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* MayflyDecemberRomance: The whole reason things are the way they are in The Lehr is because Eitri was trying to resolve the problem with one of these. [[{{GoneHorriblyRight}} It worked,]] but the relationship [[{{LoveHurts}} didn't.]]
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* MayflyDecemberRomance: The whole reason things are the way they are in The Lehr is because Eitri was trying to resolve the problem with one of these. [[{{GoneHorriblyRight}} It worked,]] but the relationship [[{{LoveHurts}} [[LoveHurts didn't.]]
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* AGodAmI: Thought he grew up believing himself an ordinary human, Eitri readily embraced his status as something more - and over the many years ended up [[{{InsufferableGenius}} losing touch]] with what it ever felt like to be anything less.
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* AGodAmI: Thought he grew up believing himself an ordinary human, Eitri readily embraced his status as something more - and over the many years ended up [[{{InsufferableGenius}} [[InsufferableGenius losing touch]] with what it ever felt like to be anything less.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Brokkr's main power is to turn the 'physical' into the 'spiritual' - a direct opposite's of Eitri's ability. Unlike Eitri, however, he experiences a compelling physical need to use this power, and the quickest way to do it is... to just [[{{HorrorHunger}} EAT]] whatever he's converting.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Brokkr's main power is to turn the 'physical' into the 'spiritual' - a direct opposite's of Eitri's ability. Unlike Eitri, however, he experiences a compelling physical need to use this power, and the quickest way to do it is... to just [[{{HorrorHunger}} [[HorrorHunger EAT]] whatever he's converting.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Zoe is the book's narrator, and her reactions to events offer up many RedHerring.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Zoe is the book's narrator, and her reactions to events offer up many a RedHerring.
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* GambitPileup: The why's of who's doing what and when can get a bit... convoluted.
* UnreliableNarrator: Zoe is the book's narrator, and her reactions to events offer up many RedHerring.
* UnreliableNarrator: Zoe is the book's narrator, and her reactions to events offer up many RedHerring.
* InsufferableGenius: And the 'insufferable' part is immediately obvious.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Sindri leads Zoe to believe that they knew each other, before she lost her memory, as part of his plan to orchestrate [[spoiler: the Nameless King's death.]]
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* HandsOffParenting: Technically, Eitri's the father of most of the cast. He is ''very bad at it.''
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* HeroicRROD: The older Tools can easily recognize within Jafri the early signs of someone who's in danger of... [[{{LiterallyShatteredLives}} shattering]]. As Eitri places him under more and more stress and the hunt for the King's soul grows more dire and urgent...
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* HeroicRROD: The older Tools can easily recognize within Jafri the early signs of someone who's in danger of... [[{{LiterallyShatteredLives}} shattering]]. As Eitri places him under more and more stress and the hunt for the King's soul grows more dire and urgent...urgent, well...
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* MoralityPet: Jafri is hers, essentially.
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* HeroicRROD: The older Tools can easily recognize within Jafri the early signs of someone who's in danger of... [[{{LiterallyShatteredLives}} shattering]]. As Eitri places him under more and more stress and the hunt for the King's soul grows more dire and urgent...
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* SickeninglySweethearts: ...though, early on, before he began to learn more about his lover's true nature, things were a lot less complicated.
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Was not always nameless. His name - and the name of the city he once ruled from - was stricken from record, to reflect the severity of his crimes against his kingdom.
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* PowerIsSexy: On the king's end, this was a huge basis of his investment in his past relationship with Eitri.
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* AGodAmI: Thought he grew up believing himself an ordinary human, Eitri readily embraced his status as something more - and over the many years ended up [[{{InsufferableGenius}}losing touch]] with what it ever felt like to be anything less.
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* AGodAmI: Thought he grew up believing himself an ordinary human, Eitri readily embraced his status as something more - and over the many years ended up [[{{InsufferableGenius}}losing [[{{InsufferableGenius}} losing touch]] with what it ever felt like to be anything less.
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* AGodIAmNot: Brokkr has always preferred obscurity, stemming from the [[{{DarkAndTroubledPast}}difficult lives]] the brothers lead in the early years of the realization of their powers.
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Including Zoe herself, these are the ArtificialHumans made by the Glassmaker in his centuries-long bid to collect the soul of the Nameless King.
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Including Zoe herself, these are the ArtificialHumans made by the Glassmaker in his centuries-long bid to collect the soul of the Nameless King. They do [[{{BornAsAnAdult}} not]] [[{{TheAgeless}} age]], though otherwise function similar to normal humans.
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