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* AwesomeButImpractical: The CMC produced three different bullets for their first gun. One Shaped like the Apple Family Barn, One like Rainbow Dash, and one that was sort of bullet shaped
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* AwesomeButImpractical: The CMC produced three different bullets for their first gun. One Shaped shaped like the Apple Family Barn, One family barn, one like Rainbow Dash, and one that was sort of bullet shapedshaped.
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** [[spoiler: The two people onboard the Enterprise whose iPhone Andrew and Twilight discover are named after the main characters from DeadSpace.]]
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** And MORTARS.
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* InstantPlunderJustAddPirates: One omake has Discord setting up a pirate simulation for Pipsqueak and Luna. Things quickly get out of [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/119496/hands-omake-by-rift120 "hand"]].
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* AwesomeButImpractical: The CMC produced three different bullets for their first gun. One Shaped like the Apple Family Barn, One like Rainbow Dash, and one that was sort of bullet shaped
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Lampshaded when a changeling, just beaten up by a pissed-off Fluttershy, accuses Andrew of "corrupting" her.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Lampshaded when a changeling, just beaten up by a pissed-off Fluttershy, accuses says Andrew of has begun "corrupting" her.
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* BonusMaterial: Andrew does his rough drafts on Spacebattles, naturally this has lead to a large number of omakes, world building, and possible future events posted by the forum goers there.
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* BerserkButton: Hurting Andrew for Twilight and Fluttershy, and vice versa.
** Rarity takes the changeling attack ruining all her hard work on the wedding dresses ''very'' badly (unfortunately for the changelings).
* BigWhat: Applejack and Rarity when Andrew reveals that he gave the CMC weapons as part of the Ponyville militia response to the changelings.
** Rarity takes the changeling attack ruining all her hard work on the wedding dresses ''very'' badly (unfortunately for the changelings).
* BigWhat: Applejack and Rarity when Andrew reveals that he gave the CMC weapons as part of the Ponyville militia response to the changelings.
* CallingYourAttacks: Rainbow Dash when trying to sneak attack Chrysalis. Andrew lampshades how this defeats the purpose of a sneak attack (which fails, naturally).
* CatFight: Twilight and Fluttershy are implied to have had one while Andrew was accompanying Spike on the Dragon Migration.
* CatFight: Twilight and Fluttershy are implied to have had one while Andrew was accompanying Spike on the Dragon Migration.
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* GodzillaThreshold: Despite the seriousness of the situation, played for laughs -- when warning Ponyville about the impending changeling invasion, Andrew says things are bad enough he's going to have to ''ask the CMC for help.''
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Lampshaded when a changeling, just beaten up by a pissed-off Fluttershy, accuses Andrew of "corrupting" her.
-->'''Chrysalis''': I believe he already has.
-->(''beat'')
-->'''Twilight''': Was... Was that an innuendo?
* GodzillaThreshold: Despite the seriousness of the situation, played for laughs -- when warning Ponyville about the impending changeling invasion, Andrew says things are bad enough he's going to have to ''ask the CMC forhelp.''help''. Played a bit more seriously when we find out this means ''giving them guns''.
* HowWeGotHere: The royal wedding arc starts with a scene of Andrew and the Mane Six fighting through an army of invading changelings, before flashing back a couple of days. When the story catches up, Andrew helpfully points it out.
* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: At least, according to the changelings.
-->'''Chrysalis''': I believe he already has.
-->(''beat'')
-->'''Twilight''': Was... Was that an innuendo?
* GodzillaThreshold: Despite the seriousness of the situation, played for laughs -- when warning Ponyville about the impending changeling invasion, Andrew says things are bad enough he's going to have to ''ask the CMC for
* HowWeGotHere: The royal wedding arc starts with a scene of Andrew and the Mane Six fighting through an army of invading changelings, before flashing back a couple of days. When the story catches up, Andrew helpfully points it out.
* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: At least, according to the changelings.
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* GodzillaThreshold: When Despite the seriousness of the situation, played for laughs -- when warning Ponyville about the impending changeling invasion, Andrew says things are bad enough he's going to have to ''ask the CMC for help.''
