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* CassandraTruth: [[MySignificanceSenseIsTingling Pinkie Pie]] keeps telling high command that their orbital fighter bays could ''really'' do with some flak-cannons. Predictably they take no notice.
** Averted when [[GodEmperor Celestia]] tells the TEC that her currently insane sister will be returning to wreak vengeance soon. They send a battlefleet.
** Averted when [[GodEmperor Celestia]] tells the TEC that her currently insane sister will be returning to wreak vengeance soon. They send a battlefleet.
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* ProudWarriorRace: Gryphons, Pegasi and the Kol family. It made them oddballs in the peaceful Trade Order. Then the Vasari turned up.
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* HumansAreWarriors: As explained in a letter to the [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Gryphus Republic]] the humans of the Trade Order are peaceful by conscious choice, not by natural inclination.
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** To elaborate: Most of the fic's WorldBuilding is on the forums, in the form of "extra documents" written InUniverse (for instance, Cloudsdale is described in a tourist brochure). There's also some elaboration of story elements in the discussion. None of this is ''necessary'' to understand the fic, but definitely helps flesh out the story.
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** It's less CruelMercy and more an indirectly-caused FateWorseThanDeath. [[CompleteMonster Not they they didn't deserve it, in any case.]]
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It can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/4387/Friends-of-a-Solar-Empire here]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7556482/1/Friends_of_a_Solar_Empire here]].
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It can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/4387/Friends-of-a-Solar-Empire here]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7556482/1/Friends_of_a_Solar_Empire here]].
here]]. And [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showpost.php?p=6995016&postcount=1 here's]] an index on the Spacebattles forum.
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* AllThereInTheManual: The Spacebattles threads.
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* TranquilFury: In a flashback, A TEC fleet arrives at a planet conquered by the Vasari, and finds it [[MoralEventHorizon turned into a giant slave camp and strip mine]]. When soldiers are sent down on a rescue mission, Rarity calmly orders them to shoot ''any'' Vasari they see, no survivors. Even the resident ColonelBadass is surprised.
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* MegaCorp: The TEC is an alliance of these; Rarity's ship is even owned by one.
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** Even Rainbow Dash finds it a bit odd, musing that it came about because "a human (took) a foal’s suggestion too seriously".
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** Even Rainbow Dash finds it a bit odd, musing that it came about because "a human (took) a foal’s suggestion too seriously".seriously".
* WorldBuilding: Arguably one of the most popular aspects of the fic.
* WorldBuilding: Arguably one of the most popular aspects of the fic.
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** Even Rainbow Dash finds it a bit odd, musing that it came about beacause "a human (took) a foal’s suggestion too seriously".
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* AndIMustScream: WordOfGod on what happened to Discord. The Traders sealed his statue in a small ship, put it on auto pilot towards empty space, and kicked on the FTL. A ship can ''only'' drop out of FTL if it enters a strong gravity well, and their are ''very'' few planets or stars in the ship's path. And Discord is ''still'' stuck as a statue during all of this.
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** Even Rainbow Dash finds it a bit odd, musing that it came about beacause "some designer took a pegasus or griffin too literally".
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** Even Rainbow Dash finds it a bit odd, musing that it came about beacause "some designer took "a human (took) a pegasus or griffin foal’s suggestion too literally".seriously".
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** [[AssholeVictim ...Dispropotionate?]]
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* HypercompetentSidekick: Lampshaded; Rarity thinks the only reason she survived in position to be competent was thanks to the local ColonelBadass.
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* ShoutOut: Rainbow Dash's callsign is "[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined Starbuck]]".
** Equestria's Argonev starbase is called the ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kasztanka Kasztanka]]''.
** Equestria's Argonev starbase is called the ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kasztanka Kasztanka]]''.
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* TheHighQueen: Princess Celestia, who is still ruling Equestria, controls most of the pony species by the strength of tradition and by being an honestly good ruler and noted as being one of *the* most important members of the TEC.
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* TheHighQueen: Princess Celestia, who is still ruling Equestria, controls most of the pony species by the strength of tradition and by being an honestly good ruler and noted as being one of *the* ''the'' most important members of the TEC.
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A crossover between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and SinsOfASolarEmpire, written by Dalek Ix.
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A crossover between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and SinsOfASolarEmpire, ''SinsOfASolarEmpire'', written by Dalek Ix.
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* GoshDangItToHeck: A human colonel is described as wearing "an apple-eating grin" when [[NoodleIncident a crazy shore leave involving Fluttershy]] is mentioned. An odd example, as it appears in narration, not dialogue.
* NoodleIncident: Apparently, Fluttershy joined Rarity's crew in some rather over-the-top antics on their last shore leave.
* NoodleIncident: Apparently, Fluttershy joined Rarity's crew in some rather over-the-top antics on their last shore leave.
* TheStinger: Both chapters so far end with flashbacks to Twilight's past, in the form of "holo-vids". [[spoiler: Word of God is that Celestia is the one watching them.]]
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* UnusualUserInterface: Pegasi and griffons control their fighters with theirwings.wings.
** Even Rainbow Dash finds it a bit odd, musing that it came about beacause "some designer took a pegasus or griffin too literally".
* UnusualUserInterface: Pegasi and griffons control their fighters with their
** Even Rainbow Dash finds it a bit odd, musing that it came about beacause "some designer took a pegasus or griffin too literally".
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The Trade Order's Investigation Directorate. Their response to the actions of the [[CorruptCorporate exacutive Horizon]] [[CompleteMonster Corporation]] was to hire a [[MoreDakka Marza-class dreadnought]] to blow up the asteroid their facility had been built on, and then ban the rest of the Traders from doing business with them. Not even to buy ''food''.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The Trade Order's Investigation Directorate. Their response to the actions of the [[CorruptCorporate exacutive [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Horizon]] [[CompleteMonster Corporation]] was to hire a [[MoreDakka Marza-class dreadnought]] to blow up the asteroid their facility had been built on, and then ban the rest of the Traders from doing business with them. Not even to buy ''food''.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The Trade Order's Investigation Directorate. Their response to the actions of the [[CorruptCorporate exacutive Horizon]] [[CompleteMonster Corporation]] was to hire a [[MoreDakka Marza-class dreadnought]] to blow up the asteroid their facility had been built on, and then ban the rest of the Traders from doing business with them. Not even to buy ''food''.
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* AcePilot: Pegasi and Griffons in general. That someone managed to find a way to let them control fighter craft with their wings helps.
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** The general opinion of the Trade Order regarding the Vasari. They are not wrong.
** The general opinion of the Trade Order regarding the Vasari. They are not wrong.
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*{{Moe}}: SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: Averted. ''Hard''. The author goes out of his way to make it clear that space is ''fucking'' '''''huge'''''. He even describes Twilight Sparkle, oh so very much.and Spike seeing the TDN ''Novus'' as a tiny point in the distance as a minor miracle.
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** The general opinion of the Trade Order regarding the Vasari and the Advent. They are not wrong.
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* AuthorAppeal: Crossovers. This ''is'' the same guy who brought us ''Fanfic/AHero''.
* CompleteMonster: The people who made TwilightSparkle.
Sparkle, The Horizon Corporation.
** The general opinion of the Trade Order regarding theVasari and the Advent.Vasari. They are not wrong.
* CompleteMonster: The people who made Twilight
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* CompleteMonster: The people who made Twilight Sparkle.
** The general opinion of the Trade Order regarding the Vasari and the Advent. They are not wrong.
* CruelMercy: By WordOfGod what happened to the people running the lab that Twilight came from.
** The general opinion of the Trade Order regarding the Vasari and the Advent. They are not wrong.
* CruelMercy: By WordOfGod what happened to the people running the lab that Twilight came from.
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* TheHighQueen: Princess Celestia, who is still ruling Equestria, controls most of the pony species by the strength of tradition and by being an honestly good ruler and noted as being one of *the* most important members of the TEC.
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A crossover between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and SinsOfASolarEmpire, written by Dalek Ix.
Equestria has been part of the Trade Order for a thousand years, enjoying prosperity. But as the Summer Sun Celebration looms and Nightmare Moon's return is on the horizon, forces align on both sides.
It can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/4387/Friends-of-a-Solar-Empire here]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7556482/1/Friends_of_a_Solar_Empire here]].
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*[[OfficerAndAGentleman Officer and a Gentlepony]]: Rarity.
Equestria has been part of the Trade Order for a thousand years, enjoying prosperity. But as the Summer Sun Celebration looms and Nightmare Moon's return is on the horizon, forces align on both sides.
It can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/4387/Friends-of-a-Solar-Empire here]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7556482/1/Friends_of_a_Solar_Empire here]].
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*GattacaBabies: Twilight Sparkle
*[[OfficerAndAGentleman Officer and a Gentlepony]]: Rarity.
