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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:He never falls to the Dark Side in canon (regardless of how this fic's author chooses to interpret certain scenes from the movies) nor has his canon self ever physically lashed out at Obi-Wan in anger.]]
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler:He never falls to the Dark Side in canon (regardless of how this fic's author chooses to interpret certain scenes from the movies) movies: Update, to be specific here the Author said he took Mace's delving into the darkside not directly from the movies but from the book adaption of the Revenge of the Sith, where it looks into the internal monologue/thoughts of the characters, where it showed that while Mace didn't "fall" he did utilize the darkside to defeat Sidious) nor has his canon self ever physically lashed out at Obi-Wan in anger.]]
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!!Alpha-17!!
The first ARC Trooper in the GAR. He was called in for the Second Battle of Axum as the Republic attempted to negotiate a ceasefire with the Imperium.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: He doesn't mince his words when talking to Ashoka and Rex, but neither could deny that he had a point.
* PragmaticVillainy: When Ashoka tells him that they couldn't bomb the Imperial temple from orbit, he actually ''agrees with her,'' but only because it would be a waste of resources and that they would be easier ways to take the Imperium.
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!!Alpha-17!!
The first ARC Trooper in the GAR. He was called in for the Second Battle of Axum as the Republic attempted to negotiate a ceasefire with the Imperium.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: He doesn't mince his words when talking to Ashoka and Rex, but neither could deny that he had a point.
* PragmaticVillainy: When Ashoka tells him that they couldn't bomb the Imperial temple from orbit, he actually ''agrees with her,'' but only because it would be a waste of resources and that they would be easier ways to take the Imperium.
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* ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter: He's one of the few people in the entire Galactic Republic who isn't fooled by Palpatine's WiseOldFolkFacade and correctly has him pegged as a manipulative VillainWithGoodPublicity who has an insatiable hunger for power. Unlike the others who are aware of Palpatine's true nature, Kuat isn't part of his inner circle or affiliated with the Sith; he figured it out all by himself simply from noticing how the Republic was increasingly nationalizing more and more legitimate private industries the longer that the Clone Wars dragged on.
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* ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter: He's one of the few people in the entire Galactic Republic who isn't fooled by Palpatine's WiseOldFolkFacade and correctly has him pegged as a manipulative VillainWithGoodPublicity who has driven by an insatiable hunger for power. Unlike the others who are aware of Palpatine's true nature, Kuat isn't part of his inner circle or affiliated with the Sith; he figured it out all by himself simply from noticing how the Republic was increasingly nationalizing more and more legitimate private industries the longer that the Clone Wars dragged on.
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* DividedWeFall: [[spoiler:By Episode 46, their hypocrisy and arrogance have finally come full circle as the Jedi are clearly on the verge of a civil war with each other. Mace wants to bomb the Basilica into oblivion despite Xan, Ashoka, and even Alpha 17 deeming this to be a waste of resources while Xan wants to take the temple. The two end up nearly close to blows until Obi-Wan and Jocasta break up the fight and force Mace to return to Coruscant.]]
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* PreAsskickingOneLiner: Says one at the end of Episode 41 Part 2 as he and Obi-Wan prepare to attack [[spoiler:Samael, who has been exposed as an undercover Inquisitor,]] during the Axum resistance's assault on the Basilica of Salvation.
-->'''Mace:''' We were interrupted the last time we spoke... let's finish that conversation now.
-->'''Mace:''' We were interrupted the last time we spoke... let's finish that conversation now.
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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler:When the Mechanicus takes down her ship, reality sinks in and she has an emotional meltdown. And there's the fact that there's an ''Eversor'' currently after her head.]]
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* OriginalCharacter: All of them save Omega are [=OCs=] exclusive to this fic.
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* UnreliableIllustrator: At the end of Season 1, Tarkin is clearly described by the narrator as having hid left eye bandaged. [[spoiler:However, when he shows up in the Season 4 premiere, the episode's art depicts him having an eyepatch over his right eye while his left eye appears unscathed.]]
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* UnreliableIllustrator: At the end of Season 1, Tarkin is clearly described by the narrator as having hid his left eye bandaged. [[spoiler:However, when he shows up in the Season 4 premiere, the episode's art depicts him having an eyepatch over his right eye while his left eye appears unscathed.]]
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* EyeScream: When he shows up at the Rothana military conference following the offscreen First Battle of Axum, he is sporting a bloodied bandage over his left eye on top of multiple other injuries. [[spoiler:When he reappears at the start of Season 4 after being PutOnTheBus at the end of Season 1, Tarkin is sporting an eyepatch over where his bandaged eye used to be.]]
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* EyeScream: When he shows up at the Rothana military conference following the offscreen First Battle of Axum, he is sporting a bloodied bandage over his left eye on top of multiple other injuries. [[spoiler:When he reappears at the start of Season 4 after being PutOnTheBus at the end of Season 1, Tarkin is sporting an eyepatch over where his bandaged damaged eye used to be.]]
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* UnreliableIllustrator: At the end of Season 1, Tarkin is clearly described by the narrator as having hid left eye bandaged. [[spoiler:However, when he shows up in the Season 4 premiere, the episode's art depicts him having an eyepatch over his right eye while his left eye appears unscathed.]]
