over attacking Chihiro, he promise he'll make things up with her after she wakes up from her coma.]]



* EasyAmnesia: Played with. [[spoiler:Once Chihiro finally wakes up from the coma, she understandably suffers from TraumaInducedAmnesia since she doesn’t remember much of the event of chapter 2. However, she does remember Celeste’s real name.]]

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* EasyAmnesia: Played with. [[spoiler:Once Chihiro finally wakes up from the coma, she understandably suffers from TraumaInducedAmnesia since she doesn’t doesn't remember much of the event of chapter 2. However, she does remember Celeste’s real name.]]



** Leon makes use of towels in an attempt to stop Sayaka’s bleeding, unknowingly saving her life.

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** Leon makes use of towels in an attempt to stop Sayaka’s Sayaka's bleeding, unknowingly saving her life.



* LateArrivalSpoiler: Despite being an alternative retelling of the first game, the author assumes you're already familiar with the original story. As such, the fic doesn't bother to hide secrets like Chihiro’s gender, Celeste's real name, Mukuro disguising herself as her sister, and Junko being the mastermind.

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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Despite being an alternative retelling of the first game, the author assumes you're already familiar with the original story. As such, the fic doesn't bother to hide secrets like Chihiro’s Chihiro's gender, Celeste's real name, Mukuro disguising herself as her sister, and Junko being the mastermind.



* LimitedWardrobe: Lampshade when Sayaka noticed that everyone always uses the same clothes every day. She strongly believes that the Mastermind forced them into this. The sole exception is Mukuro in her 'Junko' disguise, for [[TheFashionista obvious reasons]].



** The story occasionally mentions executions that where unused in the game. Examples so far includes [[BearTrap Sayaka]], [[SnowMeansDeath Byakuya]] and [[SquashedFlat Toko]].



* WeAreStrugglingTogether: Far more noticeable than in the game. There's a lot of internal conflict and distrust between the students.



* WhatAPieceOfJunk: The laptop where Alter-Ego is installed looks like an old computer, but as noted by Chihiro it’s actually more powerful than even her own high-end computer back at her home.

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* WhatAPieceOfJunk: The laptop where Alter-Ego is installed looks like an old computer, but as noted by Chihiro it’s it's actually more powerful than even her own high-end computer back at her home.



* WhatTheHellHero: Nobody is okay with Ishimaru’s self-righteous attitude in chapter 3, [[spoiler:and everyone is outraged when he reveals everyone's secrets in a delusional attempt to bring everyone together. His strict rules only make things worse for everyone and he’s not even aware of it]].

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* WhatTheHellHero: Nobody is okay with Ishimaru’s self-righteous attitude in chapter 3, [[spoiler:and everyone is outraged when he reveals everyone's secrets in a delusional attempt to bring everyone together. His strict rules only make things worse for everyone and he’s he's not even aware of it]].

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* AllLovingHero: Even more so than in the game. Makoto isn’t the HopeBringer for nothing.

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* AllLovingHero: Even more so than in the game. Makoto isn’t isn't the HopeBringer for nothing.



* BecomingTheMask: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. Mukuro starts to act less and less like Junko after she’s saved from Monokuma’s death trap. The rest of the students take notice of this, but mistake it for Junko the Fashionista's BeneathTheMask.

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* BecomingTheMask: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. Mukuro starts to act less and less like Junko after she’s she's saved from Monokuma’s death trap. The rest of the students take notice of this, but mistake it for Junko the Fashionista's BeneathTheMask.



* ButtMonkey: Whenever Leon tries to eat a sandwich, expect the universe to deny it. He’s also the OnlySaneMan when he's forced to tag along with Mondo and Taka in their "dick measurement contest".

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* ButtMonkey: Whenever Leon tries to eat a sandwich, expect the universe to deny it. He’s He's also the OnlySaneMan when he's forced to tag along with Mondo and Taka in their "dick measurement contest".



* CaptainOblivious: Ishimaru in chapter 3 is completely unaware that his attempts at controlling the group are only [[NiceJobBreakingItHero bringing more tension]] to the students. He’s also unaware that his classmates are lying to him just to get some breathers. You can’t really blame him, considering the [[SanitySlippage delusional state]] that he is in.

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* CaptainOblivious: Ishimaru in chapter 3 is completely unaware that his attempts at controlling the group are only [[NiceJobBreakingItHero bringing more tension]] to the students. He’s also unaware that his classmates are lying to him just to get some breathers. You can’t can't really blame him, considering the [[SanitySlippage delusional state]] that he is in.



