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* ''Literature/SolarPons'': In "The Adventure of the Lost Dutchman", the VictimOfTheWeek tries to write the words 'Lost Dutchman' in the dust on the floor. However, because he he is dying, the result is incomplete and almost illegible. Pons, of course, is able to figure out what he was attempting to communicate.

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* Taken to rather ridiculous extremes in ''Literature/TheDaVinciCode'' [[spoiler:dragging himself round an art gallery scrawling hidden messages on various paintings before arranging his dying body in a meaningful pose]], since revealing the identity of the killer is not so important to the dying man as giving clues to the AncientConspiracy that he was killed to cover up.
* In the Literature/DirkPittAdventures novel "Iceberg", [[spoiler:Dr. Hunnewell's]] last words to Dirk Pitt are "God save thee!" Pitt later discovers [[spoiler:that Hunnewell wasn't just identifying Oskar Rondheim as his killer, but also admitting to being in league with him. The dying message was an excerpt from "The Rime of the Ancient Mariner", Rondheim's favorite story.]]



* In the ''Literature/NeroWolfe'' novella "The Zero Clue", the victim has on his desk three pencils, a pencil eraser, and two more pencils. [[spoiler:He does this to indicate his murder is connected to the recent bombing that killed 302 people.]] Justified because that way the murderer thinks he's just fidgeting and not leaving a clue.



* ''Literature/TheSherlockHolmesStoriesOfEdwardDHoch'': In "The Manor House Case", a dying murder victim drags himself across the room to pull the ten of spades from a deck of playing cards as a clue to his killer's identity. [[spoiler:The suit was irrelevant. The dying man grabbed first ten he found in the deck in attempt to indicate the killer's surname was 'Zehn': German for 'ten'.]]
* ''Literature/SimonArk'': In "The Witch of Park Avenue", a man who is dying trapped inside a revolving door knows he only has seconds to live and writes the name "MARIE" on the glass with a felt tip pen. Although this seems to implicate a woman named Marie who is involved in the case [[spoiler:Simon determines that the victim and Marie had never met, so he could not have known her name, nor would she have reason to kill him. The actual killer was Dr. Langstrom, who had just married the eponymous witch. Langstrom's name was too long for him to write in the time he had left, so he tried to leave a short word that would nonetheless implicate Langstrom. However, while dying, he instinctively reverted to his native language, French, and wrote "marié", the French for "bridegroom".]]
* In ''Literature/TheSwanPrincess'', King William says "It's not what it seems, Derek. It's not what it seems!" in reference to the [[OneWingedAngel Great Animal]] that has attacked him. Derek has to figure out what he means by himself, eventually finding a book that describes shapeshifting in the library.
* ''Literature/TheThinkingMachine'': "His Perfect Alibi" features a rare variant in the which the victim manages to actually write down the name of his killer before expiring. However (as might be guessed from the title), the killer has a seemingly perfect alibi that makes it physically impossible for him to have committed the murder.







* In ''Literature/TheSwanPrincess'', King William says "It's not what it seems, Derek. It's not what it seems!" in reference to the [[OneWingedAngel Great Animal]] that has attacked him. Derek has to figure out what he means by himself, eventually finding a book that describes shapeshifting in the library.
* Taken to rather ridiculous extremes in ''Literature/TheDaVinciCode'' [[spoiler:dragging himself round an art gallery scrawling hidden messages on various paintings before arranging his dying body in a meaningful pose]], since revealing the identity of the killer is not so important to the dying man as giving clues to the AncientConspiracy that he was killed to cover up.
* In the Literature/DirkPittAdventures novel "Iceberg", [[spoiler:Dr. Hunnewell's]] last words to Dirk Pitt are "God save thee!" Pitt later discovers [[spoiler:that Hunnewell wasn't just identifying Oskar Rondheim as his killer, but also admitting to being in league with him. The dying message was an excerpt from "The Rime of the Ancient Mariner", Rondheim's favorite story.]]



* ''Literature/TheThinkingMachine'': "His Perfect Alibi" features a rare variant in the which the victim manages to actually write down the name of his killer before expiring. However (as might be guessed from the title), the killer has a seemingly perfect alibi that makes it physically impossible for him to have committed the murder.
* ''Literature/TheSherlockHolmesStoriesOfEdwardDHoch'': In "The Manor House Case", a dying murder victim drags himself across the room to pull the ten of spades from a deck of playing cards as a clue to his killer's identity. [[spoiler:The suit was irrelevant. The dying man grabbed first ten he found in the deck in attempt to indicate the killer's surname was 'Zehn': German for 'ten'.]]
* ''Literature/SimonArk'': In "The Witch of Park Avenue", a man who is dying trapped inside a revolving door knows he only has seconds to live and writes the name "MARIE" on the glass with a felt tip pen. Although this seems to implicate a woman named Marie who is involved in the case [[spoiler:Simon determines that the victim and Marie had never met, so he could not have known her name, nor would she have reason to kill him. The actual killer was Dr. Langstrom, who had just married the eponymous witch. Langstrom's name was too long for him to write in the time he had left, so he tried to leave a short word that would nonetheless implicate Langstrom. However, while dying, he instinctively reverted to his native language, French, and wrote "marié", the French for "bridegroom".]]
* In the Literature/NeroWolfe novella "The Zero Clue", the victim has on his desk three pencils, a pencil eraser, and two more pencils. [[spoiler:He does this to indicate his murder is connected to the recent bombing that killed 302 people.]] Justified because that way the murderer thinks he's just fidgeting and not leaving a clue.



* ''Something Wicked'' by Alan Gratz: Duncan is found dead with his son's name, MALCOLM, written in his blood, but the hero realizes it's a frame-up because Duncan and everyone else called his son Mal.
* The culprit in the Sherlock Holmes story ''A Study in Scarlet'' wrote RACHE on the wall to make the police think of a revenge killing by a secret society ...or that the murderer's name was Rachel.
** In "A Study in Pink", a loose adaptation of the story in ''Series/{{Sherlock}}'' [[spoiler: the victim did write RACHE, but she died before she could finish writing RACHEL, the password to her phone.]]
** In "Literature/AStudyInEmerald", a weird crossover between Sherlock Holmes and the Franchise/CthulhuMythos, the victim again wrote "RACHE" in the wall. [[spoiler:Turns out it was, indeed, actually the nickname of the killer.]]



** ''Thirteen at Dinner.'': After a young woman is murdered, Poirot and Hastings discover a note she had written detailing some kind of prank she was apparently playing at the titular dinner; a portion of the page has been ripped off, but it doesn't seem important, as the whole message is still legible. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, the killer deliberately tore the page in such a way that, in the portion of the letter hinting at who had put the victim up to the trick, the word "She" became "he," prompting the detectives to examine male suspects instead of focusing on the woman who was behind the whole plot.]]
* In the ''Literature/FatherBrown'' mystery "The Wrong Shape", the victim is found with a sheet of paper on their body which has typwewritten on it, "I die by my own hand; yet I die murdered!" with no quotation marks. The unusual shape of the paper (the upper left corner is snipped off, as it is on all of the sheets of paper in the room) and the presence of one less corner than sheets of paper leads Father Brown to realize that [[spoiler:a quotation mark was removed from a line of speech. The end of the story has a confession which indicates that the victim had been writing a story involving a man killed by hypnotism and the killer borrowed that last sheet to distract the investigators, snipped off the quotation mark, and burned the rest.]]

