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** There is a focus on the political side of things in the story.

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** There is a focus on the political side of things in the story.story, compared to its coverage in canon.



** Tenten gets a rapid fire version that lightly crosses with TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:

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** Tenten gets a rapid fire rapidfire version that lightly crosses with TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:



* BrokenBird: Hinata shows signs of emotional abuse, the knowledge of the other seals placed has (in some way) emotionally crushed Naruto and Isaribi already went through something similar to Naruto [[spoiler: but the "cure" Tsunade gives her makes one wonder if she made the right choice in taking it.]]
* BrokenPedestal: Ino takes the fact that two of her clan members brutalized Naruto, even putting limiting seals ''on his wounds'', very hard, especially since she adored both the men in question and is now questioning if a slight misstep on her part could lead to everything she's worked for being stolen from her in an instant.

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* BrokenBird: Hinata shows signs of emotional abuse, abuse due to the contempt she receives from her own clan. Meanwhile, the knowledge of the other seals placed on him has (in some way) emotionally crushed Naruto Naruto, and Isaribi already went through something similar to Naruto [[spoiler: but the "cure" Tsunade gives her makes one wonder if she made the right choice in taking it.]]
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Ino takes the fact that two of her clan members brutalized Naruto, even putting limiting seals ''on his wounds'', very hard, especially since she adored both the men in question and is now questioning if a slight misstep on her part could lead to everything she's worked for being stolen from her in an instant.



* BrutalHonesty: Hanabi loses her position as heir and ends up either bullied or treated with indifference by her clan. She does eventually get to voice her frustration to Neji and asks why they are treating her like that while they only have nice things to say about Hinata. Neji replies by telling her that it's because she isn't a nice person and Hinata is liked because the Branch members don't want to torment the only Main branch Hyuuga who is genuinely nice to them.

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* BrutalHonesty: Hanabi loses her position as heir and ends up either bullied bullied, or treated with indifference by her clan. She does eventually get to voice her frustration to Neji and asks why they are treating her like that while they only have nice things to say about Hinata. Neji replies by telling her that it's because she isn't a nice person and Hinata is liked because the Branch members don't want to torment the only Main branch Hyuuga who is genuinely nice to them.



** The strength enhancing technique for Hinata.
* CovertPervert: Due in part to having had a seal placed on him (multiple actually but just explaining this one is important for now) that screwed with his libido and hormones but was removed forcing the 13 year old to just deal with the overload. Naruto then travels in a group with Hinata, Shizune and Tsunade. Cue Naruto suddenly thinking about how bad he wants a backrub from Shizune, wants a hug (MarshmallowHell) from Tsunade, comments on how he wants to "hold Hinata and never let her go" and suddenly be turned on by Hinata's laugh.

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** The strength enhancing strength-enhancing technique for Hinata.
* CovertPervert: Due This was due in part to having had a seal placed on him Naruto (multiple actually actually, but just explaining this one is important for now) that screwed with his libido and hormones but was removed forcing removed, which forced the 13 year old to just deal with the overload. Naruto then travels in a group with Hinata, Shizune and Tsunade. Cue Naruto suddenly thinking about how bad he wants a backrub from Shizune, wants a hug (MarshmallowHell) from Tsunade, comments on how he wants to "hold Hinata and never let her go" and suddenly be turned on by Hinata's laugh.



* LivingEmotionalCrutch: Naruto to Hinata yet he's unaware of this. Later during a heart-to-heart, Hinata states her intention to become one for Naruto.

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* ItIsDehumanizing: Naruto is referred to as "The Container", due to having a nine-tailed kyuubei sealed in him.
* LivingEmotionalCrutch: Naruto to Hinata Hinata, yet he's unaware of this. Later during a heart-to-heart, Hinata states her intention to become one for Naruto.



** One can actually leave their clan whenever they want. However the risk is they either get punished by the clan if they have no political allies to protect them or they have to fend for themselves as their assets are tied to the clan. Jiraiya works around this by assigning Ino the long term mission of living in and taking care of Naruto's apartment (to show she supports him over her family) and since it's an official mission they'd have to go through him if they wanted to talk to her. For Neji, he sets up an account for him and puts in the payment for a B rank mission since [[spoiler: Neji helped him find a way to remove the Caged Bird Seal]].

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** One can actually leave their clan whenever they want. However the risk is they either get punished by the clan if they have no political allies to protect them or they have to fend for themselves as their assets are tied to the clan. Jiraiya works around this by assigning Ino the long term mission of living in and taking care of Naruto's apartment (to show she supports him over her family) and since it's an official mission they'd have to go through him if they wanted to talk to her. For Neji, he sets up an account for him and puts in the payment for a B rank mission since [[spoiler: Neji [[spoiler:Neji helped him find a way to remove the Caged Bird Seal]].

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* DistractedByTheSexy: While out shopping for new clothes and supplies (they've been out in the wild for 4 months) Hinata asks for Naruto's opinion on her new outfit. What he sees is her wearing a blue version of Tsunade's top with a spandex one piece that stops at mid-thigh at the bottom and shows off her AbsoluteCleavage up top. He's quiet for a beat before blurting out how hot she looks.


** After years of dealing with Sakura (who'd commit DomesticAbuse on him at any time or call him an idiot or a perv), 13 year old Naruto has the notion that ALL women will beat him for anything even something [[AccidentalPervert out of his control]] leading to a rather OOC (read: quiet) Naruto on a trip with [[BadassGrandma Tsunade]], [[CoolBigSis Shizune]] and [[CuteBruiser Hinata]] and a case of accidental CovertPervert. Tsunade sits him down and tells him "No. Sakura just had issues. We are not going to beat you for something as stupid that."

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** After years of dealing with Sakura (who'd commit DomesticAbuse on him at any time or call him an idiot or a perv), 13 year old Naruto has the notion that ALL women will beat him for anything even something [[AccidentalPervert out of his control]] leading to a rather OOC (read: quiet) Naruto on a trip with [[BadassGrandma [[CoolOldLady Tsunade]], [[CoolBigSis Shizune]] and [[CuteBruiser Hinata]] and a case of accidental CovertPervert. Tsunade sits him down and tells him "No. Sakura just had issues. We are not going to beat you for something as stupid that."

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* DeadFic: Has not been update since 2012.


* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Homura at one point actually asks Koharu if what they're doing is right as Tsunade has seen through their plot and neutralized it and maybe they should try helping her since the village doesn't need to be divided as it is right now.



* WeCouldHaveAvoidedAllThis: Homura at one point actually asks Koharu if what they're doing is right as Tsunade has seen through their plot and neutralized it and maybe they should try helping her since the village doesn't need to be divided as it is right now.


* NotHelpingYourCase: The Hyuuga are regarded as heroes when Konoha finds out about Shinji sealing Naruto. Until a rumor spreads that Naruto was a prototype for a seal they planned to use to gain more power in the village. The fact that they seal their own clan members

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* NotHelpingYourCase: The Hyuuga are regarded as heroes when Konoha finds out about Shinji sealing Naruto. Until a rumor spreads that Naruto was a prototype for a seal they planned to use to gain more power in the village. The fact that they seal their own clan members adds fuel to the fire.

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** The strength enhancing technique for Hinata.


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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Tsunade's tends to engage in this when she wants to prove a point without yelling at someone and structures it in a way where the person being punished understands WHY she's doing so.


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* SilkHidingSteel: Hinata. Part of her charcater arc and romance arc with Naruto moves forward because of it.


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* WhiteSheep: As Hiashi begrudingly admits, Hinata. If she were still in the village, she would be able to not only prevent civil war in the clan but also help clean up the Hyuuga's image considering her personality.


** Jiraiya loses a lot of respect for the Third Hokage after digging into ROOT's files, pointing out that the only way it could have grown is either the Third didn't stop Danzo or agreed with him.
** Lee is ashamed at how many seem pleased at Naruto getting sealed and asks Gai how can he fight for a village full of people like that.



** In the Land of Vegetables arc, Naruto rants to Tsunade, angrily asking why she didn't take the Hokage's Hat (which has special seals on it filled with other scrolls from Konoha) with her when during an enemy attack since neither he, Hinata or Shizune were currently in no position to stop the enemy from taking it and stealing Konoha's secrets. Tsunade is quick to placate Naruto and Hinata but [[ContinuityNod always has the hat with her at all times after this point.]]

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** In the Land of Vegetables arc, Naruto rants to Tsunade, angrily asking why she didn't take the Hokage's Hat (which has special seals on it filled with other scrolls from Konoha) with her when during an enemy attack since neither he, Hinata or and Shizune were currently put in no a position where they wouldn't be able to stop the enemy from taking it and stealing Konoha's secrets.secrets and it would have been safer if she had it. Tsunade is quick to placate Naruto and Hinata but [[ContinuityNod always has the hat with her at all times after this point.]]



** As Tsunade later reveals to Naruto, [[spoiler: his leaving more clones than she told him to in Bear Country gave Aoi and his team a way to track them to Sea Country.]]

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** As Tsunade later reveals to Naruto, [[spoiler: his leaving more clones than she told him to in Bear Neck Country gave Aoi and his team a way to track them to Sea Country.]]



* NotHelpingYourCase: The Hyuuga are regarded as heroes when Konoha finds out about Shinji sealing Naruto. Until a rumor spreads that Naruto was a prototype for a seal they planned to use to gain more power in the village. The fact that they seal their own clan members



* OhCrap: Shikaku has a subdued version of this when his shogi match with Naruto mentioned under {{Foreshadowing}} and TalkingThroughTechnique ends with an arrangement of pieces that say "I stand with my friend not my village."

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* OhCrap: Shikaku has a subdued version of this when his shogi match with Naruto Shikamaru mentioned under {{Foreshadowing}} and TalkingThroughTechnique ends with an arrangement of pieces that say "I stand with my friend not my village."



* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Gai is so horrified at how much Kakashi neglected Naruto and Sakura that he even refused to talk to Kakashi. This effectively tips Kakasi that there's something ''very wrong'' going on.

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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Gai is so horrified at how much Kakashi neglected Naruto and Sakura that he even refused to talk to Kakashi. This effectively tips Kakasi Kakashi that there's something ''very wrong'' going on.



* RefugeInAudacity: Tsunade's plan is (even InUniverse) refereed to as this trope. She made it that way to prove the point to both the council and the Daimyo about respecting her authority and power.

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* RefugeInAudacity: Tsunade's plan is (even InUniverse) refereed referred to as this trope. She made it that way to prove the point to both the council and the Daimyo about respecting her authority and power.



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* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: Ino's father feels this way [[spoiler: when some of the villagers are proud of what Yamanaka Kenshin and Jinzo did to Naruto.]]

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* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: Ino's father feels this way [[spoiler: when some of the villagers are proud of what Yamanaka Kenshin and Jinzo did to Naruto.]]]]
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* BrokenPedestal: Ino takes the fact that two of her clan members brutalized Naruto, even putting limiting seals ''on his wounds'', very hard, especially since she adored both the men in question and is now questioning if a slight misstep on her part could lead to everything she's worked for being stolen from her in an instant.


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** Ino and Chouji both point out to their fathers that, from their perspective, Naruto was turned into a pariah, mistreated at every opportunity, denied friendship and love and ''had his ninja career sabotaged in such a way it could have killed him'' for being annoying.


-->'''Sakura''' : ''(After Kakashi said that he wanted all his students, not just Sasuke, to become strong and powerful)'' Then why the hell did you teach Sasuke the Chidori when Naruto and I only got the tree walking exercise?Every single ninja in my generation is treating me like a lazy failure because I don't know more than the Academy ninjutsu and taijutsu. You're Sharingan Kakashi with over a thousand moves! Don't you think that maybe there was a technique or two in that grab bag for your other students?

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-->'''Sakura''' : ''(After Kakashi said that he wanted all his students, not just Sasuke, to become strong and powerful)'' Then why the hell did you teach Sasuke the Chidori when Naruto and I only got the tree walking exercise?Every exercise? Every single ninja in my generation is treating me like a lazy failure because I don't know more than the Academy ninjutsu and taijutsu. You're Sharingan Kakashi with over a thousand moves! Don't you think that maybe there was a technique or two in that grab bag for your other students?



---> '''Tenten''': Then let me ask you a question Kakashi-san. Is it true that the only true technique that you taught Naruto and Sakura before the Chunin Exams was the ability to walk up trees with chakra? Or how about the rumor that Uchiha Sasuke started suddenly pulling new fire jutsu out of nowhere during that same period? The thing you should be asking yourself is not '''Where did I go wrong with the Uchiha?'''. It's '''What would have happened if I made the others stronger?'''. Would Sakura have been able to stop Sasuke from leaving in the first place? Would Naruto have been nearly killed twice because he couldn't go any farther on his own? It's because you're asking the wrong questions that you're not finding the right answers."

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---> '''Tenten''': Then let me ask you a question question, Kakashi-san. Is it true that the only true technique that you taught Naruto and Sakura before the Chunin Exams was the ability to walk up trees with chakra? Or how about the rumor that Uchiha Sasuke started suddenly pulling new fire jutsu out of nowhere during that same period? The thing you should be asking yourself is not '''Where did I go wrong with the Uchiha?'''. It's '''What would have happened if I made the others stronger?'''. Would Sakura have been able to stop Sasuke from leaving in the first place? Would Naruto have been nearly killed twice because he couldn't go any farther on his own? It's because you're asking the wrong questions that you're not finding the right answers."



* BookDumb: Despite being a quick learner, quick thinker and resourceful kid, by Naruto's own admittance, he's bad with book knowlegde. Although this is just because he has a short attention span and lack of a proper education but when given a teacher who is patient enough he learns just as well as any other kid.

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* BookDumb: Despite being a quick learner, quick thinker and resourceful kid, by Naruto's own admittance, he's bad with book knowlegde.knowledge. Although this is just because he has a short attention span and lack of a proper education but when given a teacher who is patient enough he learns just as well as any other kid.



* CripplingOverspecialisation: Shizune is at least a Jonin level ninja. However on multiple occasions her mid to long range fighting style, centered around senbon and poison, gets neutralized by several people below her skill level with unique abilities making her put in more effort than she should in trying to win.

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* CripplingOverspecialisation: Shizune is at least a Jonin level ninja. However on multiple occasions occasions, her mid to long range fighting style, centered around senbon and poison, gets neutralized by several people below her skill level with unique abilities making her put in more effort than she should in trying to win.



* DeconstructionFic: The ''[[FanNickname "evil council of doom"]]'' (Homura and Koharu) is shown to just be {{Well Intentioned Extremist}}s doing what they think is best for Konoha and it's people and actually would have preferred if Sasuke was either dead or out of their hair.

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* DeconstructionFic: The ''[[FanNickname "evil council of doom"]]'' (Homura and Koharu) is shown to just be {{Well Intentioned Extremist}}s doing what they think is best for Konoha and it's its people and actually would have preferred if Sasuke was either dead or out of their hair.



** Kakashi's chronical tardiness. While is often PlayedForLaughs in canon, here it highlights a nasty side effect of this habit, which does nothing but even worsen his already bad reputation as a teacher: the fact that he's usually 2-3 hours late to team meetings means that Team 7 has to waste those 2-3 hours waiting for him while the rest of the teams spend that time doing missions or training.

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** Kakashi's chronical chronic tardiness. While is often PlayedForLaughs in canon, here it highlights a nasty side effect of this habit, which does nothing but even worsen his already bad reputation as a teacher: the fact that he's usually 2-3 hours late to team meetings means that Team 7 has to waste those 2-3 hours waiting for him while the rest of the teams spend that time doing missions or training.



* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: Kakashi thinks that the reason he became a pariah among the rest of Konoha Ninja was because he failed to stop Sasuke from trying to defect, while the truth is that they're uterly appaled upon learning how negligent he was with Naruto and Sakura's training, or lack of thereof. It isn't until Tenten points this out to him later in the story (see ArmorPiercingQuestion above) that Kakashi realizes of this and takes a step to rectify this.
* DudeNotFunny: InUniverse The jokes about how much of a dense dork or "dead-last" Naruto is, stop being used by characters as it is insulting to him and also not true.

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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: Kakashi thinks that the reason he became a pariah among the rest of Konoha Ninja was because he failed to stop Sasuke from trying to defect, while the truth is that they're uterly appaled utterly appalled upon learning how negligent he was with Naruto and Sakura's training, or lack of thereof. It isn't until Tenten points this out to him later in the story (see ArmorPiercingQuestion above) that Kakashi realizes of this and takes a step to rectify this.
* DudeNotFunny: InUniverse InUniverse. The jokes about how much of a dense dork or "dead-last" Naruto is, stop being used by characters as it is insulting to him and also not true.



** '''Downplayed''' - Sakura comes to Hinata, in tears, over Naruto's injuries, and says Sasuke isn't worth Naruto getting hurt so badly. Hinata blames Sakura for what she did to Naruto- begging him to save Sasuke and having "hit him, yelled at him and used him,"- but gives her a hug because "If she cried for Naruto, she couldn't be all bad."
** '''Subverted''' - Naruto looks like he'll do this with Sasuke but comments he still can't forgive Sasuke due in part to Sasuke trying to KILL him while Naruto just wanted to incapacitate Sasuke.

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** '''Downplayed''' - : Sakura comes to Hinata, in tears, over Naruto's injuries, and says Sasuke isn't worth Naruto getting hurt so badly. Hinata blames Sakura for what she did to Naruto- begging him to save Sasuke and having "hit him, yelled at him and used him,"- but gives her a hug because "If she cried for Naruto, she couldn't be all bad."
** '''Subverted''' - : Naruto looks like he'll do this with Sasuke but comments he still can't forgive Sasuke due in part to Sasuke trying to KILL him while Naruto just wanted to incapacitate Sasuke.



* MortonsFork: Chouji asks his dad to tell him the real reason he told him to avoid Naruto. This puts Chouza in a bad position because A) there isn't a way to justify Naruto's treatment to one of his friends. B) If he attempts to divert, deflect or stay silent, Chouji would call him on it and C) he can't tell Chouji the real reason because it would get them killed due to the Third's law.

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* MortonsFork: Chouji asks his dad to tell him the real reason he told him to avoid Naruto. This puts Chouza in a bad position because A) there isn't a way to justify Naruto's treatment to one of his friends. B) If he attempts to divert, deflect or stay silent, Chouji would call him on it it. and C) he He can't tell Chouji the real reason because it would get them killed due to the Third's law.



* NiceJobBreakingItHero: As the Daimyo later reveals [[spoiler: The Third Hokage is the reason he had to use the advisers council as his regents. As he puts it, the Third was thought to have been too old and weary for being Hokage and his waiting too long to name the next Hokage is making damage control more difficult. The Daimyo's council then argued that he should be more involved in how Konoha is run to help the current Hokage, at least until they recover from the Sound/Suna invasion. Thus the council who hope to usurp power from Tsunade now have the power of the Daimyo to call on.]]
* ObstructiveBureaucrat: The advisers council in Konoha manage to cause more problems. Lampshaded as Tsunade notes that Konoha should be a military dictatorship instead of her having to worry about what the council thinks. It's shown the other villages never have to deal with this trope proving her point.

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: As the Daimyo later reveals [[spoiler: The Third Hokage is the reason he had to use the advisers advisers' council as his regents. As he puts it, the Third was thought to have been too old and weary for being Hokage and his waiting too long to name the next Hokage is making damage control more difficult. The Daimyo's council then argued that he should be more involved in how Konoha is run to help the current Hokage, at least until they recover from the Sound/Suna invasion. Thus the council who hope to usurp power from Tsunade now have the power of the Daimyo to call on.]]
* ObstructiveBureaucrat: The advisers advisers' council in Konoha manage to cause more problems. Lampshaded as Tsunade notes that Konoha should be a military dictatorship instead of her having to worry about what the council thinks. It's shown the other villages never have to deal with this trope proving her point.



* OhCrap: Shikaku has a subdued version of this when his shogi match with Naruto mentioned under {{Foreshadowing}} and TalkingThroughTechnique ends with an arrangement of pieces that say "I stand with my friend not my village."



* OOcIsSeriousBusiness: Gai is so horrified at how much Kakashi neglected Naruto and Sakura that he even refused to talk to Kakashi. This effectively tips Kakasi that there's something ''very wrong'' going on.

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* OOcIsSeriousBusiness: OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Gai is so horrified at how much Kakashi neglected Naruto and Sakura that he even refused to talk to Kakashi. This effectively tips Kakasi that there's something ''very wrong'' going on.



** Jiraiya later mentally suggets that they could tell Naruto of his parentage, so he could use the leverage to appeal to the Daimyo of Fire Country to retract his decision to allow his banishment.

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** Jiraiya later mentally suggets suggests that they could tell Naruto of his parentage, so he could use the leverage to appeal to the Daimyo of Fire Country to retract his decision to allow his banishment.


--> '''Sakura''' : (Kakashi indirectly calls her weak in front of Jiraiya and Team 8 while she points out he abandoned training her) "What part of '''Those who abandon their allies are worse than trash''' do you believe?"
--> '''Jiraiya''' (On why he didn't teach Naruto ANYTHING) : "You didn't want to teach him (Naruto) anything that would've pissed off the Uchiha right?"

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--> '''Sakura''' : (Kakashi ''(Kakashi indirectly calls her weak in front of Jiraiya and Team 8 while she points out he abandoned training her) "What her)'' What part of '''Those who abandon their allies are worse than trash''' do you believe?"
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-->'''Sakura''' : ''(After Kakashi said that he wanted all his students, not just Sasuke, to become strong and powerful)'' Then why the hell did you teach Sasuke the Chidori when Naruto and I only got the tree walking exercise?Every single ninja in my generation is treating me like a lazy failure because I don't know more than the Academy ninjutsu and taijutsu. You're Sharingan Kakashi with over a thousand moves! Don't you think that maybe there was a technique or two in that grab bag for your other students?
--> '''Jiraiya''' (On ''(On why he didn't teach Naruto ANYTHING) ANYTHING)'' : "You You didn't want to teach him (Naruto) anything that would've pissed off the Uchiha right?"right?



---> "Then let me ask you a question Kakashi-san. Is it true that the only true technique that you taught Naruto and Sakura before the Chunin Exams was the ability to walk up trees with chakra? Or how about the rumor that Uchiha Sasuke started suddenly pulling new fire jutsu out of nowhere during that same period? The thing you should be asking yourself is not '''Where did I go wrong with the Uchiha?'''. It's '''What would have happened if I made the others stronger?'''. Would Sakura have been able to stop Sasuke from leaving in the first place? Would Naruto have been nearly killed twice because he couldn't go any farther on his own? It's because you're asking the wrong questions that you're not finding the right answers."

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---> "Then '''Tenten''': Then let me ask you a question Kakashi-san. Is it true that the only true technique that you taught Naruto and Sakura before the Chunin Exams was the ability to walk up trees with chakra? Or how about the rumor that Uchiha Sasuke started suddenly pulling new fire jutsu out of nowhere during that same period? The thing you should be asking yourself is not '''Where did I go wrong with the Uchiha?'''. It's '''What would have happened if I made the others stronger?'''. Would Sakura have been able to stop Sasuke from leaving in the first place? Would Naruto have been nearly killed twice because he couldn't go any farther on his own? It's because you're asking the wrong questions that you're not finding the right answers."


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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: Kakashi thinks that the reason he became a pariah among the rest of Konoha Ninja was because he failed to stop Sasuke from trying to defect, while the truth is that they're uterly appaled upon learning how negligent he was with Naruto and Sakura's training, or lack of thereof. It isn't until Tenten points this out to him later in the story (see ArmorPiercingQuestion above) that Kakashi realizes of this and takes a step to rectify this.


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* OOcIsSeriousBusiness: Gai is so horrified at how much Kakashi neglected Naruto and Sakura that he even refused to talk to Kakashi. This effectively tips Kakasi that there's something ''very wrong'' going on.


** When Tsunade leaves Konoha, it puts every other village on guard and threat watch because a autonomous Kage roaming the world on a mystery errand isn't normal and thus puts everyone on edge.

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** When Tsunade leaves Konoha, it puts every other village on guard and threat watch because a an autonomous Kage roaming the world on a mystery errand isn't normal and thus puts everyone on edge.

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** Kakashi's chronical tardiness. While is often PlayedForLaughs in canon, here it highlights a nasty side effect of this habit, which does nothing but even worsen his already bad reputation as a teacher: the fact that he's usually 2-3 hours late to team meetings means that Team 7 has to waste those 2-3 hours waiting for him while the rest of the teams spend that time doing missions or training.


* MortonsFork: Chouji asks his dad to tell him the real reason he told him to avoid Naruto. This puts Chouza in a bad position because A) there isn't a way to justify Naruto's treatment to one of his friends. B) Attempting to divert, deflect or stay silent since Chouji would call him on it and C) he can't tell Chouji the real reason because it would get them killed due to the Third's law.

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* MortonsFork: Chouji asks his dad to tell him the real reason he told him to avoid Naruto. This puts Chouza in a bad position because A) there isn't a way to justify Naruto's treatment to one of his friends. B) Attempting If he attempts to divert, deflect or stay silent since silent, Chouji would call him on it and C) he can't tell Chouji the real reason because it would get them killed due to the Third's law.



** The Daimyo of Fire Country. He means well but clearly doesn't understand how valuable Naruto is to Konoha most likely due to the fact he doesn't live in a ninja village.

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** The Daimyo of Fire Country. He means well but clearly doesn't understand how valuable Naruto is to Konoha most likely due to the fact that [[{{Muggle}} he doesn't live in a ninja village.]]

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