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* ColdOpen: The first scene of the story opens on Bill sinking to the bottom of the Mediterranean InMediasRes and ends on a cliffhangar as Bill sinks to his death. While this event sets in motion the rest of the story, the actual plot doesn't begin until the next chapter with the introduction of Dipper.
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* BlackAndGreyMorality: Dipper, Bill, and Gideon form a sliding scale of morality from light grey to black: Dipper is kind and generally against killing but limited in his empathy for humans, self-describing to Robbie as "indifferent" to their lives (though he seems to develop out of this the more he begins to sympathize with the humans around him); Bill is a mentally unstable pirate who [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slipped into nonchalant murder and thievery]], and, despite his beginning to move away from that moral cliff edge, still has no qualms about killing the people he feels he has to for survival; and Gideon is a megalomaniac who can control people like puppets and seeks to be the most powerful pirate captain "in all worlds," cheerfully slaughtering any and all in the way of his attaining power. The more we learn about Bill and his reasons, the more sympathetic he becomes, being characterized more like a particularly paranoid and jaded Robin Hood--while Gideon, kept "offscreen" as it were, is only heard about from scychophantic followers who themselves seek to murder and destroy: the only active presence Gideon's legion has had so far (besides mutinying against Bill) is breaking the no-arms treaty of the pirate council and attempting to kill all of the communities' leaders.

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* BlackAndGreyMorality: Dipper, Bill, and Gideon form a sliding scale of morality from light grey to black: Dipper is kind and generally against killing but limited in his empathy for humans, self-describing to Robbie as "indifferent" to their lives (though he seems to develop out of this the more he begins to sympathize with the humans around him); Bill is a mentally unstable pirate who [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slipped into nonchalant murder and thievery]], and, despite his beginning to move away from that moral cliff edge, still has no qualms about killing the people he feels he has to for survival; and Gideon is a megalomaniac who can control people like puppets and seeks to be the most powerful pirate captain "in all worlds," cheerfully slaughtering any and all in the way of his attaining power. The more we learn about Bill and his reasons, the more sympathetic he becomes, being characterized more like a particularly paranoid and jaded Robin Hood--while Gideon, kept "offscreen" as it were, is only heard about from scychophantic sycophantic followers who themselves seek to murder and destroy: the only active presence Gideon's legion has had so far (besides mutinying against Bill) is breaking the no-arms treaty of the pirate council and attempting to kill all of the communities' leaders.
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* AmbiguouslyHuman: Dipper notices during the Blind Eye attack that Bill's "Beast" exuded his own magical "tendrils," which is something impossible for humans--implying that Bill's dangerous snap personality is a manifestation of a part of himself that is other than human.

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* AmbiguouslyHuman: Dipper notices during the Blind Eye attack that Bill's "Beast" exuded exudes his own magical "tendrils," which is something impossible for humans--implying that Bill's dangerous snap personality is a manifestation of a part of himself that is other than human.
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* WasOnceAMan: It's rumored that the unnamed pirate who founded the first Pirate Council and left behind a cryptic prophecy was somehow turned into a monster.
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** The pirates in the story act more like a hybrid of pirates and the mafia: they've formed a paralegal governmental structure applying to all the captains under their allegiance and have power to the point where even the majority of those who aren't under their control do not ''dare'' to interfere with their policies; they have their own council which makes enforced decisions; and they've created their own laws and do not abide by those of the official local governments. They are criminals, but they act like a confederacy of organized crime families under the leadership of their captains (the bosses). Notably, the "bad" pirates are the ones that rebel against even ''pirate'' laws. In RealLife, pirates ''did'' have their codes and laws, but they were only agreed upon between members of a single crew or temporary fleet as each man's conditions of service (most involving an equality of rations and loot provided to the crew and no stealing from fellow crewmen). However, the story implies a major disruption involving the pirates as a whole changed the course of events during the beginning of the Golden Age and led to a conspicuously unnamed pirate leading the creation of the council, thereafter forming more a widely applicable code amongst the lot of them--Neviah, current Praesul of the Council, even refers to their brand of piracy as "''Organized'' piracy."

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** The pirates in the story act more like a hybrid of pirates and the mafia: they've formed a paralegal governmental structure applying to all the captains under their allegiance and have power to the point where even the majority of those who aren't under their control do not ''dare'' to interfere with their policies; they have their own council which makes enforced decisions; and they've created their own laws and do not abide by those of the official local governments. They are criminals, but they act like a confederacy of organized crime families under the leadership of their captains (the bosses). Notably, the "bad" pirates are the ones that rebel against even ''pirate'' laws. In RealLife, pirates ''did'' have their codes and laws, but they were only agreed upon between members of a single crew or temporary fleet as each man's conditions of service (most involving an equality of rations and loot provided to the crew and no stealing from fellow crewmen). However, the story implies a major disruption involving the pirates as a whole changed the course of events during the beginning of the Golden Age and led to a conspicuously unnamed pirate leading the creation of the council, thereafter forming more a widely applicable code amongst the lot of them--Neviah, Neviah, current Praesul of the Council, even refers to their brand of piracy as "''Organized'' piracy." Notably, the "bad" pirates are the ones that rebel against even ''pirate'' laws.



** What we hear of Gideon since he mutinied against Bill completely subverts this: he's invaded and looted towns, acquired ships, attacked other pirates, and seeks to be seen as "the most fearless and powerful captain to sail the seas of this world... of all worlds.”

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*** In RealLife pirates ''did'' have their codes and laws, but they were only agreed upon between members of a single crew or temporary fleet as each man's conditions of service (most involving an equality of rations and loot provided to the crew and no stealing from fellow crewmen). However, the story possibly justifies this difference by implying a major disruption in the pirate community changed the course of events during the beginning of the Golden Age and led to the formation of the first version of the pirate council, thereafter creating more a widely applicable code amongst pirates in general.
** What we hear of Gideon since he mutinied against Bill completely subverts this: this trope entirely: he's invaded and looted towns, acquired ships, attacked other pirates, and seeks to be seen as "the most fearless and powerful captain to sail the seas of this world... of all worlds.”
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** The pirates in the story act more like a hybrid of pirates and the mafia: they've formed a paralegal governmental structure applying to all the captains under their allegiance and have enough power where even the majority of those who aren't do not ''dare'' to interfere with their policies; they have their own council which makes enforced decisions; and they've created their own laws and do not abide by those of the official local governments. They are criminals, but they act like a confederacy of organized crime families under the leadership of their captains (the bosses). Notably, the "bad" pirates are the ones that rebel against even ''pirate'' laws. In RealLife, pirates ''did'' have their codes and laws, but they were only agreed upon between members of a single crew or temporary fleet as each man's conditions of service (most involving an equality of rations and loot provided to the crew and no stealing from fellow crewmen). However, the story implies a major disruption involving the pirates as a whole changed the course of events during the beginning of the Golden Age and led to a conspicuously unnamed pirate leading the creation of the council, thereafter forming more a widely applicable code amongst the lot of them--Neviah, current Praesul of the Council, even refers to their brand of piracy as "''Organized'' piracy."

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** The pirates in the story act more like a hybrid of pirates and the mafia: they've formed a paralegal governmental structure applying to all the captains under their allegiance and have enough power to the point where even the majority of those who aren't under their control do not ''dare'' to interfere with their policies; they have their own council which makes enforced decisions; and they've created their own laws and do not abide by those of the official local governments. They are criminals, but they act like a confederacy of organized crime families under the leadership of their captains (the bosses). Notably, the "bad" pirates are the ones that rebel against even ''pirate'' laws. In RealLife, pirates ''did'' have their codes and laws, but they were only agreed upon between members of a single crew or temporary fleet as each man's conditions of service (most involving an equality of rations and loot provided to the crew and no stealing from fellow crewmen). However, the story implies a major disruption involving the pirates as a whole changed the course of events during the beginning of the Golden Age and led to a conspicuously unnamed pirate leading the creation of the council, thereafter forming more a widely applicable code amongst the lot of them--Neviah, current Praesul of the Council, even refers to their brand of piracy as "''Organized'' piracy."
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* The pirates in the story act more like a hybrid of pirates and the mafia: they've formed a paralegal governmental structure applying to all the captains under their allegiance and have enough power where even the majority of those who aren't do not ''dare'' to interfere with their policies; they have their own council which makes enforced decisions; and they've created their own laws and do not abide by those of the official local governments. They are criminals, but they act like a confederacy of organized crime families under the leadership of their captains (the bosses). Notably, the "bad" pirates are the ones that rebel against even ''pirate'' laws. In RealLife, pirates ''did'' have their codes and laws, but they were only agreed upon between members of a single crew or temporary fleet as each man's conditions of service (most involving an equality of rations and loot provided to the crew and no stealing from fellow crewmen). However, the story implies a major disruption involving the pirates as a whole changed the course of events during the beginning of the Golden Age and led to a conspicuously unnamed pirate leading the creation of the council, thereafter forming more a widely applicable code amongst the lot of them--Neviah, current Praesul of the Council, even refers to their brand of piracy as "''Organized'' piracy."

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* ** The pirates in the story act more like a hybrid of pirates and the mafia: they've formed a paralegal governmental structure applying to all the captains under their allegiance and have enough power where even the majority of those who aren't do not ''dare'' to interfere with their policies; they have their own council which makes enforced decisions; and they've created their own laws and do not abide by those of the official local governments. They are criminals, but they act like a confederacy of organized crime families under the leadership of their captains (the bosses). Notably, the "bad" pirates are the ones that rebel against even ''pirate'' laws. In RealLife, pirates ''did'' have their codes and laws, but they were only agreed upon between members of a single crew or temporary fleet as each man's conditions of service (most involving an equality of rations and loot provided to the crew and no stealing from fellow crewmen). However, the story implies a major disruption involving the pirates as a whole changed the course of events during the beginning of the Golden Age and led to a conspicuously unnamed pirate leading the creation of the council, thereafter forming more a widely applicable code amongst the lot of them--Neviah, current Praesul of the Council, even refers to their brand of piracy as "''Organized'' piracy."
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* ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything: Played with. Characters talk quite a lot about the pirating Bill has committed prior to the story, but due to the focus on hunting Gideon, none of that has so far gone on during the story proper. The closest thing to classic pirating was the Blind Eye Society boarding ''Bill's'' ship without permission and Bill's inner demon brutally murdering one of them during the ensuing conflict, but given that Bill was the one whose ship was invaded (by people who ''weren't'' pirates, no less), it doesn't really count. The characterization of Bill in the first chapter sounds far more like a pirate than the softer character we see him be around Dipper and Rezin.

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* ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything: Played with. Characters talk quite a lot about the pirating Bill has committed prior to the story, but due to the focus on hunting Gideon, none of that has so far gone on during the story proper. The closest thing to classic pirating was the Blind Eye Society boarding ''Bill's'' ship without permission and Bill's inner demon brutally murdering one of them during the ensuing conflict, but given that Bill was the one whose ship was invaded (by people who ''weren't'' pirates, pirates nor intending to commit piracy, no less), it doesn't really count. The characterization of Bill in the first chapter sounds far more like a pirate than the softer character we see him be around Dipper and Rezin.
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* NoNameGiven: The exposition during the Pirate Council is entirely about a specific and controversial pirate who disappeared some twenty years ago and once predicted that VaguenessIsComing in a book he left behind. Everyone seems to know who this is, but no one ever gives his name (nor do they give a reason why they ''aren't'' saying his name), making the conversation about him both extremely unnatural-sounding and extremely difficult to follow--even the details people shout out about him are contradictory, with some insisting he's a hero who died to warn others and others insisting he turned into a monster (''[[WasOnceAMan quite literally]]'').
** [[spoiler:It is, however, heavily implied that this pirate may be Bill's mysterious father. Grunkle Ford, who definitely has some connection to "Cipher" (and this can't be Bill Cipher because the dates don't line up), has his name hidden in the capital letters of the first passage of the prophecy that No-Name left behind, indicating part or all of the message and prophecy/curse is for him--and the entire prophecy and message is written within a book identical to Ford's journals save a different embossed golden symbol on the front. Ford has also spent the entirety of the story speaking of "Cipher" with present-tenses and dread and convinced that something bad will happen to Dipper now that he's eighteen, the age specified in the conspicuously unnamed pirate's prophecy. Ford also refers to Cipher as a demon, which, if he is Bill's father, would explain quite a lot about Bill's more ambiguously human traits; there was some ''heavy'' foreshadowing in Chapter 10 about the ways humans might turn themselves into demonic creatures. Bill also heavily implies the treachery his father was accused of was piracy, and mentions that "a prophecy" was depicted in the stained glass window of the ''Mens Scapus''' captains quarters (and there's only ever been one prophecy mentioned in the story so far). All of this makes very clear connections: Bill's father knew of the "prophecy" that keeps reappearing in the story and is known to be connected piracy and likely to demons, Ford definitely saw at least one human become a demon and currently knows a "Cipher" who is a demon (and isn't Bill), and No Name was a pirate who possibly became a monster who wrote a prophecy directed at Ford, a prophecy that, again, Bill's dad artistically depicted in stained glass on the ''Mens Scapus.'']]

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* NoNameGiven: The exposition during the Pirate Council is entirely about a specific and controversial pirate who disappeared some twenty years ago and once predicted that wrote a prophecy about how the VaguenessIsComing in a book he left behind. Everyone seems to know who this is, but no one ever gives his name (nor do they give a reason why they ''aren't'' saying his name), making the conversation about him both extremely unnatural-sounding and extremely difficult to follow--even the details people shout out about him are contradictory, with some insisting he's a hero who died to warn others and others insisting he turned into a monster (''[[WasOnceAMan quite literally]]'').
** [[spoiler:It It is, however, heavily implied that this [[spoiler:this pirate may be Bill's mysterious father. Grunkle Ford, who definitely has some connection to "Cipher" (and this can't be Bill Cipher because father, given the dates don't line up), has his name hidden in the capital letters of the first passage of the prophecy that No-Name left behind, indicating part or all of the message clear connections between him and prophecy/curse is for him--and the entire prophecy and message is written current events as established within a book identical to Ford's journals save a different embossed golden symbol on the front. Ford has also spent the entirety of the story speaking of "Cipher" with present-tenses and dread and convinced that something bad will happen to Dipper now that he's eighteen, the age specified in the conspicuously unnamed pirate's prophecy. Ford also refers to Cipher as a demon, which, if he is story: first, Bill's father, would explain quite a lot about Bill's more ambiguously human traits; there was some ''heavy'' foreshadowing father is connected to piracy through his conviction of it in Chapter 10 about absentia by the ways humans might turn themselves into crown, to demons via his son's displays of unexplained demonic creatures. Bill also heavily implies tendencies, ''and'' to the treachery his father was accused of was piracy, and mentions that "a prophecy" was depicted in "prophecy" through the stained glass window of the ''Mens Scapus''' captains quarters (and there's only ever been one prophecy mentioned in the story so far). All of this makes very clear connections: Bill's father knew of the "prophecy" that keeps reappearing in the story and is known to be connected piracy and likely to demons, he had installed onto his ship; second, Ford definitely saw at least one human become a demon and currently knows a "Cipher" who is a demon (and isn't Bill), Bill) in connection with what may happen to Dipper when he turns 18; and third, No Name was a pirate who possibly became a monster who wrote a prophecy directed at Ford, Ford about danger coming for someone close to him when they reach "18 years," a prophecy that, again, is probably the same one Bill's dad father artistically depicted in stained glass on the ''Mens Scapus.'']]
'']] Yeah, no idea at ''all'' who this unnamed pirate could be...
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** [[spoiler:It is, however, heavily implied that this pirate may be Bill's mysterious father. Grunkle Ford, who definitely has some connection to "Cipher" (and this can't be Bill Cipher because the dates don't line up), has his name hidden in the capital letters of the first passage of the prophecy that No-Name left behind, indicating part or all of the message and prophecy/curse is for him--and the entire prophecy and message is written within a book identical to Ford's journals save a different embossed golden symbol on the front. Ford has also spent the entirety of the story speaking of "Cipher" with present-tenses and dread and convinced that something bad will happen to Dipper now that he's eighteen, the age specified in the conspicuously unnamed pirate's prophecy. Ford also refers to Cipher as a demon, which, if he is Bill's father, would explain quite a lot about Bill's more ambiguously human traits; there was some ''heavy'' foreshadowing in Chapter 10 about the ways humans might turn themselves into demonic creatures. Bill also heavily implies the treachery his father was accused of was piracy, and mentions that "a prophecy" was depicted in the stained glass window of the ''Mens Scapus''' captains quarters (and there's only ever been one prophecy mentioned in the story so far).]] All of this makes very clear connections: Bill's father knew of the "prophecy" that keeps reappearing in the story and is known to be connected piracy and likely to demons, Ford definitely saw at least one human become a demon and currently knows a "Cipher" who is a demon (and isn't Bill), and No Name was a pirate who possibly became a monster who wrote a prophecy directed at Ford, a prophecy that, again, Bill's dad artistically depicted in stained glass on the ''Mens Scapus.'']]

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** [[spoiler:It is, however, heavily implied that this pirate may be Bill's mysterious father. Grunkle Ford, who definitely has some connection to "Cipher" (and this can't be Bill Cipher because the dates don't line up), has his name hidden in the capital letters of the first passage of the prophecy that No-Name left behind, indicating part or all of the message and prophecy/curse is for him--and the entire prophecy and message is written within a book identical to Ford's journals save a different embossed golden symbol on the front. Ford has also spent the entirety of the story speaking of "Cipher" with present-tenses and dread and convinced that something bad will happen to Dipper now that he's eighteen, the age specified in the conspicuously unnamed pirate's prophecy. Ford also refers to Cipher as a demon, which, if he is Bill's father, would explain quite a lot about Bill's more ambiguously human traits; there was some ''heavy'' foreshadowing in Chapter 10 about the ways humans might turn themselves into demonic creatures. Bill also heavily implies the treachery his father was accused of was piracy, and mentions that "a prophecy" was depicted in the stained glass window of the ''Mens Scapus''' captains quarters (and there's only ever been one prophecy mentioned in the story so far).]] All of this makes very clear connections: Bill's father knew of the "prophecy" that keeps reappearing in the story and is known to be connected piracy and likely to demons, Ford definitely saw at least one human become a demon and currently knows a "Cipher" who is a demon (and isn't Bill), and No Name was a pirate who possibly became a monster who wrote a prophecy directed at Ford, a prophecy that, again, Bill's dad artistically depicted in stained glass on the ''Mens Scapus.'']]
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* NoNameGiven: The exposition during the Pirate Council is entirely about a specific and controversial pirate who disappeared some twenty years ago and once predicted that VaguenessIsComing in a book he left behind. Everyone seems to know who this is, but no one ever gives his name (nor do they give a reason why they ''aren't'' saying his name), making the conversation about him both extremely unnatural-sounding and extremely difficult to follow--even the details people shout out about him are contradictory, with some insisting he's a hero who died to warn others and others insisting he was a monster.
** [[spoiler:Currently implications point a tentative finger at Bill's mysterious father. Grunkle Ford, who definitely has some connection to "Cipher" (and this can't be Bill Cipher because the dates don't line up), has his name hidden in the capital letters of the first passage of the prophecy that No-Name left behind, indicating part or all of the message and prophecy/curse is for him--and the entire prophecy and message is written within a book identical to Ford's journals save a different embossed golden symbol on the front. Ford has also spent the entirety of the story speaking of "Cipher" with present-tenses and dread and convinced that something bad will happen to Dipper now that he's eighteen, the age specified in the conspicuously unnamed pirate's prophecy. Ford also refers to Cipher as a demon, which, if he is Bill's father, would explain quite a lot about Bill's more ambiguously human traits; there was some ''heavy'' foreshadowing in Chapter 10 about the ways humans might turn themselves into demonic creatures. Bill also heavily implies the treachery his father was accused of was piracy.]]

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* NoNameGiven: The exposition during the Pirate Council is entirely about a specific and controversial pirate who disappeared some twenty years ago and once predicted that VaguenessIsComing in a book he left behind. Everyone seems to know who this is, but no one ever gives his name (nor do they give a reason why they ''aren't'' saying his name), making the conversation about him both extremely unnatural-sounding and extremely difficult to follow--even the details people shout out about him are contradictory, with some insisting he's a hero who died to warn others and others insisting he was turned into a monster.monster (''[[WasOnceAMan quite literally]]'').
** [[spoiler:Currently implications point a tentative finger at [[spoiler:It is, however, heavily implied that this pirate may be Bill's mysterious father. Grunkle Ford, who definitely has some connection to "Cipher" (and this can't be Bill Cipher because the dates don't line up), has his name hidden in the capital letters of the first passage of the prophecy that No-Name left behind, indicating part or all of the message and prophecy/curse is for him--and the entire prophecy and message is written within a book identical to Ford's journals save a different embossed golden symbol on the front. Ford has also spent the entirety of the story speaking of "Cipher" with present-tenses and dread and convinced that something bad will happen to Dipper now that he's eighteen, the age specified in the conspicuously unnamed pirate's prophecy. Ford also refers to Cipher as a demon, which, if he is Bill's father, would explain quite a lot about Bill's more ambiguously human traits; there was some ''heavy'' foreshadowing in Chapter 10 about the ways humans might turn themselves into demonic creatures. Bill also heavily implies the treachery his father was accused of was piracy.]]
piracy, and mentions that "a prophecy" was depicted in the stained glass window of the ''Mens Scapus''' captains quarters (and there's only ever been one prophecy mentioned in the story so far).]] All of this makes very clear connections: Bill's father knew of the "prophecy" that keeps reappearing in the story and is known to be connected piracy and likely to demons, Ford definitely saw at least one human become a demon and currently knows a "Cipher" who is a demon (and isn't Bill), and No Name was a pirate who possibly became a monster who wrote a prophecy directed at Ford, a prophecy that, again, Bill's dad artistically depicted in stained glass on the ''Mens Scapus.'']]
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** [[spoiler:Currently implications point a tentative finger at Bill's mysterious father. Grunkle Ford, who definitely has some connection to "Cipher" (and this can't be Bill Cipher because the dates don't line up), has his name hidden in the capital letters of the first passage of the prophecy that No-Name left behind, indicating part or all of the message and prophecy/curse is for him--and the entire prophecy and message is written within a book identical to Ford's journals save a different embossed golden symbol on the front. Ford has also spent the entirety of the story speaking of "Cipher" with dread and convinced that something bad will happen to Dipper now that he's eighteen, the age specified in the conspicuously unnamed pirate's prophecy. Ford also refers to Cipher as a demon, which, if he is Bill's father, would explain quite a lot about Bill's more ambiguously human traits; there was some ''heavy'' foreshadowing in Chapter 10 about the ways humans might turn themselves into demonic creatures. Bill also heavily implies the treachery his father was accused of was piracy.]]

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** [[spoiler:Currently implications point a tentative finger at Bill's mysterious father. Grunkle Ford, who definitely has some connection to "Cipher" (and this can't be Bill Cipher because the dates don't line up), has his name hidden in the capital letters of the first passage of the prophecy that No-Name left behind, indicating part or all of the message and prophecy/curse is for him--and the entire prophecy and message is written within a book identical to Ford's journals save a different embossed golden symbol on the front. Ford has also spent the entirety of the story speaking of "Cipher" with present-tenses and dread and convinced that something bad will happen to Dipper now that he's eighteen, the age specified in the conspicuously unnamed pirate's prophecy. Ford also refers to Cipher as a demon, which, if he is Bill's father, would explain quite a lot about Bill's more ambiguously human traits; there was some ''heavy'' foreshadowing in Chapter 10 about the ways humans might turn themselves into demonic creatures. Bill also heavily implies the treachery his father was accused of was piracy.]]
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** [[spoiler:Currently implications point a tentative finger at Bill's mysterious father. Grunkle Ford, who definitely has some connection to "Cipher" (and this can't be Bill Cipher because the dates don't line up), has his name hidden in the capital letters of the first passage of the prophecy No Name left behind, indicating part or all of the message and prophecy/curse is for him--and the entire prophecy and message is written within a book identical to Ford's journals save a different embossed golden symbol on the front. Ford has also spent the entirety of the story speaking of "Cipher" with dread and convinced that something bad will happen to Dipper now that he's eighteen, the age specified in the conspicuously unnamed pirate's prophecy. Ford also refers to Cipher as a demon, which, if he is Bill's father, would explain quite a lot about Bill's more ambiguously human traits; there was some ''heavy'' foreshadowing in Chapter 10 about the ways humans might turn themselves into demonic creatures. Bill also heavily implies the treachery his father was accused of was piracy.]]

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** [[spoiler:Currently implications point a tentative finger at Bill's mysterious father. Grunkle Ford, who definitely has some connection to "Cipher" (and this can't be Bill Cipher because the dates don't line up), has his name hidden in the capital letters of the first passage of the prophecy No Name that No-Name left behind, indicating part or all of the message and prophecy/curse is for him--and the entire prophecy and message is written within a book identical to Ford's journals save a different embossed golden symbol on the front. Ford has also spent the entirety of the story speaking of "Cipher" with dread and convinced that something bad will happen to Dipper now that he's eighteen, the age specified in the conspicuously unnamed pirate's prophecy. Ford also refers to Cipher as a demon, which, if he is Bill's father, would explain quite a lot about Bill's more ambiguously human traits; there was some ''heavy'' foreshadowing in Chapter 10 about the ways humans might turn themselves into demonic creatures. Bill also heavily implies the treachery his father was accused of was piracy.]]
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* NoNameGiven: The exposition during the Pirate Council is entirely about a specific and controversial pirate who disappeared some twenty years ago and once predicted TheVaguenessIsComing in a book he left behind. Everyone seems to know who this is, but no one ever gives his name (nor do they give a reason why they ''aren't'' saying his name), making the conversation about him both extremely unnatural-sounding and extremely difficult to follow--even the details people shout out about him are contradictory, with some insisting he's a hero who died to warn others and others insisting he was a monster.

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* NoNameGiven: The exposition during the Pirate Council is entirely about a specific and controversial pirate who disappeared some twenty years ago and once predicted TheVaguenessIsComing that VaguenessIsComing in a book he left behind. Everyone seems to know who this is, but no one ever gives his name (nor do they give a reason why they ''aren't'' saying his name), making the conversation about him both extremely unnatural-sounding and extremely difficult to follow--even the details people shout out about him are contradictory, with some insisting he's a hero who died to warn others and others insisting he was a monster.
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* NoNameGiven: The exposition during the Pirate Council is entirely about a specific and controversial pirate (hereafter referred to as "The Conspicuously Unnamed Pirate") who disappeared some twenty years ago and once predicted TheVaguenessIsComing in a book he left behind. Everyone seems to know who this is, but no one ever gives his name (nor do they give a reason why they ''aren't'' saying his name), making the conversation about him both extremely unnatural-sounding and extremely difficult to follow--even the details people shout out about him are contradictory, with some insisting he's a hero who died to warn others and others insisting he was a monster.
** [[spoiler:Currently implications point a tentative finger at Bill's mysterious father. Grunkle Ford, who definitely has some connection to "Cipher" (and this can't be Bill Cipher because the dates don't line up), has his name hidden in the capital letters of the first passage of the prophecy No Name left behind, indicating part or all of the message and prophecy/curse is for him--and the entire prophecy and message is written within a book identical to Ford's journals save a different embossed golden symbol on the front. Ford has also spent the entirety of the story speaking of "Cipher" with dread and convinced that something bad will happen to Dipper now that he's eighteen, the age specified in The Conspicuously Unnamed Pirate's prophecy. Ford also refers to Cipher as a demon, which, if he is Bill's father, would explain quite a lot about Bill's more ambiguously human traits; there was some ''heavy'' foreshadowing in Chapter 10 about the ways humans might turn themselves into demonic creatures. Bill also heavily implies the treachery his father was accused of was piracy.]]

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* NoNameGiven: The exposition during the Pirate Council is entirely about a specific and controversial pirate (hereafter referred to as "The Conspicuously Unnamed Pirate") who disappeared some twenty years ago and once predicted TheVaguenessIsComing in a book he left behind. Everyone seems to know who this is, but no one ever gives his name (nor do they give a reason why they ''aren't'' saying his name), making the conversation about him both extremely unnatural-sounding and extremely difficult to follow--even the details people shout out about him are contradictory, with some insisting he's a hero who died to warn others and others insisting he was a monster.
** [[spoiler:Currently implications point a tentative finger at Bill's mysterious father. Grunkle Ford, who definitely has some connection to "Cipher" (and this can't be Bill Cipher because the dates don't line up), has his name hidden in the capital letters of the first passage of the prophecy No Name left behind, indicating part or all of the message and prophecy/curse is for him--and the entire prophecy and message is written within a book identical to Ford's journals save a different embossed golden symbol on the front. Ford has also spent the entirety of the story speaking of "Cipher" with dread and convinced that something bad will happen to Dipper now that he's eighteen, the age specified in The Conspicuously Unnamed Pirate's the conspicuously unnamed pirate's prophecy. Ford also refers to Cipher as a demon, which, if he is Bill's father, would explain quite a lot about Bill's more ambiguously human traits; there was some ''heavy'' foreshadowing in Chapter 10 about the ways humans might turn themselves into demonic creatures. Bill also heavily implies the treachery his father was accused of was piracy.]]
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* InformedAttribute: Dipper and Bill regularly discuss how closed-minded humanity in general is and how hostile they may be to discovering various facets of Dipper's identity, particularly regarding sexuality and gender--and while this was generally true during this particular time in history (and even true today in many parts of the world), we don't really see a general, culture-wide discomfort with Dipper as a person; everyone who finds out is generally quite respectful of Dipper's gender identity (even Robbie, who [[spoiler:was quite predatory, still respected Dipper's gender identity)]]. After over a dozen chapters, at least four visits to port, and the introduction of a fairly substantial cast of side-characters, the most we see of this close-mindedness is the misogyny displayed by two members of the Blind Eye Society, and two people can hardly be argued to speak for entire cultures or entire species.

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* InformedAttribute: Dipper and Bill regularly discuss how closed-minded humanity in general is and how hostile they may be to discovering various facets of Dipper's identity, particularly regarding his sexuality and gender--and while this was generally definitely true during this particular time in history (and even true today in many parts of the world), we don't really see a general, culture-wide discomfort with Dipper as a person; everyone who finds out is generally quite respectful of Dipper's gender identity (even Robbie, who [[spoiler:was quite predatory, still respected Dipper's gender identity)]]. After over a dozen chapters, at least four visits to port, and the introduction of a fairly substantial cast of side-characters, the most we see of this close-mindedness is the misogyny displayed by two members of the Blind Eye Society, and two people can hardly be argued to speak for entire cultures or entire species.
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* WholesomeCrossdresser: Dipper dresses as a woman in Port L'Orient as a favor to Robbie, since Robbie wants him to sing with his band but Dipper is wary of humans discovering he's transgendered.
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* {{Crossdressing}}: Dipper is talked into disguising as a woman in Port L'Orient and goes along with it mostly because he really likes the dress.
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* BiTheWay: In an attempt to show that he can relate to Dipper while the two of them discuss human attitudes towards sexuality and gender, Bill offhandedly mentions that he's bisexual.
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** Characters like Rezin make mention of the fact that Dipper is still "a child" and thus shouldn't partake in alcoholic beverages with them. However, until the creation of modern health practices and water cleaning processes, fresh water was potentially dangerous and infamously prone to contamination, especially in cities where most of the behavioral standards (like drinking ages) were set, and water stored for weeks at sea often wasn't much better. Mixing the water with strong alcohols was the most common way of making it safe to drink. It's therefore very unlikely pirates would refuse Dipper a drink due to being only 17 during the Golden Age of Piracy, considering he likely would have been drinking alcohol throughout his stay on the ''Mens Scapus'' in order to avoid the parasites and pathogens in the barrels of fresh water. Unless, you know, [[AWizardDidIt he magicked it,]] but even then the others wouldn't have reacted as such, because alcohol would have been normal and necessary for survival on a ship for everyone else, regardless of age.

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** Characters like Rezin make mention of the fact that Dipper is still "a child" and thus shouldn't partake in alcoholic beverages with them. However, until the creation of modern health practices and water cleaning processes, fresh water was potentially dangerous and infamously prone to contamination, especially in cities where most of the behavioral standards (like drinking ages) were set, and water stored for weeks at sea often wasn't much better. Mixing the water with strong alcohols was the most common way of making it safe to drink. It's therefore very unlikely that pirates would refuse Dipper a drink due to being only 17 during the Golden Age of Piracy, considering he likely would have been drinking alcohol throughout his stay on the ''Mens Scapus'' in order to avoid the parasites and pathogens in the barrels of fresh water. Unless, you know, [[AWizardDidIt he magicked it,]] but even then the others wouldn't have reacted as such, because alcohol would have been normal and necessary for survival on a ship for everyone else, regardless of age.
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** Characters like Rezin make mention of the fact that Dipper is still "a child" and thus shouldn't partake in alcoholic beverages with them. However, until the creation of modern health practices and water cleaning processes, fresh water was potentially dangerous and infamously prone to contamination, especially in cities where most of the behavioral standards (like drinking ages) were set, and water stored for weeks at sea often wasn't much better. Mixing the water with strong alcohols was the most common way of making it safe to drink. The point being: it's very unlikely pirates would refuse Dipper a drink due to being only 17 during the Golden Age of Piracy, considering he likely would have been drinking alcohol throughout his stay on the ''Mens Scapus'' in order to avoid the parasites and pathogens in the barrels of fresh water. Unless, you know, [[AWizardDidIt he magicked it,]] but even then the others wouldn't have reacted as such, because alcohol would have been normal and necessary for survival on a ship for everyone else, regardless of age.

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** Characters like Rezin make mention of the fact that Dipper is still "a child" and thus shouldn't partake in alcoholic beverages with them. However, until the creation of modern health practices and water cleaning processes, fresh water was potentially dangerous and infamously prone to contamination, especially in cities where most of the behavioral standards (like drinking ages) were set, and water stored for weeks at sea often wasn't much better. Mixing the water with strong alcohols was the most common way of making it safe to drink. The point being: it's It's therefore very unlikely pirates would refuse Dipper a drink due to being only 17 during the Golden Age of Piracy, considering he likely would have been drinking alcohol throughout his stay on the ''Mens Scapus'' in order to avoid the parasites and pathogens in the barrels of fresh water. Unless, you know, [[AWizardDidIt he magicked it,]] but even then the others wouldn't have reacted as such, because alcohol would have been normal and necessary for survival on a ship for everyone else, regardless of age.
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** The cocktail-like dress Dipper is given in Port L'Orient is made of a fabric of such a description that, given its sparkly and slinky nature, either [[AWizardDidIt required modern polyesters to be brought back by time travelers just to make it]] or is worth more than the entirety of the ''Mens Scapus'' itself. Or both. And its style doesn't exactly sound contemporary with the 17th and early 18th centuries either.

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** The cocktail-like dress Dipper is given in Port L'Orient is of a style that would be utterly scandalous even for prostitutes of the period, and made of a fabric of such a description that, given its sparkly and slinky nature, either [[AWizardDidIt required modern polyesters to be brought back by time travelers just to make it]] or is worth more than the entirety of the ''Mens Scapus'' itself. Or both.

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** The cocktail-like dress Dipper is given in Port L'Orient is of a style that would be utterly scandalous even for prostitutes of the period, and made of a fabric of such a description that, given its sparkly and slinky nature, either [[AWizardDidIt required modern polyesters to be brought back by time travelers just to make it]] or is worth more than the entirety of the ''Mens Scapus'' itself. Or both. And its style doesn't exactly sound contemporary with the 17th and early 18th centuries either.
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* AffectionateNickname: Bill has many for Dipper. Though he often uses Pine Tree (here a joke on Dipper's surname), he also uses Star Fish, [[{{Pun}} Cuddle]] Fish, and Angel Fish when he's feeling particularly affectionate or teasy.

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* AffectionateNickname: Bill has many for Dipper. Though he often uses Pine Tree (here a joke on Dipper's surname), he also uses Star Fish, [[{{Pun}} Cuddle]] Fish, and most frequently Angel Fish when he's feeling particularly affectionate or teasy.

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* GaslampFantasy: The story basically takes place in the TheGoldenAgeOfPiracy, except magic and magical creatures are real, widely known about, and criminalized by most countries.

* TheGoldenAgeOfPiracy: The approximate time period of the story, but no specific dates are given.

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* BlackAndGreyMorality: Dipper, Bill, and Gideon form a sliding scale of morality from light grey to black: Dipper is kind and generally against killing but limited in his empathy for humans, self-describing to Robbie as "indifferent" to their lives (though he seems to develop out of this the more he begins to identify with the humans around him); Bill is a mentally unstable pirate who [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slipped into nonchalant murder and thievery]], and, despite his beginning to move away from that moral cliff edge, still has no qualms about killing the people he feels he has to for survival; and Gideon is a megalomaniac who can control people like puppets and seeks to be the most powerful pirate captain "in all worlds," cheerfully slaughtering any and all in the way of his attaining power. The more we learn about Bill and his reasons, the more sympathetic he becomes, being characterized more like a particularly paranoid and jaded Robin Hood--while Gideon, kept "offscreen" as it were, is only heard about from scychophantic followers who themselves seek to murder and destroy: the only active presence Gideon's legion has had so far (besides mutinying against Bill) is breaking the no-arms treaty of the pirate council and attempting to kill all of the communities' leaders.

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* BlackAndGreyMorality: Dipper, Bill, and Gideon form a sliding scale of morality from light grey to black: Dipper is kind and generally against killing but limited in his empathy for humans, self-describing to Robbie as "indifferent" to their lives (though he seems to develop out of this the more he begins to identify sympathize with the humans around him); Bill is a mentally unstable pirate who [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slipped into nonchalant murder and thievery]], and, despite his beginning to move away from that moral cliff edge, still has no qualms about killing the people he feels he has to for survival; and Gideon is a megalomaniac who can control people like puppets and seeks to be the most powerful pirate captain "in all worlds," cheerfully slaughtering any and all in the way of his attaining power. The more we learn about Bill and his reasons, the more sympathetic he becomes, being characterized more like a particularly paranoid and jaded Robin Hood--while Gideon, kept "offscreen" as it were, is only heard about from scychophantic followers who themselves seek to murder and destroy: the only active presence Gideon's legion has had so far (besides mutinying against Bill) is breaking the no-arms treaty of the pirate council and attempting to kill all of the communities' leaders.
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When his crew mutiny under the magically-empowered leadership of his treacherous first mate, fasten him to the mainmast and blow his ship to a watery doom, Bill believes he's finished. But in the depths of the sea, there is other life, and kinder creatures--one even willing to save a life like his, in exchange for an escape from the ImplicitPrison of an overly-restrictive home. Together, infamous pirate Captain William Cipher and siren and new First Mate Dipper Pines raise the ruined shipwreck, hunt for Bill's mutinous crew, and set sail for the secrets of their past and their path towards the future. Standing against them are a maniacal traitor, a well-meaning family, Bill's own possibly disturbed mind, and a conspicuously unnamed pirate of the past, who ties all these things together.

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When his crew mutiny under the magically-empowered leadership of his treacherous first mate, fasten him to the mainmast and blow his ship to a watery doom, Bill believes he's finished. But in the depths of the sea, there is other life, and kinder creatures--one even willing to save a life like his, in exchange for an escape from the ImplicitPrison of an overly-restrictive home. Together, infamous pirate Captain William Cipher and siren and new First Mate Dipper Pines raise the ruined shipwreck, hunt for Bill's mutinous crew, and set sail for the secrets of their past and their path towards the future. Standing against them are a maniacal traitor, a well-meaning family, Bill's own possibly disturbed mind, and a conspicuously unnamed pirate of the past, past who ties all these things together.

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* RageBreakingPoint: Blind Ivan should ''not'' have slapped a "bitch." Hurting someone Bill considers his {{Protectorate}} guarantees his SoftSpokenSadist side will come out.

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* {{Transgender}}: Dipper was born physically female like his hatchmate Mabel, but identifies as male and used magic to enable his sex to match his gender. Unfortunately, as Dipper has no idea how the human body works, he doesn't know how to transfigure his sex while in the form of a human, making his identity as a trans male obvious if those around him pay attention. To the credit of the human sidecast, many treat the difference between Dipper's physical sex and gender identity as utterly irrelevant to their interactions with him... but not all, as Bill's and Dipper's encounter with the Blind Eye Society can attest to.
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* EasySexChange: Dipper is male in gender but was born physically female. Among sirens, this is no big deal, especially since Dipper is so talented at magic: having studied siren anatomy, making adjustments magically so that his body matches his gender wasn't too difficult for him. However, this is subverted after Dipper has to drop his personal spells to focus on the extremely complicated spells he has to perform while raising the ''Mens Scapus'' and transfiguring both the fish school and himself into humans. This makes Dipper's body default back to female during the transformation, and since he has yet to learn enough about human anatomy to know what to safely change or how, he has yet to change his body's sex back to matching his gender.
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->''“You’re cold?” he asked.''
->''“Yes, the water is very cold,” Bill answered.''
->''“But you’re warm,” the siren stated.''
->''“All the more reason to feel cold.”''
->''“I see… We’ll need to fix that."''

When his crew mutiny under the magically-empowered leadership of his treacherous first mate, fasten him to the mainmast and blow his ship to a watery doom, Bill believes he's finished. But in the depths of the sea, there is other life, and kinder creatures--one even willing to save a life like his, in exchange for an escape from the ImplicitPrison of an overly-restrictive home. Together, infamous pirate Captain William Cipher and siren and new First Mate Dipper Pines raise the ruined shipwreck, hunt for Bill's mutinous crew, and set sail for the secrets of their past and their path towards the future. Standing against them are a maniacal traitor, a well-meaning family, Bill's own possibly disturbed mind, and a conspicuously unnamed pirate of the past, who ties all these things together.

''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5008528/chapters/11509696 Drowning In Your Depths]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/GravityFalls'' AlternateUniverseFic written by [=AngstMom=]. Formerly updating regularly on Fridays, it remains active though updates are sporadic. Warnings for graphic depictions of violence, major character deaths, and explicit sexual content.

!Tropes Appearing in ''Drowning In Your Depths'':

* AffectionateNickname: Bill has many for Dipper. Though he often uses Pine Tree (here a joke on Dipper's surname), he also uses Star Fish, [[{{Pun}} Cuddle]] Fish, and Angel Fish when he's feeling particularly affectionate or teasy.

* AlternateUniverseFic: A pirate-and-siren style AU, wherein Bill is the pirate and the Dipper the siren.

* AlmostKiss: Dipper and Bill attempt one to seal their pact (that they will accompany each other to see the world, learn the mysteries surrounding themselves, and hunt down Gideon), but they're interrupted by the Blind Eye's BoardingParty.

* AmbiguousDisorder: Bill's "Beast" issue is only ambiguous because he lives before psychiatrists and it will probably turn out to have some sort of supernatural explanation--otherwise, a tentative diagnosis is readily available. Bill regularly hears multiple voices in his head which display contrasting personalities, frequently comment on his actions, and argue with him over his decisions as if they were spectators, and Bill occasionally snaps under extreme emotional stress and loses all inhibitions preventing his anger from spiking into an incredibly violent rage. This mental illness-like condition is the very reason Bill is a pirate: originally, he and his brother were tradesmen, but when pirates attacked their ship, Bill unexpectedly snapped for the first time and brutally slaughtered them all; afterwards, they knew they could never return to the legal side of the sea without Bill being hunted once word had spread, and it definitely would since this "Beast" had remained in Bill's head since that first violent outburst. Given this is a story with magic and there are strong hints Bill isn't entirely human, the Beast is likely supernatural, but given his sudden and extreme spikes of rage, the symptoms functions ''like'' an unusually violent mood or personality disorder, one that deeply affects how Bill chooses to live his life.

* AmbiguouslyHuman: Dipper notices during the Blind Eye attack that Bill's "Beast" exuded his own magical "tendrils," which is something impossible for humans--implying that Bill's dangerous snap personality is a manifestation of a part of himself that is other than human.

* AmbiguousTimePeriod: The story clearly takes place during the Golden Age of Piracy (1660-1730), but other than that avoids strict dating. Considering real-life pirate port Nassau has shown up, a more definite time may be found if Port Royal is ever mentioned. (Port Royal sank beneath the sea in an earthquake in 1692, at the height of the age. Prior to that it had been considered something of a pirate capital).

* ArtisticLicenseHistory:
** The cocktail-like dress Dipper is given in Port L'Orient is of a style that would be utterly scandalous even for prostitutes of the period, and made of a fabric of such a description that, given its sparkly and slinky nature, either [[AWizardDidIt required modern polyesters to be brought back by time travelers just to make it]] or is worth more than the entirety of the ''Mens Scapus'' itself. Or both.
** Although it's minor, the cast occasionally uses modernisms in their language that make no sense for the setting. For example, Dipper uses the word "blocks" during the pirate council meeting to describe the distance between them and the dozens of armed ships at port. Not only does this terminology not make sense for Dipper to know (considering he's a literal FishOutOfWater), but "blocks" only exist in areas that have experienced formal community planning, which didn't even begin to be ''thought'' about until about sixty years after the Golden Age of Piracy had ended.
** Characters like Rezin make mention of the fact that Dipper is still "a child" and thus shouldn't partake in alcoholic beverages with them. However, until the creation of modern health practices and water cleaning processes, fresh water was potentially dangerous and infamously prone to contamination, especially in cities where most of the behavioral standards (like drinking ages) were set, and water stored for weeks at sea often wasn't much better. Mixing the water with strong alcohols was the most common way of making it safe to drink. The point being: it's very unlikely pirates would refuse Dipper a drink due to being only 17 during the Golden Age of Piracy, considering he likely would have been drinking alcohol throughout his stay on the ''Mens Scapus'' in order to avoid the parasites and pathogens in the barrels of fresh water. Unless, you know, [[AWizardDidIt he magicked it,]] but even then the others wouldn't have reacted as such, because alcohol would have been normal and necessary for survival on a ship for everyone else, regardless of age.

* AttackOfThe50FootWhatever: A kraken attacks the ship in chapter 24.

* BlackAndGreyMorality: Dipper, Bill, and Gideon form a sliding scale of morality from light grey to black: Dipper is kind and generally against killing but limited in his empathy for humans, self-describing to Robbie as "indifferent" to their lives (though he seems to develop out of this the more he begins to identify with the humans around him); Bill is a mentally unstable pirate who [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slipped into nonchalant murder and thievery]], and, despite his beginning to move away from that moral cliff edge, still has no qualms about killing the people he feels he has to for survival; and Gideon is a megalomaniac who can control people like puppets and seeks to be the most powerful pirate captain "in all worlds," cheerfully slaughtering any and all in the way of his attaining power. The more we learn about Bill and his reasons, the more sympathetic he becomes, being characterized more like a particularly paranoid and jaded Robin Hood--while Gideon, kept "offscreen" as it were, is only heard about from scychophantic followers who themselves seek to murder and destroy: the only active presence Gideon's legion has had so far (besides mutinying against Bill) is breaking the no-arms treaty of the pirate council and attempting to kill all of the communities' leaders.

* ColdOpen: The first scene of the story opens on Bill sinking to the bottom of the Mediterranean InMediasRes and ends on a cliffhangar as Bill sinks to his death. While this event sets in motion the rest of the story, the actual plot doesn't begin until the next chapter with the introduction of Dipper.

* CoolBoat: The ''Mens Scapus,'' one of only five like her in the world, three of which have permenantly sank.

* DealWithTheDevil: Deals with Davey Jones and similar entities apparently exist in this world; Bill is accused by the Blind Eye Society of making one to survive the sinking of his ship. Subverted in that Dipper claims such deals are uncommon because human souls are often more a burden than they're worth; Davey Jones in particular rarely deals for one due to the problems with upkeep.

* EnthrallingSiren: Dipper is one, if atypical in nature. Unlike most versions of sirens, Dipper's pod and town do not use their voices to lure humans; in fact, the CompellingVoice is rarely used, and the sirens prefer to live far away from humans, the surface, and the shore, making it deliberately rare for them to encounter humans in the first place. Given the rarity of its use, that Ford is the one who taught the twins, and that sirens make note of which sea species are immune, it's possible the CompellingVoice's intended function may instead be a defensive ability against predators in the ocean. Dipper is an unusually powerful one, remarkable even among his kind--although he seemed unaware of just ''how'' remarkable until recent events have begun to highlight the difference.

* EvilMentor: Played with. Bill is a murderer and a pirate with scores of lives on his hands, but he does have Dipper's best interests at heart and actually doesn't want to lead Dipper astray of his own morality. Bill teaches Dipper to fight because he knows that he'll need it to survive, but Bill is jaded enough about the world and himself to ''not'' want Dipper to be like him.

* GaslampFantasy: The story basically takes place in the TheGoldenAgeOfPiracy, except magic and magical creatures are real, widely known about, and criminalized by most countries.

* TheGoldenAgeOfPiracy: The approximate time period of the story, but no specific dates are given.

* GratuitousLatin: All of the magical spells use Latin for some reason.
** The name of the Bill's ship, the ''Mens Scapus,'' also supposedly translates to "Mind Scape" in Latin.

* HumanityEnsues: Dipper (and later, [[spoiler:his siren family]])* uses magic to assume the form of a human and sail on the ''Mens Scapus'' as Bill's first mate. The adjustment is... difficult. On the other hand, Dipper offers magic to a school of fish if they will transform with him and become the ship's crew, and they, he petulantly notes, seem to have no problem.

* HumansAreBastards: Bill certainly believes so.

* HumansThroughAlienEyes: Dipper is a FishOutOfWater that had never met a human before Bill, and his only knowledge of them comes from his great uncles' stories. This leads to a major CultureClash as Dipper struggles to interpret the whats, whys, and hows of human life and adapt enough of them to pass for a normal human. This is not helped by the contemporary humans' limiting views on gender identity and sexuality, which Dipper defies through his very existence.

* IJustWantToBeFree: Dipper dearly and sincerely loves his family with all his heart, but can't stand the sudden control complex they've developed over his life--to the point where he willingly fled home with a pirate, the type of human Ford described as "the worst," just to escape the ImplicitPrison his family intended his life to become.

* IOweYouMyLife: Played straight with Bill, who feels he owes Dipper for saving him from drowning when the ''Mens Scapus'' went down. Played with in terms of Port L'Orient; though Bill saved the town from perpetual zombie invasion, he initially treats the villagers owing him their lives as a joke--however, he does expect basic respect in turn for his deeds, and is genuinely angry and betrayed when certain individuals within the town reveal themselves to be disrespectful towards those under his protection or to have intentions of treachery against him.

* InMediasRes: The story opens with Bill tied to the mainmast of the ''Mens Scapus'' as it sinks to the bottom of the Mediterranean Sea.

* InnocentProdigy: Dipper's a bit older than most examples, but fits quite well: he's still rather naive about the world and ignorant as to his own place in it--even as to just how ''much'' of a prodigy he is. Along with his prodigal analytical skills, he's extremely naturally gifted with magic.

* ItsAllAboutMe: Gideon basically thinks he's the main character, almost literally considering he assumes the prophecy is about him (when it's pretty obviously about the Pines and the Ciphers). Whatever he's searching for, he thinks it will make him the "most powerful captain... in all worlds." In short, he's still somehow both a calculating mastermind and a homicidal showboating madman. Hilariously for his ego, WordOfGod says he's basically a side quest.

* LikeRobinHood: Bill describes that during his crew's slow transition from tradesmen to pirates, they began targeting and pillaging the corrupt. It's implied they may have drifted slightly away from those vigilante ideals slightly by the time the story began, given Bill's internal monologue in chapter 1.

* LoveableRogue: Bill, who is characterized less like an unfeeling monster and more like a NobleDemon

* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The ''Blackness from the Stars.'' Luckily, it typically doesn't give a damn about the mortal world, and has ignored every attempt to summon it for thousands of years. Horrifyingly, it ''doesn't'' ignore '''''Dipper's.'''''

* NobleDemon: Bill, [[spoiler:possibly literally]] and very ironic given his role in the show's canon. Bill is a pirate--a murderer, thief, cutthroat and renegade. Yet he has a depth and softness to his character that reveals a certain morality and goodness despite these qualities. A lot of what makes Bill sympathetic despite his occupation is his acceptance and respect for others, regardless of sex, gender, sexuality, race, or species, which is heavily contrasted with the misogyny, racism, homophobia, and general bigotry of the general population. Due to his role and the way his life has gone, he's seen the worst of humanity and is [[HumansAreBastards disgusted by humanity's cruelty towards themselves and others]], though very self-aware about how terribly cruel he himself has become and can be, and very jaded regarding the concept of innocence. He gradually shifted into the pirate role due to circumstances and necessity, rather than original criminal intent; Bill ultimately comes across as a good person who became a pirate due to having a mental illness that makes it very difficult for him to function in normal society, and then slowly adapted to the more cruel pirate lifestyle--with a heavy implication, given how he describes the change as gradual while talking self-loathingly of his fellow humans and his own behavior, because Bill looked at the people he'd ended up with, looked at how the world saw them, looked at how they and others treated each other, and just gave up on the idea of being good.

* NoNameGiven: The exposition during the Pirate Council is entirely about a specific and controversial pirate (hereafter referred to as "The Conspicuously Unnamed Pirate") who disappeared some twenty years ago and once predicted TheVaguenessIsComing in a book he left behind. Everyone seems to know who this is, but no one ever gives his name (nor do they give a reason why they ''aren't'' saying his name), making the conversation about him both extremely unnatural-sounding and extremely difficult to follow--even the details people shout out about him are contradictory, with some insisting he's a hero who died to warn others and others insisting he was a monster.
** [[spoiler:Currently implications point a tentative finger at Bill's mysterious father. Grunkle Ford, who definitely has some connection to "Cipher" (and this can't be Bill Cipher because the dates don't line up), has his name hidden in the capital letters of the first passage of the prophecy No Name left behind, indicating part or all of the message and prophecy/curse is for him--and the entire prophecy and message is written within a book identical to Ford's journals save a different embossed golden symbol on the front. Ford has also spent the entirety of the story speaking of "Cipher" with dread and convinced that something bad will happen to Dipper now that he's eighteen, the age specified in The Conspicuously Unnamed Pirate's prophecy. Ford also refers to Cipher as a demon, which, if he is Bill's father, would explain quite a lot about Bill's more ambiguously human traits; there was some ''heavy'' foreshadowing in Chapter 10 about the ways humans might turn themselves into demonic creatures. Bill also heavily implies the treachery his father was accused of was piracy.]]

* OurMermaidsAreDifferent: the Sirens in this story seem to be a fusion of merfolk and siren folklore; though the sirens have the classic CompellingVoice, the sirens are closer to a benevolent merfolk archetype then the predatory nature hinted at by the label "siren"--with most outright avoiding humans and the surface altogether. Also, any seem to mimic the forms of different aquatic species ranging from octopi to sharks (Dipper in particular seems to mimic some sort of deep-ocean bioluminescent fish). They're also naturally magical creatures (as opposed to humans, who can apparently manipulate magic around them but not generate it themselves), and can percieve the different kinds of magic in the world through their normal senses.

* ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything: Played with. Characters talk quite a lot about the pirating Bill has committed prior to the story, but due to the focus on hunting Gideon, none of that has so far gone on during the story proper. The closest thing to classic pirating was the Blind Eye Society boarding ''Bill's'' ship without permission and Bill's inner demon brutally murdering one of them during the ensuing conflict, but given that Bill was the one whose ship was invaded (by people who ''weren't'' pirates, no less), it doesn't really count. The characterization of Bill in the first chapter sounds far more like a pirate than the softer character we see him be around Dipper and Rezin.
* The pirates in the story act more like a hybrid of pirates and the mafia: they've formed a paralegal governmental structure applying to all the captains under their allegiance and have enough power where even the majority of those who aren't do not ''dare'' to interfere with their policies; they have their own council which makes enforced decisions; and they've created their own laws and do not abide by those of the official local governments. They are criminals, but they act like a confederacy of organized crime families under the leadership of their captains (the bosses). Notably, the "bad" pirates are the ones that rebel against even ''pirate'' laws. In RealLife, pirates ''did'' have their codes and laws, but they were only agreed upon between members of a single crew or temporary fleet as each man's conditions of service (most involving an equality of rations and loot provided to the crew and no stealing from fellow crewmen). However, the story implies a major disruption involving the pirates as a whole changed the course of events during the beginning of the Golden Age and led to a conspicuously unnamed pirate leading the creation of the council, thereafter forming more a widely applicable code amongst the lot of them--Neviah, current Praesul of the Council, even refers to their brand of piracy as "''Organized'' piracy."
** There's even a town under Bill's "protection" that he saved from zombies. Community outreach and aid something the Yakuza (Japanese mafia) will regularly do, as it reinforces their influence and presents them as equals to official channels for aid (essentially, subtly challenges the local government).
** What we hear of Gideon since he mutinied against Bill completely subverts this: he's invaded and looted towns, acquired ships, attacked other pirates, and seeks to be seen as "the most fearless and powerful captain to sail the seas of this world... of all worlds.”

* PlotBasedPhotographObfuscation: It's not a photograph, but the stained glass window in the captain's quarters on the ''Mens Scapus'' has been mentioned repeatedly in significant character moments, yet each time elludes description beyond a vague connection to "some prophecy." Considering everyone and their grandmother has repeatedly mentioned some ambiguous prophecy, particularly in relation to Dipper and Bill, it's not a stretch of the imagination to conclude that the contents of the stain glass image are plot-relevant and revealing.

* PortTown: Given that most of the story takes place on the sea, a port town features any time the ''Mens Scapus'' heads to land. Unless something plot-significant happens while they're in town, it's hardly glanced over--the two major ones named so far have been Port l'Orient (in France) and the real-life Caribbean PortTown Nassau, which once upon a time really was a major pirate port, second only to Port Royal. A third unnamed port features in Chapter 17, described only as "off the coast of the Pearl Keys," which would place it east of Nicaragua.
** Though to be fair, Port L'Orient crosses into NotSoSafeHarbor, given just how much conspiracy and exploitation was going on there.
** Gravity Falls is kind of an inversion of this - it's a town beneath the sea, rather than beside it.

* TheQuest: Dipper and Bill agree to travel together to hunt Gideon and rescue the loyal members of Bill's crew. [[spoiler:Unlike most versions of this trope, this is heavily implied to be something of a RedHerring plot, as a more important conflict seems to be lingering just on the horizon]].

* RageBreakingPoint: Blind Ivan should ''not'' have slapped a "bitch." Hurting someone Bill considers his {{Protectorate}} guarantees his SoftSpokenSadist side will come out.

* RapePillageAndBurn: What Gideon and those who willingly follow him have been doing to everyone they come across. Bill as a pirate is confirmed to have done the "pillage and burn" parts, but it's described in Robin Hood-style so it's unclear if the third ever happened on his watch.

* RealityEnsues: Though pirates can be violent and merciless criminals and tend to meet hostile greeting parties in richer, well-governed ports, this is not true for smaller ports, who--given that they need the trade and business the visiting ships bring--tend to welcome all ships without much question as long as their crews don't cause them trouble.

* RedBaron: Though Bill doesn't use it often, he claims he's known as "the Demon atop the Seas" (as opposed to Davey Jones, who we learn is the Demon ''below'' the seas), and references to his "demon" nickname are made by characters throughout the story. This becomes increasingly ironic as the story progresses.

* RedEyesTakeWarning: Bill's eyes normally have blue irises and white sclera, but when "the Beast" makes a show of things, his sclera turns black and his irises flash between white and red, emphasizing his AmbiguouslyHuman nature.

* RedHerring: Used initially to distract from the hints that [[spoiler:Bill actually isn't entirely human]]. Dipper assumes from meeting Bill that some humans have natural, innate magic, and the perspective choices in the first dozen chapters lean towards implying this to be true: Bill's perspective when describing magic at times mirrors what Dipper's perspective is, implying that magically inclined humans can also sense magic. However, after seeing [[spoiler:Bill's "beast" naturally use an instinctive kind of magic to paralyze the Blind Eye Society, we learn that humans do ''not'' have innate magic, should not be able to sense magic like Dipper does, and that those humans that use magic have instead learned to manipulate magic around them--and thus, that Bill's magical perceptiveness as described is actually demonstrative of innately inhuman qualities.]] Because Bill was the only non-sea magic user character prior to this point, it was impossible to gauge what was truly "normal" for humans, creating the assumption of normalcy where none actually existed.

* SinkingShipScenario: The InMediasRes ColdOpen of the story begins with this, as Bill and the ''Mens Scapus'' sink to the bottom of the Mediterranean sea.

* ShipshapeShipwreck: The story's averting of this is a plot point. Despite only having sunk a few hours prior, the ''Mens Scapus'' is in absolutely terrible condition, with its masts and hull broken, the keel--its foundation--suffering what would normally be permanent damage, and its timber and ropes swollen into conditions that would have been utterly unsalvageable by mundane means. Without rare and powerful magic, it would have been a total loss. Its destruction is so complete that Bill's survival and the raising of the ''Mens Scapus'' was all but assumed to be a mad impossibility--to the point where people assume the only way he could have done so was by selling his soul to a demon--and it's only due to a powerful one-in-a-million-chance SpannerInTheWorks that the ship (and Bill) wasn't doomed to wreck and watery grave.

* SirensAreMermaids: Dipper and his kind are portrayed more similarly to the folklore of merfolk, except with [[CompellingVoice Compelling Voices]].

* SlowlySlippingIntoEvil: Bill pre-story began his career at sea as a merchant, then turned to vigilante pirating when "the Beast" made him too unstable to remain entirely on the right side of the law, and from there is implied to have sunk further and further away from any real moral justification for his actions as he [[HumansAreBastards slowly gave up on the idea of human morality altogether]], ''even within himself.'' Judging by his internal narration in the first few chapters and his shame at his previous actions in later ones, he seems to have been on his way to becoming a MisanthropeSupreme before Dipper began pulling him away from [[JumpedOffTheSlipperySlope the cliff edge.]]

* SmallRoleBigImpact: Someone named "Cipher" had a ''very'' negative encounter with the elder Pines Twins back when they sailed the ocean's surface on the Stan O'War two+ decades ago. If this person is the same as Bill's father ''and'' the unnamed pirate who recorded the Siren prophecy, then "Cipher" is responsible for a good half of the events that have defined the main characters' lives.

* SoftSpokenSadist: How the "Beast" behaves: it's eerily quiet, unstoppable yet slow, and perpetually, silently, viciously enraged--Bill's normal condescension towards humanity in general multiplied by his sudden spike of hate for those who attack the few he cares for, a suddenly exceedingly violent temper and lust for the suffering of those who have managed to make him snap, and the loss of all consequence-based inhibitions towards extreme behavior--all accompanied by the instinctual realization that Bill-as-Beast has the power to make them suffer as much as he wants and they can't do anything about it--can't even move to flee, unless he lets them. In his show-stopping appearance chapter, the Beast is characterized, above all, by an intense, violent ''stillness,'' punctuated by the squelch of human organs being forced into places and shapes they shouldn't.
** The Beast is basically the homicidal version of ColdHam.

* SummonMagic: One of Dipper's talents, to his varying horror. In chapter , Dipper, with a gun pointed at his head, is forced to attempt a summons that will result in the deaths of all those around him. In his attempts to prevent this, Dipper instead recites the spell for summoning a different entity, a dark god that has refused to be summoned for thousands of years, planning for nothing to happen in an attempt to bide time and figure out how to defuse the situation. Instead, the Blackness from the Stars ''actually shows up,'' devours the person pointing a gun at Dipper's head, and this terrifies the rest of the aggressors into fleeing for their lives. Dipper manages to keep his head in the immediate aftermath until the summoning book is destroyed and the danger has been mitigated, but afterwards is utterly shaken by the fact that he killed someone, especially via summoning a being that supposedly never answers.

* SwordAndGun: Bill begins to train Dipper to use these weapons early on in the story, believing he's probably going to need to fight when they confront Gideon.

* UnstoppableRage: Well, ''nearly'' unstoppable. Once Bill's provoked into "Beast" mode, those that provoked him usually end up brutally eviscerated--this is particularly true if the Beast was provoked by attacking someone Bill cares for. After smacking Dipper for daring to stand up to them while being "female," the majority of the Blind Eye Society was only spared because Dipper's Siren Song managed to enchant Bill into ceasing his attack. It's heavily implied that Dipper's magic is ''much'' more powerful than the average siren's, so it's unclear if another siren could even pull off such a feat.

* VillainTeamUp: Inverted, in a meta-sense. Not only is Bill a villain in the original material this story adapts from, but both Sirens and Pirates are not usually the heroes of anything. Here, the whole ''plot'' is the team up of a murderous pirate and a siren with a CompellingVoice, both of whom are the protagonists and the relative good guys.

* WaterIsAir: Bill lampshades how strange it is that he can talk and converse with Dipper after Dipper temporarily gives him the ability to breathe underwater--which should have, logically, affected the actual acoustics of their voices and made human-style linguistics almost impossible, as sound waves travel very differently in the denser water than in air and the human ear is not adapted to pick up sounds accurately in those conditions. Similarly, Bill can also see perfectly clearly [[SeeWater despite being submerged in salt water]], despite the human eyes not being adapted to the refractive indices of water and despite salt water generally being very painful for the human eyeball. Though it's never confirmed, there's always the out that these effects were tied in with the spell Dipper cast to enable Bill to breath. It ''is'' actually implied that the merfolk's natural magic enables them to speak and sing like humans even under the sea, so the idea that some of these attributes would carry over in the temporary spell isn't ''that'' far of a stretch. [[spoiler:Of course, the fact that Bill himself likely isn't entirely human and has his own natural magic may also contribute]].
** On the other hand, the story averts this trope in most other ways. Water pressure and temperature are mentioned and become concerns for the human's health (though oddly [[AWizardDidIt not nearly as much]] [[NoOneShouldSurviveThat as they should have been]]), and the thermal vents on the ocean floor spew realistic heat, mud, chemicals, and nutrients that do mess with the water. Similarly, it's constantly lampshaded that Bill's body is not adequate for any sort of efficient movement underwater, much to his chagrin.

* WhereTheHellIsSpringfield: What does Dipper mean by his "mother waters"? Does he just mean salt water, the ocean, the Mediterranean, or a specific part of the sea that he lived in?

* AWizardDidIt: The two main protagonists do an incredible amount of traveling, none of which they have the actual time for. The ''Mens Scapus'' sails from the spot it sunk in the Mediteranean just off the coast of Africa, travels around Spain and Portugal to Port L'Orient on the Northwest coast of France, over to the Pearl Cays off Nicaragua in Central America, up to Nassau for the meeting with the Pirate Council, and then back across the ocean towards Greece to catch Gideon. Even in absolute ideal conditions at a consistent speed of about 20 knots (or 23 miles per hour)--the top speed a 1700s vessel could go--it would take nine and a half days just to go straight from Port L'Orient to the Pearl Cays--and it would take approximately 22 days just to make it from the Mediterranean to Nassau via this route. Then add that to the fact that the actual average speed of a ship at the time was 4-5 knots--four times slower. Like with the biological impediments to Bill seeing, hearing, and speaking properly under the water, the author handwaves the travel time issues through Bill suspecting in his own narration that Dipper's magic is affecting the actual functions of the ship.

* WoodenShipsAndIronMen: Subverted. You definitely need to have a certain hardness about you to get through battles, but due to a combination of magic and Bill's completely historically unrealistic hygiene standards, life aboard the ''Mens Scapus'' is described as just about as comfortable as living on land, if not moreso due to a lack of all the untrustworthy people at port.

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