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** ''Thirteen at Dinner.''Literature/ThirteenAtDinner.'': After a young woman is murdered, Poirot and Hastings discover a note she had written detailing some kind of prank she was apparently playing at the titular dinner; a portion of the page has been ripped off, but it doesn't seem important, as the whole message is still legible. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, the killer deliberately tore the page in such a way that, in the portion of the letter hinting at who had put the victim up to the trick, the word "She" became "he," prompting the detectives to examine male suspects instead of focusing on the woman who was behind the whole plot.]]
* In the ''Literature/FatherBrown'' mystery "The Wrong Shape", the victim is found with a sheet of paper on their body which has typwewritten typewritten on it, "I die by my own hand; yet I die murdered!" with no quotation marks. The unusual shape of the paper (the upper left corner is snipped off, as it is on all of the sheets of paper in the room) and the presence of one less corner than sheets of paper leads Father Brown to realize that [[spoiler:a quotation mark was removed from a line of speech. The end of the story has a confession which indicates that the victim had been writing a story involving a man killed by hypnotism and the killer borrowed that last sheet to distract the investigators, snipped off the quotation mark, and burned the rest.]]]]
* ''Literature/JudgeDee'': [[spoiler:Sergeant Hong]] is murdered in broad daylight by the person he's having tea with. He tries to write the murderer's name in spilled tea, but the murderer notices and wipes it away contemptuously.



* ''Literature/JudgeDee'': [[spoiler:Sergeant Hong]] is murdered in broad daylight by the person he's having tea with. He tries to write the murderer's name in spilled tea, but the murderer notices and wipes it away contemptuously.

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* ''Literature/JudgeDee'': [[spoiler:Sergeant Hong]] ''Something Wicked'' by Alan Gratz: Duncan is murdered found dead with his son's name, MALCOLM, written in broad daylight by his blood, but the person he's having tea with. He tries hero realizes it's a frame-up because Duncan and everyone else called his son Mal.
* The culprit in the ''Literature/SherlockHolmes'' story ''Literature/AStudyInScarlet'' wrote RACHE on the wall
to write make the police think of a revenge killing by a secret society ...or that the murderer's name was Rachel.
** In "A Study
in spilled tea, Pink", a loose adaptation of the story in ''Series/{{Sherlock}}'' [[spoiler: the victim did write RACHE, but she died before she could finish writing RACHEL, the murderer notices password to her phone.]]
** In "Literature/AStudyInEmerald", a weird crossover between Sherlock Holmes
and wipes the Franchise/CthulhuMythos, the victim again wrote "RACHE" in the wall. [[spoiler:Turns out it away contemptuously.was, indeed, actually the nickname of the killer.]]

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* Creator/ElleryQueen's "GI Story": A man is murdered by one of his three stepsons (Wash Smith, Linc Smith, Wilson Smith, named after the Presidents), leaves the message "GI". But all three were former soldiers. [[spoiler: He was trying to write "GEORGE" for George Washington Smith. But he died after completing the downstroke on the E.]]
* Ellery Queen's ''The Scarlet Letters'': Adulterer is shot by a jealous husband, writes the message "XY" before dying. [[spoiler: He and the husband were in a conspiracy to blackmail the wife. He was trying to write "XX" to signify a double-cross.]]
* Creator/EdwardDHoch's ''This Prize is Dangerous'' (rewritten into ''Leopold Lends a Hand''): There are three deaths related to the theft of some icons. The third victim dies in his apartment / office, making no effort to call police or an ambulance, instead writing out "Icon". [[spoiler: He'd committed the first two murders, and had been shot during the second. He tried to patch himself together, but when he realized it was hopeless, tried to write out "I confess to the murders of (victims)", but died after writing four letters.]]

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* Creator/ElleryQueen's ''Creator/ElleryQueen'':
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"GI Story": A man is murdered by one of his three stepsons (Wash Smith, Linc Smith, Wilson Smith, named after the Presidents), leaves the message "GI". But all three were former soldiers. [[spoiler: He was trying to write "GEORGE" for George Washington Smith. But he died after completing the downstroke on the E.]]
* Ellery Queen's ** ''The Scarlet Letters'': Adulterer is shot by a jealous husband, writes the message "XY" before dying. [[spoiler: He and the husband were in a conspiracy to blackmail the wife. He was trying to write "XX" to signify a double-cross.]]
* Creator/EdwardDHoch's ''This Prize is Dangerous'' (rewritten into ''Leopold Lends In Creator/DickFrancis's novel ''Flying Finish'', a Hand''): There are three deaths related soon to the theft of some icons. The third victim dies in his apartment / office, making no effort to call police or an ambulance, instead writing out "Icon". [[spoiler: He'd committed the first two murders, and had been shot during the second. He tried to patch himself together, but when he realized it was hopeless, tried be murdered character, lacking anything to write with, frantically uses a sharp point of a nail to spell out "I confess a vital clue on a piece of scrap paper by punching out holes to make the murders letters and hides it before he's taken away to be killed. The protagonist later discovers it and is able to deduce the identity of (victims)", but died after writing four letters.]]the bad guys from the short message.



* Parodied in ''The Big Over Easy'', the first of the Literature/NurseryCrime series, where the obnoxious ace detective mentions a case in which the victim pointed at an object which was an anagram of the first half of the killer's surname, and the detective regards this as an entirely reasonable combination of "the victim pointed at an object that related to the killer's name" and "the victim tried to say the killer's name but died halfway through".

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* Parodied in ''The Big Over Easy'', the first of the Literature/NurseryCrime ''Literature/NurseryCrim''e series, where the obnoxious ace detective mentions a case in which the victim pointed at an object which was an anagram of the first half of the killer's surname, and the detective regards this as an entirely reasonable combination of "the victim pointed at an object that related to the killer's name" and "the victim tried to say the killer's name but died halfway through".through".
* Creator/EdwardDHoch's ''This Prize is Dangerous'' (rewritten into ''Leopold Lends a Hand''): There are three deaths related to the theft of some icons. The third victim dies in his apartment / office, making no effort to call police or an ambulance, instead writing out "Icon". [[spoiler: He'd committed the first two murders, and had been shot during the second. He tried to patch himself together, but when he realized it was hopeless, tried to write out "I confess to the murders of (victims)", but died after writing four letters.]]
* ''Literature/RetiredWitchesMysteries'': In book 3, Makaleigh Verza whispers three words to Molly as she's dying, but Molly just thinks they're gibberish at first. It's not until a discovery spell identifies them -- "Aba. Mho. Ord." -- and Olivia recognizes them as runes some time later that their true meaning is found. "Aba" means "atone", "Mho" means "change", and "Ord" means "beginning". [[spoiler: It's eventually subverted when they turn out to be the words necessary to bind the witchfinder within his prison in the castle, and were meant to be used to summon him to solve Makaleigh's murder.]]



* In Creator/DickFrancis's novel ''Flying Finish'', a soon to be murdered character, lacking anything to write with, frantically uses a sharp point of a nail to spell out a vital clue on a piece of scrap paper by punching out holes to make the letters and hides it before he's taken away to be killed. The protagonist later discovers it and is able to deduce the identity of the bad guys from the short message.



* ''Literature/RetiredWitchesMysteries'': In book 3, Makaleigh Verza whispers three words to Molly as she's dying, but Molly just thinks they're gibberish at first. It's not until a discovery spell identifies them -- "Aba. Mho. Ord." -- and Olivia recognizes them as runes some time later that their true meaning is found. "Aba" means "atone", "Mho" means "change", and "Ord" means "beginning". [[spoiler: It's eventually subverted when they turn out to be the words necessary to bind the witchfinder within his prison in the castle, and were meant to be used to summon him to solve Makaleigh's murder.]]