* CatchPhrase: Makoto Naegi’s iconic ''No, That’s Wrong!'' gets frequently lampshade, poke fun at and even sometime borrowed by the other students.

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* CatchPhrase: Makoto Naegi’s Naegi's iconic ''No, That’s That's Wrong!'' gets frequently lampshade, poke fun at and even sometime borrowed by the other students.



** [[spoiler:Celestia's plan on chapter 3 simply [[SpannerInTheWorks does not go as planned]], and whenever she tries to improvise and salvage her plan, she's still on the receiving end of another spanner. She even goes as far as to call it the proof that MurphysLaw did in fact exist and that the [[CosmicPlaything universe hated her.]]]]



* PublicBathhouseScene: A glorious and unexpected role-reversal from the game. It’s the guys[[note]]specifically, Makoto, Mondo, Ishimaru, Byakuya, Hifumi and Yasuhiro[[/note]] who go to the bathhouse while Hina, Celeste and Toko are the ones who take a peep. Also, the former two almost get caught due to Toko switching to Jill.

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* PublicBathhouseScene: A glorious and unexpected role-reversal from the game. It’s It's the guys[[note]]specifically, Makoto, Mondo, Ishimaru, Byakuya, Hifumi and Yasuhiro[[/note]] who go to the bathhouse while Hina, Celeste and Toko are the ones who take a peep. Also, the former two almost get caught due to Toko switching to Jill.



** During the same chapter, Monokuma [[VillainHasAPoint correctly points out]] that unless people like Byakuya believe in [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic friendship is magic]], Kiyotaka’s plan to unite the group will just not work.

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** During the same chapter, Monokuma [[VillainHasAPoint correctly points out]] that unless people like Byakuya believe in [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic friendship is magic]], Kiyotaka’s Kiyotaka's plan to unite the group will just not work.



* {{Transgender}}: Chihiro identifies herself as a female despite being biologically male, unlike in the game where Chihiro identified himself as male. Interesting enough, Chihiro is sexually attracted to girls.

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* {{Transgender}}: Chihiro identifies herself as a female despite being biologically male, unlike in the game where Chihiro explicitly identified himself as male. Interesting enough, Chihiro is sexually attracted to girls.
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* SherlockScan: Kyoko, being the [[TheGreatDetective Ultimate Detective]], makes use of this very frequently. However, being an AmnesiacHero, she has no idea why she has said ability.

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* SherlockScan: Kyoko, being the [[TheGreatDetective [[GreatDetective Ultimate Detective]], makes use of this very frequently. However, being an AmnesiacHero, she has no idea why she has said ability.
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* EstablishingSeriesMoment: The prologue start out by showing Junko mocking the students over the fact that the person they trusted the most was TheMole, only to reveal that ''everybody'' is [[EveryoneLives still alive]] and immediately jump to their friend's defence before the story reveals that their friend and savior is [[HeelFaceTurn Mukuro]] [[TheAtoner Ikusaba]].

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* ButtMonkey: Whenever Leon tries to eat a sandwich, expect the universe to deny it. He’s also the OnlySaneMan when he's forced to tag along with Mondo and Taka in their "dick measurement contest".
* TheCameo: The DVD motives showcase [[spoiler:characters that appears on the hit-list of VideoGame/AbsoluteDespairGirls.]]



* CatchPhrase: Makoto Naegi’s iconic ''No, That’s Wrong!'' gets frequently lampshade, poke fun at and even sometime borrowed by the other students.
* CreepyCrossdresser: Right before the second motive is reveal, [[spoiler:Monokuma ends up dressing up as a terrifying drag queen, much to everyone’s disgust. This was just to torment WholesomeCrossdresser, Chihiro.]]



* DumbassHasAPoint: Granted, Leon is more BookDumb than dumbass, but during the second Class Trial he does make a very valid point that leave everyone, even [[SmugSnake Byakuya]], stunned in silence.
--> '''Leon''': Okay so, let's pretend for a second that you’re right, and I'm not saying you are, but hear me out on this one! How would Toko locking herself in her room solve anything? I mean, if she did have a split personality, and I'm not saying she really does! What would stop her other personality from unlocking the door from the inside? [[FridgeLogic It doesn't make any sense!]]



** Makoto saves ‘Junko’ from Monokuma’s trap. This allows her to save both Leon’s and Sayaka’s lives.

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** Makoto saves ‘Junko’ 'Junko' from Monokuma’s trap. This allows her to save both Leon’s Leon's and Sayaka’s Sayaka's lives.



