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* BiTheWay: Sai.

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* ActualPacifist: Ain
* AlternateUniverseFic

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* ActualPacifist: Ain
Ain, just like his counterpart.
* AlternateUniverseFic AlternateUniverseFic: Expressly an original story inspired by the series, and not a retelling.



* AntiVillain: Azul

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* AntiVillain: AzulAzul, as opposed to their more AxCrazy counterpart.



* AteHisGun: [[spoiler:Jeong Jeong]]

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* AteHisGun: [[spoiler:Jeong Jeong]]Jeong]].



* BiTheWay: Sai
* BigBad: Azul

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* BiTheWay: Sai
Sai.
* BigBad: AzulAzul.



* DarkerAndEdgier
* DarkFic
* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Jeong Jeong]]

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* DarkerAndEdgier
DarkerAndEdgier: Much darker then the series it takes inspiration from.
* DarkFic
DarkFic: Just see the list of characters it ends up killing off.
* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Jeong Jeong]]Jeong]].



* KilledOffForReal
** Book One: [[spoiler:Lee and Kai, Xin Fu, Jiao, Jeong Jeong, Enri, Jun, Hyan, Rin/The Mechanist, and lastly, the entire goddamn Fire Naval fleet.]]
** Book Two:
** Book Three:

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* KilledOffForReal
** Book One:
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** Book Two:
** Book Three:
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** The Avatar Spirit is [[spoiler:not the original spirit, turned bitter and angry, after all. It is actually a NietzscheWannabe Roku, who committed suicide in an ambitious gambit to achieve AGodAmI.]]

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** The Avatar Spirit is [[spoiler:not the original spirit, turned bitter and angry, after all. It is actually a NietzscheWannabe Roku, who committed suicide in an ambitious gambit to achieve AGodAmI.godhood.]]



* ShootTheDog: Kyasin and Sakodi refer to her having killed various Fire Nation mercenaries to protect their village, in the first chapter.

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* ShootTheDog: Kyasin and Sakodi refer to her having killed various Fire Nation mercenaries to protect their village, village in the first chapter.



* WellIntentionedExtremist: Kyasin,

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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Kyasin, Kyasin.
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Avatar:The Last Airbender Revised, or A:TLAR, is an all-out AlternateUniverseFic / ContinuityReboot FanFic of WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender, written by Lovelyb0nes on the Avatar Wiki. Akin to the basic formula of the original series, the series follows two water tribe siblings, an airbender that was frozen one hundred years ago, a blind earthbender and an exiled Fire Nation prince, whose journeys eventually converge in an epic mission to end a hundred-year war. There are significant differences between these two series, though. Aside from most of the cast not sharing names with the Original Series' characters, essentially all of the characters in ATLAR, major, supporting and minor alike, have significantly different characterizations compared to their inspirations from the Original, [[FanDumb which is responsible for much of the ire from ATLA's fanbase.]] In a paraphrasing of the creator and writer's words:

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Avatar:The Last Airbender Revised, or A:TLAR, is an all-out AlternateUniverseFic / ContinuityReboot FanFic of WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender, written by Lovelyb0nes [=Lovelyb0nes=] on the Avatar Wiki. Akin to the basic formula of the original series, the series follows two water tribe siblings, an airbender that was frozen one hundred years ago, a blind earthbender and an exiled Fire Nation prince, whose journeys eventually converge in an epic mission to end a hundred-year war. There are significant differences between these two series, though. Aside from most of the cast not sharing names with the Original Series' characters, essentially all of the characters in ATLAR, major, supporting and minor alike, have significantly different characterizations compared to their inspirations from the Original, [[FanDumb which is responsible for much of the ire from ATLA's fanbase.]] fanbase. In a paraphrasing of the creator and writer's words:



Zotu is a nineteen year old firebender that was exiled from his homeland by his father, the FireLord, who Zotu convinced to allow for an opportunity at regaining his position as the heir to the throne by proving that the previous Lords' declaration, that the Avatar cycle had been broken, was a lie. While aiding the raiding parties in invading the remaining water tribe islands in the south, Zotu received word that the Avatar Host may have awoken on a nearby island. Desperate to pursue even the most flimsy of leads, Zotu struck gold; upon his arrival on the Southern Peak island, Ain surrendered to ensure that the tribals and Zotu's soldiers did not come to blows. However, while Ain was imprisoned on his warship, Zotu reflected upon the circumstances of his exile, at the behest of the monk. Troubled at how his journey seemed to ultimately be serving his father's interests more than his own, Zotu abandoned his mission. Furthermore, he was able to discover a new purpose during his reflections: he was able to realize that many of his childhood memories, particularly of his mother, were not merely faint in his mind, but completely absent. Zotu became determined to investigate into exactly how one's very memory could be tampered with, and who was responsible.

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Zotu is a nineteen year old firebender that was exiled from his homeland by his father, the FireLord, [=FireLord=], who Zotu convinced to allow for an opportunity at regaining his position as the heir to the throne by proving that the previous Lords' declaration, that the Avatar cycle had been broken, was a lie. While aiding the raiding parties in invading the remaining water tribe islands in the south, Zotu received word that the Avatar Host may have awoken on a nearby island. Desperate to pursue even the most flimsy of leads, Zotu struck gold; upon his arrival on the Southern Peak island, Ain surrendered to ensure that the tribals and Zotu's soldiers did not come to blows. However, while Ain was imprisoned on his warship, Zotu reflected upon the circumstances of his exile, at the behest of the monk. Troubled at how his journey seemed to ultimately be serving his father's interests more than his own, Zotu abandoned his mission. Furthermore, he was able to discover a new purpose during his reflections: he was able to realize that many of his childhood memories, particularly of his mother, were not merely faint in his mind, but completely absent. Zotu became determined to investigate into exactly how one's very memory could be tampered with, and who was responsible.
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** Ultimately averted with [[spoiler:the Avatar Spirit, whose pressuring of Ain to end the war as motivated by a petty grudge against the Fire Nation Royal Family, not because it had turned bitter after witnessing its own creation In fact, it turns out to not even be a spirit.]]

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** Ultimately averted with [[spoiler:the Avatar Spirit, whose pressuring of Ain to end the war as is motivated by a petty grudge against the Fire Nation Royal Family, not because it had turned bitter after witnessing its own creation creation. In fact, it turns out to not even be a spirit.]]
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* ProperlyParanoid: Kyasin distrusts [[spoiler:Hook (Jet's counterpart]] due to the common nature of individuals that live on their own, away from the towns. He turns out to be [[spoiler:the psychopathic vigilante known as the Ghoul.]]

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* ProperlyParanoid: Kyasin distrusts [[spoiler:Hook (Jet's counterpart]] counterpart)]] due to the common nature of individuals that live on their own, away from the towns. He turns out to be [[spoiler:the psychopathic vigilante known as the Ghoul.]]
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* ShoutOut: Many, including to ''Franchise/MassEffect'', TheBigLebowski, etc.

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* ShoutOut: Many, including to ''Franchise/MassEffect'', TheBigLebowski, ''Film/TheBigLebowski'', etc.
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* PurpleProse: The author, known as "Arthur_Dent_" on the wiki, is known for using this trope, and then taking it UpToEleven

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* PurpleProse: The author, known as "Arthur_Dent_" on the wiki, is known for using and abusing this trope, and then taking it UpToElevenUpToEleven.
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* PurpleProse: The author, known as "Arthur_Dent_" on the wiki, is known for using this trope, and then taking it UpToEleven
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* ShoutOut: Many, including to MassEffect, TheBigLebowski, etc.

