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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Jake lost his rattle as a child when a hawk tried to eat him, and he gained his tail gun in its place through an operation that might have killed him. He's eventually revealed to have been raised by [[AbusiveParents a drunkard father]] who [[DomesticAbuser beat his mother every night]]. One night he was {{forced to watch}} one of those beatings. It led to his father being driven out of town, and his dying mother was "put out of her misery" by an unsympathetic deputy. Jake was left on his own and he lost his rattle only a day after. [[spoiler:He was then caught for a rattlesnake round-up and witnessed other snakes being killed and skinned. While escaping, he made the sadistic human his first kill.]]
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Jake lost his rattle as a child when a hawk tried to eat him, and he gained his tail gun in its place through an operation that might have killed him. He's eventually revealed to have been raised by [[AbusiveParents a drunkard father]] who [[DomesticAbuser [[DomesticAbuse beat his mother every night]]. One night he was {{forced to watch}} one of those beatings. It led to his father being driven out of town, and his dying mother was "put out of her misery" by an unsympathetic deputy. Jake was left on his own and he lost his rattle only a day after. [[spoiler:He was then caught for a rattlesnake round-up and witnessed other snakes being killed and skinned. While escaping, he made the sadistic human his first kill.]]
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* IAmNotMyFather: Jake refuses to ever drink himself into drunkenness due to his father who was an AlcoholicParent and a DomesticAbuser. When he finds Grace beaten by her husband, his resulting UnstoppableRage is partly influenced by the memory of his parents and his father's words of Jake becoming a man like him. In the following chapter, Jake continues acting on this trope by ultimately deciding ''not'' to [[DrowningMySorrows drink in order to cope with his strained relationship with Grace]].
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* IAmNotMyFather: Jake refuses to ever drink himself into drunkenness due to his father who was an AlcoholicParent and a DomesticAbuser.{{Domestic Abuse}}r. When he finds Grace beaten by her husband, his resulting UnstoppableRage is partly influenced by the memory of his parents and his father's words of Jake becoming a man like him. In the following chapter, Jake continues acting on this trope by ultimately deciding ''not'' to [[DrowningMySorrows drink in order to cope with his strained relationship with Grace]].
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* DomesticAbuser: When Grace has had enough of Benjamin's crap and tries to throw him out, he resorts to violence to make her compliant.
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* DomesticAbuser: DomesticAbuse: When Grace has had enough of Benjamin's crap and tries to throw him out, he resorts to violence to make her compliant.
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* HateSink: Benjamin is easier to hate than the other villains due to being a [[ItsAllAboutMe selfish]] and [[DirtyCoward cowardly]] liar who [[TheFirstCutIsTheDeepest deeply betrayed Grace]] in her backstory and attempts to do so again, [[DomesticAbuser assaulting her]] without a shred of remorse.
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* HateSink: Benjamin is easier to hate than the other villains due to being a [[ItsAllAboutMe selfish]] and [[DirtyCoward cowardly]] liar who [[TheFirstCutIsTheDeepest deeply betrayed Grace]] in her backstory and attempts to do so again, [[DomesticAbuser [[DomesticAbuse assaulting her]] without a shred of remorse.
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* CreepyBlueEyes: He has clear blue eyes.
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* CompositeCharacter: He's an {{Expy}} of Frank from ''Film/OnceUponATimeInTheWest'', but he gets his [[YouKilledMyFather motive to avenge his brother]] from the character of [[spoiler:Harmonica]] from the same movie.
* CreepyBlueEyes: He has clear blueeyes.eyes and is a PsychoForHire.
* CreepyBlueEyes: He has clear blue
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* {{Expy}}: He's based on Frank from ''Film/OnceUponATimeInTheWest''.
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* {{Expy}}: He's based on Frank from ''Film/OnceUponATimeInTheWest''. Nearly the entire quote above is borrowed from Frank.
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* YouKilledMyFather: Henry's brother was killed by Jake and he wants to kill the rattlesnake for that. He's also a rare villainous example of this trope.
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* YouKilledMyFather: Henry's brother was killed by Jake and he wants to kill the rattlesnake for that. He's also a rare villainous example of this trope.Ironically, Henry's paragon [[Film/OnceUponATimeInTheWest Frank]] was targeted for the same reason by [[spoiler:Harmonica]].
