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* IWorkAlone: His preferred method of doing things, but GUN is pretty hell-bent on sticking with the Buddy System.
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* BlowYouAway: Uses his 'Sonic Wind' ability more than once.
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* PlayingWithFire: Her main ability.
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* TheSmurfettePrinciple: The only female member of [[BadassCrew Team Hardline]].
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* TheChick: Actually fairly useful, but spends most of her times breaking up fights between the others.
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Commissioned by GUN to help with the attack on Eggman. Don't worry about the [[GreenRocks Sol Emeralds]], [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong the Chaotix]] is looking after them!
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Commissioned by GUN to help with the attack on Eggman. Don't worry about the [[GreenRocks Sol Emeralds]], Emeralds, [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong the Chaotix]] is looking after them!
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Commissioned by GUN to help with the attack on Eggman. Don't worry about the [[GreenRocks Sol Emeralds]], [[Cloudcuckoolander the Chaotix]] is looking after them!
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Commissioned by GUN to help with the attack on Eggman. Don't worry about the [[GreenRocks Sol Emeralds]], [[Cloudcuckoolander [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong the Chaotix]] is looking after them!
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Commissioned by GUN to help with the attack on Eggman. Don't worry about the [[GreenRocks Sol Emeralds]], {{Cloudcuckoolander}} [[Cloudcuckoolander the Chaotix]] is looking after them!
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Commissioned by GUN to help with the attack on Eggman. Don't worry about the [[GreenRocks Sol Emeralds]], [[Cloudcuckoolander the Chaotix]] {{Cloudcuckoolander}} is looking after them!
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Commissioned by GUN to help with the attack on Eggman. Don't worry about the [[GreenRocks Sol Emeralds]], [[Cloudcuckcoolander [[Cloudcuckoolander the Chaotix]] is looking after them!
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Commissioned by GUN to help with the attack on Eggman. Don't worry about the [[GreenRocks Sol Emeralds]],[[Cloudcoocoolander Emeralds]], [[Cloudcuckcoolander the Chaotix]] is looking after them!
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Commissioned by GUN to help with the attack on Eggman. Don't worry about the [[GreenRocks Sol Emeralds]], the [[TooIncompetentToOperateABlanket Chaotix]] is looking after them.
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Commissioned by GUN to help with the attack on Eggman. Don't worry about the [[GreenRocks Sol Emeralds]], Emeralds]],[[Cloudcoocoolander the [[TooIncompetentToOperateABlanket Chaotix]] is looking after them.
them!
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* {{The Hero}}/{{TheLeader}}: Leads [[BadassCrew Team Hardline]], much to Shadow's dismay.
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* {{The Hero}}/{{TheLeader}}: Hero}}/{{The Leader}}: Leads [[BadassCrew Team Hardline]], much to Shadow's dismay.
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* TheSmartGuy
!!Blaze the Cat
Commissioned by GUN to help with the attack on Eggman. Don't worry about the [[GreenRocks Sol Emeralds]], the [[TooIncompetentToOperateABlanket Chaotix]] is looking after them.
* TheChick: Actually fairly useful, but spends most of her times breaking up fights between the others.
* FollowingThePlottedLine: Her excuse for being at Shadow's party.
!!Blaze the Cat
Commissioned by GUN to help with the attack on Eggman. Don't worry about the [[GreenRocks Sol Emeralds]], the [[TooIncompetentToOperateABlanket Chaotix]] is looking after them.
* TheChick: Actually fairly useful, but spends most of her times breaking up fights between the others.
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* TheBigGuy
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* SixthRanger: GUN asked for his assistance with the attack on Eggman's base around the same time they asked the other characters. He didn't join in until a while later. Since there are five other members of [[BadassCrew Team Hardline]], he's ''literally'' the Sixth Ranger. [[/folder]]
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* SixthRanger: GUN asked for his assistance with the attack on Eggman's base around the same time they asked the other characters. He didn't join in until a while later. Since there are five other members of [[BadassCrew Team Hardline]], he's ''literally'' the Sixth Ranger. [[/folder]]
Ranger.
