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SanitySlippage: to the point where in one chapter, everyone, even the [[MikePollock Narrator]] on {{Pokemon}}, starts to sound like [[MikePollock Eggman]].
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Brought back for reasons unknown (to Shadow at least, everyone else knows but just won't tell him), Maria wants to help Shadow find his conscience while he teaches her how to fight. Really likes ''{{My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic}}''
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Brought back for reasons unknown (to Shadow at least, everyone else knows but just won't tell him), Maria wants to help Shadow find his conscience while he teaches her how to fight. Really likes ''{{My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic}}''
Magic}}''.
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Brought back for reasons unknown (to Shadow at least, everyone else knows but just won't tell him), Maria wants to help Shadow find his conscience while he teaches her how to fight. Really likes {{My ''{{My Little Pony: Pony Friendship Is Magic}}
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Brought back for reasons unknown (to Shadow at least, everyone else knows but just won't tell him), Maria wants to help Shadow find his conscience while he teaches her how to fight. Really likes {{MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}}
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Brought back for reasons unknown (to Shadow at least, everyone else knows but just won't tell him), Maria wants to help Shadow find his conscience while he teaches her how to fight.
fight. Really likes {{MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}}
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* ChildProdigy: GradeSchoolCEO: Leads an entire team of military technicians. Did we mention that he's only eight?
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Enlisted to help with the attack on Eggman's new fortress of evil. [[ItMakesSenseInContext Has a side career as a hand model.]]
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Enlisted to help with the attack on Eggman's new fortress of evil. [[ItMakesSenseInContext [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext Has a side career as a hand model.]]
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Enlisted to help with the attack on Eggman's new fortress of evil. [[ItMakesSenseInContext Has a side career as a hand model.
model.]]
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* ButtMonkey: To pretty much every character that interacts with him.
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* ChildProdigy: Leads an entire team of military technicians. Did we mention that he's only eight?eight?
!!Knuckles the Echidna
Enlisted to help with the attack on Eggman's new fortress of evil. Has a side career as a hand model.
* SixthRanger: GUN asked for his assistance with the attack on Eggman's base around the same time they asked the other characters. He didn't join in until a while later.
!!Knuckles the Echidna
Enlisted to help with the attack on Eggman's new fortress of evil. Has a side career as a hand model.
* SixthRanger: GUN asked for his assistance with the attack on Eggman's base around the same time they asked the other characters. He didn't join in until a while later.
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* [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman]]eight?
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* ChildProdigy: Leads an entire team of military reasearchers. technicians. Did we mention that he's only eight?eight?
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Sonic's closest friend and confidant. He was recently hired by GUN to head their tech department, but just putting together his qualifying project was stressful enough. Will he enjoy his new job, or will he quit before something serious happens?
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Sonic's closest friend and confidant. He was recently hired by GUN to head their tech department, but just putting together his qualifying project was stressful enough. Will he enjoy his new job, or will he quit before something serious happens?happens?
* ChildProdigy: Leads an entire team of military reasearchers. Did we mention that he's only eight?
* ChildProdigy: Leads an entire team of military reasearchers. Did we mention that he's only eight?
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* {{Took a Level in Badass}}: Makes both [[TheHero Sonic]] and [[TheLancer Shadow]] back off from fighting him with just a ''threat''. [[DeadSerious Not an empty threat]], mind you.
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* {{Took a Level in Badass}}: Makes both [[TheHero Sonic]] and [[TheLancer Shadow]] back off from fighting him with just a ''threat''. [[DeadSerious Not an empty threat]], mind you.you.
!!Rouge the Bat
She's the one that convinced Shadow to join GUN in the first place, and he's not exactly too pleased about it. However, the two are still close friends.
* BrickJoke: She still occasionally suffers from a severe lack of judgement, due to her situation in the first fic not exactly being sorted out...
!! Miles "Tails" Prower
Sonic's closest friend and confidant. He was recently hired by GUN to head their tech department, but just putting together his qualifying project was stressful enough. Will he enjoy his new job, or will he quit before something serious happens?
!!Rouge the Bat
She's the one that convinced Shadow to join GUN in the first place, and he's not exactly too pleased about it. However, the two are still close friends.
* BrickJoke: She still occasionally suffers from a severe lack of judgement, due to her situation in the first fic not exactly being sorted out...
!! Miles "Tails" Prower
Sonic's closest friend and confidant. He was recently hired by GUN to head their tech department, but just putting together his qualifying project was stressful enough. Will he enjoy his new job, or will he quit before something serious happens?
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* Hypocrite: {{Hypocrite}}: He's fed up with Shadow's constant [[{{Wangst}} wangsting]] and refusing to help others unless it serves him in some way, but Sonic's not the nicest hedgehog in the fic, either (see below).
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* PerpetualFrowner: To the point that when Maria makes him laugh, it feels... weird.
* PerpetualFrowner: To the point that when Maria makes him laugh, it feels... weird.
* Hypocrite: He's fed up with Shadow's constant [[{{Wangst}} wangsting]] and refusing to help others unless it serves him in some way, but Sonic's not the nicest hedgehog in the fic, either (see below).
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* {{Took a Level in Badass}}: Makes both [[TheHero Sonic]] and [[TheLancer Shadow]] back off from fighting him with just a ''threat''. [[DeadSerious Not an empty threat, threat]], mind you.
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Fresh off the set of ''[[WreckItRalph Wreck-It Ralph]]'' and inspired by all the respectable villains he was surrounded with, he seems to be up to no good once more!