* HeelRealization: [[spoiler:After Celeste's first plan failed, Hifumi is starting to have second thoughts on their action and try to encourage Celeste to turn themselves in and confess.]]



* LateArrivalSpoiler: Despite being a alternative retelling of the first game, the author assumes you’re already familiar with the original story. As such, the fic doesn’t bother to hide secrets like Chihiro’s gender, Celeste’s real name, Mukuro disguising herself as her sister, and Junko being the mastermind.

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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Despite being a an alternative retelling of the first game, the author assumes you’re you're already familiar with the original story. As such, the fic doesn’t doesn't bother to hide secrets like Chihiro’s gender, Celeste’s Celeste's real name, Mukuro disguising herself as her sister, and Junko being the mastermind.



* SherlockScan: Kyoko, being the [[TheGreatDetective Ultimate Detective]], makes use of this very frequently. However, being an AmnesiacHero, she has no idea why she has said ability.
* ShipTease: Post-first Class Trial, Leon is assigned to look over Sayaka's recovery as punishment for attempting murder, the two become very close friends.
** Kyoko would start to really like Makoto due to his intelligence and general optimism. Likewise, Makoto himself admire Kyoko for her intelligence and support, even describing her as a manga heroine.



* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:On Chapter 3, Mondo would unintentionally end up ruining Celeste´s plans by knocking Hifumi out [[TheDoorSlamsYou with a door]] before he could attack Kiyotaka.]]



* WhamLine: [[spoiler:After Chihiro wakes up from her coma, she says this to Celeste. She’s understandably shocked.]]

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* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler:Celeste lose all of her composure the moment Hifumi propose to turn themselves in and confess their plans. In her fragile state of mind, she tries to kill Hifumi, only for him to catch the hammer and [[TheDogBitesBack turn against her]].]]
* WhamLine: [[spoiler:After Chihiro wakes up from her coma, she says this to Celeste. She’s calls Celeste by her ''real'' name. She's understandably shocked.]]
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Junko allowing Mukuro to sit the first trial out [[spoiler:allows the latter to discover that Sayaka is still alive despite her wounds and nurse her back to health, thereby rendering the trial moot right before the execution could be carried out.]]
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* BecomingTheMask: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. Mukuro starts to act less and less like Junko after she’s saved from Monokuma’s death trap. The rest of the students take notice of this, but mistaken it for Junko the Fashionista's BeneathTheMask.

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* BecomingTheMask: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. Mukuro starts to act less and less like Junko after she’s saved from Monokuma’s death trap. The rest of the students take notice of this, but mistaken mistake it for Junko the Fashionista's BeneathTheMask.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Leon becomes incredible terrified of Monokuma after he was saved at the last second from his execution. Too bad for him, he must deal with the bear for the rest of the story.


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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Leon becomes incredible incredibly terrified of Monokuma after he was is saved at the last second from his execution. Too bad Unfortunately for him, he must deal with the bear for the rest of the story.

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* BecomingTheMask: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. Mukuro starts to act less and less like Junko after she’s saved from Monokuma’s death trap. The rest of the students take notice of this.

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* BecomingTheMask: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. Mukuro starts to act less and less like Junko after she’s saved from Monokuma’s death trap. The rest of the students take notice of this.this, but mistaken it for Junko the Fashionista's BeneathTheMask.
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* HairTriggerTemper: Mondo Owada's FatalFlaw. Not only is it shown in his EstablishingCharacterMoment, Chapter 2 spends a good amount of time showing how prone to violence he can be. It reaches its logical conclusion when Mondo [[spoiler:nearly]] kills Chihiro in a blind rage. Afterwards, he has a ''massive'' MyGodWhatHaveIDoneMoment and begins working on reining himself in.

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* HairTriggerTemper: Mondo Owada's FatalFlaw. Not only is it shown in his EstablishingCharacterMoment, Chapter 2 spends a good amount of time showing how prone to violence he can be. It reaches its logical conclusion when Mondo [[spoiler:nearly]] kills Chihiro in a blind rage. Afterwards, he has a ''massive'' MyGodWhatHaveIDoneMoment MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment and begins working on reining himself in.
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* TheDragon: After Ishimaru goes KnightTemplar, Monokuma declares him his enforcer and goes on vacation. Everyone tries to tell Ishimaru he's playing right into Monokuma's hands, but it sails over his head.