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* [[spoiler: OrionDrive: the human space warship ''Enterprise'' (yes, this is lampshaded in the text) uses one.]]
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* [[spoiler: OrionDrive: the The human space warship ''Enterprise'' (yes, this is lampshaded in the text) uses one.]]
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* [[spoiler: OrionDrive: the human space warship ''Enterprise'' (yes, this is lampshaded in the text) uses one.]]
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* RageBreakingPoint: Having been teleported to the Everfree by Chrysalis, aware of the impending invasion and that his friends and girlfriends may be dead, and having spent a whole night being chased by the manticore obsessed with him, Andrew finally snaps, stands up to said manticore, screams in its face, and threatens to [[CutYourHeartOutWithASpoon rip out and eat its eyes]] if it doesn't help him. Either impressed or scared, it agrees.
* RememberThatTimeYouBlewUpASun: The Mane Six like to keep bringing up all of Andrew's adventures, whether he wants to talk about them or not.
* RememberThatTimeYouBlewUpASun: The Mane Six like to keep bringing up all of Andrew's adventures, whether he wants to talk about them or not.
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* RageBreakingPoint: Having been teleported to the Everfree by Chrysalis, aware of the impending invasion and that his friends and girlfriends may be dead, and having spent a whole night being chased by the manticore obsessed with him, Andrew finally snaps, stands up to said manticore, screams in its face, and threatens to [[CutYourHeartOutWithASpoon [[CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon rip out and eat its eyes]] if it doesn't help him. Either impressed or scared, it agrees.
*RememberThatTimeYouBlewUpASun: RememberWhenYouBlewUpASun: The Mane Six like to keep bringing up all of Andrew's adventures, whether he wants to talk about them or not.
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* FluffyTheTerrible: Andrew takes to calling the manticore chasing him all the time "[[Franchise/StarWars Chewy]]".
* GodzillaThreshold: When warning Ponyville about the impending changeling invasion, Andrew says things are bad enough he's going to have to ''ask the CMC for help.''
* GodzillaThreshold: When warning Ponyville about the impending changeling invasion, Andrew says things are bad enough he's going to have to ''ask the CMC for help.''
* NoodleIncident: According to Andrew, the CMC once tried to build a ''spaceship''. He doesn't elaborate, saying he doesn't think he can without descending into cursing.
* RageBreakingPoint: Having been teleported to the Everfree by Chrysalis, aware of the impending invasion and that his friends and girlfriends may be dead, and having spent a whole night being chased by the manticore obsessed with him, Andrew finally snaps, stands up to said manticore, screams in its face, and threatens to [[CutYourHeartOutWithASpoon rip out and eat its eyes]] if it doesn't help him. Either impressed or scared, it agrees.
* RememberThatTimeYouBlewUpASun: The Mane Six like to keep bringing up all of Andrew's adventures, whether he wants to talk about them or not.
* RageBreakingPoint: Having been teleported to the Everfree by Chrysalis, aware of the impending invasion and that his friends and girlfriends may be dead, and having spent a whole night being chased by the manticore obsessed with him, Andrew finally snaps, stands up to said manticore, screams in its face, and threatens to [[CutYourHeartOutWithASpoon rip out and eat its eyes]] if it doesn't help him. Either impressed or scared, it agrees.
* RememberThatTimeYouBlewUpASun: The Mane Six like to keep bringing up all of Andrew's adventures, whether he wants to talk about them or not.
* ShoutOut: All the time, though no one ever gets Andrew's references.
* SpeaksFluentAnimal: After confronting and finally standing up to the manticore, Andrew suddenly finds himself capable of understanding it. He doesn't know why.
* SpeaksFluentAnimal: After confronting and finally standing up to the manticore, Andrew suddenly finds himself capable of understanding it. He doesn't know why.
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* YouAreWorthHell: When Andrew goes to Tarturus looking for Twilight
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* YouAreWorthHell: When Andrew goes to Tarturus looking for TwilightTwilight.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Andrew says this almost word-for-word when, fleeing from the manticore in the Everfree, he finds an opening back to Ponyville... only to find himself on top of a large cliff.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Andrew says this almost word-for-word when, fleeing from the manticore in the Everfree, he finds an opening back to Ponyville... only to find himself on top of a large cliff.
