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It's about the author's [[SelfInsert self-insert]] Razor Graze and... well, a lengthy explanation is in order.
Basically, he took the [[GoodAngelBadAngel Good Angel, Bad Angel]] concept, mixed it with {{Double Consciousness}}, and took the whole thing up to eleven. Razor has two "separate consciences" that manifest themselves as "light and dark" versions of himself, named Kill and Joy. Also, they are apparently {{Omniscient}}, as they somehow have knowledge of things like Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}} and the [[Series/DoctorWho TARDIS]]. Recently, he added a third "conscience", Grace. Along with making it a bit confusing at times as Grace and Graze are only a letter apart, it pretty much invalidates the fic's current title.
Basically, he took the [[GoodAngelBadAngel Good Angel, Bad Angel]] concept, mixed it with {{Double Consciousness}}, and took the whole thing up to eleven. Razor has two "separate consciences" that manifest themselves as "light and dark" versions of himself, named Kill and Joy. Also, they are apparently {{Omniscient}}, as they somehow have knowledge of things like Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}} and the [[Series/DoctorWho TARDIS]]. Recently, he added a third "conscience", Grace. Along with making it a bit confusing at times as Grace and Graze are only a letter apart, it pretty much invalidates the fic's current title.
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It's about the author's [[SelfInsert [[SelfInsertFic self-insert]] Razor Graze and... well, a lengthy explanation is in order.
Basically, he took the[[GoodAngelBadAngel Good Angel, Bad Angel]] GoodAngelBadAngel concept, mixed it with {{Double Consciousness}}, DoubleConsciousness, and took the whole thing up to eleven. Razor has two "separate consciences" that manifest themselves as "light and dark" versions of himself, named Kill and Joy. Also, they are apparently {{Omniscient}}, [[TheOmniscient omniscient]], as they somehow have knowledge of things like Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}} ''Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles'' and the [[Series/DoctorWho TARDIS]]. Recently, he added a third "conscience", Grace. Along with making it a bit confusing at times as Grace and Graze are only a letter apart, it pretty much invalidates the fic's current title.
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'''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6109/ Three of Me: School Society]]''' (formerly '''Three of Me vs. School Society''') is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' HighSchoolAU {{Fanfic}} by the author Killjoy.
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'''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6109/ Three of Me: School Society]]''' (formerly '''Three of Me vs. School Society''') is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' HighSchoolAU {{Fanfic}} by the author Killjoy.
It's about the author's [[SelfInsert self-insert]] Razor Graze and... well, a lengthy explanation is in order.
Basically, he took the [[GoodAngelBadAngel Good Angel, Bad Angel]] concept, mixed it with {{Double Consciousness}}, and took the whole thing up to eleven. Razor has two "separate consciences" that manifest themselves as "light and dark" versions of himself, named Kill and Joy. Also, they are apparently {{Omniscient}}, as they somehow have knowledge of things like Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}} and the [[Series/DoctorWho TARDIS]]. Recently, he added a third "conscience", Grace. Along with making it a bit confusing at times as Grace and Graze are only a letter apart, it pretty much invalidates the fic's current title.
Other characters have multiple consciences too, most notably Pinkie Pie, who [[OutOfCharacterMoment repeatedly attempts to rape Razor]] because her consciences are in love with his, but he's dating Derpy. Pretty much every OC that appears in the fic also has at least one "conscience", too.
Even if you don't count the consciences, there really are a lot of characters. It's gotten to the point where entire chapters can go by without a single canon character appearing, with the possible exception of Derpy, Razor's love interest.
This fic should NOT be confused with the remake, [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/62745/3om-tartarus-and-everfree Everfree and Tartarus]], which is improved to a quite surprising degree. This page is about the original, vastly inferior "School Society" version.
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!! This WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic contains the following tropes:
%%* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Pinkie Pie, thanks to the influence of Surprise.
* BeachEpisode: The chapter "TO THE BEACH !"
%%* BlackComedyRape:
%%** The intent of the Pinkie scene. It just comes off as creepy and forced.
%%** Both "Marepocalypse" chapters, though it occurs in other scenes as well.
* ClingyJealousGirl: Fleur de Lis latches onto Razor and [[FriendVersusLover tries to drive everyone else away from him]].
* CoolGuns: In the Airsoft chapter, the Barrett M82, UMP-45, and FN F2000.
* CrossOver: With the fic ''[[Fanfic/LivingTheDreamKickass222urmom Living The Dream]]'', the only story on [=FimFiction=] with more comments than this one, for "Surprise Encounter and HOOFBALL!" and the "CROSSOVER OF CONSCIENCES" chapters.
%%* DarkAndTroubledPast: It's quicker to name the [=OCs=] that ''don't'' have one.