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-->'''Jake''': ''Burn'', asshole.
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-->'''Jake''': My turn.
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-->'''Jake''': Them boys are gonna have to think of the ''wrath'' that's about to set down on 'em...
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--> "[[ContinuityNod Wounded Bird was right]]... ow... that was a bad idea...
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-->'''Ramirez''': Poor lizard. You are ''loco'', aren't you? You know how to kill a man, ''si''? But could you ''really'' stomach it? Go on. Find out. It's one thing to pull the trigger. It's another to watch your kill die.
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--> "Should've listened to the stories, [[spoiler:Kepper]]. No one survives a scarlet kiss."
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-->'''Grace''': [[GetOut I want you out.]]\\
'''Henry''': Ooh, this one's got bite. I like her.
'''Henry''': Ooh, this one's got bite. I like her.
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler:He still hasn't faced Jake to avenge his brother. Also, Grace [[YouOweMe owes him a favor]] (for telling her where Dufayel is keeping Teddy) which he promises to claim someday.]]
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* KissOfDeath: Shes' known for her habit of leaving a red kiss on her every murder victim. [[spoiler:After she kills Kepper who gives her a {{forceful kiss}} during their duel, she makes a BondOneLiner about this trope.]]
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* KissOfDeath: Shes' She's known for her habit of leaving a red kiss on her every murder victim. [[spoiler:After she kills Kepper who gives her a {{forceful kiss}} during their duel, she makes a BondOneLiner about this trope.]]
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* GigglingVillain: Kepper is quick to giggle.
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* {{Foil}}: To Jake. Benjamin is outwardly respectable, but he's actually a honorless con artist. Jake in turn is a notorious outlaw who does have a code of honor. Benjamin seduced Grace by first showing her niceness, but he showed her his bad qualities after they were married. Jake in turn starts out on hostile terms with Grace before gradually showing her his kinder side. Fittingly, Benjamin is a member of a non-venomous snake species that mimics the venomous rattlesnakes to ward off predators.
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* SharpDressedMan: He wears a burgundy suit even though Mojave's sun is hot.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: He tells Rango that he's searching for a snake without being more specific. This leads to Rango seeking out Rattlesnake Jake and hiring him to protect Mud, which is a major obstacle in Dufayel's plans.
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* TheProtagonist: Though the plot's driven by Rango trying to stop Dufayel's attempts to claim Mud, the main focus is on Jake, his background and gradually developing romance with Grace Glossy.
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* {{Deuteragonist}}: The second greatest focus of the story are Grace, her past and the internal soul-searching she undergoes as her relationship with Jake develops.
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* DemotedToExtra: He was in the movie Tortoise John's most important henchman after Rattlesnake Jake. He appears in one chapter only in this fic.
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* DisneyVillainDeath: His death is a [[spoiler:downplayed example of this trope, for Jake fills him with bullets, after which he falls into a dark engine pit of his car hideout]].
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* DisneyVillainDeath: A subverted example occurs with his above mentioned DestinationDefenestration incident.
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* DisneyVillainDeath: [[spoiler:Downplayed, for he's shot in the heart by Delilah, after which he falls off a balcony.]]
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* ContrastingSequelAntagonist: Tortoise John was the mayor of Dirt's desert town who was good at hiding his villainous nature with charisma. Dufayel is a wealthy inhabitant of cities who, despite his politeness, never really hides his condescending nature or motivations. They both attempted to put an end to the town of Dirt/Mud, but for different reasons; Tortoise John was a VisionaryVillain who wanted to create a modern city, while Dufayel's entire motivation is to [[spoiler:claim the underground gold he was promised and needs to avoid becoming broke]]. Tortoise John made Rango his pawn by promoting him as Dirt's sheriff and pitted against him Rattlesnake Jake whom he hired. Dufayel in turn makes himself an enemy of both Rango and Jake who work together against right from the beginning.
