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* StatuesqueStunner: Word of God states Sabran is 6’1” [[https://sshannonauthor.tumblr.com/post/187145177203/how-much-taller-is-sabran-than-eadaz]].
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* StatuesqueStunner: Word of God states Sabran is 6’1” 6’1”(185.42cm) [[https://sshannonauthor.tumblr.com/post/187145177203/how-much-taller-is-sabran-than-eadaz]].
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* BrokenAce: Harbors a lot of insecurity despite being among the best in her class of dragon riders.
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* BrokenAce: Harbors a lot of insecurity despite being among the best incredibly skilled in her class of dragon riders.almost everything she does.
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* PlatonicLifePartners: It’s unclear if Tane’s feelings for Susa ever went beyond deep childhood friendship.
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* PlatonicLifePartners: It’s unclear [[AmbiguouslyGay unclear]] if Tane’s feelings for Susa ever went beyond deep childhood friendship.
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* TragicStillbirth: After her stomach is pierced by the white dragon.
* TraumaCongaLine: Dead mother, disappeared father, pressured into marriage, [[spoiler: miscarriage]], the list goes on.
* TraumaCongaLine: Dead mother, disappeared father, pressured into marriage, [[spoiler: miscarriage]], the list goes on.
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*BrokenAce: Harbors a lot of insecurity despite being among the best in her class of dragon riders.
*AcheyScars: The pain in her side gets progressively worse as the earthquakes increase.
*AcheyScars: The pain in her side gets progressively worse as the earthquakes increase.
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* BadAssNormal: Has no innate supernatural powers. [[note]]At first.[[/note]]
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* TheFettered:
*MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Upon realizing her actions led to [[spoiler: the capture of Nayimathun and the death of Susa]].
%%*NiceJobBreakingItHero: Tane’s attempt to keep the Water Trials from being canceled sets several
*PlatonicLifePartners: It’s unclear if Tane’s feelings for Susa ever went beyond deep childhood friendship.
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*PlatonicLifePartners: It’s unclear if Tane’s feelings for Susa ever went beyond deep childhood friendship.
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** Responds to Turosa’s petty insults with polite indifference.
** She spends the night before her final trials practicing instead of going into town with the rest of her cohort.
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%%*TookALevelInBadass: After eating from the Orange Tree.
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*TheAce: Smart, athletic, and a powerful mage.
*AmazonianBeauty: Ead is 5’10” (177.8 cm), strong, and attractive.
*AssassinOutclassin: Her magic makes it easier to thwart assassins sent for Sabran.
*AmazonianBeauty: Ead is 5’10” (177.8 cm), strong, and attractive.
*AssassinOutclassin: Her magic makes it easier to thwart assassins sent for Sabran.
*HatesWearingDresses: Justified in that they are impractical for fighting.
*LadyAndKnight: The knight to Sabran’s Lady.
*LoveEpiphany: It takes being kissed to realize her feelings for Sabran.
*LadyAndKnight: The knight to Sabran’s Lady.
*LoveEpiphany: It takes being kissed to realize her feelings for Sabran.
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*ObliviousToLove: Doesn't understand why Sabran has taken a sudden interest in
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%%*ParentalFavoritism: one clue that [[spoiler:Chassar]] is Ead’s father.
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*SuperSenses: A passive effect of siden magic granted by the Orange Tree.
*UnwillinglyGirlyTomboy: Ead is not a fan of the restrictive Inyish styles.
-->“Oh, and Sabran, I will not be wearing court fashions any longer. I’ve had more than enough of trying to protect you in a petticoat.”
%%*BigDamnHeroes: Is the one to finally vanquish the Nameless One.
*UnwillinglyGirlyTomboy: Ead is not a fan of the restrictive Inyish styles.
-->“Oh, and Sabran, I will not be wearing court fashions any longer. I’ve had more than enough of trying to protect you in a petticoat.”
%%*BigDamnHeroes: Is the one to finally vanquish the Nameless One.
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Heir to the northern province of Leas in Inys and brother of Margret. Loth is one of Sabran’s closet friends.
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*BigBrotherInstinct: For Sabran and, more literally, for his sister, Meg.
*BlueBlood: Heir apparent to the province of the Leas and the estate of Goldenbirch.
*BlueBlood: Heir apparent to the province of the Leas and the estate of Goldenbirch.
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* [[NiceToTheWaiter Nice To The Help]]: Loth befriends Ead who is below him in rank.
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* [[NiceToTheWaiter Nice To The Help]]: Loth befriends Ead who is below him in rank.Ead, a chambermaid.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Sent to Yscalin by Combe so that he’s not in the way of Sabran's marriage prospects.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Sent to Yscalin [[{{Mordor}} Yscalin]] by Combe so that he’s not in the way of Sabran's marriage prospects.prospects.
*TheStraightMan: Loth is far more sober about being sent away than Kit, who chooses to see it as an adventure.
*SuicideMission: Willingly infects himself with the Draconic Plague in order to escape Yscalin, knowing there’s a high chance he will die before he can complete his mission.
*TheStraightMan: Loth is far more sober about being sent away than Kit, who chooses to see it as an adventure.
*SuicideMission: Willingly infects himself with the Draconic Plague in order to escape Yscalin, knowing there’s a high chance he will die before he can complete his mission.
