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!!Ashia
Jardir's niece, turned over to Enkido in her adolescence along with her other non-dama'ting cousins and trained as a warrior.
* ActionGirl
* TheBeard: Her husband Asome is push'ting, Krasian for a gay man. Her brother Asukaji is his lover, and pushed for the two to wed so that his sister could bear the lovers children with both of their blood.
* KissingCousins: Asome is also her first cousin. Not forbidden in Krasia, but still taboo, so they likely wouldn't have been considered a viable match if not for her brother's machinations.
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!!Ashia
Jardir's niece, turned over to Enkido in her adolescence along with her other non-dama'ting cousins and trained as a warrior.
* ActionGirl
* TheBeard: Her husband Asome is push'ting, Krasian for a gay man. Her brother Asukaji is his lover, and pushed for the two to wed so that his sister could bear the lovers children with both of their blood.
* KissingCousins: Asome is also her first cousin. Not forbidden in Krasia, but still taboo, so they likely wouldn't have been considered a viable match if not for her brother's machinations.
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!!Arlen Bales AKA "The Painted Man"
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!!Arlen Bales AKA "The Painted Warded Man"
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A Krasian warleader. After getting his hands on the warded spear of the first Deliverer, he declares himself the new one and leads his men to open war on the demons (as well as everyone else in the vicinity.)
) Chapters featuring Jardir show the Spear of Kaji.
A farmer's daughter from Tibbet's Brook who is briefly promised to Arlen before he runs away. While he's gone, she endures abuse from her father, snaps on him, and is nearly put to death for it before the Warded Man returns home just in time for them to save each other. When she appears, chapters display her knife.
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First wife of Jardir, a dama'ting (priestess) who wields considerable power behind the scenes in Krasia. Her chapter image is a set of magic dice.
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First wife of Jardir, a dama'ting (priestess) who wields considerable power behind the scenes in Krasia. Her chapter image is a set of magic dice.''alagai hora'', the demon bone dice used by dama'ting to predict the future.
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A village girl taken under the wings of the local [[NeverMessWithGranny grouchy]] [[CoolOldLady herb-gatherer granny]] and ends up becoming an accomplished herb-gatherer and warder herself.
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An orphan taken in by a jongleur after the two are the only survivors of a demon attack. His chapters feature a fiddle.
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!!Inevera
First wife of Jardir, a dama'ting (priestess) who wields considerable power behind the scenes in Krasia. Her chapter image is a set of magic dice.
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!!Inevera
First wife of Jardir, a dama'ting (priestess) who wields considerable power behind the scenes in Krasia. Her chapter image is a set of magic dice.
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* {{Badass}}: He managed to permanently kill demons even before he got his ward tattoos, something that impressed even the local BloodKnight culture.
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* {{Badass}}: Even before he became the [[MessianicArchetype warrior messiah]] of his people. To be fair, one pretty much ''has'' to be one to become a leader in [[BloodKnight Krasian culture]]
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* OneHeroHoldTheWeaksauce: Eating demon flesh has altered his biology to let him hold magic within him, letting him use magic during the day.
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* EmpoweredBadassNormal: Eating demonflesh has transformed her body in the same way as it transform Arlen's, allowing her to hold and use magic during the day.
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* WhatAnIdiot: For an orphan raised in brothels and on the road by a bitter drunk, Rojer can be ''staggeringly'' naive and thoughtless.
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* WhatAnIdiot: For an orphan raised in brothels and on the road by a bitter drunk, Rojer can be ''staggeringly'' naive and thoughtless.
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* {{Pride}}: Jardir's primary flaw. Sure, he's about as decent a guy as you get out of the [[TheSpartanWay Krasian military training] and genuinely wants to save the world from the demons- but he also truly buys into his role as the [[ChosenOne Deliverer]] and its attendant OmniscientMoralityLicense.
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* {{Pride}}: Jardir's primary flaw. Sure, he's about as decent a guy as you get out of the [[TheSpartanWay Krasian military training] training]] and genuinely wants to save the world from the demons- but he also truly buys into his role as the [[ChosenOne Deliverer]] and its attendant implied OmniscientMoralityLicense.