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* ContrastingSequelAntagonist: Tortoise John was the mayor of Dirt's desert town who was good at hiding his villainous nature with charisma. Dufayel is a wealthy inhabitant of cities who, despite his politeness, never really hides his motives or condescending nature or motivations.nature. They both attempted to put an end to the town of Dirt/Mud, but for different reasons; Tortoise John was a VisionaryVillain who wanted to create a modern city, while Dufayel's entire motivation is to [[spoiler:claim the underground gold he was promised and needs to avoid becoming broke]]. Tortoise John made turned Rango into his pawn by promoting making him as Dirt's sheriff and pitted against him hired the services of Rattlesnake Jake whom Jake, pitting them against each other until he hired. [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness attempted to kill Jake]]. Dufayel in turn makes himself an enemy of to both Rango and Jake who work together against him right from the beginning.
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* BadBoss: He's proven to be this after the below-mentioned ShootTheMessenger moment.
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* FreudianTrio: He's the Ego in the one between himself, Johan Quall and Kepper. While Worst is cocky and ambitious, he does question the chances they have against Jake before agreeing to Dufayel's proposal to get rid of the Grim Reaper.
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* FreudianTrio: He's the Superego in the one between himself, Irvin Worst and Kepper. Quall's the most composed of them and needs the most persuasion before he agrees to go against Jake.
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* FreudianTrio: He's the Id in the one between himself, Irvin Worst and Johan Quall. Kepper's the least inhibited and careful of them.
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* NeverMyFault: He blames his [[spoiler:imminent bankruptcy]] and his harassment of the heroes on Tortoise John who asked him to invest the mayor's EvilPlan in exchange for [[spoiler:the big gold deposit]].
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* BlackAndWhiteMorality: She believes in the law and is quite biased toward outlaws, treating Jake scornfully until she gets to know him better.
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* TerribleTrio: Leads the one he has formed with Johan Quall and Kepper.
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* DirtyCoward: [[spoiler:Jake [[ExploitedTrope uses Quall's fear]] of his wrath to abandon Worst and flee while he still can.]]
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* {{Expy}}: She has more than a passing resemblance to [[Literature/{{Holes}} Kissin' Kate Barlow]].
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* KissOfDeath: Shes' known for her habit of leaving a red kiss on her every murder victim. [[spoiler:After she kills Kepper who gives her a {{forceful kiss}} during their duel, she makes a BondOneLiner about this trope.]]
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* ContrastingSequelAntagonist: Tortoise John was the mayor of Dirt's desert town who was good at hiding his villainous nature with charisma. Dufayel is a wealthy inhabitant of cities who, despite his politeness, never really hides his villainous nature. Tortoise John was a VisionaryVillain who wanted to create a modern city, making Rango his pawn as Dirt's sheriff and hiring the services of Rattlesnake Jake. Dufayel in turn wants to [[spoiler:claim the underground gold he was promised and needs to avoid becoming broke]], becoming an enemy of both Rango and Jake right in the beginning.
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* ContrastingSequelAntagonist: Tortoise John was the mayor of Dirt's desert town who was good at hiding his villainous nature with charisma. Dufayel is a wealthy inhabitant of cities who, despite his politeness, never really hides his villainous nature. condescending nature or motivations. They both attempted to put an end to the town of Dirt/Mud, but for different reasons; Tortoise John was a VisionaryVillain who wanted to create a modern city, making Rango his pawn as Dirt's sheriff and hiring the services of Rattlesnake Jake. Dufayel in turn wants while Dufayel's entire motivation is to [[spoiler:claim the underground gold he was promised and needs to avoid becoming broke]], becoming broke]]. Tortoise John made Rango his pawn by promoting him as Dirt's sheriff and pitted against him Rattlesnake Jake whom he hired. Dufayel in turn makes himself an enemy of both Rango and Jake who work together against right in from the beginning.
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* CatchPhrase: It's revealed that whenever someone tells him to go to hell, he asks where do they think he comes from.
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* HateSink: Benjamin is easier to hate than the other villains due to being a [[ItsAllAboutMe selfish]] and [[DirtyCoward cowardly]] liar who [[TheFirstCutIsTheDeepest deeply betrayed Grace]] in her backstory and attempts to do so again, [[DomesticAbuser assaulting her]] without a shred of remorse.
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* GoodCounterpart: Like Benjamin Hares, Rango's cowardly and tends to get into trouble with his bluffing. However, the climax proves Rango's moral superiority by having him [[spoiler:rescue the wife and son of the posthumous Hares [[TakingTheBullet from a bullet with his own body]]]], atoning that way for (well-meaningly) lying to Beans.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She's a cocky murderer, but she helps in [[spoiler:rescuing Grace and Teddy]].