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* ButtMonkey: To [[{{PIRATE}} sailors]] aboard the ''Pursuit''.
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*AssholeVictim: Niclays doesn’t always deserve his fates but it can be hard to feel sorry for him considering how his selfish actions have made life harder for everyone else.
* ButtMonkey: To[[{{PIRATE}} sailors]] [[{{PIRATES}} privateers]] aboard the ''Pursuit''.
* ButtMonkey: To
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* DescentIntoAddiction: After Jannart’s death, Niclays lost himself to gambling and alcohol.
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* DescentIntoAddiction: After Jannart’s death, Niclays lost loses himself to gambling and alcohol.
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* ForScience: Wants to create an elixir of immortality. Not so he can drink it, but to prove that he can.
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* ForScience: Wants to create an elixir of immortality. Not so he can drink it, but to prove that he can.can make it.
*GrumpyOldMan: Justified in that he has been banished to a tiny island across the world for eight years.
*GrumpyOldMan: Justified in that he has been banished to a tiny island across the world for eight years.
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A small island nation located north of the western continent. Inys is ruled by a matrilineal line of monarchs that trace their ancestry to the founder of the religion of Virtudom.
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A small island nation located north of the western continent. Inys is ruled by a matrilineal line of monarchs that trace their ancestry to the founder of the religion of Virtudom.
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*{{Matriarchy}}: Inys’ monarchy is ruled by a matrilineal line of queens.
The thirty-sixth queen of Inys.
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* BadassBoast: An epic one to [[TheDragon Freydel]]:
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*AnxietyDreams: Has recurring nightmares about a mysterious bower and the Nameless One eating her child.
*AssassinationAttempt: The target of ''several''.
* BadassBoast: An epic one to [[TheDragonFreydel]]:Fyredel]]:
*AssassinationAttempt: The target of ''several''.
* BadassBoast: An epic one to [[TheDragon
*BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted. After being locked in her room for weeks, she looks just as unkempt and emaciated as one might expect.
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* IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical.
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*HonorBeforeReason: Walks out to meet [[TheDragon Fyredel]] without stopping to consider what her death would mean for her country. Almost a [[TooDumbToLive Too Dumb To Live]] moment had it not been for [[spoiler:Ead’s warding]].
*IdenticalGranddaughter: IdenticalGranddaughter / StrongFamilyResemblance: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical.
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* ImmortalitySeeker: Fear or marriage and childbirth leads her to hire Niclays Roos to create an [[ElixirOfLife Elixir of Immortality]].
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* ImmortalitySeeker: Fear or of marriage and childbirth leads her to hire Niclays Roos to create an [[ElixirOfLife Elixir of Immortality]].
*LipstickLesbian: It’s unclear how much of this is Sabran’s personal style or simply conforming to societal standards of what a monarch should look like, but it seems probable that if she wanted to dress differently, she could.
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* RoyalWe: Sabran uses this when speaking publicly.
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%%*PleaseWakeUp: To Ead after she is poisoned. --> '''Sabran:''' “Don’t leave me here alone.”
*PostVictoryCollapse: After surviving her encounter with Fyredel, she promptly faints.
*RavenHairIvorySkin: Sabran has dark hair, green eyes, and pale skin.
* RoyalWe:Sabran uses Uses this when speaking publicly.publicly as she speaks both for herself and her ancestor, the Saint.
*PostVictoryCollapse: After surviving her encounter with Fyredel, she promptly faints.
*RavenHairIvorySkin: Sabran has dark hair, green eyes, and pale skin.
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*StatuesqueStunner: Word of God states Sabran is 6’1” [[https://sshannonauthor.tumblr.com/post/187145177203/how-much-taller-is-sabran-than-eadaz]].
*TragicStillbirth: After her stomach is pierced by the white dragon.
*TragicStillbirth: After her stomach is pierced by the white dragon.
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SuddenlySuitableSuitor: Sabran raises Margret’s crush Thairan Lintley to the title of Viscount, making him of sufficient rank marry her.
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*SuddenlySuitableSuitor: Sabran raises Margret’s crush Thairan Lintley to the title of Viscount, making him of sufficient rank marry
*CourtlyLove: With Lintley.
*BlueBlood: As the second child, it is expected that she will stay at court while her bother rules the province and estate.
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%%* TheBard: His love for writing poetry puts him at odds with his father.
%%*GuiltByAssociation: Or rather, punishment by association. Kit is dragged into sharing Loth’s mission simply because the two are friends.
* RedShirt: Secondary character accompanies main character into enemy territory. [[note]]guess who doesn’t come back.[[/note]]
%%*GuiltByAssociation: Or rather, punishment by association. Kit is dragged into sharing Loth’s mission simply because the two are friends.
* RedShirt: Secondary character accompanies main character into enemy territory. [[note]]guess who doesn’t come back.[[/note]]
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%%* RedShirt: Secondary character accompanies main character into enemy territory. [[note]]guess who doesn’t come back.[[/note]]
%%*SacrificialLamb: Kit, for Loth.
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[[folder:Kalyba]]
*FemmeFatale: Kalyba appears as a beautiful woman and is not above acting seductive to get what she wants.
*HotWitch: A practitioner of the dark arts and femme fatale to boot.
*OffingTheOffspring: Tries to kill her descendant.
*ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: At least 1,000, having gained immortality from the hawthorn tree.
*ShapeshifterDefaultForm: Kalyba’s true form is identical to [[spoiler: Sabran IX]].
%%*SacrificialLamb: Kit, for Loth.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Kalyba]]
*FemmeFatale: Kalyba appears as a beautiful woman and is not above acting seductive to get what she wants.
*HotWitch: A practitioner of the dark arts and femme fatale to boot.
*OffingTheOffspring: Tries to kill her descendant.
*ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: At least 1,000, having gained immortality from the hawthorn tree.
*ShapeshifterDefaultForm: Kalyba’s true form is identical to [[spoiler: Sabran IX]].
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Genuinely believes that in order to defeat the Nameless One, Virtudom must ally itself with the East,[[note]]she’s not wrong[[/note]] but is too naive to realize how dangerous her methods are.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Genuinely believes that that, in order to defeat the Nameless One, Virtudom must ally itself with the East,[[note]]she’s not wrong[[/note]] East but is too naive to realize how dangerous her methods are.are.
*BurnTheWitch: Threatens to do this to Ead.
*BurnTheWitch: Threatens to do this to Ead.
%%*TogetherInDeath: With Sulyard.
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* ReligionOfEvil: After Freydel awakens and possesses King Sigoso, the nation abandons Virtudom to worship the [[BigBad Nameless One]].
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*{{Mordor}}: Becomes this after it’s taken over by Frydel and the Draconic Army. Complete with lava flows.
* ReligionOfEvil: AfterFreydel Fyredel awakens and possesses King Sigoso, the nation abandons Virtudom to worship the [[BigBad Nameless One]].One]].
* ReligionOfEvil: After
*BodyHorror: Apparently being Flesh King also emaciates the body, turns one’s eyes grey, red lines appear on the hands, and it feels like burning.
*BasiliskAndCockatrice: Some of the lesser species of western dragons.
*WeakenedByTheLight: Wyverns are repelled by Sterren magic.
*WeakenedByTheLight: Wyverns are repelled by Sterren magic.
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* TheDragon: Literally and figuratively. Freydel is second only to the Nameless One in power and authority.
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* TheDragon: Literally and figuratively.
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*TheDreaded: He’s been gone for a thousand years and is still feared by reputation alone.
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* AltarDiplomacy: Arranges a marriage with [[spoiler:Aubrecht II]] in order to secure a stronger alliance with Mentendon.
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* AltarDiplomacy: Arranges a marriage with [[spoiler:Aubrecht II]] in order to secure a stronger alliance with Mentendon.for Inys.
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* IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical to the last.
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* IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical to the last.identical.
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Frequently seen attending to matters of state and making important diplomatic decisions.
* TraumaCongaLine: The entire book is one cold harsh dose of reality after another.
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Frequently seen attending Actively attends to matters of state and making makes important diplomatic decisions.
* TraumaCongaLine:The entire book is one cold harsh dose of reality after another.Dead mother, disappeared father, pressured into marriage, [[spoiler: miscarriage]], the list goes on.
* TraumaCongaLine:
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* TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask: The sole ruler of Inys, Sabran is never anything less than composed in public. Only her [[LadyInWaiting Ladies-in-Waiting]] get so see the person beneath the title.
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* TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask: The sole ruler of Inys, Sabran is never anything less than composed in public. Only her [[LadyInWaiting Ladies-in-Waiting]] get so see the person beneath the title.crown.
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* AltarTheSpeed:
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--> “I was too fortunate. All my life, the great Kwiriki was too good to me. Every day, I have waited for his favor to disappear. When the outsider came, I knew it was time.’’
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*TheAtoner: Doesn’t try to defend her actions when they are exposed and willingly suffers the consequences.
*BadAssNormal: Has no innate supernatural powers.
*BadassPacifist: Trained in various weapons for combat but abhors lethal force. Unless you [[BerserkButton harm a dragon]].
*DespairEventHorizon: After losing her best friend and her dragon.
*[[{{Determinator}} Determinator]]: Will keep fighting regardless of odds or injury.
** Willingly takes a painful blow to lure her opponent in during a fight.
** Part of training to be a dragon rider is being severely beaten by soldiers to ensure they can endure torture without giving up information.
** Defends herself against a wyvern attack when she is interrupted ''mid-surgery'' and still under partial anesthesia, then sews herself back up.
*TheFettered:
*IDidWhatIHadToDo: She’s willing to break her [[ThouShaltNotKill Thou Shalt Not Kill]] policy in order to rescue Nayimathun.
*TheStoic: Even her dragon thinks she should lighten up.
** Responds to Turosa’s petty insults with polite indifference.
** She spends the night before her final trials practicing instead of going into town with the rest of her cohort.
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*TheAtoner: Doesn’t try to defend her actions when they are exposed and willingly suffers the consequences.
*BadAssNormal: Has no innate supernatural powers.
*BadassPacifist: Trained in various weapons for combat but abhors lethal force. Unless you [[BerserkButton harm a dragon]].
*DespairEventHorizon: After losing her best friend and her dragon.
*[[{{Determinator}} Determinator]]: Will keep fighting regardless of odds or injury.
** Willingly takes a painful blow to lure her opponent in during a fight.
** Part of training to be a dragon rider is being severely beaten by soldiers to ensure they can endure torture without giving up information.