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** Byakuya is still the same InsufferableGenius as he is in the game, but most of his jerkass moments have [[JerkassHasAPoint good reasoning behind it]]. Him altering the crime scene in chapter 2 [[spoiler:was actually a gambit to expose Toko identity as Genocide Jack/Jill and to test Makoto’s intelligence.]] His secret is that [[spoiler:he's been financially helping outcaste members of his family]].

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** Byakuya is still the same InsufferableGenius as he is in the game, but most of his jerkass moments have [[JerkassHasAPoint good reasoning behind it]]. Him altering the crime scene in chapter 2 [[spoiler:was actually a gambit to expose Toko Toko's identity as Genocide Jack/Jill and to test Makoto’s intelligence.]] His secret is that [[spoiler:he's been financially helping outcaste outcast members of his family]].



* AmbiguousGender: Played with. After the students [[UnsettlingGenderReveal discovered Chihiro is actually male]] during the second trial, everyone avoids using gender-specific pronoun [[HeartwarmingMoments out of respect of Chihiro]] since they didn't know at the time how Chihiro identified herself.

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* AmbiguousGender: Played with. After the students [[UnsettlingGenderReveal discovered Chihiro is actually male]] during the second trial, everyone avoids using gender-specific pronoun [[HeartwarmingMoments out of respect of for Chihiro]] since they didn't don't know at the time how Chihiro identified identifies herself.



* BerserkButton: Celeste [[TranquilFury boils internally]] after her real name got reveal in front of everyone. Thankfully for her, nobody noticed it.

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* BerserkButton: Celeste [[TranquilFury boils internally]] after her real name got reveal is revealed in front of everyone. Thankfully for her, nobody noticed notices it.



* CaptainOblivious: Ishimaru in chapter 3 is completely unaware that his attempts at controlling the group is only [[NiceJobBreakingItHero bringing more tension]] to the students. He’s also unaware that his classmates are lying to him just to get some breathers. You can’t really blame him, considering the [[SanitySlippage delusional state]] that he is in.
* CareerEndingInjury: Mukuro, still in her 'Junko' disguise, use the injury in her hand to point out that her modeling career is over to [[YouAreNotAlone support]] a depressed Sayaka.
** [[spoiler:Sayaka would later admit the same pain of never be able to sing on the stage ever again as a result of her scar on her stomach.]]

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* CaptainOblivious: Ishimaru in chapter 3 is completely unaware that his attempts at controlling the group is are only [[NiceJobBreakingItHero bringing more tension]] to the students. He’s also unaware that his classmates are lying to him just to get some breathers. You can’t really blame him, considering the [[SanitySlippage delusional state]] that he is in.
* CareerEndingInjury: Mukuro, still in her 'Junko' disguise, use uses the injury in on her hand to point out that her modeling career is over to [[YouAreNotAlone support]] a depressed Sayaka.
** [[spoiler:Sayaka would later admit admits the same pain of never be able to sing on the stage ever again as a result of her scar on her stomach.]]



* FailureGambit: Byakuya actions in chapter 2 turns out to be this. [[spoiler:He discovers early on that Toko is the infamous serial killer, Genocide Jack. He alters the crime scene to make it look like Genocide Jack made it and bring Makoto to the library to the library to study about the killer, lastly, he purposely left some mistakes in the crime scene in order for Makoto to pick it up and test his intelligence. He successfully exposes Genocide Jill to the group]].

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* FailureGambit: Byakuya actions in chapter 2 turns out to be this. [[spoiler:He discovers early on that Toko is the infamous serial killer, Genocide Jack. He alters the crime scene to make it look like Genocide Jack made it and bring brings Makoto to the library to the library to study about the killer, lastly, killer. Lastly, he purposely left leaves some mistakes in the crime scene in order for Makoto to pick up on it up and test his intelligence. He successfully exposes Genocide Jill to the group]].



* ForWantOfANail: The story heavily relies on this, the farther you go into the story, the more different it becomes from the original game.
** Leon makes use of towels in an attempt to stop Sayaka’s bleeding, unknowningly to him it does help save her life.
** Makoto saves ‘Junko’ from Monokuma’s trap. This allowed her to save both, Leon’s and Sayaka’s life.
** This also applies to background story, Chihiro was bullied at a young age for not being masculine enough and started cross-dressing to stop suffering from it. He ends up embracing his feminine side and causes him to become {{Transgender}}.
** Had Mondo hit Chihiro any harder, he would’ve kill her.
** Mondo [[spoiler:scream for help shortly]] after he has moved Chihiro's unconscious body to the girl's lockers as he knew that she was still alive.