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* ShoutOut: Many, including to MassEffect, ''Franchise/MassEffect'', TheBigLebowski, etc.
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** The Gathering Storm: During an emotional evening preceding the massive battle to protect the city of Taku from a legion of Fire Nation soldiers, Ain confesses that he [[spoiler:abandoned the Avatar Monks because he accidentally killed his mentor, while Sai reveals that she is actually the heir to one of the greatest fortunes in the Earth Kingdom, the daughter of Lao Bei Fong, one of the EK's regional governors. Then, during the battle, Sakodi commits his first murder, against his friend Enri,]] who in turn reveals that Omashu has been conquered. After barely winning the battle, the group witnesses large plumes of smoke coming from the south, revealing that the Border Forest has been completely destroyed. Oh yeah, and after her first incapacitation, Jun admits to [[spoiler:Indo that his wife is still alive.]]

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** The Gathering Storm: During an emotional evening preceding the massive battle to protect the city of Taku from a legion of Fire Nation soldiers, Ain confesses that he [[spoiler:abandoned the Avatar Monks because he accidentally killed his mentor, while Sai reveals that she is actually the heir to one of the greatest fortunes in the Earth Kingdom, the daughter of Lao Bei Fong, Beifong, one of the EK's regional governors. Then, during the battle, Sakodi commits his first murder, against his friend Enri,]] who in turn reveals that Omashu has been conquered. After barely winning the battle, the group witnesses large plumes of smoke coming from the south, revealing that the Border Forest has been completely destroyed. Oh yeah, and after her first incapacitation, Jun admits to [[spoiler:Indo that his wife is still alive.]]
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Avatar:The Last Airbender Revised, or A:TLAR, is an all-out AlternateUniverseFic / ContinuityReboot FanFic of WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender, written by Lovelyb0nes on the Avatar Wiki. Akin to the basic formula of the original series, the series follows two water tribe siblings, an airbender that was frozen one hundred years ago, a blind earthbender and an exiled Fire Nation prince, whose journeys eventually converge in an epic mission to end a hundred-year war. There are [[{{Understatement}} differences between these two series, though.]] Aside from most of the cast not sharing names with the Original Series' characters, essentially all of the characters in ATLAR, major, supporting and minor alike, have significantly different characterizations compared to their inspirations from the Original, [[FanDumb which is responsible for much of the ire from ATLA's fanbase.]] In a paraphrasing of the creator and writer's words:

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Avatar:The Last Airbender Revised, or A:TLAR, is an all-out AlternateUniverseFic / ContinuityReboot FanFic of WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender, written by Lovelyb0nes on the Avatar Wiki. Akin to the basic formula of the original series, the series follows two water tribe siblings, an airbender that was frozen one hundred years ago, a blind earthbender and an exiled Fire Nation prince, whose journeys eventually converge in an epic mission to end a hundred-year war. There are [[{{Understatement}} significant differences between these two series, though.]] though. Aside from most of the cast not sharing names with the Original Series' characters, essentially all of the characters in ATLAR, major, supporting and minor alike, have significantly different characterizations compared to their inspirations from the Original, [[FanDumb which is responsible for much of the ire from ATLA's fanbase.]] In a paraphrasing of the creator and writer's words:
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* AnyoneCanDie: You have no idea. . See KilledOffForReal below for an extensive list.


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* KilledOffForReal
** Book One: [[spoiler:Lee and Kai, Xin Fu, Jiao, Jeong Jeong, Enri, Jun, Hyan, Rin/The Mechanist, and lastly, the entire goddamn Fire Naval fleet.]]
** Book Two:
** Book Three:

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* AteHisGun: [[spoiler:Jeong Jeong]]



* TheRunaway Sai, of course, since she's kind of based off of Toph.

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* TheRunaway TheRunaway: Sai, of course, since she's kind of based off of Toph.


