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* BareYourMidriff: Greta is an unintentional, non-fanservice example. Her stomach's so large, that the lilac shirt she wears ends up showing off most of her belly, and she can't even close her lab coat due to her bloated gut getting in the way.
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* FanDisservice: Greta's stomach's so large, that the lilac shirt she wears ends up showing off most of her belly, and she can't even close her lab coat due to her bloated gut getting in the way.
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Hot Scientist is no longer a trope
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* FanDisservice: Greta subverts the HotScientist trope by being a grotesque, hideous figure with an equally ugly diet.
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* FanDisservice: Greta subverts the HotScientist trope by being has a grotesque, hideous figure with an equally ugly diet.
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Bald Black Leader Guy is no longer a trope
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* BaldBlackLeaderGuy: Big D is one towards not only his gang, but also Kaos as a whole.
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* BaldBlackLeaderGuy: BaldOfAuthority: Big D is one towards not only his gang, but also Kaos as a whole.
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Dewicking as Static Character is now Definition Only.
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* StaticCharacter: Pinot starts the story a selfish hitman and ends the story as just that. He even [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] this at the end by telling Penelope that he doesn't feel any different than when he started.
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* TheStoic: Timmy, one of D's most loyal henchmen, hides his feelings behind his sunglasses and a stone cold frown.
* UndyingLoyalty: Averted. Timmy's not afraid to talk back to D, and hightails it out when D's business looks to start sinking.
* UndyingLoyalty: Averted. Timmy's not afraid to talk back to D, and hightails it out when D's business looks to start sinking.
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* TheStoic: Timmy, one of D's most loyal henchmen, Timmy hides his feelings behind his sunglasses and a stone cold frown.
* UndyingLoyalty: Averted. Timmy's not afraid to talk back to Big D, and hightails it out when D's business looks to start sinking.
* UndyingLoyalty: Averted. Timmy's not afraid to talk back to Big D, and hightails it out when D's business looks to start sinking.
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A surgeon working for Big D tasked with harvesting organs from the corpses.
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A cannibalistic surgeon working for Big D tasked with harvesting organs from the corpses.numerous corpses she's given.
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* BareYourMidriff: Greta is an unintentional, non-fanservice example. Her stomach's so large, that the lilac shirt she wears ends up showing off most of her belly, and she can't even close her lab coat due to her gut getting in the way.
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* BareYourMidriff: Greta is an unintentional, non-fanservice example. Her stomach's so large, that the lilac shirt she wears ends up showing off most of her belly, and she can't even close her lab coat due to her bloated gut getting in the way.
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* BigBadWannabe: She seeking to be the queen of the zombie world, and her manipulations establish her as a credible threat. Unfortunately for her, her plan turns out to be a farce, and she's later outclassed by Christopher Cogswell, who comes closer to his plans of apocalyptic destruction.
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* BigBadWannabe: She seeking seeks to be the queen of the zombie world, and her manipulations establish her as a credible threat. Unfortunately for her, her plan turns out to be a farce, and she's later outclassed by Christopher Cogswell, who comes closer to his plans of apocalyptic destruction.destruction than she ever could.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Greta refers to Big D as a "baboon" in Chapter 7.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Greta refers to the African American Big D as a "baboon" in Chapter 7.
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* ForcedToWatch: According to Schultz, after Greta castrated him for letting Pinot go, she forced him to watch as she ate his severed penis.
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* ForcedToWatch: According to Schultz, after Greta castrated him for letting Pinot go, she forced him to watch as she ate her eat his severed penis.
* AintTooProudToBeg: He begs when he's about to be executed by D, though this leads to him accidentally calling him a "nigger", which does zero favors for him.
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Jerrel is clearly based on Andy Dick, right down to looks, personality, alcoholism, and the various sexual assault accusations.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: He accidentally refers to D as a "nigger".
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: He accidentally refers to D as a "nigger".
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: Jerrel is clearly based on comedian Andy Dick, right down to looks, personality, alcoholism, and the various sexual assault accusations.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: He accidentally refers to D as a"nigger"."nigger" to his face, which does him no favors.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: He accidentally refers to D as a
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* YouWouldntHitAGuyWithGlasses: Jerrel tries this tactic when Timmy starts beating him up. In response, Timmy [[ExactWords calmly removes Jerrel's glasses]] and resumes beating him up.