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* ShipTease: Applejack and Royal Guard member Galland.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Chrysalis offers Andrew to serve her and help take over Equestria. He naturally refuses, and she just as naturally doesn't take it well.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14407/hands "Hands"]] is a fic by Andrew Joshua Talon, known for the fic [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/339/progress "Progress."]]
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14407/hands "Hands"]] is a fic by Andrew Joshua Talon, better known for the fic [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/339/progress "Progress."]]
"FanFic/{{Progress}}".
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* {{Action Survivor}}: Andrew is a normal guy but can be surprisingly dangerous if pushed, especially if he has his weapons on him.[[spoiler:As the demon found out.]].
* {{Buttmonkey}}: Andrew, sometimes as a result of his own doing, but mostly just due to bad luck.
* {{Clingy Jealous Girl}}: Twilight mostly, but Fluttershy can and has shown this as well.
* {{Failure is the Only Option}}: The CMC have done and created amazing things under Andrew's tutelage. Still no cutie marks.
* {{Interspecies Romance}}: Andrew and Twilight. Eventually Fluttershy gets in on it.
* {{Least Rhymable Word}}: Andrew tries this on Zecora with the word "orange." She doesn't fall for it though.
* {{Buttmonkey}}: Andrew, sometimes as a result of his own doing, but mostly just due to bad luck.
* {{Clingy Jealous Girl}}: Twilight mostly, but Fluttershy can and has shown this as well.
* {{Failure is the Only Option}}: The CMC have done and created amazing things under Andrew's tutelage. Still no cutie marks.
* {{Interspecies Romance}}: Andrew and Twilight. Eventually Fluttershy gets in on it.
* {{Least Rhymable Word}}: Andrew tries this on Zecora with the word "orange." She doesn't fall for it though.
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* {{Action Survivor}}: ActionSurvivor: Andrew is a normal guy but can be surprisingly dangerous if pushed, especially if he has his weapons on him.him. [[spoiler:As the demon found out.]].
*{{Buttmonkey}}: AlienInvasion: How the changelings are interpreted here. [[spoiler: They invaded Earth at some point after Andrew ended up in Equestria, but humanity fought them off.]]
* ButtMonkey: Andrew, sometimes as a result of his own doing, but mostly just due to bad luck.
*{{Clingy Jealous Girl}}: ClingyJealousGirl: Twilight mostly, but Fluttershy can and has shown this as well.
*{{Failure is the Only Option}}: {{Crossover}}: With "Versus Equestria", another Humans in Equestria fic.
* TheDreaded: Humans to dragons. Comes in handy when Andrew has to protect Spike from those teenage dragons bullies.
* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: The CMC have done and created amazing things under Andrew's tutelage. Still no cutie marks.
*{{Interspecies Romance}}: InterspeciesRomance: Andrew and Twilight. Eventually Fluttershy gets in on it.
*{{Least Rhymable Word}}: LeastRhymableWord: Andrew tries this on Zecora with the word "orange." She doesn't fall for it though.though.
* LoveTriangle: Twilight/Andrew/Fluttershy. Eventually, they reluctantly decide to live in a threesome.
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* ButtMonkey: Andrew, sometimes as a result of his own doing, but mostly just due to bad luck.
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* TheDreaded: Humans to dragons. Comes in handy when Andrew has to protect Spike from those teenage dragons bullies.
* FailureIsTheOnlyOption: The CMC have done and created amazing things under Andrew's tutelage. Still no cutie marks.
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* LoveTriangle: Twilight/Andrew/Fluttershy. Eventually, they reluctantly decide to live in a threesome.
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* {{Romantic Comedy}}: Andrew's relationship's with Twilight and Fluttershy and the situations this brings.
* {{Wall of Weapons}}: Andrew has a chest full of guns and at least one flamethrower. All made by the Cutie Mark Crusaders.
* {{You Are Worth Hell}}: When Andrew goes to Tarturus looking for Twilight
* {{Wall of Weapons}}: Andrew has a chest full of guns and at least one flamethrower. All made by the Cutie Mark Crusaders.