%%* DeadpanSnarker: The entire cast in general, but Kill and Joy in particular.
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Razor's mother died when he was young. Silent Charge, Ice and Shadow/Light all lost both parents in the events that led to them getting their cutie marks. In all cases, the lost parents are remembered fondly.
* {{Doorstopper}}: 250,000 words and still going strong.
* DontLikeDontRead: The author's standard policy to criticism.
%%* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Most notably, both "Marepocalypse" chapters, though it occurs in other scenes as well.
* EasilyForgiven: [=LightBlade=] is instantly integrated into Razor's group of friends even though he made multiple attempts on most of their lives.
%%* FeaturelessPlaneOfDisembodiedDialogue: Becomes very common in the later chapters, especially since Kill and Joy don't use dialogue tags.
* {{Flanderization}}: As the story progresses, several characters fall victim to this. [=CrackShot=] starts to become possessive of toilet paper, for instance.
%%* GenderBender: Happens to Razor...multiple times.
* GunsDoNotWorkThatWay: The Airsoft battle scene manages to get almost everything wrong about both Airsoft and real guns, including a sniper rifle that somehow manages to produce a tremendous report despite firing air-propelled plastic [=BBs=], an M16 that is referred to as a "carbine rifle", and a pair of "quad-barreled shotguns".
%%* HeelFaceTurn: This is how many of Razor's friends are made.
%%* HighSchoolAU
* IrrationalHatred: There's no good reason for [=ShadowBlade=] to ever have initially attacked the main characters.
* KarmaHoudini: [=ShadowBlade's=] only punishment for his initial actions is a number of broken bones. After his next attempt to kill Razor and his friends, they practically reward him.
%%* MoodSwinger: A consequence of having the consciences. At least, when the writer ''remembers'' the characters have them.
%%* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Razor is prone to this after instances when he loses control of his temper.
* MysteriousPast: Up until chapter 19, we know very little of the [=OCs'=] backstories. [[BackstoryOfTheDay Since then, though, the story of how each new character got their cutie mark is a staple to their introduction.]]
%%* PosthumousCharacter: Razor's mother, Grace.
* PutOnABus: Non-OC recurring characters are prone to being forgotten about for chapters on end.
%%* RandomEventsPlot: Most of the story arcs are this, namely the "Helping Out" chapters.
* RevengeBeforeReason: [=ShadowBlade=] conquered a mostly-shattered skeleton for the chance to ''completely end'' Razor.
* SadisticTeacher: Mr. Charge, who is supposedly dedicated to strictness and order but usually just comes off as a random dick.
%%* SelectiveObliviousness: A lot of conflict is created this way.
* SelfInsert: Razor Graze. In addition, many other [=OCs=] are basically self-inserts of the author's friends.
* ASimplePlan: In the "Helping Out" arc, all Razor wants to do is [[HumbleGoal get back to his room and spend his day off with Ditzy.]] Because fate despises him, he spends the entire day trying to do this.
* SirSwearsALot: Special mention goes to Kill, but nearly every character is prone to this at times.
* WriteWhoYouKnow: Many reviewers have been written into the story as new students.
* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: Punctuation errors are common, although they are less frequent in the later chapters.
%%* {{Yandere}}: Fleur de Lis.
* YourMom: Graze insults some generic bullies by saying that they probably inherited their small penises from their mothers. [[{{Hermaphrodite}} The implications of this are unclear.]]
* YuriFan: Graze, who takes advantage of his GenderBender to hook up with lesbian females and uses a sniper scope to spy on two female friends of his having sex.
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It's about the author's [[SelfInsert self-insert]] Razor Graze and... well, a lengthy explanation is in order.
Basically, he took the [[GoodAngelBadAngel Good Angel, Bad Angel]] concept, mixed it with {{Double Consciousness}}, and took the whole thing up to eleven. Razor has two "separate consciences" that manifest themselves as "light and dark" versions of himself, named Kill and Joy. Also, they are apparently {{Omniscient}}, as they somehow have knowledge of things like Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}} and the [[Series/DoctorWho TARDIS]]. Recently, he added a third "conscience", Grace. Along with making it a bit confusing at times as Grace and Graze are only a letter apart, it pretty much invalidates the fic's current title.
Other characters have multiple consciences too, most notably Pinkie Pie, who [[OutOfCharacterMoment repeatedly attempts to rape Razor]] because her consciences are in love with his, but he's dating Derpy. Pretty much every OC that appears in the fic also has at least one "conscience", too.
Even if you don't count the consciences, there really are a lot of characters. It's gotten to the point where entire chapters can go by without a single canon character appearing, with the possible exception of Derpy, Razor's love interest.