** Defends herself against a wyvern attack when she is interrupted ''mid-surgery'' and still under partial anesthesia, then sews herself back up.
*TheFettered:
*IDidWhatIHadToDo: She’s willing to break her [[ThouShaltNotKill Thou Shalt Not Kill]] policy in order to rescue Nayimathun.
*TheStoic: Even her dragon thinks she should lighten up.
** Responds to Turosa’s petty insults with polite indifference.
** She spends the night before her final trials practicing instead of going into town with the rest of her cohort.
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[[folder:Ead Duryan / Eadaz du Zãla uq-Nãra]]
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* BodyguardCrush: Develops feelings for Sabran, who she was sent by the Priory to protect.
* DeadpanSnarker: Especially with Sabran.
* DeadpanSnarker: Especially with Sabran.
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*AwesomeMcCoolName: Eadaz du Zãla uq-Nãra.
*BodyguardCrush: Develops feelings for Sabran, who she was sent by the Priory to protect.
*ExactWords: Promises Sabran she will stay with her "as long as she is able".
*MagicKnight: Equally skilled in swords and sorcery.
%%*ObliviousToLove: Doesn't understand why Sabran has taken a sudden interest in her.
*OnlySaneMan: How Ead feels in the Inys court.
%%*ParentalFavoritism: one clue that [[spoiler:Chassar]] is Ead’s father.
*PlayingWithFire: She wields a fire-type magic that is gained by eating the fruit of a [[MiracleFood magical orange tree]].
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Heir to the northern province of Leas in Inys and brother of Margret. Loth is Sabran’s closet friend.
* PlatonicLifePartners: With Sabran. Their closeness is what gets him sent to Yscalin despite the fact that there is nothing romantic between them.
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Heir to the northern province of Leas in Inys and brother of Margret. Loth is one of Sabran’s closet friend.
* PlatonicLifePartners:friends.
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*HonorBeforeReason: Given several opportunities to choose the safer path, Loth insists on doing the right thing no matter how dangerous.
*[[NiceToTheWaiter Nice To The Help]]: Loth befriends Ead who is below him in rank.
*PlatonicLifePartners: With Sabran. Their closeness is what gets him sent to Yscalin despite the fact that there is nothing romantic between them.
*ReassignedToAntarctica: Sent to Yscalin by Combe so that he’s not in the way of Sabran's marriage prospects.
* PlatonicLifePartners:
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*HonorBeforeReason: Given several opportunities to choose the safer path, Loth insists on doing the right thing no matter how dangerous.
*[[NiceToTheWaiter Nice To The Help]]: Loth befriends Ead who is below him in rank.
*PlatonicLifePartners: With Sabran. Their closeness is what gets him sent to Yscalin despite the fact that there is nothing romantic between them.
*ReassignedToAntarctica: Sent to Yscalin by Combe so that he’s not in the way of Sabran's marriage prospects.
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* ButtMonkey: To the [[{{PIRATE}} sailors]] aboard the ''Pursuit''.
* DescentIntoAddiction: After Jannart’s death, Niclays lost himself to gambling and alcohol.
* TheLostLenore: Jannart, Niclays dead lover, and Truyde’s grandfather, who was betrothed at birth to a noblewoman. They carried on a secret affair but Jannart died before they could steal away together.
* TraumaCongaLine: Mostly self-inflicted but no less traumatic.
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!Queendom of Inys
A small island nation located north of the western continent. Inys is ruled by a matrilineal line of monarchs that trace their ancestry to the founder of the religion of Virtudom.
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: England
[[folder:Sabran IX]]
->’’For the first time, [Ead] saw Sabran Berethnet for who she was beneath the mask: a young and fragile woman who carried a thousand-year legacy on her shoulders. A queen whose power was absolute only so long as she could produce a daughter.’’
* DescentIntoAddiction: After Jannart’s death, Niclays lost himself to gambling and alcohol.
* TheLostLenore: Jannart, Niclays dead lover, and Truyde’s grandfather, who was betrothed at birth to a noblewoman. They carried on a secret affair but Jannart died before they could steal away together.
* TraumaCongaLine: Mostly self-inflicted but no less traumatic.
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!Queendom of Inys
A small island nation located north of the western continent. Inys is ruled by a matrilineal line of monarchs that trace their ancestry to the founder of the religion of Virtudom.
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: England
[[folder:Sabran IX]]
->’’For the first time, [Ead] saw Sabran Berethnet for who she was beneath the mask: a young and fragile woman who carried a thousand-year legacy on her shoulders. A queen whose power was absolute only so long as she could produce a daughter.’’
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* AltarDiplomacy: Arranges her marriage to [[spoiler:Aubrecht II]] in order to secure a stronger alliance for Inys.
* BadassBoast: A pretty epic one to [[TheDragon Freydel]]:
* BadassBoast: A pretty epic one to [[TheDragon Freydel]]:
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**and the palanquin carriers.
**and the soldiers in Orisima.
*DescentIntoAddiction: After Jannart’s death, Niclays lost himself to gambling and alcohol.
*DisproportionateRetribution: Sees his exile as this. Sabran later admits it was excessive.
*ForScience: Wants to create an elixir of immortality. Not so he can drink it, but to prove that he can.