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Reth is an outlaw and a thief, but he saved Jake when [[spoiler:the boy was captured by humans for a rattlesnake round-up]] and taught him to survive.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Reth is an outlaw and a thief, but he saved Jake when [[spoiler:the boy was captured by humans for a rattlesnake round-up]] and taught him to survive. He also helps Jake and Rango in [[spoiler:rescuing Grace and Teddy]].
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A Mojave kingsnake and one of the HiredGuns of Dufayel.
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-->''"I'm beginning to think I might be a little sorry killing you. Ya like being alive. Hmmm? Ya also like to feel a man's touch all over you. You like it. Even if it's the man who [[spoiler:killed your husband]], am I right? What a little tramp. Tell me: if I killed the rattlesnake, would you bed me to?"''
A Mojave kingsnake and one of the HiredGuns of Dufayel. He wants to kill Jake for killing his brother.
A Mojave kingsnake and one of the HiredGuns of Dufayel. He wants to kill Jake for killing his brother.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Bill and his goons disappear from the story after they're left injured by the battering they received from Grace and then Jake. The WordOfGod has it that as soon as they were healed, they decided to skip town.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Bill and his goons disappear from the story after they're left injured by the battering they received from Grace and then Jake. The WordOfGod [[WordOfGod author has it stated]] [[https://www.deviantart.com/adonovan94/art/Irvin-Worst-Johan-Quall-and-Kepper-669188015 here]] that as soon as they were healed, they decided to skip town.
* EvilCounterpart: Like Rango, Benjamin is cowardly and has a tendency to get into trouble and bluff. However, Benjamin is much more selfish and honorless than Rango.
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* KnightOfCerebus: Appears only in four chapters, but his act of subjecting Grace to domestic violence is one of the darkest moments of the story. Though he gets his comeuppance, the once happy relationship between Grace and Jake becomes more troubled than before with the HeroicBSOD Grace has in the following chapters. Also, Dufayel decides that with Hares' failure to legally sell him Grace's property, it's time to throw aside the pretenses of lawfulness and utilize more drastic measures.
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* KnightOfCerebus: Appears He appears only in four chapters, but his act of subjecting Grace to domestic violence is one of the darkest moments of the story. Though he gets his comeuppance, the once happy relationship between Grace and Jake becomes more troubled than before with the HeroicBSOD Grace has in the following chapters. Also, Dufayel decides that with Hares' failure to legally sell him Grace's property, it's time to throw aside the pretenses of lawfulness and utilize more drastic measures.
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* ShadowArchetype: Like with Rango, Benjamin's vices include pretentiousness and cowardness. Rango was exposed as a fraud but returned to save Dirt as a true hero, and even though he hasn't fully lost his vices, he attempts to do the right thing as a sheriff. Benjamin in turn is an incorrigible conman who cares firstly about himself and his own safety. He charmed Grace to marry him and left her penniless to escape his debts, returning ten years later with false regrets to sell her out again and get his debts covered. In short, Benjamin is what Rango could have become if he had never risen above his vices and instead continued his life as a fraudster on the move.
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* ShadowArchetype: Like with Rango, Benjamin's vices include pretentiousness and cowardness. Rango was exposed as a fraud but returned to save Dirt as a true hero, and even though he hasn't fully lost his vices, he attempts to do the right thing as a sheriff. Benjamin in turn is an incorrigible conman who cares firstly about himself and his own safety. He charmed Grace to marry him and left her penniless to escape his debts, returning ten years later with false regrets to sell her out again and get his debts covered. In short, Benjamin is what Rango could have become if he had never risen above his vices and instead continued his life as a fraudster on the move. In the climax, Rango does something Benjamin wouldn't have likely done: [[spoiler:[[TakingTheBullet jumping in front of the bullet]] aimed at Grace and Teddy]].
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* LightningBruiser: Being a member of a snake species that preys on other snakes, Henry's rather fast and strong. He also survives a fall of several storeys right after he's shot and sliced.
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* YouGotSpunk: He openly expresses lecherous interest in Grace's defiance during their first meeting.