This fic should NOT be confused with the remake, [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/62745/3om-tartarus-and-everfree Everfree and Tartarus]], which is improved to a quite surprising degree. This page is about the original, vastly inferior "School Society" version.
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!! This WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic contains the following tropes:
%%* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Pinkie Pie, thanks to the influence of Surprise.
* BeachEpisode: The chapter "TO THE BEACH !"
%%* BlackComedyRape:
%%** The intent of the Pinkie scene. It just comes off as creepy and forced.
%%** Both "Marepocalypse" chapters, though it occurs in other scenes as well.
* ClingyJealousGirl: Fleur de Lis latches onto Razor and [[FriendVersusLover tries to drive everyone else away from him]].
* CoolGuns: In the Airsoft chapter, the Barrett M82, UMP-45, and FN F2000.
* CrossOver: With the fic ''[[Fanfic/LivingTheDreamKickass222urmom Living The Dream]]'', the only story on [=FimFiction=] with more comments than this one, for "Surprise Encounter and HOOFBALL!" and the "CROSSOVER OF CONSCIENCES" chapters.
%%* DarkAndTroubledPast: It's quicker to name the [=OCs=] that ''don't'' have one.
%%* DeadpanSnarker: The entire cast in general, but Kill and Joy in particular.
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Razor's mother died when he was young. Silent Charge, Ice and Shadow/Light all lost both parents in the events that led to them getting their cutie marks. In all cases, the lost parents are remembered fondly.
* {{Doorstopper}}: 250,000 words and still going strong.
* DontLikeDontRead: The author's standard policy to criticism.
%%* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Most notably, both "Marepocalypse" chapters, though it occurs in other scenes as well.
* EasilyForgiven: [=LightBlade=] is instantly integrated into Razor's group of friends even though he made multiple attempts on most of their lives.
%%* FeaturelessPlaneOfDisembodiedDialogue: Becomes very common in the later chapters, especially since Kill and Joy don't use dialogue tags.
* {{Flanderization}}: As the story progresses, several characters fall victim to this. [=CrackShot=] starts to become possessive of toilet paper, for instance.
%%* GenderBender: Happens to Razor...multiple times.
* GunsDoNotWorkThatWay: The Airsoft battle scene manages to get almost everything wrong about both Airsoft and real guns, including a sniper rifle that somehow manages to produce a tremendous report despite firing air-propelled plastic [=BBs=], an M16 that is referred to as a "carbine rifle", and a pair of "quad-barreled shotguns".
%%* HeelFaceTurn: This is how many of Razor's friends are made.
%%* HighSchoolAU
* IrrationalHatred: There's no good reason for [=ShadowBlade=] to ever have initially attacked the main characters.
* KarmaHoudini: [=ShadowBlade's=] only punishment for his initial actions is a number of broken bones. After his next attempt to kill Razor and his friends, they practically reward him.
%%* MoodSwinger: A consequence of having the consciences. At least, when the writer ''remembers'' the characters have them.
%%* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Razor is prone to this after instances when he loses control of his temper.
* MysteriousPast: Up until chapter 19, we know very little of the [=OCs'=] backstories. [[BackstoryOfTheDay Since then, though, the story of how each new character got their cutie mark is a staple to their introduction.]]
%%* PosthumousCharacter: Razor's mother, Grace.
* PutOnABus: Non-OC recurring characters are prone to being forgotten about for chapters on end.
%%* RandomEventsPlot: Most of the story arcs are this, namely the "Helping Out" chapters.
* RevengeBeforeReason: [=ShadowBlade=] conquered a mostly-shattered skeleton for the chance to ''completely end'' Razor.
* SadisticTeacher: Mr. Charge, who is supposedly dedicated to strictness and order but usually just comes off as a random dick.
%%* SelectiveObliviousness: A lot of conflict is created this way.
* SelfInsert: Razor Graze. In addition, many other [=OCs=] are basically self-inserts of the author's friends.
* ASimplePlan: In the "Helping Out" arc, all Razor wants to do is [[HumbleGoal get back to his room and spend his day off with Ditzy.]] Because fate despises him, he spends the entire day trying to do this.
* SirSwearsALot: Special mention goes to Kill, but nearly every character is prone to this at times.
* WriteWhoYouKnow: Many reviewers have been written into the story as new students.
* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: Punctuation errors are common, although they are less frequent in the later chapters.
%%* {{Yandere}}: Fleur de Lis.
* YourMom: Graze insults some generic bullies by saying that they probably inherited their small penises from their mothers. [[{{Hermaphrodite}} The implications of this are unclear.]]
* YuriFan: Graze, who takes advantage of his GenderBender to hook up with lesbian females and uses a sniper scope to spy on two female friends of his having sex.
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