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* TricksterMentor: To an extent with both Will and Horace.
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* BigEater: His "mighty prowness at the dinner table" is actually how he earns his nickname of Black Bear while they're in Nihon-Ja.
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* BigEater: His "mighty prowness at the dinner table" is actually how he earns his nickname of Black Bear "Kurokama" (Black Bear) while they're in Nihon-Ja.
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* ActionGirl: [[spoiler: In book five, she draws a knife on John Buttle to distract him, and in book ten she is showen to have some skill with a light sabre.]]
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* CombatPragmatist: Breaks the rules of his tournaments for the sake of ensuring his win and keeping control of his minions.
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!'''Sir Keren'''
The knight who wants to take control of Macindaw to allow the Scotti passage into Araluen.
!'''Yusal'''
The leader of the Tualaghi, who holds Erak hostage.
!'''Tennyson'''
The leader of the Outsiders cult, offering happiness in exchange for gold.
!'''Jory Ruhl'''
Alyss's murderer and the leader of a slaving trade.
The knight who wants to take control of Macindaw to allow the Scotti passage into Araluen.
!'''Yusal'''
The leader of the Tualaghi, who holds Erak hostage.
!'''Tennyson'''
The leader of the Outsiders cult, offering happiness in exchange for gold.
!'''Jory Ruhl'''
Alyss's murderer and the leader of a slaving trade.
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* HeightAngst: Was too small to fulfil his dream of becoming a knight, or even working with the warhorses that they ride into combat.
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* ImprobableAimingSkills: Described as better archer than Gilan, Halt's former apprentice and a ranger of considerably more experience.
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* HeightAngst: Was He was too small to fulfil fulfill his dream of becoming a knight, or even working with the warhorses that they ride into combat.
* ImprobableAimingSkills:Described He's escribed as better archer than Gilan, Halt's former apprentice and a ranger of considerably more experience.
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Halt's former apprentice
* StealthExpert: Considered to be the stealthiest Ranger in the Corps, high praise for an organisation that places so much emphasis on stealth as a skill.
* StealthExpert: Considered to be the stealthiest Ranger in the Corps, high praise for an organisation that places so much emphasis on stealth as a skill.
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* ChildhoodFriendRomance: [[spoiler: With Alyss]].
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* ActionGirl: With her slingshot.
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* MeaningfulName: Baron Arald notices his determination and 'will'power in the first book, and how it relates to his name. [[spoiler: His last name was given to him when he graduated from his apprenticeship, as a tribute referring to the important role he played in securing the treaty with Skandia.]]
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* ParentalSubstitute: To Will; even calls him "son" at one point.
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