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* EyeScream: When he shows up at the Rothana military conference following the offscreen First Battle of Axum, he is sporting a bloodied bandage over his left eye on top of multiple other injuries. [spoiler:When he reappears at the start of Season 4 after being PutOnTheBus at the end of Season 1, Tarkin is sporting an eyepatch over where his bandaged eye used to be.]]
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* EyeScream: When he shows up at the Rothana military conference following the offscreen First Battle of Axum, he is sporting a bloodied bandage over his left eye on top of multiple other injuries. [spoiler:When [[spoiler:When he reappears at the start of Season 4 after being PutOnTheBus at the end of Season 1, Tarkin is sporting an eyepatch over where his bandaged eye used to be.]]
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* EyeScream: When he shows up at the Rothana military conference following the offscreen First Battle of Axum, he is sporting a bloodied bandage over his left eye on top of multiple other injuries.
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* EyeScream: When he shows up at the Rothana military conference following the offscreen First Battle of Axum, he is sporting a bloodied bandage over his left eye on top of multiple other injuries. [spoiler:When he reappears at the start of Season 4 after being PutOnTheBus at the end of Season 1, Tarkin is sporting an eyepatch over where his bandaged eye used to be.]]
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* ALighterShadeOfBlack: The Galactic Republic has its share of problems, including rampant corruption, cultural stagnation and bureaucracy. It is still ''vastly'' superior on a moral level to the Imperium, a MartyrdomCulture of [[TheFundamentalist religious fanatics]] who believe they have a UsefulNotes/ManifestDestiny to conquer the universe and [[FantasticRacism exterminate all non-human life]] in the process.
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* ALighterShadeOfBlack: ALighterShadeOfGrey: The Galactic Republic has its share of problems, including rampant corruption, cultural stagnation and bureaucracy. It is still ''vastly'' superior on a moral level to the Imperium, a MartyrdomCulture of [[TheFundamentalist religious fanatics]] who believe they have a UsefulNotes/ManifestDestiny to conquer the universe and [[FantasticRacism exterminate all non-human life]] in the process.
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* TheCorruptible: [[spoiler:As it turns out, Rex has always been particularly vulnerable to Chaos corruption as demonstrated just before the start of Ahsoka's peace talks with the Imperials in Season 4 when he starts uncontrollably leaking TearsOfBlood and HearingVoices in his head.]]
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** Canon Palpatine was "merely" a powerful human Sith Lord with incredible mastery over the Dark Side unmatched by any other living Force-user of his time. This Palpatine is a [[spoiler:reality-warping TranshumanAbomination created from the fused souls of ''every'' Sith Master that lived and died since the time of Darth Bane, the process of which has transformed him into a borderline PhysicalGod capable of besting '''Alpha-Plus psykers''' in single combat and potentially solo ''nearly half a thousand'' experienced Jedi Masters and Knights at the same time.]]
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** Canon Palpatine was "merely" a powerful human Sith Lord with incredible mastery over the Dark Side unmatched by any other living Force-user of his time. This Palpatine is a [[spoiler:reality-warping TranshumanAbomination created from the fused souls of ''every'' Sith Master that lived and died since the time of Darth Bane, the process of which has transformed him into a borderline PhysicalGod capable of besting '''Alpha-Plus psykers''' in single combat and potentially solo combat. For comparison, a single Alpha-Plus psyker was shown effortlessly soloing ''nearly half a thousand'' experienced Jedi Masters and Knights at the same time.]]
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* TheWorfEffect: The Jedi definitely get it the worst in this fic. Usually, a newly introduced Imperial OC will establish themselves as a badass by easily taking down a Jedi. Season 3 sees this get taken up to eleven as that season features several individuals each singlehandedly plowing through hundreds of experienced Jedi simultaneously in different scenes.
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* I Reject Your Reality: By this time of the Clone Wars, they have adopted this stance on anything that contradicts their beliefs, so they take it ''HARD'' when they suffer heavy casualties against the Imperium's psychic and non-psychic troops.
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* I Reject Your Reality: IRejectYourReality: By this time of the Clone Wars, they have adopted this stance on anything that contradicts their beliefs, so they take it ''HARD'' when they suffer heavy casualties against the Imperium's psychic and non-psychic troops.
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* I Reject Your Reality: By this time of the Clone Wars, they have adopted this stance on anything that contradicts their beliefs, so they take it ''HARD'' when they suffer heavy casualties against the Imperium's psychic and non-psychic troops.
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* HigherTechSpecies: Played with. The Republic's technology isn't more advanced than the Imperium's, generally speaking -- in fact, in many places i(particularly n the military fields), it's ''worse'' due to the Ruusan Reformation and the 4,000 years of peace that stemmed from it. However, the Republic has a consistently high level of available technology and technical know-how, in contrast to the Imperium's SchizoTech society. They ''also'' have a much more efficient logistics network and lack the religious opposition to technological innovation, making them capable of advancing their base technology far more rapidly than their Imperial counterparts.
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* HigherTechSpecies: Played with. The Republic's technology isn't more advanced than the Imperium's, generally speaking -- in fact, in many places i(particularly n (particularly in the military fields), it's ''worse'' due to the Ruusan Reformation and the 4,000 years of peace that stemmed from it. However, the Republic has a consistently high level of available technology and technical know-how, in contrast to the Imperium's SchizoTech society. They ''also'' have a much more efficient logistics network and lack the religious opposition to technological innovation, making them capable of advancing their base technology far more rapidly than their Imperial counterparts.