* Creator/ElleryQueen's "Diamonds in Paradise": Victim steals diamonds at the Paradise Gardens Casino, but falls from a fire escape fleeing police. When asked where he hid the diamonds, he replies "Diamonds in paradise". [[spoiler: He was trying to say "Diamonds in pair of dice". He had a specially hollowed out pair in his pocket.]]
* Creator/ElleryQueen's ''The Last Woman in His Life'': The victim announces he will be changing his will to disinherit his three ex-wives (Alice Tierney, Audrey Weston, and Marcia Kemp) as he will be marrying his true love Laura. He is murdered that night, and dies saying "home". [[spoiler: The killer was his lawyer Al Marsh (nee C. Aubrey Marsh), who had an unrequited attraction for the victim. The victim had had a stutter even before he was stabbed and couldn't risk saying "Al" (Alice), "Marsh" (Marcia), "Aubrey" (Audrey), "Lawyer" (Laura), "Attorney" (Tierney), or "Man" (Laura Mannzoni). He was trying to say "homosexual".]]
* A ''Seven Minute Mysteries'' had an incomprehensible dying message typed out on a keyboard that made sense once the detective realized [[spoiler: that the victim had swapped all instances of the letter "c" with "v" and vice versa]].
** An ''Literature/EncyclopediaBrown'' story did the same thing, but with the variation that the victim survived but had amnesia.
* In Creator/IsaacAsimov's juvenile mystery story "Try Sarah Tops," a jewel thief who'd been mortally wounded by his double-crossing accomplices flees into a museum, then gasps out a cryptic phrase before dying. It sounds like he's suggesting the cops ask someone named "Sarah Tops" where he's hidden the loot, but in fact he'd tossed it into the nearest exhibit, a ''Triceratops'' skeleton.
* In a novel by Creator/JohnDicksonCarr, the victim says before dying to the person trying to assist him "It was your gloves". [[spoiler:It had previously been established that the victim only spoke French and that a TranslationConvention was being used. In French, "your gloves" is "vos gants", which sounds similar to the murderer's name "Vaughan".]]

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* Creator/ElleryQueen's "Diamonds in Paradise": Victim steals diamonds at the Paradise Gardens Casino, but falls from a fire escape fleeing police. When asked where he hid the diamonds, he replies "Diamonds in paradise". [[spoiler: He was trying to say "Diamonds in pair of dice". He had a specially hollowed out pair in his pocket.]]
* Creator/ElleryQueen's ''The Last Woman in His Life'': The victim announces he will be changing his will to disinherit his three ex-wives (Alice Tierney, Audrey Weston, and Marcia Kemp) as he will be marrying his true love Laura. He is murdered that night, and dies saying "home". [[spoiler: The killer was his lawyer Al Marsh (nee C. Aubrey Marsh), who had an unrequited attraction for the victim. The victim had had a stutter even before he was stabbed and couldn't risk saying "Al" (Alice), "Marsh" (Marcia), "Aubrey" (Audrey), "Lawyer" (Laura), "Attorney" (Tierney), or "Man" (Laura Mannzoni). He was trying to say "homosexual".]]
* A ''Seven Minute Mysteries'' had an incomprehensible dying message typed out on a keyboard that made sense once the detective realized [[spoiler: that the victim had swapped all instances
''Literature/EightySeventhPrecinct'': In ''Lady, Lady I Did It'', one of the letter "c" with "v" and vice versa]].
** An ''Literature/EncyclopediaBrown'' story did
victims of a mass shooting manages to gasp the same thing, but with the variation that the victim survived but had amnesia.
* In Creator/IsaacAsimov's juvenile mystery story "Try Sarah Tops," a jewel thief who'd been mortally wounded by his double-crossing accomplices flees into a museum, then gasps out a cryptic phrase
word "carpenter" before dying. It sounds like he's suggesting Investigation by the cops ask someone 87th Precinct fails to turn up a suspect who is named "Sarah Tops" where he's hidden Carpenter or who works with wood. It turns out [[spoiler:the victim was actually saying "car painter" (i.e. the loot, man who had recently painted his car) but in fact he'd tossed his thick accent turned it into the nearest exhibit, a ''Triceratops'' skeleton.
* In a novel by Creator/JohnDicksonCarr, the victim says before dying to the person trying to assist him "It was your gloves". [[spoiler:It had previously been established that the victim only spoke French and that a TranslationConvention was being used. In French, "your gloves" is "vos gants", which sounds similar to the murderer's name "Vaughan".]]
"carpenter"]].



* In the ''Literature/SherlockHolmes'' story "The Boscombe Valley Murder", the victim and his son are alone in the woods at the time of his death and the son hears the victim say something about "a rat" before dying. What he was trying to say was "Black Jack of Ballarat", but the son only heard the last part. [[spoiler: The murderer was John Turner, a man who lived with the victim. Turner had spent his younger days in a gang called the "Ballarat Gang" and he had first met the victim when the victim was driving a stagecoach that the gang intended to rob. Turner had the opportunity to kill the victim then, but didn't. Years later, Turner encountered the victim again and the victim, without a penny to his name, threatened to tell the police what he knew about Turner if Turner didn't support him and his family. This was all well and good until the victim wanted to marry his son to Turner's daughter. Turner wasn't having it, so he killed him. Turner's name in the gang had been "Black Jack of Ballarat."]]
* In one short story, a detective looks into the murder of a rock singer. The singer grabbed his guitar as his final act and broke two strings. Questioning the singer's girlfriend, manager, and two of his band members turns up nothing. [[spoiler: The detective's partner offers to play a song on the broken guitar, except the E and D strings are broken. One of the band members is named Ed.]]
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* In the ''Literature/SherlockHolmes'' story "The Boscombe Valley Murder", a novel by Creator/JohnDicksonCarr, the victim and his son are alone in says before dying to the woods at the time of his death and the son hears person trying to assist him "It was your gloves". [[spoiler:It had previously been established that the victim say something about "a rat" before dying. What he was trying to say was "Black Jack of Ballarat", but the son only heard the last part. [[spoiler: The murderer was John Turner, a man who lived with the victim. Turner had spent his younger days in a gang called the "Ballarat Gang" spoke French and he had first met the victim when the victim was driving a stagecoach that a TranslationConvention was being used. In French, "your gloves" is "vos gants", which sounds similar to the gang intended to rob. Turner had the opportunity to kill the victim then, but didn't. Years later, Turner encountered the victim again and the victim, without a penny to his name, threatened to tell the police what he knew about Turner if Turner didn't support him and his family. This was all well and good until the victim wanted to marry his son to Turner's daughter. Turner wasn't having it, so he killed him. Turner's murderer's name in the gang had been "Black Jack of Ballarat."]]
* In one short story, a detective looks into the murder of a rock singer. The singer grabbed his guitar as his final act and broke two strings. Questioning the singer's girlfriend, manager, and two of his band members turns up nothing. [[spoiler: The detective's partner offers to play a song on the broken guitar, except the E and D strings are broken. One of the band members is named Ed.]]
%% Anyone have the name of the above story?
"Vaughan".]]



* In the Literature/NeroWolfe short story "Before I Die," Archie Goodwin is on hand to hear the last words of the victim of a drive-by shooting: "Shame. Goddamn shame." [[spoiler:What she was actually saying was not "shame" but "''Shane''", the name of her then-unknown accomplice, who had come up with his own idea to get money.]]

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* In ''Creator/ElleryQueen'':
** "Diamonds in Paradise": Victim steals diamonds at
the Literature/NeroWolfe short story "Before I Die," Archie Goodwin is on hand to hear Paradise Gardens Casino, but falls from a fire escape fleeing police. When asked where he hid the last words diamonds, he replies "Diamonds in paradise". [[spoiler: He was trying to say "Diamonds in pair of the dice". He had a specially hollowed out pair in his pocket.]]
** ''The Last Woman in His Life'': The
victim of announces he will be changing his will to disinherit his three ex-wives (Alice Tierney, Audrey Weston, and Marcia Kemp) as he will be marrying his true love Laura. He is murdered that night, and dies saying "home". [[spoiler: The killer was his lawyer Al Marsh (nee C. Aubrey Marsh), who had an unrequited attraction for the victim. The victim had had a drive-by shooting: "Shame. Goddamn shame." [[spoiler:What she stutter even before he was stabbed and couldn't risk saying "Al" (Alice), "Marsh" (Marcia), "Aubrey" (Audrey), "Lawyer" (Laura), "Attorney" (Tierney), or "Man" (Laura Mannzoni). He was trying to say "homosexual".]]
* One ''Literature/TheGreatBrain'' story has a murder victim gasp out "Butch" right before he dies, which causes those around him to assume the murder was Butch Cassidy. [[spoiler:TD realizes he
was actually saying ''"Hutch"'', having spotted a scar on the killer's hand and realized an old friend of his was not "shame" but "''Shane''", the name of her then-unknown accomplice, who had come up with his own idea robbing him, forcing Hutch to get money.kill him.]]



