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* ConspiracyTheorist: Ox truly believes in [=UFOs=] and is convinced "the Man" is out to get him. However, there are limits to what he will believe. He makes up the [[spoiler: Dex Hex]] articles wholesale and is just as surprised as anyone when one of them proves to be correct.
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* ConspiracyTheorist: Ox truly believes in [=UFOs=] and is convinced "the Man" is out to get him. However, there are limits to what he will believe. He makes up the [[spoiler: Dex Hex]] articles wholesale and is just as surprised as anyone when one of them proves to be correct.
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* ConspiracyTheorist: Ox truly believes in [=UFOs=] and is convinced "the Man" is out to get him. However, there are limits to what he will believe, and he saves his craziest theories for his fake identity.
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* ConspiracyTheorist: Ox truly believes in [=UFOs=] and is convinced "the Man" is out to get him. However, there are limits to what he will believe, believe. He makes up the [[spoiler: Dex Hex]] articles wholesale and he saves his craziest theories for his fake identity.is just as surprised as anyone when one of them proves to be correct.
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* InventedIndividual: He created the fake [[ConspiracyTheorist conspiracy nut]] identity [[spoiler: Dex Hex]] to pull a second paycheck.Basically, he would get drunk, hammer out a slew of nonsense, and submit it to the paper as an irregular column.
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* InventedIndividual: He created the fake [[ConspiracyTheorist conspiracy nut]] identity [[spoiler: Dex Hex]] to pull a second paycheck. Basically, he would get drunk, hammer out a slew of nonsense, and submit it to the paper as an irregular column.
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* ConspiracyTheorist: Ox truly believes in UFOs and is convinced "the Man" is out to get him. However, there are limits to what he will believe, and he saves his craziest theories for his fake identity.
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* ConspiracyTheorist: Ox truly believes in UFOs [=UFOs=] and is convinced "the Man" is out to get him. However, there are limits to what he will believe, and he saves his craziest theories for his fake identity.
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* ConspiracyTheorist: Ox truly believes in UFOs and is convinced "the Man" is out to get him. However, there are limits to what he will believe, and he saves his craziest theories for his fake identity.
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* TroubledTeen: Stella is a runaway dealing with [[PubertySuperpower emerging powers]] and mysterious forces trying to capture her. She hides her fear and anger behind [[DeadpanSnarker snark]].
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* TroubledTeen: Stella is a runaway dealing with [[PubertySuperpower emerging powers]] powers]], a DarkAndTroubledPast and mysterious forces trying to capture her. She hides her fear and anger behind [[DeadpanSnarker snark]].
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* JerkassHasAPoint: For all of his unpleasantness, Banecroft is usually correct in his judgements. For example, his editorial decisions are incredibly rude but improve the paper's overall quality. He’s also an ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: For all of his unpleasantness, Banecroft is usually correct in his judgements. For example, his editorial decisions are delivered in an incredibly rude way but improve the paper's overall quality. He’s also an ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter.
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* OurWerewolvesAreDifferent: The main monster in the first book is a Were, a human who has become a supernatural, shape-shifting hunting dog. They have historically been used by the Founders to capture Folk.
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* InASingleBound: The Were can leap extraordinarily far, even to the top of a 40-story building.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Initially, Merchant is simply given super-senses and the ability to change shape, but the Beast inside him slowly warps his mind to become wrathful and animalistic. Not that old Gary was a particularly nice guy to begin with.
* OurWerewolvesAreDifferent: The main monster in the first book is a Were, a human who has become a supernatural, shape-shifting hunting dog. They can have historically been used by the Founders to capture Folk.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Initially, Merchant is simply given super-senses and the ability to change shape, but the Beast inside him slowly warps his mind to become wrathful and animalistic. Not that old Gary was a particularly nice guy to begin with.
* OurWerewolvesAreDifferent: The main monster in the first book is a Were, a human who has become a supernatural, shape-shifting hunting dog. They can have historically been used by the Founders to capture Folk.
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* SuperStrength: The Were can swat aside a desk with a flick of its wrist. It can easily overcome any mundane weapon.
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* ByTheBookCop: Sturgess is known as a bit of a hardass, but he never takes shortcuts when investigating and holds himself to the same standards as his colleagues. Even when he loses control and threatens Ox, he refuses to let Wilkerson cover for him, preferring instead to take the full blame and notifying Ox of possible legal recourse. When suspended, however, he’s slightly more willing to bend the rules.
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* TurnInYourBadge: His dogged investigation ruffles some feathers and gets him suspended from the force. Granted, the stress of the investigation and his [[PuppeteerParasite migraines]] cause him to behave erratically.
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!!Reginald "Reggie" Fairfax II
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!!Reginald "Reggie" Fairfax IIIII
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* SilkHidingSteel: Mrs. Harnforth is a proper, refined lady with a strong backbone, able to out-glare Banecroft of all people!
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* PuppeteerParasite: He has a parapsyche in his head. It’s normally a passive passenger, but it can control his body at will.
* TurnInYourBadge: His dogged investigation ruffles some feathers and gets him suspended from the force. Granted, the stress of the investigation and his [[PuppeteerParasite migraines]] cause him to behave erratically.
* TurnInYourBadge: His dogged investigation ruffles some feathers and gets him suspended from the force. Granted, the stress of the investigation and his [[PuppeteerParasite migraines]] cause him to behave erratically.