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* AbusiveParents: While her father was loving (if weak) Leesha's mother is a piece of work. She isn't physically abusive, but she emotionally torments Leesha to a horrific extent. She never has a kind word and sees Leesha more as a tool to increase her own standing within the town.
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* AbusiveParents: While her father was loving (if weak) Leesha's mother is a piece of work. She isn't physically abusive, abusive (mostly), but she emotionally torments Leesha to a horrific extent. She never has a kind word and sees Leesha more as a tool to increase her own standing within the town.
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A Krasian warleader. After getting his hands on the warded spear of the first Deliverer, he declares himself the new one and leads his men to war open war on the demons (as well as everyone else he deems is in his way.the vicinity.)
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* MagicKnight: Due to the ancient magical spear he took from Arlen.
* {{Pride}}: Jardir's primary flaw. Sure, he's about as decent a guy as you get out of the [[TheSpartanWay Krasian military training] and genuinely wants to save the world from the demons- but he also truly buys into his role as the [[ChosenOne Deliverer]] and its attendant OmniscientMoralityLicense.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: He really wants to save humanity from the demon threat... it's just that he tries to accomplish it by subjugating, [[MasterRace purposefully raping/breeding]] and pillaging every other human culture in the process.
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* AdaptiveAbility: His wards siphon power away from the demons he kills, slowly making him more powerful over time. Eating demons might also increase this effect.
* BadassBookworm: One of the best educated people of his generation (he agreed to an arduous warding job as an apprentice just so that he would get unlimited access to the local Duke's library) and also one of the most powerful fighters, be it against demons (due to his wards) or against humans (due to [[AdaptiveAbility soaking up enough demon magic]] turning him superhuman.)
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* RedBaron: The Warded Man. Even the narrator stops using his real name after he gains it.
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* WanderingMinstrel: He is a jongleur by trade, which is a mixture of TheBard, an acrobat and a musician. He specializes in storytelling and the fiddle.
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* TheMedic: She is a herb-gatherer, the setting's term for healer, midwife, trauma-surgeon and alchemist [[spoiler:and alchemist]] rolled into one.
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* HandicappedBadass: [[LovableCoward The badass part is slightly questionable]], but his missing fingers never stopped him from becoming an acrobat and expert fiddle player.
* HidingTheHandicap: His adoptive father, Arrick makes him wear a glove with prosthetic fingers as a child because he is afraid people wouldn't take a crippled jongleur seriously.
* MagicMusic: His fiddle-music can put demons in a trance or enrage them.
* TheLoad: For most of the first book.
* HidingTheHandicap: His adoptive father, Arrick makes him wear a glove with prosthetic fingers as a child because he is afraid people wouldn't take a crippled jongleur seriously.
* MagicMusic: His fiddle-music can put demons in a trance or enrage them.
* TheLoad: For most of the first book.
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* BattleCouple: [[spoiler:With Renna.]]
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* GeniusBruiser: Arlen is one of the most dangerous men in existence, and he's no idiot. He devoted much of his childhood to learning.
* HeWhoFightsMonsters: His single-minded determination to kill corelings leads Arlen to become increasingly distant from humanity, acting in many ways like a coreling himself; ruthless, dangerous and lurking outside of the walls.
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* TheParagon: A variation: Arlen becomes a legend but dislikes the idea of being considered any kind of saviour. He's rather inspire people to take up arms than look upon him as any kind of fix-everything religious chosen one.
* RescueIntroduction: [[spoiler:How he meets Leesha and Rojer.]]
* WorthyOpponent: To Jardir, who was once his friend.
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[[folder:Arlen]]
!!Arlen Bales AKA "The Painted Man"
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!!Leesha Paper
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[[folder:Rojer]]
!!Rojer Inn
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!!Ahmann Jardir AKA "Shar'Dama Ka"
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!!Renna Tanner
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[[folder:Arlen]]
!!Arlen Bales AKA "The Painted Man"
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[[folder:Leesha]]
!!Leesha Paper
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[[folder:Rojer]]
!!Rojer Inn
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!!Ahmann Jardir AKA "Shar'Dama Ka"
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!!Renna Tanner
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