*KarmaHoudini: Downplayed. Although he doesn’t escape unscathed, his fate is relatively benign compared to how much trouble he causes everyone else.
*TheLostLenore: Jannart, Niclays dead lover, and Truyde’s grandfather, who was betrothed at birth to a noblewoman. They carried on a secret affair but Jannart died before they could steal away together.
*TraumaCongaLine: Mostly self-inflicted but no less traumatic.
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!Queendom of Inys
A small island nation located north of the western continent. Inys is ruled by a matrilineal line of monarchs that trace their ancestry to the founder of the religion of Virtudom.
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*BanOnMagic: Especially fire magic which is heavily associated with wyrms.
*FantasyCounterpartCulture: England
[[folder:Sabran IX]]
->’’For the first time, [Ead] saw Sabran Berethnet for who she was beneath the mask: a young and fragile woman who carried a thousand-year legacy on her shoulders. A queen whose power was absolute only so long as she could produce a daughter.’’
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*AltarDiplomacy: Arranges a marriage with [[spoiler:Aubrecht II]] in order to secure a stronger alliance with Mentendon.
*AltarTheSpeed:
* BadassBoast:
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* CharacterDevelopment: Arguably the most out of all the characters. Sabran starts out a self righteous religious zealot and slowly has every piece of her world view and identity called into question.
* DefrostingIceQueen: Toward Ead.
* DespairEventHorizon: After the loss of [[spoiler:her daughter]].
* HeirClubForMen: A [[GenderInvertedTrope rare female example]]. Although it’s implied that a male heir wouldn’t ruin anything, in 36 generations, it’s never happened.
* HeroicBastard: Unconfirmed. Her mother is rumored to have had an affair with [[{{Privateer}} Gian Harlowe]] but it is unclear if Sabran is his child or not.
* IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical to the last. Turns out to be [[spoiler: no coincidence.]]
* ImmortalitySeeker: Fear or marriage and childbirth leads her to hire Niclays Roos to create an [[ElixirOfLife Elixir of Immortality]].
* KingBobTheNth: Out of the 36 queens of Inys, there are only six names among them.[[note]]Glorian, Sabran, Jillian, Rosarian, Carnelian, and Marian[[/note]] This leads to high regnal numbers, such as Sabran IX.
* TheMagnificent: Her royal epithet.
* MandatoryMotherhood: Her purpose as Queen of Inys is to secure the royal line by giving birth to a daughter.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Frequently seen attending to matters of state and making important diplomatic decisions.
* TraumaCongaLine: The entire book is one cold harsh dose of reality after another.
* DefrostingIceQueen: Toward Ead.
* DespairEventHorizon: After the loss of [[spoiler:her daughter]].
* HeirClubForMen: A [[GenderInvertedTrope rare female example]]. Although it’s implied that a male heir wouldn’t ruin anything, in 36 generations, it’s never happened.
* HeroicBastard: Unconfirmed. Her mother is rumored to have had an affair with [[{{Privateer}} Gian Harlowe]] but it is unclear if Sabran is his child or not.
* IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical to the last. Turns out to be [[spoiler: no coincidence.]]
* ImmortalitySeeker: Fear or marriage and childbirth leads her to hire Niclays Roos to create an [[ElixirOfLife Elixir of Immortality]].
* KingBobTheNth: Out of the 36 queens of Inys, there are only six names among them.[[note]]Glorian, Sabran, Jillian, Rosarian, Carnelian, and Marian[[/note]] This leads to high regnal numbers, such as Sabran IX.
* TheMagnificent: Her royal epithet.
* MandatoryMotherhood: Her purpose as Queen of Inys is to secure the royal line by giving birth to a daughter.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Frequently seen attending to matters of state and making important diplomatic decisions.
* TraumaCongaLine: The entire book is one cold harsh dose of reality after another.
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* DefrostingIceQueen: Toward Ead.
* DespairEventHorizon: After the loss of [[spoiler:her daughter]].
* HeirClubForMen: A [[GenderInvertedTrope rare female example]]. Although it’s implied that a male heir wouldn’t ruin anything, in 36 generations, it’s never happened.
* HeroicBastard: Unconfirmed. Her mother is rumored to have had an affair with [[{{Privateer}} Gian Harlowe]] but it is unclear if Sabran is his child or not.
* IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical to the last. Turns out to be [[spoiler: no coincidence.]]
* ImmortalitySeeker: Fear or marriage and childbirth leads her to hire Niclays Roos to create an [[ElixirOfLife Elixir of Immortality]].
* KingBobTheNth: Out of the 36 queens of Inys, there are only six names among them.[[note]]Glorian, Sabran, Jillian, Rosarian, Carnelian, and Marian[[/note]] This leads to high regnal numbers, such as Sabran IX.
* TheMagnificent: Her royal epithet.
* MandatoryMotherhood: Her purpose as Queen of Inys is to secure the royal line by giving birth to a daughter.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Frequently seen attending to matters of state and making important diplomatic decisions.
* TraumaCongaLine: The entire book is one cold harsh dose of reality after another.
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*DefrostingIceQueen: Toward Ead.
*DespairEventHorizon: After the loss of [[spoiler:her daughter]], she briefly contemplates suicide. Ead snaps her out of it.
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*HeirClubForMen: A [[GenderInvertedTrope rare female example]], she’s expected to birth a daughter for the queendom.
