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* ReligionOfEvil: Elma and her family used to belong to one, where the children there were raped, tortured, and sometimes murdered to "cleanse" them of their evil.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: In the manga, Kanna's father is named Kimun; in this fic, he is named Seiryu.
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Whatever happened to the [[spoiler: girl that Hina was looking for.]] As the medical examiner describes it:
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* BadDreams: Tohru has one in which [[spoiler: a village of humans that she killed come back from the dead and kill her.]]
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* DomesticAbuse: Lucoa's nephew, Lacandon, tells her that [[spoiler: his previous partner physically and sexually abused him.]]
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* BlindDate: Lucoa is set up on one with the doctor who treated Kanna by her brother.
* BloodierAndGorier: Compared to the other chapters, where violence is either implied or limited in brutality, the final scene of Chapter 14 increases the gore factor, as [[spoiler: a warehouse where a missing girl is found is covered in gore, and the girl is described as being almost completely torn open.]]
* BloodierAndGorier: Compared to the other chapters, where violence is either implied or limited in brutality, the final scene of Chapter 14 increases the gore factor, as [[spoiler: a warehouse where a missing girl is found is covered in gore, and the girl is described as being almost completely torn open.]]
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* FamilyThemeNaming: All of the Kamui children are named after different Ainu gods: Pauchi (god of insanity), Apasam (god of the threshold), Kim-un (god of bears and mountains), Yushkep (god of spiders), Kina-sut (god of snakes), and Kanna (god of lightning and thunder). This is both continued and Averted with the parents; the mother is named Tokapcup, the Kamui of the sun, while the father's name is Seiryu, a name that has no relation to any Ainu gods.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 16. [[spoiler: As it turns out, Seiryu's abuse of Tokapcup was part of an act meant to trick the other members of the clan and prevent them from killing the Kamui family. Eventually, they decided to leave the other world and come to Earth. This chapter also has Kanna revealing her rape to her family members.]]
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* FlashbackCut: When [[spoiler: Kanna's brothers]] brothers bring up [[spoiler: her sister]], oldest sister Pauchi, Kanna has a memory of [[spoiler: her sister being hurt, implied to be Kanna's fault.]]
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[[https:http://archiveofourown.org/works/12231420/chapters/27788208 Just A Child]] is a ''Manga/MissKobayashisDragonMaid'' fanfiction on Archive of Our Own written by the user Johnny Mueller. Beginning with the rape of Kanna by one of her teachers, the story then expands to the rest of the canon characters and a few OCs as they react to the situation and try to deal with their own individual traumas.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Kanna's older twin brothers act in this fashion, with Yushkep being the red and Kim-un being the blue.
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* FlashbackCut: When [[spoiler: Kanna's brothers]] bring up [[spoiler: her sister]], Kanna has a memory of [[spoiler: her sister being hurt, implied to be Kanna's fault.]]
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* BadDreams: Tohru has one in which [[spoiler: a village of humans that she killed come back from the dead and kill her.]]
* ChildSoldiers: [[spoiler: Tohru began helping her father kill humans when she was young.]]
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* RapeAsDrama: The impetus of the plot. [[spoiler: Also present in Elma's backstory.]]
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* SexSlave: [[spoiler: Iruru]] became one after she was kidnapped by people who murdered her parents.
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted. After her rape, Kanna begins to see a therapist recommended to her.
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* DomesticAbuse: Lucoa's newphew, Lacandon, tells her that [[spoiler: his previous partner physically and sexually abused him.]]
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* DomesticAbuse: Lucoa's newphew, nephew, Lacandon, tells her that [[spoiler: his previous partner physically and sexually abused him.]]
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* DoubleTake: Kobayashi does a verbal version of this when Kanna references Tohru's love for her.
-->'''Kobayashi''': Ah, I see- Wait, what?
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* WorkingWithTheEx: It is implied that Yamato and Hina dated each other, and they consult with each other on child sexual abuse cases, including Kanna's.
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[[https:http://archiveofourown.org/works/12231420/chapters/27788208 Just A Child]] is a ''Manga/MissKobayashisDragonMaid'' fanfiction on Archive of Our Own written by the user Johnny Mueller. Beginning with the rape of Kanna by one of her teachers, the story then expands to the rest of the canon characters, as well as a few OCs, as they react to the situation, as well as their own individual traumas.
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[[https:http://archiveofourown.org/works/12231420/chapters/27788208 Just A Child]] is a ''Manga/MissKobayashisDragonMaid'' fanfiction on Archive of Our Own written by the user Johnny Mueller. Beginning with the rape of Kanna by one of her teachers, the story then expands to the rest of the canon characters, as well as characters and a few OCs, OCs as they react to the situation, as well as situation and try to deal with their own individual traumas.