* ''Literature/EightySeventhPrecinct'': In ''Lady, Lady I Did It'', one of the victims of a mass shooting manages to gasp the word "carpenter" before dying. Investigation by the 87th Precinct fails to turn up a suspect who is named Carpenter or who works with wood. It turns out [[spoiler:the victim was actually saying "car painter" (i.e. the man who had recently painted his car) but his thick accent turned it into "carpenter"]].

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* ''Literature/EightySeventhPrecinct'': In ''Lady, Lady the ''Literature/NeroWolfe'' short story "Before I Did It'', one Die," Archie Goodwin is on hand to hear the last words of the victims of a mass shooting manages to gasp the word "carpenter" before dying. Investigation by the 87th Precinct fails to turn up a suspect who is named Carpenter or who works with wood. It turns out [[spoiler:the victim of a drive-by shooting: "Shame. Goddamn shame." [[spoiler:What she was actually saying "car painter" (i.e. was not "shame" but "''Shane''", the name of her then-unknown accomplice, who had come up with his own idea to get money.]]
* A ''Seven Minute Mysteries'' had an incomprehensible dying message typed out on a keyboard that made sense once the detective realized [[spoiler: that the victim had swapped all instances of the letter "c" with "v" and vice versa]].
** An ''Literature/EncyclopediaBrown'' story did the same thing, but with the variation that the victim survived but had amnesia.
* In the ''Literature/SherlockHolmes'' story "The Boscombe Valley Murder", the victim and his son are alone in the woods at the time of his death and the son hears the victim say something about "a rat" before dying. What he was trying to say was "Black Jack of Ballarat", but the son only heard the last part. [[spoiler: The murderer was John Turner, a
man who lived with the victim. Turner had recently painted spent his car) younger days in a gang called the "Ballarat Gang" and he had first met the victim when the victim was driving a stagecoach that the gang intended to rob. Turner had the opportunity to kill the victim then, but didn't. Years later, Turner encountered the victim again and the victim, without a penny to his thick accent turned it into "carpenter"]].name, threatened to tell the police what he knew about Turner if Turner didn't support him and his family. This was all well and good until the victim wanted to marry his son to Turner's daughter. Turner wasn't having it, so he killed him. Turner's name in the gang had been "Black Jack of Ballarat."]]



* One ''Literature/TheGreatBrain'' story has a murder victim gasp out "Butch" right before he dies, which causes those around him to assume the murder was Butch Cassidy. [[spoiler:TD realizes he was actually saying ''"Hutch"'', having spotted a scar on the killer's hand and realized an old friend of his was robbing him, forcing Hutch to kill him.]]

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* One ''Literature/TheGreatBrain'' In Creator/IsaacAsimov's juvenile mystery story has "Try Sarah Tops," a murder victim gasp jewel thief who'd been mortally wounded by his double-crossing accomplices flees into a museum, then gasps out "Butch" right a cryptic phrase before he dies, which causes those around him to assume dying. It sounds like he's suggesting the cops ask someone named "Sarah Tops" where he's hidden the loot, but in fact he'd tossed it into the nearest exhibit, a ''Triceratops'' skeleton.
* In one short story, a detective looks into
the murder was Butch Cassidy. [[spoiler:TD realizes he was actually saying ''"Hutch"'', having spotted of a scar rock singer. The singer grabbed his guitar as his final act and broke two strings. Questioning the singer's girlfriend, manager, and two of his band members turns up nothing. [[spoiler: The detective's partner offers to play a song on the killer's hand broken guitar, except the E and realized an old friend D strings are broken. One of his was robbing him, forcing Hutch to kill him.]]the band members is named Ed.]]
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%%* Creator/ElleryQueen's "E=Murder"
* In the Dr. Sam Hawthorne story, "The Problem of the Locked Caboose," the victim leaves the word "Elf" written in blood. [[spoiler: Turns out that he was writing the German word for eleven. The only thing that he knew about his killer was that they were in berth 11.]]



* ''Creator/ElleryQueen'': In "E=Murder", Ellery has to figure out if a curvy three is a 3, an M, a W, or something more bizarre. Of course, it is the more obscure notation for the small Greek letter Omega, the last, or 24th letter of that alphabet, which everyone has on the tip of their conscious thoughts. The deceased had just 23 visitors sign the admittance register to access his secure tower that week, so the number 24 can only refer to the last visitor, the one who did not sign in, because he did not need to sign in.
* In the Dr. Sam Hawthorne story, "The Problem of the Locked Caboose," the victim leaves the word "Elf" written in blood. [[spoiler: Turns out that he was writing the German word for eleven. The only thing that he knew about his killer was that they were in berth 11.]]



* Creator/ElleryQueen's "The Glass Domed Clock": The victim knocks over a glass domed clock and grabs an amethyst. [[spoiler:One of the suspects was a stockbroker (the clock resembled a stock ticker), who was born on February 29 (birthstone is an amethyst). However, other evidence indicates that the victim thought the suspect was born on March 1. Other evidence reveals that only one suspect knew the real birthdate and could have left that message.]]
* And yet ''another'' Creator/ElleryQueen example, the short story "A Lump of Sugar". Ellery and Inspector Queen spend the whole story discussing the possible meaning of the dying clue -- a lump of sugar in the victim's hand -- with respect to each of the suspects, until they realize [[spoiler:the killer was simply the one mostly likely to have a sugar cube in his hand: the mounted police officer.]]
* In ''Literature/WhoCensoredRogerRabbit'', toons create word balloons when they speak (unless they consciously choose not to). A word balloon containing Roger's final words is found at the scene of the crime, but it's ambiguous without knowing the way the words were said.
* ''Literature/MaroonedInRealtime'' by Creator/VernorVinge features possibly ''the'' most epic case of "murder victim writes cryptic final message" in the entire history of detective fiction. The murderer uses a uniquely science-fictional murder weapon that results in a four-decades long, lingering death of old age for the victim, so she has time to write a final message over ''two million words'' long -- but the important bit is still so cryptic only one man could see it -- and it's ''not'' her lover. This is because [[spoiler:the murderer is ''watching'' her the entire time, and would have destroyed anything that looked like a clue to his-or-her identity.]]