*HeroicBastard: Unconfirmed. Her mother is rumored to have had an affair with [[{{Privateer}} Gian Harlowe]] but it is unclear if Sabran is his child or not.
*IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical to the last.
*ILoveYouBecauseICantControlYou: Falls for Ead precisely because Ead doesn’t tell her what she wants to hear.
*ImmortalitySeeker: Fear or marriage and childbirth leads her to hire Niclays Roos to create an [[ElixirOfLife Elixir of Immortality]].
*UnwantedSpouse: KingBobTheNth: Out of the 36 queens of Inys, there are only six names among them.[[note]]Glorian, Sabran, Jillian, Rosarian, Carnelian, and Marian[[/note]] This leads to high regnal numbers, such as Sabran IX.
*TheMagnificent: Her royal epithet.
*MandatoryMotherhood: Her purpose as Queen of Inys is to secure the royal line by giving birth to a daughter.
*MissingMom: Her mother was poisoned with [[CruelAndUnusualDeath basilisk venom]] when she was 14.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Frequently seen attending to matters of state and making important diplomatic decisions.
*TraumaCongaLine: The entire book is one cold harsh dose of reality after another.
*UnwantedSpouse: Doesn’t want a political marriage despite knowing she will eventually have to in order to fulfill her [[MandatoryMotherhood MandatoryMotherhood]].Motherhood]].
*TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask: The sole ruler of Inys, Sabran is never anything less than composed in public. Only her [[LadyInWaiting Ladies-in-Waiting]] get so see the person beneath the title.
*DefrostingIceQueen: Toward Ead.
*DespairEventHorizon: After the loss of [[spoiler:her daughter]], she briefly contemplates suicide. Ead snaps her out of it.
%%*FreudianExcuse: Given her upbringing
*HeirClubForMen: A [[GenderInvertedTrope rare female example]], she’s expected to birth a daughter for the queendom.
*HeroicBastard: Unconfirmed. Her mother is rumored to have had an affair with [[{{Privateer}} Gian Harlowe]] but it is unclear if Sabran is his child or not.
*IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical to the last.
*ILoveYouBecauseICantControlYou: Falls for Ead precisely because Ead doesn’t tell her what she wants to hear.
*ImmortalitySeeker: Fear or marriage and childbirth leads her to hire Niclays Roos to create an [[ElixirOfLife Elixir of Immortality]].
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*TheMagnificent: Her royal epithet.
*MandatoryMotherhood: Her purpose as Queen of Inys is to secure the royal line by giving birth to a daughter.
*MissingMom: Her mother was poisoned with [[CruelAndUnusualDeath basilisk venom]] when she was 14.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Frequently seen attending to matters of state and making important diplomatic decisions.
*TraumaCongaLine: The entire book is one cold harsh dose of reality after another.
*UnwantedSpouse: Doesn’t want a political marriage despite knowing she will eventually have to in order to fulfill her [[MandatoryMotherhood Mandatory
*TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask: The sole ruler of Inys, Sabran is never anything less than composed in public. Only her [[LadyInWaiting Ladies-in-Waiting]] get so see the person beneath the title.
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* PluckyComicRelief: The optimistic sidekick and [[WiseGuy Wise Guy]] to Loth’s [[StraightMan Straight Man]].
* GuiltByAssociation: Gets dragged into sharing Loth’s mission simply because the two are friends.
* RedShirt: Secondary character accompanies main character into enemy territory. [[note]]guess who doesn’t come back.[[/note]]
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* DeadpanSnarker: Especially with Sabran.
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* ButtMonkey: To the [[{{PIRATE}} sailors]] aboard the ''Pursuit''.
* DescentIntoAddiction: After Jannart’s death, Niclays lost himself to gambling and alcohol.
* TheLostLenore: Jannart, Niclays dead lover, and Truyde’s grandfather, who was betrothed at birth to a noblewoman. They carried on a secret affair but Jannart died before they could steal away together.
* TraumaCongaLine: Mostly self-inflicted but no less traumatic.
* DescentIntoAddiction: After Jannart’s death, Niclays lost himself to gambling and alcohol.
* TheLostLenore: Jannart, Niclays dead lover, and Truyde’s grandfather, who was betrothed at birth to a noblewoman. They carried on a secret affair but Jannart died before they could steal away together.
* TraumaCongaLine: Mostly self-inflicted but no less traumatic.
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* AltarDiplomacy: Arranges her marriage to [[spoiler:Aubrecht II]] in order to secure a stronger alliance for Inys.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Arguably the most out of all the characters. Sabran starts out a self righteous religious zealot and slowly has every piece of her world view and identity called into question.
* DefrostingIceQueen: Toward Ead.
* DespairEventHorizon: After the loss of [[spoiler:her daughter]].
* HeirClubForMen: A [[GenderInvertedTrope rare female example]]. Although it’s implied that a male heir wouldn’t ruin anything, in 36 generations, it’s never happened.
* HeroicBastard: Unconfirmed. Her mother is rumored to have had an affair with [[{{Privateer}} Gian Harlowe]] but it is unclear if Sabran is his child or not.
* IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical to the last. Turns out to be [[spoiler: no coincidence.]]
* DefrostingIceQueen: Toward Ead.
* DespairEventHorizon: After the loss of [[spoiler:her daughter]].