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* ForWantOfANail: The story heavily relies on this, this; the farther you go into the story, the more different it becomes from the original game.
** Leon makes use of towels in an attempt to stop Sayaka’s bleeding, unknowningly to him it does help save unknowingly saving her life.
** Makoto saves ‘Junko’ from Monokuma’s trap. This allowed allows her to save both, both Leon’s and Sayaka’s life.
lives.
** This also applies to the background story, story. Chihiro was bullied at a young age for not being masculine enough and started cross-dressing to stop suffering from it. He ends up embracing his feminine side and causes him to become currently identifies as {{Transgender}}.
** Had A conversation with Leon causes Mondo hit Chihiro any harder, to hold back when he would’ve kill her.
attacks Chihiro, sparing her life.
** Mondo [[spoiler:scream [[spoiler:screams for help shortly]] after he has moved Chihiro's unconscious body to the girl's lockers as he knew that she was still alive.



* ForegoneConclusion: The fic starts with InMediasRes, where it's chronologically around the sixth trial, showing that all students are surviving their murder attempts or executions and have since made peace with each other's faults that they immediately trust Mukuro despite she's being revealed as TheMole.

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* ForegoneConclusion: The fic starts with InMediasRes, where it's chronologically around the sixth trial, showing that all students are surviving survive their murder attempts or executions and have since made executions, make peace with each other's faults that they faults, and immediately trust Mukuro despite she's her being revealed as TheMole.



* FriendOrIdolDecision: Kyouko is in a difficult place where her instinctive suspicions make her doubt her allies despite numerous times they had proven themselves sincere.
* HairTriggerTemper: Mondo Owada's FatalFlaw. Not only is it shown in his EstablishingCharacterMoment, Chapter 2 spent a good amount of time showing how prone to violence he can be. It reaches its logical conclusion when Mondo [[spoiler:nearly]] killed Chihiro in a blind rage.
* HiddenDepths: Kyoko really doesn't like manipulating others and withdrawing crucial information, but she sees it as a justified NecessaryEvil.

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* FriendOrIdolDecision: Kyouko is in a difficult place where her instinctive suspicions make her doubt her allies despite numerous times they had proven themselves sincere.
* HairTriggerTemper: Mondo Owada's FatalFlaw. Not only is it shown in his EstablishingCharacterMoment, Chapter 2 spent spends a good amount of time showing how prone to violence he can be. It reaches its logical conclusion when Mondo [[spoiler:nearly]] killed kills Chihiro in a blind rage.
rage. Afterwards, he has a ''massive'' MyGodWhatHaveIDoneMoment and begins working on reining himself in.
* HiddenDepths: Kyoko really doesn't like manipulating others and withdrawing withholding crucial information, but she sees it as a justified NecessaryEvil.



* HumiliationConga: Both Leon and Sayaka are disparaged numerous times because they are confirmed attempted murderer, intentional or not. Sayaka also got her secret revealed in front of the others which, despite anonymously referred, is so damningly pointing at her that everyone now knows she once [[spoiler:sabotaged her potential rival by siccing her fans on said rival and [[ColdBloodedTorture pouring acid down her throat]]]].

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* HumiliationConga: Both Leon and Sayaka are disparaged numerous times because they are confirmed attempted murderer, intentional murderers, intentionally or not. Sayaka also got gets her secret revealed in front of the others which, despite anonymously referred, being anonymous, is so damningly pointing at her that everyone now knows she once [[spoiler:sabotaged her [[spoiler:ruined a potential rival by siccing rival's career, even if they don't know her fans on said rival and took it too far by [[ColdBloodedTorture pouring acid down her throat]]]].



* LastMinuteReprieve: After Mukuro gave first aid to a dying Sayaka, she then ran to the court just in time to stop Leon from being executed.
* LateArrivalSpoiler: Despite being a Alternative Retelling of the first game, the author assumes you’re already familiar with the original story. As such, the fic doesn’t bother to hide secrets like Chihiro’s gender, Celeste’s real name, Mukuro disguising as her sister and Junko being the mastermind.

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* KnightTemplar: After the second trial, Ishimaru loses it and begins forcing a draconian set of rules on the other students in a desperate attempt to prevent any more murders.
* LastMinuteReprieve: After Mukuro gave gives first aid to a dying Sayaka, she then ran runs to the court just in time to stop Leon from being executed.
* LateArrivalSpoiler: Despite being a Alternative Retelling alternative retelling of the first game, the author assumes you’re already familiar with the original story. As such, the fic doesn’t bother to hide secrets like Chihiro’s gender, Celeste’s real name, Mukuro disguising herself as her sister sister, and Junko being the mastermind.mastermind.
* LawfulStupid: When Ishimaru goes KnightTemplar, he is unwilling to allow anyone to bend rules such as "no running in the hallway" and "no profanity"... even when people are missing and potentially dead.



* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: Mukuro decides to go against Junko after her sister attempts to kill her, despite promising Mukuro that she would instead be dropped through a trap door and survive. Mukuro also believes her continued act as "Junko" and attempts to keep everyone alive is her penance for playing along to Junko's desires.

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* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: Mukuro decides to go against Junko after her sister attempts to kill her, despite promising Mukuro that she would instead be dropped through a trap door and survive. Mukuro also believes her continued act as "Junko" and attempts to keep everyone alive is are her penance for playing along to Junko's desires.



* MythologyGag: The title of the story is named after the opening song of Danganronpa: The Animation.
** On the second trial, Monokuma called Genocide Jill "the scissor cutty-cutty bitch", a reference to another fic written by ''hunterofcomedy'', ''Fanfic/TheUltimateHope''.
* OnlyAFleshWound: Averted. Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, it is noted that she would have died had Leon [[ForWantOfANail not use towels as improvised bandages and had Mukuro not find her and give her first aid]]. The injury [[YouCanBarelyStand cripple]] her for several days.
** Also averted with [[spoiler: Chihiro. She's in a coma from Oowada's head wound]].

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* MythologyGag: The title of the story is named after the opening song of Danganronpa: ''Danganronpa: The Animation.
Animation''.
** On During the second trial, Monokuma called calls Genocide Jill "the scissor cutty-cutty bitch", a reference to another fic written by ''hunterofcomedy'', hunterofcomedy, ''Fanfic/TheUltimateHope''.
* OnlyAFleshWound: Averted. Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died had Leon [[ForWantOfANail not use used towels as improvised bandages and had Mukuro not find found her and give given her first aid]]. The injury [[YouCanBarelyStand cripple]] cripples]] her for several days.
** Also averted with [[spoiler: Chihiro. She's She spends several days in a coma from Oowada's head wound]].



* ShoutOut: In chapter 3, Mukuro uses a [[VideoGame/MetalGear cardboard box]] as a decoy to disctract Mondo long enough to sneak pass him, she couldn’t believe it actually worked.
** On the same chapter, Monokuma [[VillainHasAPoint correctly points out]] that unless people like Byakuya believe in [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic friendship is magic]], Kiyotaka’s plan to unite the group will just not work.

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* ShoutOut: In chapter 3, Mukuro uses a [[VideoGame/MetalGear cardboard box]] as a decoy to disctract distract Mondo long enough to sneak pass past him, she couldn’t and can't believe it actually worked.
works.
** On During the same chapter, Monokuma [[VillainHasAPoint correctly points out]] that unless people like Byakuya believe in [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic friendship is magic]], Kiyotaka’s plan to unite the group will just not work.



** Sayaka weep upon discovering that she nearly killed the entire group by trying to commit a murder.

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** Sayaka weep weeps upon discovering that she nearly killed the entire group by trying to commit a murder.



* TookALevelInJerkass: Kiyotaka becomes a self-righteous jerk after the second trial because of Mondo "betrayal".

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* TookALevelInJerkass: Kiyotaka becomes a self-righteous jerk after the second trial because of Mondo Mondo's "betrayal".



* WhatIf: Notable in that the fic takes many cues from another WhatIf scenario of the canon, ''Danganronpa IF''; Makoto saved Mukuro from the Spears of Gungnir not because of his memory returning from being zapped by the fake escape switch, but because his natural kindness alarms him of Monokuma's trap, Mukuro betrays Junko but does not immediately reveal herself as the Ultimate Soldier because of the circumstances, EverybodyLives but not by brute-forcing the Monokuma army, etc.
* WhatTheHellHero: Nobody is okay with Ishimaru’s self-righteous attitute in chapter 3, [[spoiler:and everyone was outraged when he reveals everyones' secrets in a delusional attempt to bring everyone together. His strict rules only make things worse for everyone and he’s not even aware of it]].

