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* DisappeardDad: Never shows up in the present day, and is heavily implied to be this.
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* EvilRedhead: Artwork on Threadbare's account show she has red hair
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* EvilRedhead: Artwork on Threadbare's Charlie's ask account show that she has red hairhair.
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* EvilRedhead: Artwork on Threadbare's account show she has red hair
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* ItIsDehumanizing: [[spoiler: In the flashback to Charlie's birth, Joe refers to Charlie as "it".]]
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* ItIsDehumanizing: [[spoiler: In the flashback to Charlie's birth, Joe he refers to Charlie as "it"."it", even though he's next to the hospital bed, and should've heard that the baby is a girl.]]
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* TookALevelInJerkAss: Despite the above mentioned MaliciousMisnaming, Jane in the flashback of ''Fall of the House of Pierzynski'' is much nicer than she is in the present. It's implied her husband leaving her had something to do with this.
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* TookALevelInJerkAss: TookALevelInJerkass: Despite the above mentioned MaliciousMisnaming, Jane in the flashback of ''Fall of the House of Pierzynski'' is much nicer than she is in the present. It's implied her husband leaving her had something to do with this.
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* AssholeVictim: Is subjected to an extremely one-sided KangarooCourt, where even ''her lawyer'' refuses to defend her. Given what she did to Charlie, though, no one's going to feel sorry.
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!![[spoiler: Joe Pierzynski]]
[[spoiler: Jane's husband and Charlie's birth father
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* ItIsDeHumanizing: [[spoiler: In the flashback to Charlie's birth, Joe refers to Charlie as "it".]]
* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler: Is implied to have walked out on Jane and Charlie. This might explain why Jane is the way she is.]]
* ParentalNeglect: [[spoiler: Shows absolutely no interest in Charlie, telling Jane to "Call it whatever you want."]]
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* ItIsDeHumanizing: [[spoiler: In the flashback to Charlie's birth, Joe refers to Charlie as "it".]]
* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler: Is implied to have walked out on Jane and Charlie. This might explain why Jane is the way she is.]]
* ParentalNeglect: [[spoiler: Shows absolutely no interest in Charlie, telling Jane to "Call it whatever you want."]]
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* FreudianExcuse: It's somewhat implied that her husband and [[spoiler: Charlie's birth father]] leaving is what made her who she is in the present.
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* MaliciousMisnaming: She named Charlie "Charlie", not Charlotte, because she thought it would be funny. Charlie disagreed.
* TookALevelInJerkAss: Despite the above mentioned MaliciousMisnaming, Jane in the flashback of ''Fall of the House of Pierzynski'' is much nicer than she is in the present. It's implied her husband leaving her had something to do with this.
* TookALevelInJerkAss: Despite the above mentioned MaliciousMisnaming, Jane in the flashback of ''Fall of the House of Pierzynski'' is much nicer than she is in the present. It's implied her husband leaving her had something to do with this.
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* KnightOfCerebus: Her abuse of Charlie is depicted completely seriously, and the story gets darker whenever she appears.
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* KnightOfCerebus: Her abuse of Charlie is depicted completely seriously, and the story gets darker whenever she appears. The school even has a talk with the students about child abuse when [[spoiler: she almost kills Charlie.]]
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* AxCrazy: Most of her time in the first story is dedicated to showing how violent she is towards Charlie, and her frequent MoodSwings.
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* AxCrazy: Most of her time in the first story is dedicated to showing how violent and unstable she is towards Charlie, and her frequent MoodSwings.Charlie.
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* HateSink: A violent drunk that beats her own daughter for the smallest reasons, even [[spoiler: almost killing her by force-feeding her bleach.]]
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** She, Cartman, and Kenny actually do this to Stan in ''One of the Girls'', by [[InsaneTrollLogic saying that since Stan is a "total pussy", and Wendy's a girl, that makes Stan a lesbian]].
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* AbusiveParents: Probably a nice way to describe her treatment of Charlie.
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* AbusiveParents: Probably a nice way to describe She beats Charlie so badly, the girl is left with multiple bruises on her treatment of Charlie.body. [[spoiler: When Mr. Mackey calls her to confirm the accusations, she beats Charlie so violently that she hospitalizes the poor girl. The doctors later find out that Charlie was force-fed '''bleach'''.]]
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Charlie's abusive mother
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Charlie's unstable, abusive mothermother.
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* HatedByAll: When her abuse of Charlie is exposed, practically ''everyon'' in town turns on her, and subjects her to a KangarooCourt.
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* HatedByAll: When she [[spoiler: hospitalizes Charlie]] and her abuse of Charlie is exposed, practically ''everyon'' ''everyone'' in town turns on her, and subjects her to a KangarooCourt.KangarooCourt.
* HateSink: A violent drunk that beats her own daughter for the smallest reasons, even [[spoiler: almost killing her by force-feeding her bleach.]]
* HateSink: A violent drunk that beats her own daughter for the smallest reasons, even [[spoiler: almost killing her by force-feeding her bleach.]]
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* DisproportionateRetribution: She has brutally beaten Charlie for either being late getting home or getting a concerned call from the school counselor.
* HatedByAll: When her abuse of Charlie is exposed, practically ''everyon'' in town turns on her, and subjects her to a KangarooCourt.
* HatedByAll: When her abuse of Charlie is exposed, practically ''everyon'' in town turns on her, and subjects her to a KangarooCourt.
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, has been renamed to Unconvincingly Unpopular Character and is a YMMV audience reaction.
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* CoolLoser