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* SurvivorsGuilt: A significant contributor to Jeong Jeong's perpetual grief.
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* HalfwayPlotSwitch: In Book Three, Team Avatar seeks to incite a revolution of the Fire Nation's citizens, to overthrow the Royal Family entirely, while they were seeking to push back the FN military in the Earth Kingdom via uniting the divided factions, without particularly caring about what happened to the FN afterward, in the first two books. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] as the war ends with the finale of Book Two, the group now lacking access to their previous allies and having grown to understand the plight of FN's civilians.
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** The Gathering Storm: During an emotional evening preceding the massive battle to protect the city of Taku from a legion of Fire Nation soldiers, Ain confesses that he [[spoiler:abandoned the Avatar Monks because he accidentally killed his mentor, while Sai reveals that she is actually the heir to one of the greatest fortunes in the Earth Kingdom, the daughter of Lao Bei Fong, one of the EK's regional governors. Then, during the battle, Sakodi commits his first murder, against his friend Enri,]] who in turn reveals that Omashu has been conquered. After barely winning the battle, the group witnesses large plumes of smoke coming from the south, revealing that the Border Forest has been completely destroyed. Oh yeah, and after her first incapacitation, Jun admits to Indo that [[his wife is still alive.]]

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** The Gathering Storm: During an emotional evening preceding the massive battle to protect the city of Taku from a legion of Fire Nation soldiers, Ain confesses that he [[spoiler:abandoned the Avatar Monks because he accidentally killed his mentor, while Sai reveals that she is actually the heir to one of the greatest fortunes in the Earth Kingdom, the daughter of Lao Bei Fong, one of the EK's regional governors. Then, during the battle, Sakodi commits his first murder, against his friend Enri,]] who in turn reveals that Omashu has been conquered. After barely winning the battle, the group witnesses large plumes of smoke coming from the south, revealing that the Border Forest has been completely destroyed. Oh yeah, and after her first incapacitation, Jun admits to Indo [[spoiler:Indo that [[his his wife is still alive.]]

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* TokenEvilTeammate: Literally the entire main cast consists of AntiHeroes, so this doesn't apply, but Sai is the token Chaotic member of Team Avatar.

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* TokenEvilTeammate: Literally the entire main cast consists of AntiHeroes, variations of AntiHero, so this doesn't apply, but Sai is the token Chaotic member of Team Avatar.



* WordOfGay: Kyasin, before the third chapter was released, which was the first to explicitly acknowledge her sexuality through a brief kiss with a Kyoshi Warrior that she had bonded with.

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** The Gathering Storm: During an emotional evening preceding the massive battle to protect the city of Taku from a legion of Fire Nation soldiers, Ain confesses that he [[spoiler:abandoned the Avatar Monks because he accidentally killed his mentor, while Sai reveals that she is actually the heir to one of the greatest fortunes in the Earth Kingdom, the daughter of Lao Bei Fong, one of the EK's regional governors. Then, during the battle, Sakodi commits his first murder, against his friend Enri,]] who in turn reveals that Omashu has been conquered. After barely winning the battle, the group witnesses large plumes of smoke coming from the south, revealing that the Border Forest has been completely destroyed. Oh yeah, and after her first incapacitation, Jun admits to Indo that [[his wife is still alive.]]
** The Inventor: [[spoiler:The Fire Nation's firearms have been completely destroyed, at the expense of the life of their inventor, who was ordered to be executed by Kyasin.]]
** The Battle of the Citadel, Parts I and II: [[spoiler:Indo reunites with his wife, Xira, who reveals that the brain surgeons of the Dai Li were originally the servants of the FN Royal Family, and thus it is concluded that Aizo ordered that Zotu's memories of his mother be expelled. The Avatar seizes control of Ain and uses its immense power to demolish the Fire Nation Naval Forces, killing thousands of soldiers. However, as the waterbenders are celebrating their victory, word is received that while the battle was taking place, a legion of soldiers swept through the remains of the Border Forest and up the coast, having claimed nearly all of the Earth Kingdom, aside from Ba Sing Se.]]
* WordOfGay: Kyasin, before the third chapter was released, which was the first to explicitly acknowledge her sexuality through a brief kiss with a Kyoshi Warrior that she had bonded with.
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* AntiVillain: Azul


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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Teo, in the Day of Black Sun and Ain, in the finale. Subverted in the case of Hakido, who attempts to sacrifice himself in order to protect his son while they fight during the DoBS, but instead he is captured, tortured and killed, while Sakodi winds up taking a wound anyway.]]
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[[OneOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOther And did we mention that Kyasin is gay?]]