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* RapeDiscreationShot: The only part of Kanna's rape that is shown is her teacher, Mr. Sunohara, laying his hand on her shoulder.
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* AllTherapistsAreMuggles: Kanna has to lie about her family and past to her therapist, since she doesn't know about dragons.
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* RapeDiscreationShot: The only part of Kanna's rape that is shown is her teacher, Mr. Sunohara, laying his hand on her shoulder.
* WhamLine: From Chapter 9: [[spoiler: I love you, Tohru.]]
* WhamLine: From Chapter 9: [[spoiler: I love you, Tohru.]]
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[[https:http://archiveofourown.org/works/12231420/chapters/27788208 Just A Child]] is a [[Anime/MissKobayashisDragonMaid]] fanfiction on Archive of Our Own written by the user Johnny Mueller. Beginning with the rape of Kanna by one of her teachers, the story then expands to the rest of the canon characters, as well as a few OCs, as they react to the situation, as well as their own individual traumas.
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[[https:http://archiveofourown.org/works/12231420/chapters/27788208 Just A Child]] is a [[Anime/MissKobayashisDragonMaid]] ''Manga/MissKobayashisDragonMaid'' fanfiction on Archive of Our Own written by the user Johnny Mueller. Beginning with the rape of Kanna by one of her teachers, the story then expands to the rest of the canon characters, as well as a few OCs, as they react to the situation, as well as their own individual traumas.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: [[Anime/MissKobayashisDragonMaid]]: ''Manga/MissKobayashisDragonMaid'': A light-hearted slice of life anime about family and culture clash. Just A Child: A DarkFic about rape and trauma.
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[[https:http://archiveofourown.org/works/12231420/chapters/27788208 Just A Child]] is a [[Anime/MissKobayashisDragonMaid]] fanfiction on Archive of Our Own written by the user Johnny Mueller. Beginning with the rape of Kanna by one of her teachers, the story then expands to the rest of the canon characters, as well as a few OCs, as they react to the situation, as well as their own individual traumas.
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!!This fanfiction provides examples of:
* ADateWithRosiePalms: Kobayashi masturbates while thinking about [[spoiler: Tohru having sex with her.]]
* BullyingADragon: Literally happens in Chapter 9, when a group of boys harass Kanna and Saikawa.
* ClusterF-Bomb/SirSwars-A-Lot: Detective Ryuji is given a colorful introduction:
-->'''Ryuji''': God damnit, where’d the fuck did I put my papers?... How the fuck am I still a detective?
* DarkerAndEdgier: [[Anime/MissKobayashisDragonMaid]]: A light-hearted slice of life anime about family and culture clash. Just A Child: A DarkFic about rape and trauma.
* DomesticAbuse: Lucoa's newphew, Lacandon, tells her that [[spoiler: his previous partner physically and sexually abused him.]]
* MassiveNumberedSiblings: Kanna is the youngest of six siblings, as opposed to the manga/anime, where no siblings are mentioned.
* PuppyLove: Kanna and Saikawa, even further than the manga/anime, as they kiss each other several times.
* RapeAsDrama: The impetus of the plot. [[spoiler: Also present in Elma's backstory.]]
* WorkingWithTheEx: It is implied that Yamato and Hina dated each other, and they consult with each other on child sexual abuse cases, including Kanna's.
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!!This fanfiction provides examples of:
* ADateWithRosiePalms: Kobayashi masturbates while thinking about [[spoiler: Tohru having sex with her.]]
* BullyingADragon: Literally happens in Chapter 9, when a group of boys harass Kanna and Saikawa.
* ClusterF-Bomb/SirSwars-A-Lot: Detective Ryuji is given a colorful introduction:
-->'''Ryuji''': God damnit, where’d the fuck did I put my papers?... How the fuck am I still a detective?
* DarkerAndEdgier: [[Anime/MissKobayashisDragonMaid]]: A light-hearted slice of life anime about family and culture clash. Just A Child: A DarkFic about rape and trauma.
* DomesticAbuse: Lucoa's newphew, Lacandon, tells her that [[spoiler: his previous partner physically and sexually abused him.]]
* MassiveNumberedSiblings: Kanna is the youngest of six siblings, as opposed to the manga/anime, where no siblings are mentioned.
* PuppyLove: Kanna and Saikawa, even further than the manga/anime, as they kiss each other several times.
* RapeAsDrama: The impetus of the plot. [[spoiler: Also present in Elma's backstory.]]
* WorkingWithTheEx: It is implied that Yamato and Hina dated each other, and they consult with each other on child sexual abuse cases, including Kanna's.