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* YouWouldntHitAGuyWithGlasses: Jerrel tries this tactic when Timmy starts beating him up. kicking his ass. In response, Timmy [[ExactWords calmly removes Jerrel's glasses]] and resumes beating him up.his pummeling.
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* DeepSouth: Kleetus speaks in a very Southern accent. Except it's all an act, as his actual accent is British.
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* DeepSouth: Kleetus speaks in with a very Southern accent. Except it's all an act, as he his actual natural accent is British.English.
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* EvilBrit: Kleetus' actual accent is English, and he is a SinisterMinister who wants to cause the apocalypse.
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* EvilBrit: Kleetus' actual accent is Christopher was born English, and he is a SinisterMinister who wants to cause the apocalypse.an apocalypse.
* EvilOldFolks: Is thousands of years old, but is every bit as cruel as one can imagine.
* EvilOldFolks: Is thousands of years old, but is every bit as cruel as one can imagine.
* UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper: Was previously the killer himself, having murdered those prostitutes to satiate his boredom.
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* KnightOfCerebus: Kleetus Klementine is ''far'' more darker than all the other villains, who are at least entertainingly over the top, goofy, or have at least one redeeming quality. Not him. Kleetus' actions are played far more seriously, his child trafficking operation actually portrayed as horrific and sad. His sections serve as some of the darkest parts of the story.
* UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper: Was previously the killer himself, having murdered those prostitutes to satiate his boredom.
* UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper: Was previously the killer himself, having murdered those prostitutes to satiate his boredom.
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* KnightOfCerebus: Kleetus Klementine Cogswell is ''far'' more darker than all the other villains, villains in the story, who are at least entertainingly over the top, goofy, or have at least one redeeming quality. Not him. Kleetus' Cogswell's actions are played far more seriously, with his child trafficking operation actually portrayed as horrific and sad.appropriately cruel. His sections serve as some of the darkest parts of the story.
*UsefulNotes/JackTheRipper: Was previously KickTheDog: Several moments, but the killer himself, having murdered those prostitutes to satiate biggest one is when he kills Mr. Pow, and then prevents his boredom.partner Mr. Blam from going to comfort him, just to spite them both for failing to acquire a child for his operation.
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* SinisterMinister: In two ways. He encourages his followers to act violently around supposed criminals, making him a vicious KnightTemplar to the public. Behind the scenes, he's a child trafficker who has children kidnapped and sold for money. His preacher act is nothing but a disguise to hide a cold-hearted monster.
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* SinisterMinister: In two ways. He encourages his followers to act violently around supposed criminals, making him a vicious KnightTemplar to the public. Behind the scenes, he's a child trafficker who has children kidnapped and sold for money. His preacher act is nothing but a disguise to hide a the cold-hearted monster.monster he really is.
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* YouHaveFailedMe: While he doesn't come right out and say it, Kleetus killing Mr. Pow and preventing Mr. Blam from going to comfort his dying partner is essentially this after they failed to bring him a child.
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* YouHaveFailedMe: While he doesn't come right out and say it, Kleetus Cogswell killing Mr. Pow and preventing Mr. Blam from going to comfort his dying partner is essentially this after they failed to bring him a child.
A duo of eccentric, stilted, mask-wearing hitmen working for Kleetus Klementine. Pow is identified by his Happy Face mask, while Blam is identified by his skull mask.
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A clueless follower of "Kleetus" completely unaware of his interior motives and businesses.
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A clueless follower of "Kleetus" completely unaware of his interior true motives and businesses.
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* ThePollyanna: A force of pure joy who enjoys working for Kleetus thanks to his boss' sheer altruism. Unfortunately, once he finds the truth, things go downhill ''very'' fast.
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* ThePollyanna: A force beacon of pure joy who enjoys working for Kleetus thanks to his boss' sheer altruism. Unfortunately, once he finds the truth, things go downhill ''very'' fast.
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* ILoveTheDead: He is a pedophile who loves having sex with deceased children.
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* ILoveTheDead: He is He's a pedophile who loves having sex with deceased children.