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Fresh off the set of ''[[WreckItRalph Wreck-It Ralph]]'' [[WreckItRalph a certain upcoming movie]] and inspired by all the respectable villains he was surrounded with, he seems to be up to no good once more!
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Fresh off the set of [[WreckItRalph ''Wreck-It Ralph'']] ''[[WreckItRalph Wreck-It Ralph]]'' and inspired by all the respectable villains he was surrounded with, he seems to be up to no good once more!
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Fresh off the set of {{Wreck-it Ralph}} [[WreckItRalph ''Wreck-It Ralph'']] and inspired by all the respectable villains he was surrounded with, he seems to be up to no good once more!
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!!Dr. Eggman
Fresh off the set of {{''Wreck it Ralph''}}, he seems to be up to no good once more!
* {{Took a Level in Badass}}: Makes both [[TheHero Sonic]] and [[TheLancer Shadow]] back off from fighting him with just a ''threat''. Not an empty threat, mind you.
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* {{Embarrassing Nickname}}s: Maria calls him Shaddykins, Sonic calls him Slim Shady
* {{Only Sane Man}}: He tends to accept everyone else's nutty goings-on with bitter sarcasm, especially when Sonic starts singing...
* {{The Rival}}: To Sonic, as always, but much more pronounced.
* {{Embarrassing Nickname}}s: Maria calls him Shaddykins, Sonic calls him Slim Shady
* {{Only Sane Man}}: He tends to accept everyone else's nutty goings-on with bitter sarcasm, especially when Sonic starts singing...
* {{The Rival}}: To Sonic, as always, but much more pronounced.
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* {{Perpetual Frowner}}: PerpetualFrowner: To the point that when Maria makes him laugh, it feels... weird.
*{{Embarrassing Nickname}}s: EmbarrassingNickname: Maria calls him Shaddykins, Sonic calls him Slim Shady
*{{Only Sane Man}}: OnlySaneMan: He tends to accept everyone else's nutty goings-on with bitter sarcasm, especially when Sonic starts singing...
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* {{Hypocrite}}: He's fed up with Shadow's constant [[Wangst wangsting]] and refusing to help others unless it serves him in some way, but Sonic's not the nicest hedgehog in the fic, either (see above).
* {{Took a Level in Jerkass}}: And ''how''.
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* {{Breakout Character}}: BreakoutCharacter: Was originally supposed to only be in a few chapters, but then the fans said that they enjoyed his banter with Shadow, so expect him a lot more often!
*{{Took a Level in Jerkass}}: TookALevelInJerkass: And ''how''.
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After a year within the ranks of GUN, Shadow is fed up with not being taken seriously as an agent. Surly and antisocial.
* {{Perpetual Frowner}}: To the point that when Maria makes him laugh, it feels... weird.
* {{Embarrassing Nickname}}s: Maria calls him Shaddykins, Sonic calls him Slim Shady
* {{Only Sane Man}}: He tends to accept everyone else's nutty goings-on with bitter sarcasm, especially when Sonic starts singing...
* {{The Rival}}: To Sonic, as always, but much more pronounced.
Sonic the Hedgehog
All [[SuperSpeed speed]] and mad skillz, he finds joy in helping others, [[MostAnnoyingSound singing along ]][[LimpBizkit to early 2000's rap-rock]], and making Shadow completely miserable.
* {{Breakout Character}}: Was originally supposed to only be in a few chapters, but then the fans said that they enjoyed his banter with Shadow, so expect him a lot more often!
* {{Took a Level in Jerkass}}: And ''how''.
* {{Hypocrite}}: He's fed up with Shadow's constant [[Wangst wangsting]] and refusing to help others unless it serves him in some way, but Sonic's not the nicest hedgehog in the fic, either (see above).
Maria Robotnik
Brought back for reasons unknown (to Shadow at least, everyone else knows but just won't tell him), Maria wants to help Shadow find his conscience while he teaches her how to fight.
* {{Little Miss Badass}}: Yet to be revealed, but the title kinda gives it away
* {{Littlest Cancer Patient}}: In the flashback sequences
After a year within the ranks of GUN, Shadow is fed up with not being taken seriously as an agent. Surly and antisocial.
* {{Perpetual Frowner}}: To the point that when Maria makes him laugh, it feels... weird.
* {{Embarrassing Nickname}}s: Maria calls him Shaddykins, Sonic calls him Slim Shady
* {{Only Sane Man}}: He tends to accept everyone else's nutty goings-on with bitter sarcasm, especially when Sonic starts singing...
* {{The Rival}}: To Sonic, as always, but much more pronounced.
Sonic the Hedgehog
All [[SuperSpeed speed]] and mad skillz, he finds joy in helping others, [[MostAnnoyingSound singing along ]][[LimpBizkit to early 2000's rap-rock]], and making Shadow completely miserable.
* {{Breakout Character}}: Was originally supposed to only be in a few chapters, but then the fans said that they enjoyed his banter with Shadow, so expect him a lot more often!
* {{Took a Level in Jerkass}}: And ''how''.
* {{Hypocrite}}: He's fed up with Shadow's constant [[Wangst wangsting]] and refusing to help others unless it serves him in some way, but Sonic's not the nicest hedgehog in the fic, either (see above).
Maria Robotnik
Brought back for reasons unknown (to Shadow at least, everyone else knows but just won't tell him), Maria wants to help Shadow find his conscience while he teaches her how to fight.
* {{Little Miss Badass}}: Yet to be revealed, but the title kinda gives it away
* {{Littlest Cancer Patient}}: In the flashback sequences