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* Creator/ElleryQueen's "The Glass Domed Clock": In one of Craetor/IsaacAsimov's ''Literature/BlackWidowers'' stories the guest relates the tale of a Russian spy (that is, a Russian national working for the West) who left a dying message that nobody had been able to interpret: the letters E P O C K from a ''TabletopGame/{{Scrabble}}'' set. The victim knocks over a glass domed clock word "epock" was meaningless and grabs an amethyst. [[spoiler:One of no anagram could be found either, so the suspects was spy's intention had been a stockbroker (the clock resembled a stock ticker), who was born on February 29 (birthstone is an amethyst). However, other evidence indicates mystery for more than twenty years. As always, Henry the waiter solves it, pointing out that the victim thought letters ''could'' be rearranged - to form 'CKOPE', which in the suspect was born on March 1. Other evidence reveals Cyrillic alphabet spells the word 'score'. This, along with a newspaper opened at the sports page (the ''scores'', gettit?) implied that only one suspect knew the real birthdate agent was trying to communicate the number twenty. The Widowers' guest is thunderstruck at this - in the code they used at the time, '20' meant "Government in firm control" and if they had known this, the Bay of Pigs invasion could have left that message.]]
* And yet ''another'' Creator/ElleryQueen example, the short story "A Lump of Sugar". Ellery and Inspector Queen spend the whole story discussing the possible meaning of the dying clue -- a lump of sugar in the victim's hand -- with respect to each of the suspects, until they realize [[spoiler:the killer was simply the one mostly likely to have a sugar cube in his hand: the mounted police officer.]]
* In ''Literature/WhoCensoredRogerRabbit'', toons create word balloons when they speak (unless they consciously choose not to). A word balloon containing Roger's final words is found at the scene of the crime, but it's ambiguous without knowing the way the words were said.
* ''Literature/MaroonedInRealtime'' by Creator/VernorVinge features possibly ''the'' most epic case of "murder victim writes cryptic final message" in the entire history of detective fiction. The murderer uses a uniquely science-fictional murder weapon that results in a four-decades long, lingering death of old age for the victim, so she has time to write a final message over ''two million words'' long -- but the important bit is still so cryptic only one man could see it -- and it's ''not'' her lover. This is because [[spoiler:the murderer is ''watching'' her the entire time, and would have destroyed anything that looked like a clue to his-or-her identity.]]
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* ''Literature/TheSaint'':
** In a short story, the Victim writes "COP", with people suspecting that the murderer was a policeman until Simon Templar realized the victim's nationality-- in the UsefulNotes/CyrillicAlphabet "COP" = "sor". The killer's name was Soren.
** Similarly, in one of Isaac Asimov's ''Literature/BlackWidowers'' stories the guest relates the tale of a Russian spy (that is, a Russian national working for the West) who left a dying message that nobody had been able to interpret: the letters E P O C K from a ''TabletopGame/{{Scrabble}}'' set. The word "epock" was meaningless and no anagram could be found either, so the spy's intention had been a mystery for more than twenty years. As always, Henry the waiter solves it, pointing out that the letters ''could'' be rearranged - to form 'CKOPE', which in the Cyrillic alphabet spells the word 'score'. This, along with a newspaper opened at the sports page (the ''scores'', gettit?) implied that the agent was trying to communicate the number twenty. The Widowers' guest is thunderstruck at this - in the code they used at the time, '20' meant "Government in firm control" and if they had known this, the Bay of Pigs invasion could have been called off.

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** "The Glass Domed Clock": The victim knocks over a glass domed clock and grabs an amethyst. [[spoiler:One of the suspects was a stockbroker (the clock resembled a stock ticker), who was born on February 29 (birthstone is an amethyst). However, other evidence indicates that the victim thought the suspect was born on March 1. Other evidence reveals that only one suspect knew the real birthdate and could have left that message.]]
** "A Lump of Sugar". Ellery and Inspector Queen spend the whole story discussing the possible meaning of the dying clue -- a lump of sugar in the victim's hand -- with respect to each of the suspects, until they realize [[spoiler:the killer was simply the one mostly likely to have a sugar cube in his hand: the mounted police officer.]]
* ''Literature/MaroonedInRealtime'' by Creator/VernorVinge features possibly ''the'' most epic case of "murder victim writes cryptic final message" in the entire history of detective fiction. The murderer uses a uniquely science-fictional murder weapon that results in a four-decades long, lingering death of old age for the victim, so she has time to write a final message over ''two million words'' long -- but the important bit is still so cryptic only one man could see it -- and it's ''not'' her lover. This is because [[spoiler:the murderer is ''watching'' her the entire time, and would have destroyed anything that looked like a clue to his-or-her identity.]]
* ''Literature/TheSaint'':
In a short story, the Victim writes "COP", with people suspecting that the murderer was a policeman until Simon Templar realized the victim's nationality-- in the UsefulNotes/CyrillicAlphabet "COP" = "sor". The killer's name was Soren.
** Similarly, in one of Isaac Asimov's ''Literature/BlackWidowers'' stories the guest relates the tale of a Russian spy (that is, a Russian national working for the West) who left a dying message that nobody had been able to interpret: the letters E P O C K from a ''TabletopGame/{{Scrabble}}'' set. The * In ''Literature/WhoCensoredRogerRabbit'', toons create word "epock" was meaningless and no anagram could be balloons when they speak (unless they consciously choose not to). A word balloon containing Roger's final words is found either, so the spy's intention had been a mystery for more than twenty years. As always, Henry the waiter solves it, pointing out that the letters ''could'' be rearranged - to form 'CKOPE', which in the Cyrillic alphabet spells the word 'score'. This, along with a newspaper opened at the sports page (the ''scores'', gettit?) implied that scene of the agent was trying to communicate crime, but it's ambiguous without knowing the number twenty. The Widowers' guest is thunderstruck at this - in way the code they used at the time, '20' meant "Government in firm control" and if they had known this, the Bay of Pigs invasion could have been called off.words were said.



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* ''Literature/SimonArk'': In "The Witch of Park Avenue", a man who is dying trapped inside a revolving door knows he only has seconds to live and writes the name "MARIE" on the glass with a felt tip pen. Although this seems to implicate a woman named Marie who is involved in the case [[spoiler:Simon determines that the victim and Marie had never met, so he could not have known her name, nor would she have reason to kill him. The actual killer was Dr. Langstrom, who had just married the eponymous witch. Langstrom's name was too long for him to write in the time he had left, so he tried to leave a short word that would nonetheless implicate Langstrom. However, while dying, he instinctively reverted to his native language, French, and wrote "marie", the French for "bridegroom".]]

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* ''Literature/SimonArk'': In "The Witch of Park Avenue", a man who is dying trapped inside a revolving door knows he only has seconds to live and writes the name "MARIE" on the glass with a felt tip pen. Although this seems to implicate a woman named Marie who is involved in the case [[spoiler:Simon determines that the victim and Marie had never met, so he could not have known her name, nor would she have reason to kill him. The actual killer was Dr. Langstrom, who had just married the eponymous witch. Langstrom's name was too long for him to write in the time he had left, so he tried to leave a short word that would nonetheless implicate Langstrom. However, while dying, he instinctively reverted to his native language, French, and wrote "marie", "marié", the French for "bridegroom".]]
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* In the ''Literature/KnownSpace'' book ''The Patchwork Girl'' the victim leaves "NAKF" written in his own blood on the rocks of the lunar surface. [[spoiler:He was trying to write "NAKED", indicating that his killer was naked: i.e., not wearing a space suit, which is quite a trick out on the surface of the moon.]]

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* In the ''Literature/KnownSpace'' book ''The Patchwork Girl'' the victim leaves "NAKF" [[CouldntFindAPen written in his own blood blood]] on the rocks of the lunar surface. [[spoiler:He was trying to write "NAKED", indicating that his killer was naked: i.e., not wearing a space suit, which is quite a trick out on the surface of the moon.]]
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* In Creator/LarryNiven's ''Literature/ThePatchworkGirl'', the victim leaves "NAKF" [[CouldntFindAPen written in his own blood]] on the rocks of the lunar surface. [[spoiler:He was trying to write "NAKED" indicating that his killer was naked: i.e. not wearing a space suit, which is quite a trick out on the surface of the moon.]]

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* Creator/AgathaChristie's ''Literature/AMurderIsAnnounced'' has one that doesn't quite count as a clue, as it's actually the reason she was killed, but similarly to the Roger Rabbit case above. Was it "She ''wasn't'' there"? or was it "''She'' wasn't there"? or maybe "She wasn't ''there''"? [[spoiler: "She wasn't ''there''".]]

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''Literature/AMurderIsAnnounced'' has one that doesn't quite count as a clue, as it's actually the reason she was killed, but similarly to the Roger Rabbit case above. Was it "She ''wasn't'' there"? or was it "''She'' wasn't there"? or maybe "She wasn't ''there''"? [[spoiler: "She wasn't ''there''".]]



** The book ''Literature/WhyDidntTheyAskEvans'' is named after one, one of the main characters Bobby Jones finds a dying man who asks this question. When he tells the victim's sister about this, he is poisoned not long after and tries to solve the murder, despite not knowing who Evans was or what they should have been asked about. It turns out that [[spoiler: Evans was the parlour maid of a man who had died just after changing his will. Evans wasn't asked witness the will being changed and the gardener, who was further away was. This was to disguise the fact that the man making the will was an impressionist and not the genuine article at all. The parlour maid would have noticed but the gardener wouldn't.]]



