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The recent edits done on the SH FANDOM page taught me to properly cite verifiable and objective sources, so it isn't dismissed as mere speculative opinion.
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* BodyHorror: Her body is pale-white and her skin looks decomposed, her clothes soaked in blood and what appears to be her stab wounds visible through some of her exposed body. Strangely, her in-game model is missing the "16/21" carved on her skin, in contrast to the recent victims.
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* BodyHorror: Her body is pale-white and her skin looks decomposed, her clothes soaked in blood and what appears to be her stab wounds visible through some of her exposed body. Strangely, Oddly, her in-game model [[https://youtu.be/eo0s0fiIlqk?t=54 is missing the "16/21" carved on her skin, skin]] in contrast to the recent victims.
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* CallingCard: Carving numbers into the bodies of his victims and - albeit only for the Ten Hearts victims - ripping out their hearts and carving his name. [[spoiler:For good measure, he numbered ''himself'' as well as he committed suicide in keeping with the Sacraments]].
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* CallingCard: Carving numbers into the bodies of his victims and - albeit only for the Ten Hearts victims - ripping out their hearts and carving his name. [[spoiler:For good measure, he numbered ''himself'' as well as he committed suicide in keeping with the Sacraments]].
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* BodyHorror: Her body is pale-white and her skin looks decomposed, her clothes soaked in blood and what appears to be her stab wounds visible through some of her exposed body.
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* BodyHorror: Her body is pale-white and her skin looks decomposed, her clothes soaked in blood and what appears to be her stab wounds visible through some of her exposed body. Strangely, her in-game model is missing the "16/21" carved on her skin, in contrast to the recent victims.
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* ImprobableWeaponUser: Uses the same candlestick he used to trace the 17/21 on his chest as he was dying.
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* ImprobableWeaponUser: Uses the same candlestick he used to trace the 17/21 "17/21" on his chest as he was dying.
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* StringyHairedGhostGirl: Resembles an ''onryuu'', with the long hair and paler skin.
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* StringyHairedGhostGirl: Resembles an ''onryuu'', ''onryō'', with the long hair and paler skin.
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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: A young Walter once saw [[spoiler:Richard Braintree]] holding up the bloody clothes of a local pervert, and misconstrued it as him having skinned a man alive, leading to the alleged perpetrator's death many years later as "retribution".
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Several of the murders he performs are overreactions to his own behavior, including among them Steve Garland (who scared him with his guard dog) and Cynthia Velasquez (who told him off for stalking her for a decade).
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* JerkJustifications: Cynthia was 29 [[spoiler:at the time of her death]], and was understandably repulsed by a strange man [[StalkerWithoutACrush who supposedly had been "eavesdropping" on she and her friends for ''10 years''.]] If anything, most people would be put off by someone who's apparently been stalking them for quite some time. On the other hand, one could say that on [[SerialKiller Walter's]] terms, Cynthia's reaction [[spoiler: pretty much sealed her fate in the near future as a case of TooDumbToLive]].
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* JerkJustifications: Cynthia was 29 [[spoiler:at the time of her death]], and was understandably repulsed by a strange man [[StalkerWithoutACrush who supposedly had been "eavesdropping" on she and her friends for ''10 years''.]] If anything, most people would be put off by someone who's apparently been stalking them for quite some time. On the other hand, one could say that on [[SerialKiller Walter's]] terms, Cynthia's reaction [[spoiler: pretty much sealed her fate in the near future as a case of TooDumbToLive]].
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* DistressedDamsel: [[spoiler:Almost getting killed and being sucked into the Otherworld; distressing indeed]].
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* DistressedDamsel: DamselInDistress: [[spoiler:Almost getting killed and being sucked into the Otherworld; distressing indeed]].
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* DistressedDamsel: Henry finds her trapped in a subway cart after she vanishes from the toilet. He does manage to get her out before she disappears again, supposedly being pursed by Walter. [[spoiler:By the time Henry gets to her, it's too late]].
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* DistressedDamsel: DamselInDistress: Henry finds her trapped in a subway cart after she vanishes from the toilet. He does manage to get her out before she disappears again, supposedly being pursed by Walter. [[spoiler:By the time Henry gets to her, it's too late]].
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* FreakOut: She undergoes a major one upon waking up in the hospital all bandaged up after [[spoiler: being assaulted to near-death by Walter]], and seeing someone looming over her. She soon calms down once she realizes that the man is Henry, who is there to rescue her.
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* OhCrap: She undergoes a major one upon waking up in the hospital all bandaged up after [[spoiler: being assaulted to near-death by Walter]], and seeing someone looming over her. She soon calms down once she realizes that the man is Henry, who is there to rescue her.
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* OhCrap: She undergoes a major one upon waking up in the hospital all bandaged up after [[spoiler: being assaulted to near-death by Walter]], and seeing someone looming over her. She soon calms down once she realizes that the man is Henry, who is there to rescue her.