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[[folder:Other Characters]]
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[[folder:Other Characters]]
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* BrickJoke: She still occasionally suffers from a severe lack of judgement, due to her situation in the first fic not exactly being sorted out...
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* BrickJoke: She still occasionally suffers from a severe lack of judgement, due to her situation in the first fic not exactly being sorted out...out...
[[/folder]]
[[/folder]]
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!! Miles "Tails" Prower
Sonic's closest friend and confidant. He was recently hired by GUN to head their tech department, but just putting together his qualifying project was stressful enough. Will he enjoy his new job, or will he quit before something serious happens?
* [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman]]
* GradeSchoolCEO: Leads an entire team of military technicians. Did we mention that he's only eight?
!!Knuckles the Echidna
Enlisted to help with the attack on Eggman's new fortress of evil. [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext Has a side career as a hand model.]]
* SixthRanger: GUN asked for his assistance with the attack on Eggman's base around the same time they asked the other characters. He didn't join in until a while later. Since there are five other members of [[BadassCrew Team Hardline]], he's ''literally'' the Sixth Ranger. [[/folder]]
Sonic's closest friend and confidant. He was recently hired by GUN to head their tech department, but just putting together his qualifying project was stressful enough. Will he enjoy his new job, or will he quit before something serious happens?
* [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman]]
* GradeSchoolCEO: Leads an entire team of military technicians. Did we mention that he's only eight?
!!Knuckles the Echidna
Enlisted to help with the attack on Eggman's new fortress of evil. [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext Has a side career as a hand model.]]
* SixthRanger: GUN asked for his assistance with the attack on Eggman's base around the same time they asked the other characters. He didn't join in until a while later. Since there are five other members of [[BadassCrew Team Hardline]], he's ''literally'' the Sixth Ranger. [[/folder]]
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* BrickJoke: She still occasionally suffers from a severe lack of judgement, due to her situation in the first fic not exactly being sorted out...
!! Miles "Tails" Prower
Sonic's closest friend and confidant. He was recently hired by GUN to head their tech department, but just putting together his qualifying project was stressful enough. Will he enjoy his new job, or will he quit before something serious happens?
* [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman]]
* GradeSchoolCEO: Leads an entire team of military technicians. Did we mention that he's only eight?
!!Knuckles the Echidna
Enlisted to help with the attack on Eggman's new fortress of evil. [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext Has a side career as a hand model.]]
* SixthRanger: GUN asked for his assistance with the attack on Eggman's base around the same time they asked the other characters. He didn't join in until a while later. Since there are five other members of [[BadassCrew Team Hardline]], he's ''literally'' the Sixth Ranger.
!! Miles "Tails" Prower
Sonic's closest friend and confidant. He was recently hired by GUN to head their tech department, but just putting together his qualifying project was stressful enough. Will he enjoy his new job, or will he quit before something serious happens?
* [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman]]
* GradeSchoolCEO: Leads an entire team of military technicians. Did we mention that he's only eight?
!!Knuckles the Echidna
Enlisted to help with the attack on Eggman's new fortress of evil. [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext Has a side career as a hand model.]]
* SixthRanger: GUN asked for his assistance with the attack on Eggman's base around the same time they asked the other characters. He didn't join in until a while later. Since there are five other members of [[BadassCrew Team Hardline]], he's ''literally'' the Sixth Ranger.
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* BrickJoke: She still occasionally suffers from a severe lack of judgement, due to her situation in the first fic not exactly being sorted out...
!! Miles "Tails" Prower
Sonic's closest friend and confidant. He was recently hired by GUN to head their tech department, but just putting together his qualifying project was stressful enough. Will he enjoy his new job, or will he quit before something serious happens?
* [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman]]
* GradeSchoolCEO: Leads an entire team of military technicians. Did we mention that he's only eight?
!!Knuckles the Echidna
Enlisted to help with the attack on Eggman's new fortress of evil. [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext Has a side career as a hand model.]]