* Creator/AgathaChristie's ''Literature/DeathOnTheNile'' has the letter J written in blood at the scene of the crime, but Poirot dismisses it since Jackie, the obvious "J" person, had an airtight alibi and couldn't have possibly committed the murder, and in any case the victim clearly died instantly and wouldn't have left any clues. Poirot deduces that it was actually left by the murderer trying to frame Jackie. [[spoiler:Or, as it turns out, because they had a flair for the dramatic.]]
** Another Agatha Christie example appears in ''Thirteen at Dinner.'' After a young woman is murdered, Poirot and Hastings discover a note she had written detailing some kind of prank she was apparently playing at the titular dinner; a portion of the page has been ripped off, but it doesn't seem important, as the whole message is still legible. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, the killer deliberately tore the page in such a way that, in the portion of the letter hinting at who had put the victim up to the trick, the word "She" became "he," prompting the detectives to examine male suspects instead of focusing on the woman who was behind the whole plot.]]

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''Literature/DeathOnTheNile'' has the letter J written in blood at the scene of the crime, but Poirot dismisses it since Jackie, the obvious "J" person, had an airtight alibi and couldn't have possibly committed the murder, and in any case the victim clearly died instantly and wouldn't have left any clues. Poirot deduces that it was actually left by the murderer trying to frame Jackie. [[spoiler:Or, as it turns out, because they had a flair for the dramatic.]]
** Another Agatha Christie example appears in ''Thirteen at Dinner.'' '': After a young woman is murdered, Poirot and Hastings discover a note she had written detailing some kind of prank she was apparently playing at the titular dinner; a portion of the page has been ripped off, but it doesn't seem important, as the whole message is still legible. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, the killer deliberately tore the page in such a way that, in the portion of the letter hinting at who had put the victim up to the trick, the word "She" became "he," prompting the detectives to examine male suspects instead of focusing on the woman who was behind the whole plot.]]
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* One ''Literature/TheGreatBrain'' story has a murder victim gasp out "Butch" right before he dies, which causes those around him to assume the murder was Butch Cassidy. [[spoiler:TD realizes he was actually saying ''"Hutch"'', having spotted a scar on the killer's hand and realized an old friend of his was robbing him, forcing Hutch to kill him.]]
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* In a short story of ''Literature/TheSaint'' the Victim writes "COP", with people suspecting that the murderer was a policeman until Simon Templar realized the victim's nationality-- in the UsefulNotes/CyrillicAlphabet "COP" = "sor". The killer's name was Soren.
** Similarly, in one of Isaac Asimov's ''Literature/BlackWidowers'' stories the guest relates the tale of a Russian spy (that is, a Russian national working for the West) who left a dying message that nobody had been able to interpret: the letters E P O C K from a Scrabble set. The word 'epock' was meaningless and no anagram could be found either, so the spy's intention had been a mystery for more than twenty years. As always, Henry the waiter solves it, pointing out that the letters ''could'' be rearranged - to form 'CKOPE', which in the Cyrillic alphabet spells the word 'score'. This, along with a newspaper opened at the sports page (the ''scores'', gettit?) implied that the agent was trying to communicate the number twenty. The Widowers' guest is thunderstruck at this - in the code they used at the time, '20' meant "Government in firm control" and if they had known this, the Bay of Pigs invasion could have been called off.

