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* HehHehYouSaidX: When Rainbow Dash hears about Twilight Sparkle "feeding [Pincer] love", she fails to suppress a giggle.
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* GrayingMorality: The entire point of the story is to take a good look at the BlackAndWhiteMorality presented by the changeling invasion and give a more in depth story, which definitely changes the exact hues we see both sides in.
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* GrayingMorality: The entire point of the story is to take a good look at the BlackAndWhiteMorality presented by the changeling invasion and give a more in depth story, which definitely changes the exact hues we see both sides in.in (though Celestia is still far, ''far'' better than Chrysalis).
* MundaneUtility: [[spoiler:Pincer becomes an actor at the end of the story]].
* SequelHook: [[spoiler:Chrysalis is overthrown and a more benevolent Queen is elevated to the position, there's apparently a group of changelings that wish for a return to the old lifestyle]].
* MundaneUtility: [[spoiler:Pincer becomes an actor at the end of the story]].
* SequelHook: [[spoiler:Chrysalis is overthrown and a more benevolent Queen is elevated to the position, there's apparently a group of changelings that wish for a return to the old lifestyle]].
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** [[spoiler:After Chrysalis is overthrown, things start to change for the better]].
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Averted, though both Pincer and the ponies he deals with expect this of eachother. He's aware that what the changelings are doing would generally be considered bad, but he knows that they are only doing it to survive.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Averted, though both Pincer and the ponies he deals with expect this of eachother.each other. He's aware that what the changelings are doing would generally be considered bad, but he knows that they are only doing it to survive.
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* TheSpartanWay: Every changeling serves as a member of their society's military. Poor soldiers are subject to verbal abuse, corporal punishment, and in particularly severe cases, [[UriahGambit assignment to penal battalions.]]
* TheSpartanWay: Every changeling serves as a member of their society's military. Poor soldiers are subject to verbal abuse, corporal punishment, and in particularly severe cases, [[UriahGambit assignment to penal battalions.]]
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* GrayingMorality: The entire point of the story is to take a good look at the BlackandWhiteMorality BlackAndWhiteMorality presented by the changeling invasion and give a more in depth story, which definitely changes the exact hues we see both sides in.
* TheSpartanWay: Every changeling serves as a member of their society's military. Poor soldiers are subject to verbal abuse, corporal punishment, and in particularly severe cases, [[UriahGambit assignment to penal battalions.]]]]
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* TheSpartanWay: Every changeling serves as a member of their society's military. Poor soldiers are subject to verbal abuse, corporal punishment, and in particularly severe cases, [[UriahGambit assignment to penal battalions.
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A MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction written by Starman Ghost.
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* BlueandOrangeMorality: BlueAndOrangeMorality: Averted, though both Pincer and the ponies he deals with expect this of eachother. He's aware that what the changelings are doing would generally be considered bad, but he knows that they are only doing it to survive.
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*BlueandOrangeMorality: Averted, though both Pincer and the ponies he deals with expect this of eachother. He's aware that what the changelings are doing would generally be considered bad, but he knows that they are only doing it to survive.
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* ExtremeOmnivore: Pincer (and implicitly, changelings in general) can eat and enjoy everything from flowers to raw meat, and doesn't bother peeling an orange before he eats it.
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* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthluhu: When Pincer finally meets Celestia face-to-face, she takes him for a snack at a pastry shop.
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* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthluhu: DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: When Pincer finally meets Celestia face-to-face, she takes him for a snack at a pastry shop.
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* NoMrBondIExpectYouToDine: When Pincer finally meets Celestia face-to-face, she takes him for a snack at a pastry shop.
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* NoMrBondIExpectYouToDine: DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthluhu: When Pincer finally meets Celestia face-to-face, she takes him for a snack at a pastry shop.
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* NoMrBondIExpectYouToDine: When Pincer finally meets Celestia face-to-face, she takes him for a snack at a pastry shop.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: What Pincer ''thinks'' the ponies will do to him. He's quite shocked when it doesn't happen.
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*TheSpartanWay: Every changeling serves as a member of their society's military. Poor soldiers are subject to verbal abuse, corporal punishment, and in particularly severe cases, [[UriahGambit assignment to penal battalions.]]
*TheSpartanWay: Every changeling serves as a member of their society's military. Poor soldiers are subject to verbal abuse, corporal punishment, and in particularly severe cases, [[UriahGambit assignment to penal battalions.]]
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The story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/74014/body-and-mind here]].
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The story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/74014/body-and-mind here]].here]].
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The story follows a lone Changeling that goes by the name of Pincer who, after the failed invasion of Canterlot, gets caught by the Royal Guard and goes onto discover that what he was taught about the ponies, might not be true, and the ponies themselves learn that what they know about the Changelings might also not be true.
The story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/74014/body-and-mind here]].
The story follows a lone Changeling that goes by the name of Pincer who, after the failed invasion of Canterlot, gets caught by the Royal Guard and goes onto discover that what he was taught about the ponies, might not be true, and the ponies themselves learn that what they know about the Changelings might also not be true.
The story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/74014/body-and-mind here]].
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