* SixthRanger: GUN asked for his assistance with the attack on Eggman's base around the same time they asked the other characters. He didn't join in until a while later. Since there are five other members of [[BadassCrew Team Hardline]], he's ''literally'' the Sixth Ranger.out...
!! Miles "Tails" Prower
Sonic's closest friend and confidant. He was recently hired by GUN to head their tech department, but just putting together his qualifying project was stressful enough. Will he enjoy his new job, or will he quit before something serious happens?
* [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman]]
* GradeSchoolCEO: Leads an entire team of military technicians. Did we mention that he's only eight?
!!Knuckles the Echidna
Enlisted to help with the attack on Eggman's new fortress of evil. [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext Has a side career as a hand model.]]
* SixthRanger: GUN asked for his assistance with the attack on Eggman's base around the same time they asked the other characters. He didn't join in until a while later. Since there are five other members of [[BadassCrew Team Hardline]], he's ''literally'' the Sixth Ranger.
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* SixthRanger: GUN asked for his assistance with the attack on Eggman's base around the same time they asked the other characters. He didn't join in until a while later. Since there are five other members of [[BadassCrew Team]] [[Crush40 Hardline]], he's ''literally'' the Sixth Ranger.
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* SixthRanger: GUN asked for his assistance with the attack on Eggman's base around the same time they asked the other characters. He didn't join in until a while later. Since there are five other members of [[BadassCrew Team]] [[Crush40 Team Hardline]], he's ''literally'' the Sixth Ranger.
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* SixthRanger: GUN asked for his assistance with the attack on Eggman's base around the same time they asked the other characters. He didn't join in until a while later. Since there are five other members of Team Hardline, [[BadassCrew Team]] [[Crush40 Hardline]], he's ''literally'' the Sixth Ranger.
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* SixthRanger: GUN asked for his assistance with the attack on Eggman's base around the same time they asked the other characters. He didn't join in until a while later. Since there are five other members of Team Hardline, he's ''literally'' the Sixth Ranger.
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* DreadfulMusician: Read the karaoke chapter with caution. See also {{Giftedly Bad}}.
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Brought back for reasons unknown (to Shadow at least, everyone else knows but just won't tell him), Maria wants to help Shadow find his conscience while he teaches her how to fight. Really likes ''{{My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic}}''.
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Brought back for reasons unknown (to Shadow at least, everyone else knows but just won't tell him), Maria wants to help Shadow find his conscience while he teaches her how to fight. Really (and we mean ''really'') likes ''{{My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic}}''.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: And ''how''. Starts to toe the line of {{WhatTheHellHero}}.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: And ''how''. Starts to toe the line of {{WhatTheHellHero}}.
{{What The Hell Hero}}.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: And ''how''.
''how''. Starts to toe the line of {{WhatTheHellHero}}.
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* TheRival: To Sonic, as always, but much more pronounced.
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* TheRival: To Sonic, as always, but much ''much'' more pronounced.
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* PerpetualFrowner: To the point that when Maria makes him laugh, it feels... weird.[[WhatIsThisFeeling weird]].
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* DeathIsCheap: Or [[spoiler:Or so it seemsseems...]]
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* SanitySlippage: To the point where in one chapter everyone, even the [[MikePollock Narrator]] on {{Pokemon}}, starts to sound like [[MikePollock Eggman]] to him.
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* SanitySlippage: To the point where in one chapter everyone, even the [[MikePollock Narrator]] Narrator on {{Pokemon}}, starts to sound like [[MikePollock Eggman]] to him.
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* SanitySlippage: To the point where in one chapter, everyone, even the [[MikePollock Narrator]] on {{Pokemon}}, starts to sound like [[MikePollock Eggman]] to him.
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* SanitySlippage: To the point where in one chapter, chapter everyone, even the [[MikePollock Narrator]] on {{Pokemon}}, starts to sound like [[MikePollock Eggman]] to him.
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* SanitySlippage: to To the point where in one chapter, everyone, even the [[MikePollock Narrator]] on {{Pokemon}}, starts to sound like [[MikePollock Eggman]].
Eggman]] to him.
