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* TheDreaded: In her scenario, when she encounters Reimu; Reimu's reaction is to outright try and flee her. Of course, with Hisami's powers, this dosen't work, and it's not made entirely clear if she's fleeing Hisami because she's specifically scared of Hisami, or because she's scared of Zanmu [which was established in Reimu's scenario]
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* TheDreaded: In her scenario, when she encounters Reimu; Reimu's reaction is to outright try and flee her. Of course, with Hisami's powers, this dosen't doesn't work, and it's not made entirely clear if she's fleeing Hisami because she's specifically scared of Hisami, or because she's scared of Zanmu [which (which was established in Reimu's scenario]scenario).
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* TheDreaded: In her scenario, when she encounters Reimu; Reimu's reaction is to outright try and flee her. Of course, with Hisami's powers, this dosen't work, and it's not made entirely clear if she's fleeing Hisami because she's specifically scared of Hisami, or because she's scared of Zanmu [which was established in Reimu's scenario]
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* MirrorCharacter: Could be seen as one to [[Characters/TouhouKaeidzukaPhantasmagoriaOfFlowerView Komachi Onozuka]]. Komachi tends to slack off a lot of the time, but she's really competent at her job--especially when her boss Eiki Shiki is around. Meanwhile, Hisami is ''incredibly'' skilled at her job (so much so that the Yama is monitoring her because she's been dragging more people to Hell than anticipated), but that tends to falter when comes to Zanmu due to Hisami's one-sided infatuation with her.
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* MirrorCharacter: Could be seen as one to [[Characters/TouhouKaeidzukaPhantasmagoriaOfFlowerView Komachi Onozuka]]. Komachi tends to slack off a lot of the time, but she's really competent at her job--especially when her boss Eiki Shiki is around. Meanwhile, Hisami is ''incredibly'' skilled at her job (so much so that the Yama is monitoring her because she's been dragging more people to Hell than anticipated), but that tends to falter when it comes to Zanmu due to Hisami's one-sided infatuation with her.
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** Hisami also pants while talking about her desire to be solded to both Zanmu and Suika.
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** Hisami also pants while talking about her desire to be solded scolded to both Zanmu and Suika.
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* DamageOverTime: Zanmu's shot type can inflict bleed on contact, slowing increasing damage taken.
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* DamageOverTime: Zanmu's shot type can inflict bleed on contact, slowing slowly increasing damage taken.
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* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Unlike most oni, who focus on brute strength, Zanmu's specialty is in scheming. Although this dosen't stop Zanmu being strong enough that even Reimu is outright scared of fighting her at full power, and an Oni as strong as Suika resorts to schemes instead of direct confrontation.
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* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Unlike most oni, who focus on brute strength, Zanmu's specialty is in scheming. Although However, this dosen't doesn't stop Zanmu from still being strong enough that even Reimu is outright scared of fighting her at full power, and an Oni as strong as Suika resorts to schemes instead of direct confrontation.
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* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Unlike most oni, who focus on brute strength, Zanmu's specialty is in scheming. Although this dosen't stop Zanmu being strong enough that even Reimu is outright scared of fighting her at full power, and an Oni as strong as Sukia resorts to schemes instead of direct confrontation.
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* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Unlike most oni, who focus on brute strength, Zanmu's specialty is in scheming. Although this dosen't stop Zanmu being strong enough that even Reimu is outright scared of fighting her at full power, and an Oni as strong as Sukia Suika resorts to schemes instead of direct confrontation.