* HeirClubForMen: A [[GenderInvertedTrope rare female example]]. Although it’s implied that a male heir wouldn’t ruin anything, in 36 generations, it’s never happened.
* HeroicBastard: Unconfirmed. Her mother is rumored to have had an affair with [[{{Privateer}} Gian Harlowe]] but it is unclear if Sabran is his child or not.
* IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical to the last. Turns out to be [[spoiler: no coincidence.]]
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* TheMagnificent: Her royal epithet.
* MandatoryMotherhood: Her purpose as Queen of Inys is to secure the royal line by giving birth to a daughter.
* MandatoryMotherhood: Her purpose as Queen of Inys is to secure the royal line by giving birth to a daughter.
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* TraumaCongaLine: The entire book is one cold harsh dose of reality after another. [[spoiler: “Everything I am is a lie.”]]
* UnwantedSpouse: Doesn’t want a political marriage despite knowing she will eventually have to in order to fulfill her [[MandatoryMotherhood Mandatory Motherhood]].
* UnwantedSpouse: Doesn’t want a political marriage despite knowing she will eventually have to in order to fulfill her [[MandatoryMotherhood Mandatory Motherhood]].
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*UnwantedSpouse: Doesn’t want a political marriage despite knowing she will eventually have to in order to fulfill her [[MandatoryMotherhood Mandatory Motherhood]].
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* RedShirt: Secondary character accompanies main character into enemy territory. [[note]]guess who doesn’t come back.[[/note]]
* PluckyComicRelief: The optimistic sidekick and [[WiseGuy Wise Guy]] to Loth’s [[StraightMan Straight Man]].
* RedShirt: Secondary character accompanies main character into enemy territory. [[note]]guess who doesn’t come back.[[/note]]
* PluckyComicRelief: The optimistic sidekick and [[WiseGuy Wise Guy]] to Loth’s [[StraightMan Straight Man]].
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Genuinely believes that in order to defeat the Nameless One, Virtudom must [[spoiler: ally itself with the East]],[[note]]she’s not wrong[[/note]] but is too naive to realize how dangerous her methods are.
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* IfICantHaveYou: Conspired with The Cupbearer to kill [[spoiler:Rosarian IV]] because she rebuffed his marriage proposal.
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* BigBad: Satan in the form of a giant black dragon.
* SealedEvilInACan: Banished to the bottom of the ocean for a thousand years [[spoiler:by Cleolind and Neporo]].
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* ButtMonkey: To the [[{{PIRATE}} sailors]] aboard the ‘Pursuit’.
* DescentIntoAddiction: After Jannart’s death, Niclays lost himself to gambling and alcohol.
* TheLostLenore: Jannart, Niclays dead lover, and Truyde’s grandfather, who was betrothed at birth to a noblewoman. They carried on a secret affair but Jannart died before they could steal away together.
* TraumaCongaLine: Mostly self-inflicted but no less traumatic.
* DescentIntoAddiction: After Jannart’s death, Niclays lost himself to gambling and alcohol.
* TheLostLenore: Jannart, Niclays dead lover, and Truyde’s grandfather, who was betrothed at birth to a noblewoman. They carried on a secret affair but Jannart died before they could steal away together.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Arguably the most out of all the characters. Sabran starts out a self righteous religious zealot and slowly has every piece of her world view and identity called into question.
* DefrostingIceQueen: Toward Ead.
* DespairEventHorizon: After the loss of [[spoiler:her daughter]].
* HeirClubForMen: A rare [[GenderInvertedTrope female example]]. Although it’s implied that a male heir wouldn’t ruin anything, in 36 generations, it’s never happened.
* HeroicBastard: Unconfirmed. Her mother is rumored to have had an affair with [[{{Privateer}} Gian Harlowe]] but it is unclear if Sabran is his child or not.
* IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical to the last. Turns out to be [[spoiler: no coincidence.]]
* DefrostingIceQueen: Toward Ead.
* DespairEventHorizon: After the loss of [[spoiler:her daughter]].
* HeirClubForMen: A rare [[GenderInvertedTrope female example]]. Although it’s implied that a male heir wouldn’t ruin anything, in 36 generations, it’s never happened.
* HeroicBastard: Unconfirmed. Her mother is rumored to have had an affair with [[{{Privateer}} Gian Harlowe]] but it is unclear if Sabran is his child or not.
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* TheMagnificent: Her royal epithet.
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* TraumaCongaLine: The entire book is one cold harsh dose of reality after another. [[spoiler: “Everything I am is a lie.”]]
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* RedShirt: Secondary character accompanies main character into enemy territory. [[note]]guess who doesn’t come back[[/note]]
* PluckyComicRelief: The optimistic sidekick and [[WiseGuy Wise Guy]] to Loth’s [[StraightMan Straight Man]].
* RedShirt: Secondary character accompanies main character into enemy territory. [[note]]guess who doesn’t come back[[/note]]
* PluckyComicRelief: The optimistic sidekick and [[WiseGuy Wise Guy]] to Loth’s [[StraightMan Straight Man]].
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* HeroicBastard: Unconfirmed. Her mother is rumored to have had an affair with [[{{Privateer}} Gian Harlowe]] but it is unclear if Sabran is his child or not.
* IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical to the last. Turns out to be [[spoiler: no coincidence.]]