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* TermsOfEndangerment: He calls Grace "sweetcheeks".
* YouGotSpunk: Heopenly expresses lecherous interest in Grace's defiance during their first meeting. defiant attitude. He later gives her [[spoiler:the location of Dufayel's hideout]], saying that he's doing the favour because he likes her spunk.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: He appears in one chapter only, but his actions lead to Jake (and the readers) finding out what happened to Teddy's nine unhatched siblings.
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* ContrastingSequelAntagonist: Tortoise John was Dirt's mayor who was good at hiding his villainous nature with charisma. Dufayel is a wealthy inhabitant of cities who, despite his politeness, never really hides his villainous nature. Tortoise John was a VisionaryVillain who wanted to create a modern city while denying Dirt's townsfolk the water they desperately recruited. Dufayel in turn wants to claim the underground gold he was promised and needs to avoid becoming broke.
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* ContrastingSequelAntagonist: Tortoise John was the mayor of Dirt's mayor desert town who was good at hiding his villainous nature with charisma. Dufayel is a wealthy inhabitant of cities who, despite his politeness, never really hides his villainous nature. Tortoise John was a VisionaryVillain who wanted to create a modern city while denying city, making Rango his pawn as Dirt's townsfolk sheriff and hiring the water they desperately recruited. services of Rattlesnake Jake. Dufayel in turn wants to claim [[spoiler:claim the underground gold he was promised and needs to avoid becoming broke.
broke]], becoming an enemy of both Rango and Jake right in the beginning.
-->''"You could call us 'fixers'..."''
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* KnifeNut: He often uses a knife.
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--> "Poor lizard. You are ''loco'', aren't you? You know how to kill a man, ''si''? But could you ''really'' stomach it? Go on. Find out. It's one thing to pull the trigger. It's another to watch your kill die."
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* FatalFlaw: Arrogance. Whenever he makes his moves, he believes that he has planned everything to his advantage, leading him to underestimate the heroes' cleverness and resilience at crucial moments.
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Jake becomes this once he has started his relationship with Grace. Benjamin showing up when Grace's present riles Jake, and her toleration of her estranged husband's presence angers him further. He notes to himself that he has never been possessive over the hookers he previously slept with.
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Jake becomes this once he has started his relationship with Grace. Benjamin showing up when Grace's present riles Jake, and her (reluctant) toleration of her estranged husband's presence angers him further. He notes to himself that he has never been possessive over the hookers he previously slept with.
* PrecisionFStrike: When he's first introduced to his father Benjamin Hares, Teddy's not pleased to meet him and asks what the hell Benjamin is doing there.
-->'''Teddy''': I want what's good for my momma and me.\\
'''Benjamin''': So do I.\\
'''Teddy''': No. You don't. That's why I'm not your son. Momma always said I was a gift from God. I'm gonna believe that instead.
'''Benjamin''': So do I.\\
'''Teddy''': No. You don't. That's why I'm not your son. Momma always said I was a gift from God. I'm gonna believe that instead.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: While he {{took a level in badass}} in the movie, he's still a seemingly ditzy oddball who talks himself into trouble and gets out by bluffing. However, he still shows occasionally how ''he'' is the one who defeated Rattlesnake Jake a year earlier. In the climax, he [[spoiler:kills Ramirez Arvenga and [[TakingTheBullet takes Dufayel's bullet]] for Grace and Teddy]].
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: While he {{took a level in badass}} in the movie, he's still a seemingly ditzy oddball who talks himself into trouble and gets out by bluffing. However, he still shows occasionally how ''he'' is the one who defeated Rattlesnake Jake just a year earlier.ago. In the climax, he [[spoiler:kills Ramirez Arvenga and [[TakingTheBullet takes Dufayel's bullet]] for Grace and Teddy]].
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* CulturedBadass: Quotes He quotes several times Creator/{{Shakespeare}}.
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* TemptingFate: He does in the 20th chapter by assuring Beans that he won't be needed on duty, only for frantic doorknocks and callings of his name to ensue.
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* WhatBeautifulEyes: Jake mocks her with this trope when they meet an year [[ContinuityNod after he threatened to squeeze her eyes out]].
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* WhatBeautifulEyes: Jake mocks her with this trope when they meet an just one year [[ContinuityNod after he threatened to squeeze her eyes out]].
