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* DeathOfAChild: [[spoiler:Michael digs his unborn baby sisters corpse out of his mother's dead body and holds her to his chest.]]
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* InfantImmortality: [[spoiler: Averted with Michael's unborn baby sister. Michael digs her corpse out of his mother's dead body and holds her to his chest. Counts as a TearJerker]]
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* MagnificentBastard: Noah Brimstrome and Jeremiah Fontenot seem to have a rivalry on who is the bigger MagnificentBastard.
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''Manga/ElfenLied'' ElsewhereFic about a sixteen year old male diclonius named Michael Mordare, the first diclonius born in the United Sates of America. The story is set two years after the events of Elfen Lied, with the occasional ShoutOut to its events. Michael Mordare has been raised by his human parents, completely unaware of his mutant powers. Then suddenly his family comes under attack by a US Diclonius facility, leaving Michael as the only survivor. Michael swears to avenge his family, thus starting his [[StartOfDarkness journey into the darkness]]. He also develops a sadistic SplitPersonality who encourages Michael to KillAllHumans as part of an EvilPlan. Meanwhile, the facility puts [[MagnificentBastard Noah Brimstrome]], in charge of Michael's capture.
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''Manga/ElfenLied'' ElsewhereFic about a sixteen year old male diclonius named Michael Mordare, the first diclonius born in the United Sates of America. The story is set two years after the events of Elfen Lied, with the occasional ShoutOut to its events. Michael Mordare has been raised by his human parents, completely unaware of his mutant powers. Then suddenly his family comes under attack by a US Diclonius facility, leaving Michael as the only survivor. Michael swears to avenge his family, thus starting his [[StartOfDarkness journey into the darkness]]. He also develops a sadistic SplitPersonality who encourages Michael to KillAllHumans as part of an EvilPlan. Meanwhile, the facility puts [[MagnificentBastard Noah Brimstrome]], Brimstrome in charge of Michael's capture.
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ElsewhereFic about a sixteen year old male diclonius named Michael Mordare, the first diclonius born in the United Sates of America. The story is set two years after the events of Elfen Lied, with the occasional ShoutOut to its events. Michael Mordare has been raised by his human parents, completely unaware of his mutant powers. Then suddenly his family comes under attack by a US Diclonius facility, leaving Michael as the only survivor. Michael swears to avenge his family, thus starting his [[StartOfDarkness journey into the darkness]]. He also develops a sadistic SplitPersonality who encourages Michael to KillAllHumans as part of an EvilPlan. Meanwhile, the facility puts [[MagnificentBastard Noah Brimstrome]], in charge of Michael's capture.
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''Manga/ElfenLied'' ElsewhereFic about a sixteen year old male diclonius named Michael Mordare, the first diclonius born in the United Sates of America. The story is set two years after the events of Elfen Lied, with the occasional ShoutOut to its events. Michael Mordare has been raised by his human parents, completely unaware of his mutant powers. Then suddenly his family comes under attack by a US Diclonius facility, leaving Michael as the only survivor. Michael swears to avenge his family, thus starting his [[StartOfDarkness journey into the darkness]]. He also develops a sadistic SplitPersonality who encourages Michael to KillAllHumans as part of an EvilPlan. Meanwhile, the facility puts [[MagnificentBastard Noah Brimstrome]], in charge of Michael's capture.
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* TranquilFury: When Michael gets sick and tired of being [[UnstoppableRage angry all the time]], he resorts to this.
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* TranquilFury: When Michael gets sick and tired of being [[UnstoppableRage angry all the time]], he resorts to this.this.
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The story can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4695538/1/Angel-of-Massacre here]].
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* TranquilFury: When Michael gets sick and tired of being [[UnstoppableRage angry all the time]], he resorts to this.
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* TranquilFury: When Michael gets sick and tired of being [[UnstoppableRage angry all the time]], he resorts to this.
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* InfantImmortality: [[spoiler: Averted so hard with Michael's unborn baby sister. Michael digs her corpse out of his mother's dead body and holds her to his chest. Counts as a TearJerker]]
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* InfantImmortality: [[spoiler: Averted so hard with Michael's unborn baby sister. Michael digs her corpse out of his mother's dead body and holds her to his chest. Counts as a TearJerker]]
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* MindRape: Samael drops a bomb on Michael by suggesting that [[spoiler: Michael himself is a split personality born from the trauma of watching his father die.]]
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Noah directly quotes this trope when trying to plan around Michael's unpredictable killing spree.
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* BatmanGambit: Noah Brimstrome's original plan involved detailed psyche evaluations of Michael Mordare. When Michael stopped following these psyche evaluations, Noah was forced to turn to XanatosSpeedChess.