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In a short story of ''Literature/TheSaint'' story, the Victim writes "COP", with people suspecting that the murderer was a policeman until Simon Templar realized the victim's nationality-- in the UsefulNotes/CyrillicAlphabet "COP" = "sor". The killer's name was Soren.
** Similarly, in one of Isaac Asimov's ''Literature/BlackWidowers'' stories the guest relates the tale of a Russian spy (that is, a Russian national working for the West) who left a dying message that nobody had been able to interpret: the letters E P O C K from a Scrabble ''TabletopGame/{{Scrabble}}'' set. The word 'epock' "epock" was meaningless and no anagram could be found either, so the spy's intention had been a mystery for more than twenty years. As always, Henry the waiter solves it, pointing out that the letters ''could'' be rearranged - to form 'CKOPE', which in the Cyrillic alphabet spells the word 'score'. This, along with a newspaper opened at the sports page (the ''scores'', gettit?) implied that the agent was trying to communicate the number twenty. The Widowers' guest is thunderstruck at this - in the code they used at the time, '20' meant "Government in firm control" and if they had known this, the Bay of Pigs invasion could have been called off.
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* Creator/ElleryQueen's "GI Story": A man is murdered by one of his three stepsons (Wash Smith, Linc Smith, Wilson Smith, named after the Presidents), leaves the message "GI". But all three were former soldiers. [[spoiler: He was trying to write "GEORGE" for George Washington Smith. But he died after completing the downstroke on the E.]]
* Ellery Queen's ''The Scarlet Letters'': Adulterer is shot by a jealous husband, writes the message "XY" before dying. [[spoiler: He and the husband were in a conspiracy to blackmail the wife. He was trying to write "XX" to signify a double-cross.]]
* Creator/EdwardDHoch's ''This Prize is Dangerous'' (rewritten into ''Leopold Lends a Hand''): There are three deaths related to the theft of some icons. The third victim dies in his apartment / office, making no effort to call police or an ambulance, instead writing out "Icon". [[spoiler: He'd committed the first two murders, and had been shot during the second. He tried to patch himself together, but when he realized it was hopeless, tried to write out "I confess to the murders of (victims)", but died after writing four letters.]]
* In Creator/LarryNiven's ''Literature/ThePatchworkGirl'', the victim leaves "NAKF" [[CouldntFindAPen written in his own blood]] on the rocks of the lunar surface. [[spoiler:He was trying to write "NAKED" indicating that his killer was naked: i.e. not wearing a space suit, which is quite a trick out on the surface of the moon.]]
* Parodied in ''The Big Over Easy'', the first of the Literature/NurseryCrime series, where the obnoxious ace detective mentions a case in which the victim pointed at an object which was an anagram of the first half of the killer's surname, and the detective regards this as an entirely reasonable combination of "the victim pointed at an object that related to the killer's name" and "the victim tried to say the killer's name but died halfway through".
* ''The Seventh Sinner'' by Elizabeth Peters: the dying man scrawled "VII". Now which of the group of seven tourists should be considered the seventh? [[spoiler:He was actually starting to write "Virginia," the name of one of them whom most of the group knew only by her nickname]].
* In Creator/DickFrancis's novel ''Flying Finish'', a soon to be murdered character, lacking anything to write with, frantically uses a sharp point of a nail to spell out a vital clue on a piece of scrap paper by punching out holes to make the letters and hides it before he's taken away to be killed. The protagonist later discovers it and is able to deduce the identity of the bad guys from the short message.
* Subverted in one murder mystery short story as we witness the soon to be murdered protagonist (a judge) due to his height attempting to cleverly write some initials of his killer in the dust on his door frame only to find out that he's got who's getting ready to kill him completely wrong and his message will now mislead any investigation and frantically but too late tries to erase the message.
* ''Literature/RetiredWitchesMysteries'': In book 3, Makaleigh Verza whispers three words to Molly as she's dying, but Molly just thinks they're gibberish at first. It's not until a discovery spell identifies them -- "Aba. Mho. Ord." -- and Olivia recognizes them as runes some time later that their true meaning is found. "Aba" means "atone", "Mho" means "change", and "Ord" means "beginning". [[spoiler: It's eventually subverted when they turn out to be the words necessary to bind the witchfinder within his prison in the castle, and were meant to be used to summon him to solve Makaleigh's murder.]]
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* Creator/ElleryQueen's "Diamonds in Paradise": Victim steals diamonds at the Paradise Gardens Casino, but falls from a fire escape fleeing police. When asked where he hid the diamonds, he replies "Diamonds in paradise". [[spoiler: He was trying to say "Diamonds in pair of dice". He had a specially hollowed out pair in his pocket.]]
* Creator/ElleryQueen's ''The Last Woman in His Life'': The victim announces he will be changing his will to disinherit his three ex-wives (Alice Tierney, Audrey Weston, and Marcia Kemp) as he will be marrying his true love Laura. He is murdered that night, and dies saying "home". [[spoiler: The killer was his lawyer Al Marsh (nee C. Aubrey Marsh), who had an unrequited attraction for the victim. The victim had had a stutter even before he was stabbed and couldn't risk saying "Al" (Alice), "Marsh" (Marcia), "Aubrey" (Audrey), "Lawyer" (Laura), "Attorney" (Tierney), or "Man" (Laura Mannzoni). He was trying to say "homosexual".]]
* A ''Seven Minute Mysteries'' had an incomprehensible dying message typed out on a keyboard that made sense once the detective realized [[spoiler: that the victim had swapped all instances of the letter "c" with "v" and vice versa]].
** An ''Literature/EncyclopediaBrown'' story did the same thing, but with the variation that the victim survived but had amnesia.
* In Creator/IsaacAsimov's juvenile mystery story "Try Sarah Tops," a jewel thief who'd been mortally wounded by his double-crossing accomplices flees into a museum, then gasps out a cryptic phrase before dying. It sounds like he's suggesting the cops ask someone named "Sarah Tops" where he's hidden the loot, but in fact he'd tossed it into the nearest exhibit, a ''Triceratops'' skeleton.
* In a novel by Creator/JohnDicksonCarr, the victim says before dying to the person trying to assist him "It was your gloves". [[spoiler:It had previously been established that the victim only spoke French and that a TranslationConvention was being used. In French, "your gloves" is "vos gants", which sounds similar to the murderer's name "Vaughan".]]
* Played with in Creator/KimNewman's ''Literature/AnnoDracula'', where a victim, in her dying spasm, grabs the trouser leg of the attending doctor. The protagonists jokingly suggest that she was trying to tell them the killer's name was "Sydney Trouser", or that she was aiming for "Mr Boot" and missed. It takes them much longer to discover what the audience by this point already knows: that it was the doctor who did it.
* In the ''Literature/SherlockHolmes'' story "The Boscombe Valley Murder", the victim and his son are alone in the woods at the time of his death and the son hears the victim say something about "a rat" before dying. What he was trying to say was "Black Jack of Ballarat", but the son only heard the last part. [[spoiler: The murderer was John Turner, a man who lived with the victim. Turner had spent his younger days in a gang called the "Ballarat Gang" and he had first met the victim when the victim was driving a stagecoach that the gang intended to rob. Turner had the opportunity to kill the victim then, but didn't. Years later, Turner encountered the victim again and the victim, without a penny to his name, threatened to tell the police what he knew about Turner if Turner didn't support him and his family. This was all well and good until the victim wanted to marry his son to Turner's daughter. Turner wasn't having it, so he killed him. Turner's name in the gang had been "Black Jack of Ballarat."]]
* In one short story, a detective looks into the murder of a rock singer. The singer grabbed his guitar as his final act and broke two strings. Questioning the singer's girlfriend, manager, and two of his band members turns up nothing. [[spoiler: The detective's partner offers to play a song on the broken guitar, except the E and D strings are broken. One of the band members is named Ed.]]
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* The third ''Literature/DiamondBrothers'' novel is called ''South By Southeast'', based on the victim's dying exclamation of "Suff... Beee... Suff Eees". The titular brothers decode it as the title and spend the majority of the novel trying to figure out what it means. [[spoiler: The victim was trying to say "Sotheby's. Tsar's Feast." which is the location of a prestigous auction house and the title of a well-publicised masterpiece that was due to go under the hammer. The murderer had stolen the original, replaced it with a forgery and attacked the one individual who had figured out what they were up to, and consequently could have stopped them.]]
* In the Literature/NeroWolfe short story "Before I Die," Archie Goodwin is on hand to hear the last words of the victim of a drive-by shooting: "Shame. Goddamn shame." [[spoiler:What she was actually saying was not "shame" but "''Shane''", the name of her then-unknown accomplice, who had come up with his own idea to get money.]]
* There's a ''Literature/MissMarple'' short story where the AssholeVictim's last words are related as being something like "a heap of fish", so people assume he was delusional and ignore it. [[spoiler:Pilocarpine can be used to treat atropine poisoning. Atropine is an ingredient in the murderer's eyedrops, and the victim was a doctor who recognized his symptoms and was trying to call for the antidote. Unfortunately, he was surrounded by a housewife, a cook, and a deaf doctor, and he was slurring his words badly as an effect of the poison, so they all heard it as a "pile of carp".]]
* ''Literature/EightySeventhPrecinct'': In ''Lady, Lady I Did It'', one of the victims of a mass shooting manages to gasp the word "carpenter" before dying. Investigation by the 87th Precinct fails to turn up a suspect who is named Carpenter or who works with wood. It turns out [[spoiler:the victim was actually saying "car painter" (i.e. the man who had recently painted his car) but his thick accent turned it into "carpenter"]].
* ''Literature/TheSherlockHolmesStoriesOfEdwardDHoch'': In "A Scandal in Montreal", the murder victim--a German student attending [=McGill=] University to improve his English--gasps the name "Norton" to the constable who reaches him just before he dies. This makes a strong circumstantial case that his killer is Ralph Norton: a fellow student with whom he had a very public quarrel a few days earlier. [[spoiler:Once in possession of all the facts, Holes deduces that his his killer is actually his estranged lover Miss Monica Starr, whose nickname is 'North' (as in 'North Star'). While dying, he reverted to his German and was actually saying 'norden'; the German word for 'north'.]]
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* In the Dr. Sam Hawthorne story, "The Problem of the Locked Caboose," the victim leaves the word "Elf" written in blood. [[spoiler: Turns out that he was writing the German word for eleven. The only thing that he knew about his killer was that they were in berth 11.]]