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* TheChessmaster: He manipulates events to claim the heroes' lands for himself. Too bad for him that his schemes are foiled due to factors he didn't foresee.
* ClassyCane: Has one, but eventually smashes it into splinters during his [[VillainousBreakdown meltdown]]. He's got another one, though.
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* ClassyCane:Has Owns one, but he eventually smashes it into splinters during his [[VillainousBreakdown meltdown]]. He's got He has another one, though.
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* EvilPlan: Have Mud's area cleared out and harvest the [[spoiler:great underground gold deposit and avoid bankruptcy]].
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* EvilPlan: Have Mud's area cleared out and harvest the [[spoiler:great underground gold deposit and to avoid bankruptcy]].
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-->'''Rango''': For your own sake, I'm asking you to leave us be.
-->'''Dufayel''': Is that a threat, ''Monsieur'' Rango?
-->'''Rango''': You don't wanna corner a wild animal.
-->'''Dufayel''': And you had best not attempt to outfox a fox. It goes badly for you in your cause.
-->'''Dufayel''': Is that a threat, ''Monsieur'' Rango?
-->'''Rango''': You don't wanna corner a wild animal.
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-->'''Dufayel''':be.\\
'''Dufayel''': Is that a threat, ''Monsieur''Rango?
-->'''Rango''':Rango?\\
'''Rango''': You don't wanna corner a wildanimal.
-->'''Dufayel''':animal.\\
'''Dufayel''': And you had best not attempt to outfox a fox. It goes badly for you in your cause.
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'''Dufayel''': Is that a threat, ''Monsieur''
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'''Rango''': You don't wanna corner a wild
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'''Dufayel''': And you had best not attempt to outfox a fox. It goes badly for you in your cause.
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--> "Yer damned lucky the Sheriff's so soft. What's the matter, boy? Yer shakin' a little. How's it feel to be so helpless? In the face of death, it don't matter whether yer rich or poor, we all die in the end. Don't you ever forget that, 'cause one day I'm gonna be the one who comes callin' to claim yer soul. Now look into my eyes... I want you to remember them for the rest of yer life. 'Cause next time you see them ''this'' close, it'll be {{the last thing you ever see}}."
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* DeconfirmedBachelor: Jake has never had other than one-night stands with hookers and believes marriage to be a waste of time due to [[DomesticAbuse his father]]. When he starts hitting it with Grace, however, he finds himself drawn to her in a way like never before with any woman.
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* DeconfirmedBachelor: Jake has never had other than one-night stands with hookers and believes marriage to be a waste of time due to [[DomesticAbuse his father]]. When he starts hitting it with Grace, however, he finds himself drawn to her in a way like never before with any woman. [[spoiler:Though they don't become married in the end, Jake sticks around as Grace's mate.]]
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* HandicappedBadass: He lost his rattle to a hawk when he was a child and Reth "the Carpenter" operated his gatling gun onto his tail.
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* HandicappedBadass: He lost his rattle to a hawk when he was a child and Reth "the Carpenter" operated his gatling gun onto his tail.
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* OnlyInItForTheMoney: He accepts Rango's request to protect Mud only because he's been between jobs lately and is offered the belongings of [[spoiler:Tortoise John]] as the reward.
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* OnlyInItForTheMoney: He accepts Rango's request to protect Mud only because he's been between jobs lately and is offered the belongings of [[spoiler:Tortoise John]] Tortoise John as the reward.
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--> "Ya boys was real stupid in thinkin' you could claim hell without payin' the devil his due. I don't like sloppy work... and you boys just made one hell've'a mess."
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--> "''Burn'', asshole."
** He another one to [[spoiler:Dufayel]] whom he fills with bullets.
--> "My turn."
** He another one to [[spoiler:Dufayel]] whom he fills with bullets.
--> "My turn."
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** He gives another one to [[spoiler:Dufayel]] whom he fills with bullets.
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* ReminiscingAboutYourVictims: In the first scene portrayed from Jake's POV, he remembers with sadistic satisfaction how he killed [[spoiler:Tortoise John]] for his betrayal.
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* ReminiscingAboutYourVictims: In the first scene portrayed from Jake's POV, he remembers with sadistic satisfaction how he killed [[spoiler:Tortoise John]] Tortoise John for his betrayal.