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ElsewhereFic about a sixteen year old male diclonius named Michael Mordare, the first diclonius born in the United Sates of America. The story is set two years after the events of Elfen Lied, with the occasional ShoutOut to its events. Michael Mordare has been raised by his human parents, completely unaware of his mutant powers. Then suddenly his family comes under attack by a US Diclonius facility, leaving Michael as the only survivor. Michael swears to avenge his family, thus starting his [[StartOfDarkness journey into the darkness]]. He also develops a sadistic SplitPersonality who encourages Michael to KillAllHumans as part of an EvilPlan. Meanwhile, the facility puts [[MagnificentBastard Noah Brimstrome]], in charge of Michael's capture.
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* BlackBugRoom: The theater where the [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Boy from the Theater]] presides. Michael gets dragged there when he witnesses his father's brutal murder and when he tries to [[BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind fight the Boy from the Theater face-to-face]]. See below.
* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: When Michael loses his resolve, [[SplitPersonality The Boy in the Theater]] beats some into him. The fight takes place inside the [[BlackBugRoom theater]] and is pitifully short. It's one of the rare instances where the host loses, yet still keeps control.
* CurbStompBattle: The fight between the Boy from the Theater and Michael. Made especially brutal when the Boy delivers an actual curb-stomp.
* EnemyWithin: The Boy in the Theater [[spoiler: later renamed as Samael]] is pretty much this. What his plans are and what he hopes to accomplish hasn't been directly stated. [[spoiler: There's a scene after the BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind where Samael manages to tear off some of the bandages that bind him when he couldn't do this before.]]
* InfantImmortality: [[spoiler: Averted so hard with Michael's unborn baby sister. Michael digs her corpse out of his mother's dead body and holds her to his chest. Counts as a TearJerker]]
* LetNoCrisisGoToWaste: Jeremiah practically quotes this trope when he indirectly accuses Noah of orchestration Michael's escape. [[spoiler: Noah's inner monologue reveals that everything is going AllAccordingToPlan]].
* MagnificentBastard: Noah Brimstrome and Jeremiah Fontenot seem to have a rivalry on who is the bigger MagnificentBastard.
* SlasherSmile: The Boy in the Theater displays this in spades at the prospect of massacre. Michael gets in on this in the beginning.
* SplitPersonalityTakeover: [[spoiler: Subverted when the Boy from the Theater willingly returns control of Michael's body to the rightful owner. Doesn't mean he isn't intending to take it over completely, now is just not the time.]]
* TranquilFury: When Michael gets sick and tired of being [[UnstoppableRage angry all the time]], he resorts to this.
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!!This story provides examples of:
* BlackBugRoom: The theater where the [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Boy from the Theater]] presides. Michael gets dragged there when he witnesses his father's brutal murder and when he tries to [[BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind fight the Boy from the Theater face-to-face]]. See below.
* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: When Michael loses his resolve, [[SplitPersonality The Boy in the Theater]] beats some into him. The fight takes place inside the [[BlackBugRoom theater]] and is pitifully short. It's one of the rare instances where the host loses, yet still keeps control.
* CurbStompBattle: The fight between the Boy from the Theater and Michael. Made especially brutal when the Boy delivers an actual curb-stomp.
* EnemyWithin: The Boy in the Theater [[spoiler: later renamed as Samael]] is pretty much this. What his plans are and what he hopes to accomplish hasn't been directly stated. [[spoiler: There's a scene after the BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind where Samael manages to tear off some of the bandages that bind him when he couldn't do this before.]]
* InfantImmortality: [[spoiler: Averted so hard with Michael's unborn baby sister. Michael digs her corpse out of his mother's dead body and holds her to his chest. Counts as a TearJerker]]
* LetNoCrisisGoToWaste: Jeremiah practically quotes this trope when he indirectly accuses Noah of orchestration Michael's escape. [[spoiler: Noah's inner monologue reveals that everything is going AllAccordingToPlan]].
* MagnificentBastard: Noah Brimstrome and Jeremiah Fontenot seem to have a rivalry on who is the bigger MagnificentBastard.
* SlasherSmile: The Boy in the Theater displays this in spades at the prospect of massacre. Michael gets in on this in the beginning.
* SplitPersonalityTakeover: [[spoiler: Subverted when the Boy from the Theater willingly returns control of Michael's body to the rightful owner. Doesn't mean he isn't intending to take it over completely, now is just not the time.]]
* TranquilFury: When Michael gets sick and tired of being [[UnstoppableRage angry all the time]], he resorts to this.