* DefrostingIceQueen: Toward Ead.
* HeroicBastard: Unconfirmed. Her mother is rumored to have had an affair with [[{{Privateer}} Gian Harlowe]] but it is unclear if Sabran is his child or not.
* IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical to the last. Turns out to be [[spoiler: no coincidence.]]
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*HeroicBastard: Unconfirmed. Her mother is rumored to have had an affair with [[{{Privateer}} Gian Harlowe]] but it is unclear if Sabran is his child or not.
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* PluckyComicRelief: The optimistic sidekick and [[WiseGuy Wise Guy]] to Loth’s [[StraightMan Straight Man]].
* RedShirt: Secondary character accompanies main character into enemy territory. [[note]]guess who doesn’t come back[[/note]]
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* DeadpanSnarker: Especially with Sabran.
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[[folder:King Sigoso]
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*PluckyComicRelief: The optimistic sidekick and [[WiseGuy Wise Guy]] to Loth’s [[StraightMan Straight Man]].
* TheBard: His love for writing poetry puts him at odds with his father.
*GuiltByAssociation: Gets dragged into sharing Loth’s mission simply because the two are friends.
*RedShirt: Secondary character accompanies main character into enemy territory. [[note]]guess who doesn’t come back[[/note]]
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* TheMagnificent: Her royal epithet.Marian[[/note]] This leads to high regnal numbers, such as Sabran IX.
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething:
**RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Frequently seen attending to matters of state and making important military decisions.
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-->”Leave this city and harm no soul, or I swear by the Saint whose blood I carry, you will face defeat beyond any the House of Berethnet has ever extracted on your kind. Before I leave this world, I will see your kind thrown down, sealed forever in the chasm of the mountain.”\\
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-->”Leave this city and harm no soul, or I swear by the Saint whose blood I carry, you will face defeat beyond any the House of Berethnet has ever extracted on your kind. Before I leave this world, I will see your kind thrown down, sealed forever in the chasm of the mountain.”\\”
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—>”Leave this city and harm no soul, or I swear by the Saint whose blood I carry, you will face defeat beyond any the House of Berethnet has ever extracted on your kind. Before I leave this world, I will see your kind thrown down, sealed forever in the chasm of the mountain.”\\
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A small island nation located north of the western continent. Inys is ruled by a matrilineal line of monarchs
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** Highlights include "Macrocosm", in which Janeway does the Sigourney Weaver bit, her repairs of the deflector dish in "Year of Hell", and her role as a Parisian resistance fighter in "The Killing Game".
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!Queendom of Inys
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->’’”For the first time, she saw Sabran Berethnet for who she was beneath the mask: a young and fragile woman who carried a thousand-year legacy on her shoulders. A queen whose power was absolute only so long as she could produce a daughter.”’’
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** Out of the 36 queens of Inys, there are only 6 names among them: Glorian, Sabran, Jillian, Rosarian, Carnelian, and Marian.
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** Out of the 36 queens of Inys, there are only 6 names among them: Glorian, them.[[note]][[Glorian, Sabran, Jillian, Rosarian, Carnelian, and Marian. Marian]][[/note]]
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!Queendom of Inys
[[folder:Sabran IX]]
->’’”For the first time, she saw Sabran Berethnet for who she was beneath the mask: a young and fragile woman who carried a thousand-year legacy on her shoulders. A queen whose power was absolute only so long as she could produce a daughter.”’’
Sabran [[DontCallMeSir The Magnificent]]
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* KingBobTheNth:
** Out of the 36 queens of Inys, there are only 6 names among them: Glorian, Sabran, Jillian, Rosarian, Carnelian, and Marian.
** Highlights include "Macrocosm", in which Janeway does the Sigourney Weaver bit, her repairs of the deflector dish in "Year of Hell", and her role as a Parisian resistance fighter in "The Killing Game".
* BadassBoast: To [[TheDragon Freydel]]
-->Leave this city and harm no soul, or I swear by the Saint whose blood I carry, you will face defeat beyond any the House of Berethnet has ever extracted on your kind. Before I leave this world, I will see your kind thrown down, sealed forever in the chasm of the mountain.\\
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething:
** Frequently seen attending to matters of state and making important military decisions.
!Queendom of Inys
[[folder:Sabran IX]]
->’’”For the first time, she saw Sabran Berethnet for who she was beneath the mask: a young and fragile woman who carried a thousand-year legacy on her shoulders. A queen whose power was absolute only so long as she could produce a daughter.”’’
Sabran [[DontCallMeSir The Magnificent]]
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* KingBobTheNth:
** Out of the 36 queens of Inys, there are only 6 names among them: Glorian, Sabran, Jillian, Rosarian, Carnelian, and Marian.
** Highlights include "Macrocosm", in which Janeway does the Sigourney Weaver bit, her repairs of the deflector dish in "Year of Hell", and her role as a Parisian resistance fighter in "The Killing Game".
* BadassBoast: To [[TheDragon Freydel]]
-->Leave this city and harm no soul, or I swear by the Saint whose blood I carry, you will face defeat beyond any the House of Berethnet has ever extracted on your kind. Before I leave this world, I will see your kind thrown down, sealed forever in the chasm of the mountain.\\
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething:
** Frequently seen attending to matters of state and making important military decisions.