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* WhatIf: Notable in that the fic takes many cues from another WhatIf scenario of the canon, ''Danganronpa IF''; Makoto saved saves Mukuro from the Spears of Gungnir not because of his memory returning from being zapped by the fake escape switch, but because his natural kindness alarms him of Monokuma's trap, trap; Mukuro betrays Junko but does not immediately reveal herself as the Ultimate Soldier because of the circumstances, circumstances; EverybodyLives but not by brute-forcing the Monokuma army, army; etc.
* WhatTheHellHero: Nobody is okay with Ishimaru’s self-righteous attitute attitude in chapter 3, [[spoiler:and everyone was is outraged when he reveals everyones' everyone's secrets in a delusional attempt to bring everyone together. His strict rules only make things worse for everyone and he’s not even aware of it]].it]].
* WhiteHairBlackHeart: After Ishimaru goes full-blown KnightTemplar, his hair turns white just like it did in canon when he became Kiyondo. Whenever he temporarily comes back to his senses, his hair reverts to its natural black.
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** Same goes to Mondo, he attacks Chihiro in blind rage after the later unknowingly pushes his BerserkButton.

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** Same goes to Mondo, he attacks Chihiro in a blind rage after the later latter unknowingly pushes his BerserkButton.



* ADayInTheLimelight: Due to its EveryoneLives nature. Every surviving that died in the game get quite a lot of focus.

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* ADayInTheLimelight: Due to its EveryoneLives nature. Every surviving that student who died in the game get quite a lot of focus.



** Makoto save ‘Junko’ from Monokuma’s trap. This allowed her to save both, Leon’s and Sayaka’s life.
** This also applies to background story, Chihiro was bullied at young age for not being masculine enough and started cross-dressing to stop suffering from it. He ends up embracing his feminine side and causes him to become {{Transgender}}.

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** Makoto save saves ‘Junko’ from Monokuma’s trap. This allowed her to save both, Leon’s and Sayaka’s life.
** This also applies to background story, Chihiro was bullied at a young age for not being masculine enough and started cross-dressing to stop suffering from it. He ends up embracing his feminine side and causes him to become {{Transgender}}.



** In chapter 3 is where the story diverge greatly from the game due to multiple different circunstances, [[spoiler:from having everyone’s secret revealed, Ishimaru becoming a KnightTemplar, the reveal of a 16th student much earlier and the possibility of the Mastermind being a student]].

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** In chapter Chapter 3 is where the story diverge diverges greatly from the game due to multiple different circunstances, circumstances, [[spoiler:from having everyone’s secret revealed, Ishimaru becoming a KnightTemplar, the reveal of a 16th student much earlier earlier, and the possibility of the Mastermind being a student]].



* HairTriggerTemper: Mondo Owada's FatalFlaw. Not only is his EstablishingCharacterMoment, chapter 2 spent a good amount of time showing how prone to violence he can be. It reaches its logical conclusion when Mondo [[spoiler:nearly]] killed Chihiro in a blind rage.

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* HairTriggerTemper: Mondo Owada's FatalFlaw. Not only is it shown in his EstablishingCharacterMoment, chapter Chapter 2 spent a good amount of time showing how prone to violence he can be. It reaches its logical conclusion when Mondo [[spoiler:nearly]] killed Chihiro in a blind rage.



* LastMinuteReprieve: After Mukuro gave first aid to a dying Sayaka, she then run to the court just in time to stop Leon from being executed.

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* LastMinuteReprieve: After Mukuro gave first aid to a dying Sayaka, she then run ran to the court just in time to stop Leon from being executed.



* PublicBathhouseScene: A glorious and unexpected role-reversal from the game. It’s the guys[[note]]specifically, Makoto, Mondo, Ishimaru, Byakuya, Hifumi and Yasuhiro[[/note]] who go to the bathhouse while Hina, Celeste and Toko are the one who take a peep. Also, the former two almost get caught due to Toko switching to Jill.

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* PublicBathhouseScene: A glorious and unexpected role-reversal from the game. It’s the guys[[note]]specifically, Makoto, Mondo, Ishimaru, Byakuya, Hifumi and Yasuhiro[[/note]] who go to the bathhouse while Hina, Celeste and Toko are the one ones who take a peep. Also, the former two almost get caught due to Toko switching to Jill.



* WhatTheHellHero: Nobody is okay with Ishimaru’s self-righteous attitute in chapter 3, [[spoiler:and everyone were outraged when he reveals everyone's secrets in a delusional attempt to bring everyone together. His strict rules only make thing worse for everyone and he’s not even aware about it]].

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* WhatTheHellHero: Nobody is okay with Ishimaru’s self-righteous attitute in chapter 3, [[spoiler:and everyone were was outraged when he reveals everyone's everyones' secrets in a delusional attempt to bring everyone together. His strict rules only make thing things worse for everyone and he’s not even aware about of it]].

