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*** Among said limits: she cannot safely transform into anything with too much mass, the upper limit being 320 kilograms [[IfMyCalculationsAreCorrect by her own calculations]]; just to be safe, she never transforms into anything with a mass greater than 200 kilograms. Also, if she transforms into any fictional being, she can only mimic that being's appearance. She cannot, for example, transform into a [[{{Pokemon}} pikachu]] and suddenly be able to shoot electricity.
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*** Among said limits: she cannot safely transform into anything with too much mass, the upper limit being 320 kilograms [[IfMyCalculationsAreCorrect by her own calculations]]; just to be safe, she never transforms into anything with a mass greater than 200 kilograms. Also, if she transforms into any fictional being, she can only mimic that being's appearance. She cannot, for example, transform into a [[{{Pokemon}} pikachu]] [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Pikachu]] and suddenly be able to shoot electricity.
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Everythings Nuttier With Squirrels is a redirect to Nutty Squirrel, which is being cut per TRS decision
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* ShoutOut: One of the first new forms Serenity learns to take on is that of a [[EverythingsNuttierWithSquirrels squirrel.]] She remarks that said squirrel form makes her feel [[Webcomic/ElGoonishShive graceful.]]
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* ShoutOut: One of the first new forms Serenity learns to take on is that of a [[EverythingsNuttierWithSquirrels squirrel.]] squirrel. She remarks that said squirrel form makes her feel [[Webcomic/ElGoonishShive graceful.]]
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** Nami's father is an archaeologist, and his surname is [[{{La-Mulana}} Kosugi]].
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** Nami's father is an archaeologist, and his surname is [[{{La-Mulana}} [[VideoGame/LaMulana Kosugi]].
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* ShapeshifterBaggage: Somewhat {{justified}} with Serenity [[spoiler: and by extension, her entire race]]. The form of shapeshifting magic she uses is unique in that it can create and destroy matter, which magic explicitly cannot do otherwise.
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* ShapeshifterBaggage: Somewhat {{justified}} {{Justified|Trope}} with Serenity [[spoiler: and by extension, her entire race]]. The form of shapeshifting magic she uses is unique in that it can create and destroy matter, which magic explicitly cannot do otherwise.
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* WeaponsKitchenSink: {{Justified}}. The main heroes, ahem, ''[[KleptomaniacHero borrow]]'' their weapons and armor from Nami's father, an archaeologist who brings home various magic artifacts he finds for study.
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* WeaponsKitchenSink: {{Justified}}.{{Justified|Trope}}. The main heroes, ahem, ''[[KleptomaniacHero borrow]]'' their weapons and armor from Nami's father, an archaeologist who brings home various magic artifacts he finds for study.
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Humanity's evolution and capacity to develop new technologies was greatly aided by the influence of the Codex, and that was when it was ''sealed''. Now that it's unsealed, mankind will likely experience massive leaps and bounds in technological discoveries. The Namformae are descendants of the {{Precursors}} that fled the Earth to escape the [[ForeverWar world-ending Codex War]], but by doing so subjected themselves to CreativeSterility.
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Humanity's evolution and capacity to develop new technologies was greatly aided by the influence of the Codex, and that was when it was ''sealed''. Now that it's unsealed, mankind will likely experience massive leaps and bounds in technological discoveries. The Namformae are descendants of the {{Precursors}} that fled the Earth to escape the [[ForeverWar world-ending Codex War]], but by doing so subjected themselves to CreativeSterility.]]
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* ShoutOut: One of the first new forms Serenity learns to take on is that of a [[EverythingsNuttierWithSquirrels squirrel.]] She remarks that said squirrel form makes her feel [[ElGoonishShive graceful.]]
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* ShoutOut: One of the first new forms Serenity learns to take on is that of a [[EverythingsNuttierWithSquirrels squirrel.]] She remarks that said squirrel form makes her feel [[ElGoonishShive [[Webcomic/ElGoonishShive graceful.]]
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Humanity's evolution and capacity to develop new technologies was greatly aided by the influence of the Codex, and that was when it was ''sealed''. Now that it's unsealed, mankind will likely experience massive leaps and bounds in technological discoveries. The Namformae are descendants of the {{Precursors}} that fled the Earth to escape the [[ForeverWar world-ending Codex War]], but by doing so subjected themselves to CreativeSterility and eventually {{Gotterdammerung}}.]]
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Humanity's evolution and capacity to develop new technologies was greatly aided by the influence of the Codex, and that was when it was ''sealed''. Now that it's unsealed, mankind will likely experience massive leaps and bounds in technological discoveries. The Namformae are descendants of the {{Precursors}} that fled the Earth to escape the [[ForeverWar world-ending Codex War]], but by doing so subjected themselves to CreativeSterility and eventually {{Gotterdammerung}}.]]CreativeSterility.