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[[OneOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOther [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers And did we mention that Kyasin is gay?]]

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[[LipstickLesbian And did we mention that Kyasin is gay?]]

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[[LipstickLesbian [[OneOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOther And did we mention that Kyasin is gay?]]



** Ultimately averted with [[spoiler:the Avatar Spirit, whose pressuring of Ain to end the war as motivated by a petty grudge against the Fire Nation Royal Family, not because it had turned bitter after witnessing its own creation In fact, it turns out to not even be a spirit.]]



* LateArrivalSpoiler: Guns exist in this world.

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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Guns exist in this world.world, and Kyasin is gay.


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* TheReveal: The one who is responsible for Zotu's memory loss was [[spoiler:his own father, who intended to reshape Zotu as a devoted son, as he could not afford to have both of his children to be against him, in a family with a tradition of assassinating fathers.]]
** The Avatar Spirit is [[spoiler:not the original spirit, turned bitter and angry, after all. It is actually a NietzscheWannabe Roku, who committed suicide in an ambitious gambit to achieve AGodAmI.]]
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* MyCountryRightOrWrong: Jiao's primary motivation.
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Jeong Jeong]]
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* ChasteHero: Ain, although the heroic aspects of his character are debatable, to say the least.
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* TheRunaway Sai, of course, since she's kind of based off of Toph.
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* This creator has officially stated that his series will liberally feature Wham Episodes, such as:

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** The Runaway: Zotu's encounter with the ex-Dai Li informant reveals that [[spoiler:the Dai Li has brain surgeons in their forces, who tamper with the minds of political dissidents, effectively brainwashing them into obedience.]]
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* ButchLesbian or LipstickLesbian: Kyasin has been argued to be both by individuals, but as far as the canon goes, she seems to be neither. On one hand, she is athletic and a skilled fighter, has an aggressive personality, has difficulty relating to other young women in the village due to their vanity and lack of physical capability, and she was primarily raised by her father while growing up amongst boys like her brother; on the other hand, she is still very compassionate, does not lack her own anxieties, maintains a maternal role in her family and tribe, and does not seem to have a particularly muscular build, nor does her fighting lend itself much to physical strength, as she is primarily a waterbender, with some hand-to-hand training. Ultimately, Kyasin is a complex individual that doesn't seem to truly pertain to Gender Stereotypes.

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* ButchLesbian or LipstickLesbian: Kyasin has been argued to be both by individuals, but as far as the canon goes, she seems to be neither. On one hand, she is an athletic and a skilled fighter, has an aggressive personality, has difficulty relating to other young women in the village due to their vanity and lack of physical capability, and she was primarily raised by her father while growing up amongst boys like her brother; on the other hand, she is still very compassionate, does not lack her own anxieties, maintains a maternal role in her family and tribe, and does not seem to have a particularly muscular build, nor does her fighting lend itself much to physical strength, as she is primarily a waterbender, with some hand-to-hand training. Ultimately, Kyasin is a complex individual that doesn't seem to truly pertain to Gender Stereotypes.
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Zotu is a nineteen year old firebender that was exiled from his homeland by his father, the FireLord, who Zotu convinced to allow for an opportunity at redemption and regaining his position as the heir to the throne by proving that the previous Lords' declaration, that the Avatar cycle had been broken, was a lie. While aiding the raiding parties in invading the remaining water tribe islands in the south, Zotu received word that the Avatar Host may have awoken on a nearby island. Desperate to pursue even the most flimsy of leads, Zotu struck gold; upon his arrival on the Southern Peak island, Ain surrendered to ensure that the tribals and Zotu's soldiers did not come to blows. However, while Ain was imprisoned on his warship, Zotu reflected upon the circumstances of his exile, at the behest of the monk. Troubled at how his journey seemed to ultimately be designed against him, designed to drive him to further corruption rather than redemption, Zotu abandoned his mission. Furthermore, he was able to discover a new purpose during his reflections: he was able to realize that many of his childhood memories, particularly of his mother, were not merely faint in his mind, but completely absent. Zotu became determined to investigate into exactly how one's very memory could be tampered with, and who was responsible.