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* CareerEndingInjury: Mukuro, still in her 'Junko' disguise, use the injury in her hand to point out that her modeling career is over in order to [[YouAreNotAlone support]] a depressed Sayaka.

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* CareerEndingInjury: Mukuro, still in her 'Junko' disguise, use the injury in her hand to point out that her modeling career is over in order to [[YouAreNotAlone support]] a depressed Sayaka.Sayaka.
** [[spoiler:Sayaka would later admit the same pain of never be able to sing on the stage ever again as a result of her scar on her stomach.]]



* EasyAmnesia: Played with. [[spoiler:Once Chihiro finally wakes up from the coma, she understandably suffers from TraumaInducedAmnesia since she doesn’t remember much of the event of chapter 2. However, she does remember Celeste’s real name.]]



* RunningGag: Leon's attempts at eating a sandwich are constantly ruined. The story even have a tag lampshading it, ''[[FunnyMoments Sandwich Denial]]''.

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* PublicBathhouseScene: A glorious and unexpected role-reversal from the game. It’s the guys[[note]]specifically, Makoto, Mondo, Ishimaru, Byakuya, Hifumi and Yasuhiro[[/note]] who go to the bathhouse while Hina, Celeste and Toko are the one who take a peep. Also, the former two almost get caught due to Toko switching to Jill.
* RunningGag: Leon's attempts at eating a sandwich are constantly ruined. The story even have has a tag lampshading it, ''[[FunnyMoments Sandwich Denial]]''.



* TookALevelInJerkass: Kiyotaka becomes a self-righteous jerk after the second trial as a result of Mondo "betrayal".

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* TookALevelInJerkass: Kiyotaka becomes a self-righteous jerk after the second trial as a result because of Mondo "betrayal".



* WhatAPieceOfJunk: The laptop where Alter-Ego is installed looks like a old computer, but as noted by Chihiro it’s actually more powerful than even her own high-end computer back at her home.

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* WhamLine: [[spoiler:After Chihiro wakes up from her coma, she says this to Celeste. She’s understandably shocked.]]
-->[[spoiler: '''Chihiro''': Thank you… ''Taeko''.]]
* WhatAPieceOfJunk: The laptop where Alter-Ego is installed looks like a an old computer, but as noted by Chihiro it’s actually more powerful than even her own high-end computer back at her home.



* WhatTheHellHero: Nobody is okay with Ishimaru’s self-righteous attitute in chapter 3, [[spoiler:and everyone was outraged when he reveals everyones' secrets in a delusional attempt to bring everyone together]].

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* WhatTheHellHero: Nobody is okay with Ishimaru’s self-righteous attitute in chapter 3, [[spoiler:and everyone was were outraged when he reveals everyones' everyone's secrets in a delusional attempt to bring everyone together]].together. His strict rules only make thing worse for everyone and he’s not even aware about it]].
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** This also applies to background story, Chihiro was bullied at young age for not being masculine enough and started cross-dressing to stop suffering from it. He ends up embracing his feminine side and causes him to become a {{Transgender}}.

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** This also applies to background story, Chihiro was bullied at young age for not being masculine enough and started cross-dressing to stop suffering from it. He ends up embracing his feminine side and causes him to become a {{Transgender}}.



* WhatIf: Notable in that the fic takes many cues from another WhatIf scenario of the canon, ''Danganronpa IF''; Makoto saved Mukuro from Spear of Gungnir not because his memory returning from being zapped by the fake escape switch but because his natural kindness alarms him of Monokuma's trap, Mukuro betrays Junko but not immediately reveals herself as the Ultimate Soldier because of the circumstances, EverybodyLives but not by brute-forcing the Monokuma army, etc.
* WhatTheHellHero: Nobody is okay with Ishimaru’s self-righteous attitute in chapter 3, [[spoiler:and everyone was outrage when he started to reveal everyones secrets in a delusional attempt to bring everyone together]].

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* WhatIf: Notable in that the fic takes many cues from another WhatIf scenario of the canon, ''Danganronpa IF''; Makoto saved Mukuro from Spear the Spears of Gungnir not because of his memory returning from being zapped by the fake escape switch switch, but because his natural kindness alarms him of Monokuma's trap, Mukuro betrays Junko but does not immediately reveals reveal herself as the Ultimate Soldier because of the circumstances, EverybodyLives but not by brute-forcing the Monokuma army, etc.
* WhatTheHellHero: Nobody is okay with Ishimaru’s self-righteous attitute in chapter 3, [[spoiler:and everyone was outrage outraged when he started to reveal everyones reveals everyones' secrets in a delusional attempt to bring everyone together]].

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