* UnscrupulousHero: Jake is an outlaw and a murderer with a code of conduct. [[spoiler:Though he remains in his profession, he keeps that dark side of his life out of Mud and the Glossy farm he protects.]]
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* AdultFear: She constantly fears for her son's safety, and justifiably so.
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* AdultFear: She constantly fears for her son's safety, and justifiably so.so with the threats directed toward them both.
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* AndYourRewardIsEdible: When she's forced to ask for Jake's help in fixing the damages done in her home, she rewards him with a meal. At first he's not that pleased, but decides her food is worth the trouble. Later she makes him another meal for [[PetTheDog teaching Teddy to overcome his visual impairment]]. She gives him regular meals afterwards.
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* AndYourRewardIsEdible: When she's forced to ask for Jake's help in fixing the damages done in her home, farm, she rewards him with a meal. At first he's not that pleased, but decides her food is worth the trouble. Later she makes him another meal for [[PetTheDog teaching Teddy to overcome his visual impairment]]. She gives him regular meals afterwards.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: After a year of blissful marriage, Grace's husband suddenly disappeared and left her pregnant, penniless and homeless. [[TheFirstCutIsTheDeepest That betrayal has discouraged her from trying other men.]] [[spoiler:When robbers smashed nearly all of her unhatched eggs, she killed the ruffians in blind fury. Though she covered her act and had Teddy, [[FreudianExcuse the experience made her very prejudiced towards outlaws]].]]
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: After a one year of blissful marriage, Grace's husband suddenly disappeared and left her pregnant, penniless and homeless. [[TheFirstCutIsTheDeepest That betrayal has discouraged her from trying other men.]] [[spoiler:When robbers smashed nearly all of her unhatched eggs, she killed the ruffians in blind fury. Though she covered her act and had Teddy, [[FreudianExcuse the experience made her very prejudiced towards outlaws]].]]
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* HeroicFireRescue: She saves the wife and baby of the owner of the Convenient Store of Mud when it's set ablaze by the Hellhounds.
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* HeroicFireRescue: She saves the wife and baby of the owner of the Convenient Store of Mud when it's set ablaze by the Hellhounds. The townsfolk pipes down its [[FantasticRacism prejudices]] toward her after this, and Jake's esteem toward her grows.
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* UnstoppableRage: Teddy's beat up at the hands of Bad Bill's gang leads her to [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown brutally beat them]]. [[spoiler:The murder of nearly all her unhatched babies caused her to slaughter in blind fury the culprits.]]
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* UnstoppableRage: Teddy's beat up at the hands of Bad Bill's gang leads her to [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown brutally beat them]].them up]] in turn. [[spoiler:The murder of nearly all her unhatched babies caused her to slaughter in blind fury the culprits.]]
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* TheChessmaster: He manipulates events to claim the heroes' lands for himself. Too bad for him that his schemes are foiled due to factors he didn't foresee.
* SmallRoleBigImpact: He only appears in two chapters, but his act of bringing [[KnightOfCerebus Benjamin Hares]] on board starts a darker part at the end of the story.
* ShadowArchetype: Like with Rango, Benjamin's vices include pretentiousness and cowardness. Rango was exposed as a fraud but returned to save Dirt as a true hero, and even though he hasn't fully lost his vices, he attempts to do the right thing as a sheriff. Benjamin in turn is an incorrigible conman who cares firstly about himself and his own safety. He charmed Grace to marry him and left her penniless to escape his debts, returning ten years later with false regrets to sell her out again and get his debts covered. In short, Benjamin is what Rango could have become if he had never risen above his vices and instead continued his life as a fraudster on the move.
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* ShadowArchetype: Like with Rango, Benjamin's vices include pretentiousness and cowardness. Rango was exposed as a fraud but returned to save Dirt as a true hero, and even though he hasn't fully lost his vices, he attempts to do the right thing as a sheriff. Benjamin in turn is an incorrigible conman who cares firstly about himself and his own safety. He charmed Grace to marry him and left her penniless to escape his debts, returning ten years later with false regrets to sell her out again and get his debts covered. In short, Benjamin is what Rango could have become if he had never risen above his vices and instead continued his life as a fraudster on the move.