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Zotu is a nineteen year old firebender that was exiled from his homeland by his father, the FireLord, who Zotu convinced to allow for an opportunity at redemption and regaining his position as the heir to the throne by proving that the previous Lords' declaration, that the Avatar cycle had been broken, was a lie. While aiding the raiding parties in invading the remaining water tribe islands in the south, Zotu received word that the Avatar Host may have awoken on a nearby island. Desperate to pursue even the most flimsy of leads, Zotu struck gold; upon his arrival on the Southern Peak island, Ain surrendered to ensure that the tribals and Zotu's soldiers did not come to blows. However, while Ain was imprisoned on his warship, Zotu reflected upon the circumstances of his exile, at the behest of the monk. Troubled at how his journey seemed to ultimately be designed against him, designed to drive him to further corruption rather serving his father's interests more than redemption, his own, Zotu abandoned his mission. Furthermore, he was able to discover a new purpose during his reflections: he was able to realize that many of his childhood memories, particularly of his mother, were not merely faint in his mind, but completely absent. Zotu became determined to investigate into exactly how one's very memory could be tampered with, and who was responsible.
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Zotu is a nineteen year old firebender that was exiled from his homeland by his father, the FireLord, who Zotu convinced to allow for an opportunity at redemption and regaining his position as the heir to the throne by proving that the previous FireLords' declaration, that the Avatar cycle had been broken, was a lie. While aiding the raiding parties in invading the remaining water tribe islands in the south, Zotu received word that the Avatar Host may have awoken on a nearby island. Desperate to pursue even the most flimsy of leads, Zotu struck gold; upon his arrival on the Southern Peak island, Ain surrendered to ensure that the tribals and Zotu's soldiers did not come to blows. However, while Ain was imprisoned on his warship, Zotu reflected upon the circumstances of his exile, at the behest of the monk. Troubled at how his journey seemed to ultimately be designed against him, designed to drive him to further corruption rather than redemption, Zotu abandoned his mission. Furthermore, he was able to discover a new purpose during his reflections: he was able to realize that many of his childhood memories, particularly of his mother, were not merely faint in his mind, but completely absent. Zotu became determined to investigate into exactly how one's very memory could be tampered with, and who was responsible.

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Zotu is a nineteen year old firebender that was exiled from his homeland by his father, the FireLord, who Zotu convinced to allow for an opportunity at redemption and regaining his position as the heir to the throne by proving that the previous FireLords' Lords' declaration, that the Avatar cycle had been broken, was a lie. While aiding the raiding parties in invading the remaining water tribe islands in the south, Zotu received word that the Avatar Host may have awoken on a nearby island. Desperate to pursue even the most flimsy of leads, Zotu struck gold; upon his arrival on the Southern Peak island, Ain surrendered to ensure that the tribals and Zotu's soldiers did not come to blows. However, while Ain was imprisoned on his warship, Zotu reflected upon the circumstances of his exile, at the behest of the monk. Troubled at how his journey seemed to ultimately be designed against him, designed to drive him to further corruption rather than redemption, Zotu abandoned his mission. Furthermore, he was able to discover a new purpose during his reflections: he was able to realize that many of his childhood memories, particularly of his mother, were not merely faint in his mind, but completely absent. Zotu became determined to investigate into exactly how one's very memory could be tampered with, and who was responsible.
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* KickTheDog: The warden in 'Revolution 1' kills one of his own loyal guards to demonstrate the power of his WeaponOfIntimidation.

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* EarlyArrivalSpoiler: Guns exist in this world.



* KickTheDog: The warden in 'Revolution 1' kills one of his own loyal guards to demonstrate the power of his WeaponOfIntimidation.

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* KickTheDog: The warden in 'Revolution 1' kills one of his own loyal guards to demonstrate the power of his WeaponOfIntimidation.
* LateArrivalSpoiler: Guns exist in this world.

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