* {{You Are Worth Hell}}: When Andrew goes to Tarturus looking for Twilight
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* {{Romantic Comedy}}: RomanticComedy: Andrew's relationship's with Twilight and Fluttershy and the situations this brings.
*{{Wall VoluntaryShapeshifting: Twilight creates a spell that transforms ponies into humans. She refines it over the course of Weapons}}: the story, going from merely being anthropomorphized ponies to being practically indistinguishable from real humans, minus wings or horns, depending on what race they were prior.
* WallOfWeapons: Andrew has a chest full of guns and at least one flamethrower. All made by the Cutie Mark Crusaders.
*{{You Are Worth Hell}}: WorthyOpponent: According to Fluttershy, this is why that manticore keeps chasing Andrew. He's less than flattered.
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* WallOfWeapons: Andrew has a chest full of guns and at least one flamethrower. All made by the Cutie Mark Crusaders.
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* {{Least Rhymable Word}}: Andrew tries this on Zecora with the word "orange." She doesn't fall for it though.
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* [[MegatonPunch Megaton Kick]]: Applejack accidentally kicks Andrew through a wall, breaking his jaw, when Granny Smith tries to help Andrew massage Applejack's stiff leg muscle. She surprised Applejack by pressing Andrew's hand onto Applejack's lower flank.
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"Hands" is a fic by Andrew Joshua Talon, known for the fic "Progress."
It uses the "Human in Equestria" concept..but makes it much funnier than the usual fare.
It uses the "Human in Equestria" concept..but makes it much funnier than the usual fare.
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It uses the "Human in Equestria"
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* {{Action Survivor}}: Andrew is a normal guy but can be surpisingly dangerous if pushed, especally if he has his weapons on him.[[spoiler:As the demon found out.]].
* InterspeciesRomance: Andrew and Twilight.
* InterspeciesRomance: Andrew and Twilight.
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* {{Action Survivor}}: Andrew is a normal guy but can be surpisingly surprisingly dangerous if pushed, especally especially if he has his weapons on him.[[spoiler:As the demon found out.]].
*InterspeciesRomance: {{Buttmonkey}}: Andrew, sometimes as a result of his own doing, but mostly just due to bad luck.
* {{Clingy Jealous Girl}}: Twilight mostly, but Fluttershy can and has shown this as well.
* {{Failure is the Only Option}}: The CMC have done and created amazing things under Andrew's tutelage. Still no cutie marks.
* {{Interspecies Romance}}: Andrew andTwilight.Twilight. Eventually Fluttershy gets in on it.
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* {{Clingy Jealous Girl}}: Twilight mostly, but Fluttershy can and has shown this as well.
* {{Failure is the Only Option}}: The CMC have done and created amazing things under Andrew's tutelage. Still no cutie marks.
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* {{Action Survivor}}: Andrew is a normal guy but can be surpisingly dangerous if pushed, especally if he has his weapons on him. As the demon found out.
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* {{Action Survivor}}: Andrew is a normal guy but can be surpisingly dangerous if pushed, especally if he has his weapons on him. As [[spoiler:As the demon found out.]].
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* InterspeciesRomance: Andrew and Twilight
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him. As the demon found out.
* InterspeciesRomance: Andrew andTwilightTwilight.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Andrew and Twilight.
* {{Romantic Comedy}}: Andrew's relationship's with Twilight and Fluttershy and the situations this brings.
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* {{Romantic Comedy:}} Andrew's relationship's with Twilight and Fluttershy and the situations this brings.
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* <a href="http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RomanticComedy">Romantic Comedy:</a> {{Romantic Comedy:}} Andrew's relationship's with Twilight and Fluttershy and the situations this brings.
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* <a href="http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RomanticComedy">Romantic Comedy:</a> Andrew's relationship's with Twilight and Fluttershy and the situations this brings.
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"Hands" is a fic by Andre Joshua Talon, known for the fic "Progress."
It uses the "Human in Equestria" concept..but makes it much funnier than the usual fare.
!! This fic has examples of:
It uses the "Human in Equestria" concept..but makes it much funnier than the usual fare.
!! This fic has examples of:
