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A duel is either a win or a loss. In one world Yugi defeated Pegasus, in another he did not. Joey, Tea, and Tristan's world changes into a place where every choice is regrettable and the Millennium Puzzle is a curse to them all.
Set during the final battle of Duelist Kingdom, the story explores what would have happened if Yugi had lost his duel with Pegasus. Without Yugi or the spirit of the Millennium Puzzle to guide them, Joey, Tea, and Tristan must band together and deal with the consequences of what happened, their own actions, and try to survive in a world that will soon be forever changed.
Set during the final battle of Duelist Kingdom, the story explores what would have happened if Yugi had lost his duel with Pegasus. Without Yugi or the spirit of the Millennium Puzzle to guide them, Joey, Tea, and Tristan must band together and deal with the consequences of what happened, their own actions, and try to survive in a world that will soon be forever changed.
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A duel is either a win or a loss. In one world Yugi defeated Pegasus, in another he did not. Joey, Tea, Téa, and Tristan's world changes into a place where every choice is regrettable and the Millennium Puzzle is a curse to them all.
Set during the final battle of Duelist Kingdom, the story explores what would have happened if Yugi had lost his duel with Pegasus. Without Yugi or the spirit of the Millennium Puzzle to guide them, Joey,Tea, Téa, and Tristan must band together and deal with the consequences of what happened, their own actions, and try to survive in a world that will soon be forever changed.
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* BittersweetEnding: Pegasus was stopped from getting the Millennium Puzzle, [[spoiler:both Ryou and Yami Bakura are presumed dead]], and Joey, Tea, and Tristan have escaped with the soulless Mokuba. However, [[spoiler:Joey realizes that they'll never stop being hunted, declares that they cannot be friends, and the trio separate to save the world]].
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Yami Bakura does this to Tea with the Change of Heart card.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Yami Bakura does this to Tea with the Change of Heart card.
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* BittersweetEnding: Pegasus was stopped from getting the Millennium Puzzle, [[spoiler:both Ryou and Yami Bakura are presumed dead]], and Joey, Tea, Téa, and Tristan have escaped with the soulless Mokuba. However, [[spoiler:Joey realizes that they'll never stop being hunted, declares that they cannot be friends, and the trio separate to save the world]].
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* TheHeart: Tea, Téa, but the heroes realize that Yugi was this to them.
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: Examined and ultimately deconstructed. While their friendship sustains them and helps them to never give up, Joey realizes that the villains can and will use it as a weapon, and ultimately decides [[spoiler:he, Tristan, and Tea must ''stop'' being friends to save the world]].
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: Examined and ultimately deconstructed. While their friendship sustains them and helps them to never give up, Joey realizes that the villains can and will use it as a weapon, and ultimately decides [[spoiler:he, Tristan, and Tea Téa must ''stop'' being friends to save the world]].
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* RealityWarper: Pegasus, Yami Bakura, [[spoiler:Joey, Tea, and Tristan]] gain the ability to summon monsters from the Shadow Realm into reality. Pegasus also alters the structure of his castle, locking the heroes into an endless room.
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* RealityWarper: Pegasus, Yami Bakura, [[spoiler:Joey, Tea, Téa, and Tristan]] gain the ability to summon monsters from the Shadow Realm into reality. Pegasus also alters the structure of his castle, locking the heroes into an endless room.
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* ShipTeasing: Between Ryou and Tea, but in a twisted way as he uses it against her and her friends.
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* ShipTeasing: Between Ryou and Tea, Téa, but in a twisted way as he uses it against her and her friends.
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* WeWereYourTeam: Yugi kept his friends together. Tea points out at the end that if he were there, [[spoiler:he wouldn't have let them split apart]].
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* WeWereYourTeam: Yugi kept his friends together. Tea Téa points out at the end that if he were there, [[spoiler:he wouldn't have let them split apart]].
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* AlternateUniverseFicAlternateUniverseFic: The story explores what would have happened if Yugi had lost his duel with Pegasus, rather than winning it as he did in canon.
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Played for drama, as Joey suddenly remembers his promise to Serenity, and realizes he'll never keep it now.
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Played for drama, as Joey suddenly remembers his promise to Serenity, Serenity and realizes he'll never keep it now.
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* VisionaryVillain: Pegasus.
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* VisionaryVillain: Pegasus.Pegasus gleefully explains his plan to reshape the world in his image and to his rules.
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->''The world had become a dangerous place in just a few hours.''
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->''The world had become a dangerous place in just only a few hours.''
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Set during the final battle of Duelist Kingdom, the story explores what would have happened if Yugi had lost his duel with Pegasus. Without Yugi or the spirit of the Millennium Puzzle to guide them, Joey, Tea, and Tristan must band together and deal with the consequences of what happened, their own actions, and try to survive in a world that would soon be forever changed.
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Set during the final battle of Duelist Kingdom, the story explores what would have happened if Yugi had lost his duel with Pegasus. Without Yugi or the spirit of the Millennium Puzzle to guide them, Joey, Tea, and Tristan must band together and deal with the consequences of what happened, their own actions, and try to survive in a world that would will soon be forever changed.
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Played for drama, as Joey suddenly remembers his promise to Serenity.
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Played for drama, as Joey suddenly remembers his promise to Serenity.Serenity, and realizes he'll never keep it now.
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->''The world had become a dangerous place in just a few hours.''
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* ForWantOfANail: Everything changes when Pegasus wins the duel instead of Yugi.
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* DarkFic: Not as dark as the manga, but darker than the Creator/FourKidsEntertainment dub and possibly the original anime.
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* DarkFic: DarkerAndEdgier: Not as dark as the manga, but darker than the Creator/FourKidsEntertainment dub and possibly the original anime.
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* UndyingLoyalty: Towards Yugi's memory.
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* UndyingLoyalty: Towards Joey is constantly asking himself what Yugi would do in situations, and a lot of his actions stem from wanting to honor Yugi's memory.
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* WorthyOpponent: Yami Bakura considers Pegasus to be one.
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* EmptyShell: Yugi's grandpa, the Kaiba brothers, and Yugi himself, courtesy of Pegasus.
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* RuleOfCool: The Duel Monsters being summoned in reality.
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* EvilVsEvil: Pegasus versus Yami Bakura. He's much more successful than in canon, forcing Bakura to retreat.
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* EvilVsEvil: EvilVersusEvil: Pegasus versus Yami Bakura. He's much more successful than in canon, forcing Bakura to retreat.
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''Fallen King'' is a oneshot ''Anime/YuGiOh'' fanfic.
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''Fallen King'' is a oneshot ''Anime/YuGiOh'' fanfic.fanfic written by Selena Style.
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* ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: [[spoiler:This is Joey's reason for deciding they can't be friends]].
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* ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: [[spoiler:This is Joey's reason for deciding they can't be friends]]. Someone will always be after the Puzzle, and [[spoiler:by staying apart]] there's a chance someone else can help before the world ends.
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* TheFellowshipHasEnded: At the end of the story, [[spoiler:Joey decides they can't be friends and must stay away from each other to save the world]].
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* ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: [[spoiler:This is Joey's reason for deciding they can't be friends]].
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* WeWereYourTeam: Yugi kept his friends together. Tea points out at the end that if he were there, [[spoiler:he wouldn't have let them split apart]].
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* RealityWarper: Pegasus, Yami Bakura, and [[spoiler:Joey and Tristan]] gain the ability to summon monsters from the Shadow Realm into reality. Pegasus also alters the structure of his castle, locking the heroes into an endless room.
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* RealityWarper: Pegasus, Yami Bakura, and [[spoiler:Joey [[spoiler:Joey, Tea, and Tristan]] gain the ability to summon monsters from the Shadow Realm into reality. Pegasus also alters the structure of his castle, locking the heroes into an endless room.
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* DeadFic: The fic was intended to be multiple chapters, but ultimately only one was posted. [[TropesAreNotBad It works quite well as a oneshot fic, though]].
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* DeadFic: The fic was intended to be multiple chapters, but ultimately only one was posted. [[TropesAreNotBad It works quite well as a oneshot fic, though]].
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* EvilerThanThou: In-universe, Joey sees Pegasus as more evil than Yami Bakura.
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* OhCrap: Yami Bakura gets this reaction when Pegasus brings out Relinquished.
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Set during the final battle of Duelist Kingdom, the story explores what would have happened if Yugi had lost his duel with Pegasus. Without Yugi or the spirit of the Millennium Puzzle to guide them, Joey, Tea, and Tristan must band together and deal with the consequences of what happened, their own actions, and try to survive in a world that would soon be forever changed.
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* EurekaMoment: Tristan and Joey ramble about ''Film/TheWizardofOz'' and wanting to fly home like Dorothy, and suddenly remember [[spoiler:Kaiba's helicopter]].
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* EurekaMoment: Tristan and Joey ramble about ''Film/TheWizardofOz'' ''Film/TheWizardOfOz'' and wanting to fly home like Dorothy, and suddenly remember [[spoiler:Kaiba's helicopter]].
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* InTheirOwnImage: Pegasus's ultimate goal is to rewrite the world with his rules.
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* InTheirOwnImage: Pegasus's ultimate goal is to rewrite the world with according to his rules.
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* EvilEye: The Millennium Eye.
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* MagicalEye: The Millennium Eye. Its glow is always described as malevolent in nature.
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* EurekaMoment: Tristan and Joey get this when [[spoiler:they remember Kaiba's helicopter]].
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* EurekaMoment: Tristan and Joey get this when [[spoiler:they ramble about ''Film/TheWizardofOz'' and wanting to fly home like Dorothy, and suddenly remember Kaiba's [[spoiler:Kaiba's helicopter]].
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* ArtifactOfDoom: The Millennium Items, particularly the Eye, Ring and Puzzle.
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* ArtifactOfDoom: The Millennium Items, particularly Eye and Ring, but the Eye, Ring Millennium Puzzle is the one most touched upon. Being near its ''pieces'' lets those in proximity summon monsters, and Puzzle.Pegasus plans to use it to rewrite reality.
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* RealityWarper: Pegasus, Yami Bakura, and [[spoiler:Joey and Tristan]] gain the ability to summon monsters from the Shadow Realm into reality.
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* RealityWarper: Pegasus, Yami Bakura, and [[spoiler:Joey and Tristan]] gain the ability to summon monsters from the Shadow Realm into reality. Pegasus also alters the structure of his castle, locking the heroes into an endless room.
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* WhamLine: Several near the end.
-->''"I'm protecting my friends," [Joey] replied. Though his voice was steady, his body trembled fiercely. Things had certainly changed. "He's not our friend."''
** A few pages later there's a bigger one.
-->''If the Puzzle is a danger to the world, then we're a danger to each other.''\\
"[[spoiler:We can't be friends]]," he spoke out loud, breaking the silence.
-->''"I'm protecting my friends," [Joey] replied. Though his voice was steady, his body trembled fiercely. Things had certainly changed. "He's not our friend."''
** A few pages later there's a bigger one.
-->''If the Puzzle is a danger to the world, then we're a danger to each other.''\\
"[[spoiler:We can't be friends]]," he spoke out loud, breaking the silence.
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* BittersweetEnding: Pegasus was stopped from getting the Millennium Puzzle, [[spoiler:both Ryou and Yami Bakura are presumed dead]], and Joey, Tea, and Tristan have escaped with the soulless Mokuba. However, [[spoiler:Joey realizes that they'll never stop being hunted, declares that they cannot be friends, and the trio separate to save the world]].
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* DeadFic: The fic was intended to be multiple chapters, but ultimately only one was posted.
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* DeadFic: The fic was intended to be multiple chapters, but ultimately only one was posted. [[TropesAreNotBad It works quite well as a oneshot fic, though]].
* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Played for drama, as Joey suddenly remembers his promise to Serenity.
-->''The world, my friends, my family...''\\
Joey's eyes shot open as reality slapped him in the face.\\
"Serenity," he whispered.
-->''The world, my friends, my family...''\\
Joey's eyes shot open as reality slapped him in the face.\\
"Serenity," he whispered.
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* TheHeart: The heroes realize that Yugi was this to them.
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* TheHeart: The Tea, but the heroes realize that Yugi was this to them.
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* DarkFic: Not as dark as the manga, but darker than the Creator/FourKids dub and possibly the original anime.
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* DarkFic: Not as dark as the manga, but darker than the Creator/FourKids Creator/FourKidsEntertainment dub and possibly the original anime.
* EvilVsEvil: Pegasus versus Yami Bakura. He's much more successful than in canon, forcing Bakura to retreat.
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* MakeABetterWorld: Pegasus's ultimate goal is this.
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* MakeABetterWorld: TheHeart: The heroes realize that Yugi was this to them.
* InTheirOwnImage: Pegasus's ultimate goal isthis.to rewrite the world with his rules.
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* VillainousRescue: Yami Bakura saves the group from Pegasus a few times so ''he'' can take the Puzzle.
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* UndyingLoyalty: Towards Yugi's memory.
* VillainousRescue: Yami Bakura saves the group from Pegasus a fewtimes times, but only so ''he'' can take the Puzzle.Puzzle.
* VisionaryVillain: Pegasus.
* VillainousRescue: Yami Bakura saves the group from Pegasus a few
* VisionaryVillain: Pegasus.
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The fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1191480/1/Fallen-King here]].
* ArtifactOfDoom: The Millennium Items, particularly the Eye, Ring and Puzzle.
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* BigBadWannabe: Yami Bakura is a threat, but not nearly as pressing as Pegasus is. [[s
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* BigBadWannabe: Yami Bakura is ''is'' a threat, but not nearly as pressing as Pegasus is. [[sIn his internal monologue, Joey thinks that Pegasus is the ''real'' monster.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Yami Bakura does this to Tea with the Change of Heart card.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Yami Bakura does this to Tea with the Change of Heart card.
* DeadFic: The fic was intended to be multiple chapters, but ultimately only one was posted.
* DismantledMacGuffin: The Millennium Puzzle.
* DismantledMacGuffin: The Millennium Puzzle.
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: Played with and ultimately deconstructed. While their friendship sustains them and helps them out, Joey realizes that the villains can and will use it as a weapon, and ultimately decides [[spoiler:he, Tristan, and Tea must ''stop'' being friends to save the world]].
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* EurekaMoment: Tristan and Joey get this when [[spoiler:they remember Kaiba's helicopter]].
* EvilEye: The Millennium Eye.
* FakinMacGuffin: Joey bluffs Pegasus's guards by throwing a piece of stone off the tower and pretending it's the Puzzle.
* MakeABetterWorld: Pegasus's ultimate goal is this.
* MasterOfIllusion: Pegasus becomes this, using an endless hallway to trap the heroes.
* ThePowerOfFriendship:Played with Examined and ultimately deconstructed. While their friendship sustains them and helps them out, to never give up, Joey realizes that the villains can and will use it as a weapon, and ultimately decides [[spoiler:he, Tristan, and Tea must ''stop'' being friends to save the world]].
* EvilEye: The Millennium Eye.
* FakinMacGuffin: Joey bluffs Pegasus's guards by throwing a piece of stone off the tower and pretending it's the Puzzle.
* MakeABetterWorld: Pegasus's ultimate goal is this.
* MasterOfIllusion: Pegasus becomes this, using an endless hallway to trap the heroes.
* ThePowerOfFriendship:
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* RealityWarper: Pegasus, Yami Bakura, and [[spoiler:Joey and Tristan]] gain the ability to summon monsters from the Shadow Realm into reality.
* RuleOfSymbolism: Seven days to create the world and seven Items that would destroy it.
* RuleOfSymbolism: Seven days to create the world and seven Items that would destroy it.
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* TookALevelInBadass: ''Everybody'', but especially Joey.
* VillainousRescue: Yami Bakura saves the group from Pegasus a few times so ''he'' can take the Puzzle.
* WarIsHell: A theme of the story.
-->''So this is what it's always going to be like? Someone always after the Puzzle, trying to tear away what little we have of Yugi left.''
* VillainousRescue: Yami Bakura saves the group from Pegasus a few times so ''he'' can take the Puzzle.
* WarIsHell: A theme of the story.
-->''So this is what it's always going to be like? Someone always after the Puzzle, trying to tear away what little we have of Yugi left.''
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''Fallen King'' is a oneshot ''Anime/YuGiOh'' fanfic.
A duel is either a win or a loss. In one world Yugi defeated Pegasus, in another he did not. Joey, Tea, and Tristan's world changes into a place where every choice is regrettable and the Millennium Puzzle is a curse to them all.
Set during the final battle of Duelist Kingdom, the story explores what would have happened if Yugi had lost his duel with Pegasus. Without Yugi or the spirit of the Millennium Puzzle to guide them, Joey, Tea, and Tristan must band together and try to survive in a world that would soon be forever changed.
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* AGodAmI: Pegasus acts like this after he wins. He's not too far off.
* BigBad: Pegasus.
* BigBadWannabe: Yami Bakura is a threat, but not nearly as pressing as Pegasus is. [[s
* DarkFic: Not as dark as the manga, but darker than the Creator/FourKids dub and possibly the original anime.
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The Millennium Items can cause this, and Pegasus plans to do this.
* ThePowerOfFriendship: Played with and ultimately deconstructed. While their friendship sustains them and helps them out, Joey realizes that the villains can and will use it as a weapon, and ultimately decides [[spoiler:he, Tristan, and Tea must ''stop'' being friends to save the world]].
* PutOnABus: Yami Yugi, though not without reason. Pegasus lampshades that it was a dumb move to ask him to leave.
* ShipTeasing: Between Ryou and Tea, but in a twisted way as he uses it against her and her friends.
* ShootTheDog: [[spoiler:Joey throws Ryou Bakura off the helicopter]].
* WhamShot: In text form. [[spoiler:Joey throwing Ryou Bakura off the helicopter]].
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A duel is either a win or a loss. In one world Yugi defeated Pegasus, in another he did not. Joey, Tea, and Tristan's world changes into a place where every choice is regrettable and the Millennium Puzzle is a curse to them all.
Set during the final battle of Duelist Kingdom, the story explores what would have happened if Yugi had lost his duel with Pegasus. Without Yugi or the spirit of the Millennium Puzzle to guide them, Joey, Tea, and Tristan must band together and try to survive in a world that would soon be forever changed.
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* AGodAmI: Pegasus acts like this after he wins. He's not too far off.
* BigBad: Pegasus.
* BigBadWannabe: Yami Bakura is a threat, but not nearly as pressing as Pegasus is. [[s
* DarkFic: Not as dark as the manga, but darker than the Creator/FourKids dub and possibly the original anime.
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The Millennium Items can cause this, and Pegasus plans to do this.
* ThePowerOfFriendship: Played with and ultimately deconstructed. While their friendship sustains them and helps them out, Joey realizes that the villains can and will use it as a weapon, and ultimately decides [[spoiler:he, Tristan, and Tea must ''stop'' being friends to save the world]].
* PutOnABus: Yami Yugi, though not without reason. Pegasus lampshades that it was a dumb move to ask him to leave.
* ShipTeasing: Between Ryou and Tea, but in a twisted way as he uses it against her and her friends.
* ShootTheDog: [[spoiler:Joey throws Ryou Bakura off the helicopter]].
* WhamShot: In text form. [[spoiler:Joey throwing Ryou Bakura off the helicopter]].
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