* ''The Dragon in the Sea'' by Creator/FrankHerbert. The crew of an atomic submarine find the dead body of a Security agent in the reactor room where he was locked in by a saboteur. He kills himself to prevent a lingering death from radiation, leaving a detailed statement of what happened, but unfortunately he never saw who it was who locked the hatch.
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* Creator/ElleryQueen's "The Glass Domed Clock": The victim knocks over a glass domed clock and grabs an amethyst. [[spoiler:One of the suspects was a stockbroker (the clock resembled a stock ticker), who was born on February 29 (birthstone is an amethyst). However, other evidence indicates that the victim thought the suspect was born on March 1. Other evidence reveals that only one suspect knew the real birthdate and could have left that message.]]
* And yet ''another'' Creator/ElleryQueen example, the short story "A Lump of Sugar". Ellery and Inspector Queen spend the whole story discussing the possible meaning of the dying clue -- a lump of sugar in the victim's hand -- with respect to each of the suspects, until they realize [[spoiler:the killer was simply the one mostly likely to have a sugar cube in his hand: the mounted police officer.]]
* In ''Literature/WhoCensoredRogerRabbit'', toons create word balloons when they speak (unless they consciously choose not to). A word balloon containing Roger's final words is found at the scene of the crime, but it's ambiguous without knowing the way the words were said.
* ''Literature/MaroonedInRealtime'' by Creator/VernorVinge features possibly ''the'' most epic case of "murder victim writes cryptic final message" in the entire history of detective fiction. The murderer uses a uniquely science-fictional murder weapon that results in a four-decades long, lingering death of old age for the victim, so she has time to write a final message over ''two million words'' long -- but the important bit is still so cryptic only one man could see it -- and it's ''not'' her lover. This is because [[spoiler:the murderer is ''watching'' her the entire time, and would have destroyed anything that looked like a clue to his-or-her identity.]]
* Creator/AgathaChristie's ''Literature/AMurderIsAnnounced'' has one that doesn't quite count as a clue, as it's actually the reason she was killed, but similarly to the Roger Rabbit case above. Was it "She ''wasn't'' there"? or was it "''She'' wasn't there"? or maybe "She wasn't ''there''"? [[spoiler: "She wasn't ''there''".]]
** Another famous Christie example appears in ''Literature/MurderOnTheOrientExpress.'' When examining the AssholeVictim's room for clues, Poirot comes across a charred piece of paper that reads "--member little Daisy Armstrong." It turns out to be a vital piece of information: the victim, who was traveling under an assumed name, was responsible for the kidnap and murder of a child heiress named Daisy Armstrong, whose death prompted a massive string of tragedies for the Armstrong household. The note helps Poirot realize that he is not investigating a mere murder, but a deeply-rooted revenge plot. [[spoiler: It ultimately turns out to be a subversion, though, as the person who burned the note wasn't the victim, but one of the people behind the murder--he and everyone else involved deliberately taunted the criminal by sending the note, then tried to destroy it to remove all evidence of the Armstrong case and make the crime unsolvable. The charred piece was never supposed to be found in the first place.]]
* In a short story of ''Literature/TheSaint'' the Victim writes "COP", with people suspecting that the murderer was a policeman until Simon Templar realized the victim's nationality-- in the UsefulNotes/CyrillicAlphabet "COP" = "sor". The killer's name was Soren.
** Similarly, in one of Isaac Asimov's ''Literature/BlackWidowers'' stories the guest relates the tale of a Russian spy (that is, a Russian national working for the West) who left a dying message that nobody had been able to interpret: the letters E P O C K from a Scrabble set. The word 'epock' was meaningless and no anagram could be found either, so the spy's intention had been a mystery for more than twenty years. As always, Henry the waiter solves it, pointing out that the letters ''could'' be rearranged - to form 'CKOPE', which in the Cyrillic alphabet spells the word 'score'. This, along with a newspaper opened at the sports page (the ''scores'', gettit?) implied that the agent was trying to communicate the number twenty. The Widowers' guest is thunderstruck at this - in the code they used at the time, '20' meant "Government in firm control" and if they had known this, the Bay of Pigs invasion could have been called off.
* In ''Literature/TheSwanPrincess'', King William says "It's not what it seems, Derek. It's not what it seems!" in reference to the [[OneWingedAngel Great Animal]] that has attacked him. Derek has to figure out what he means by himself, eventually finding a book that describes shapeshifting in the library.
* Taken to rather ridiculous extremes in ''Literature/TheDaVinciCode'' [[spoiler:dragging himself round an art gallery scrawling hidden messages on various paintings before arranging his dying body in a meaningful pose]], since revealing the identity of the killer is not so important to the dying man as giving clues to the AncientConspiracy that he was killed to cover up.
* In the Literature/DirkPittAdventures novel "Iceberg", [[spoiler:Dr. Hunnewell's]] last words to Dirk Pitt are "God save thee!" Pitt later discovers [[spoiler:that Hunnewell wasn't just identifying Oskar Rondheim as his killer, but also admitting to being in league with him. The dying message was an excerpt from "The Rime of the Ancient Mariner", Rondheim's favorite story.]]
* In the ''Literature/ZacharyNixonJohnson'' book ''The Doomsday Brunette'', the murder victim Foraa Thompson scrawled a series of seemingly random symbols just before dying. Multiple characters [[LampshadeHanging lampshade]] the general contrivance and implausibility of the trope.
--> '''Zach''': Foraa's dying clue. She drew these symbols in the wine puddle just before she died. Maybe as some sort of veiled reference to her killer's identity.
--> '''Electra''': Why didn't she just write down the killer's name?
--> '''Zach''': Because that would have been too easy.
--> '''Electra''': So she spent her last nanos of life devising some arcane symbolic code?\\
'''Zach''': Well, apparently, lots of murder victims do it.
* ''Literature/TheThinkingMachine'': "His Perfect Alibi" features a rare variant in the which the victim manages to actually write down the name of his killer before expiring. However (as might be guessed from the title), the killer has a seemingly perfect alibi that makes it physically impossible for him to have committed the murder.
* ''Literature/TheSherlockHolmesStoriesOfEdwardDHoch'': In "The Manor House Case", a dying murder victim drags himself across the room to pull the ten of spades from a deck of playing cards as a clue to his killer's identity. [[spoiler:The suit was irrelevant. The dying man grabbed first ten he found in the deck in attempt to indicate the killer's surname was 'Zehn': German for 'ten'.]]
* ''Literature/SimonArk'': In "The Witch of Park Avenue", a man who is dying trapped inside a revolving door knows he only has seconds to live and writes the name "MARIE" on the glass with a felt tip pen. Although this seems to implicate a woman named Marie who is involved in the case [[spoiler:Simon determines that the victim and Marie had never met, so he could not have known her name, nor would she have reason to kill him. The actual killer was Dr. Langstrom, who had just married the eponymous witch. Langstrom's name was too long for him to write in the time he had left, so he tried to leave a short word that would nonetheless implicate Langstrom. However, while dying, he instinctively reverted to his native language, French, and wrote "marie", the French for "bridegroom".]]
* In the Literature/NeroWolfe novella "The Zero Clue", the victim has on his desk three pencils, a pencil eraser, and two more pencils. [[spoiler:He does this to indicate his murder is connected to the recent bombing that killed 302 people.]] Justified because that way the murderer thinks he's just fidgeting and not leaving a clue.
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* ''Something Wicked'' by Alan Gratz: Duncan is found dead with his son's name, MALCOLM, written in his blood, but the hero realizes it's a frame-up because Duncan and everyone else called his son Mal.
* The culprit in the Sherlock Holmes story ''A Study in Scarlet'' wrote RACHE on the wall to make the police think of a revenge killing by a secret society ...or that the murderer's name was Rachel.
** In "A Study in Pink", a loose adaptation of the story in ''Series/{{Sherlock}}'' [[spoiler: the victim did write RACHE, but she died before she could finish writing RACHEL, the password to her phone.]]
** In "Literature/AStudyInEmerald", a weird crossover between Sherlock Holmes and the Franchise/CthulhuMythos, the victim again wrote "RACHE" in the wall. [[spoiler:Turns out it was, indeed, actually the nickname of the killer.]]
* Creator/AgathaChristie's ''Literature/DeathOnTheNile'' has the letter J written in blood at the scene of the crime, but Poirot dismisses it since Jackie, the obvious "J" person, had an airtight alibi and couldn't have possibly committed the murder, and in any case the victim clearly died instantly and wouldn't have left any clues. Poirot deduces that it was actually left by the murderer trying to frame Jackie. [[spoiler:Or, as it turns out, because they had a flair for the dramatic.]]
** Another Agatha Christie example appears in ''Thirteen at Dinner.'' After a young woman is murdered, Poirot and Hastings discover a note she had written detailing some kind of prank she was apparently playing at the titular dinner; a portion of the page has been ripped off, but it doesn't seem important, as the whole message is still legible. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, the killer deliberately tore the page in such a way that, in the portion of the letter hinting at who had put the victim up to the trick, the word "She" became "he," prompting the detectives to examine male suspects instead of focusing on the woman who was behind the whole plot.]]
* In the ''Literature/FatherBrown'' mystery "The Wrong Shape", the victim is found with a sheet of paper on their body which has typwewritten on it, "I die by my own hand; yet I die murdered!" with no quotation marks. The unusual shape of the paper (the upper left corner is snipped off, as it is on all of the sheets of paper in the room) and the presence of one less corner than sheets of paper leads Father Brown to realize that [[spoiler:a quotation mark was removed from a line of speech. The end of the story has a confession which indicates that the victim had been writing a story involving a man killed by hypnotism and the killer borrowed that last sheet to distract the investigators, snipped off the quotation mark, and burned the rest.]]
* A few cases in the book ''Minute Mysteries'' involve this, along with other books with mini-detective puzzle shorts. More often than not, they are a framing attempt made by the person writing the note, and it's left to the reader to find the reason.
* ''Literature/JudgeDee'': [[spoiler:Sergeant Hong]] is murdered in broad daylight by the person he's having tea with. He tries to write the murderer's name in spilled tea, but the murderer notices and wipes it away contemptuously.
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