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* ReallyRoyaltyReveal: Not much of a surprise, since it was hinted at more than once before but it said out flat in Episode 094.
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* ReallyRoyaltyReveal: Not much of a surprise, since it was hinted at more than once before but it was said out flat in Episode 094.094.
* RulingFamilyMassacre: Hinted at what occurred when King Ozuru conquered Ashiroi, Kozuke's kingdom. This caused him both physical and mental scars.
* RulingFamilyMassacre: Hinted at what occurred when King Ozuru conquered Ashiroi, Kozuke's kingdom. This caused him both physical and mental scars.
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Shiori, otherwise known as Sumire, was a prostitute with whom Ryusaki had a former romantic relationship with. She is currently Kozuke's right-hand.
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* ChildhoodMarriagePromise: [[spoiler: In a flashback scene in Episode 57, Kozuke promises to marry Mei once they're older, and make her his "princess."]]
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*ChildhoodMarriagePromise: [[spoiler: In a flashback scene in Episode 57, Kozuke promises to marry Mei once they're older, and make her his "princess."]]
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* MindGameShip: Towards Mei, he is polite, flirty and ''completely'' manipulative, causing Mei a good deal of trauma.
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* MindGameShip: Towards Mei, he is soft-spoken, polite, flirty and ''completely'' manipulative, causing Mei a good deal of trauma.
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* MindGameShip: Towards Mei, he is polite, flirty and completely manipulative, causing Mei a good deal of trauma.
* TermsOfEndangerment: ''Justified.'' Refers to Mei as, "my love," which she is and always was.
* TermsOfEndangerment: ''Justified.'' Refers to Mei as, "my love," which she is and always was.
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* MindGameShip: Towards Mei, he is polite, flirty and completely ''completely'' manipulative, causing Mei a good deal of trauma.
* TermsOfEndangerment:''Justified.'' Justified. Refers to Mei as, "my love," which she is and always was.
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* VillainousCrush: He was in love with Mei before he went down the villain route and still is now.
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* TheStoic: Probably the least friendly of the cast. He rarely shows any emotion past disgust and only calls people by their title or last name.
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* TheStoic: Probably the least friendly of the cast. He rarely shows any emotion past disgust and only calls people by their title or last name.
name. However, [[NotSoStoic he has shown remorse over Daisuke.]]
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* RedOniBlueOni: [[ZigzaggedTrope Zig-zagged]]. On the surface, he appears to be the stoic blue to Hayate's hedonistic red. When the two are alone, however, then they switch, as their true colors primarily show then.
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* RedOniBlueOni: [[ZigzaggedTrope Zig-zagged]]. On the surface, he appears to be the stoic blue to Hayate's hedonistic red. When the two are alone, however, then they switch, as their true colors colours primarily show then.
* WarriorPrince: Well, he was. Even now as the King, he's still got the 'blood' bit down.
* [[spoiler: RoyalBlood]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: Died in battle so that his men could survive[[spoiler:... or so the lie went. He really died trying to bring down Kozuke, whom he feared, given his obsession with Mei, would try to go after his little sister. Still a heroic death, though.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: Died in battle so that his men could survive[[spoiler:... or so the lie went. He really died trying to bring down Kozuke, whom he feared, given his obsession with Mei, would try to go after his little sister. Still a heroic death, though.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: Died in battle so that his men could survive[[spoiler:...or so the lie went. He really died trying to bring down Kozuke, whom he feared with his obsession would try to go after his little sister. Still a heroic death, though.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: Died in battle so that his men could survive[[spoiler:... or so the lie went. He really died trying to bring down Kozuke, whom he feared with feared, given his obsession with Mei, would try to go after his little sister. Still a heroic death, though.]]
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Daisuke was somewhat protective of Mei, not wanting to her be involved or even know about his being in the Blood Core. He also demonstrated his protectiveness when he first showed Ryusaki, his sister Mei. He noticed that Ryusaki was ogling his sister too much and warned him to stop staring.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Daisuke was somewhat protective of Mei, not wanting to her be involved or even know about his being in the Blood Core. He His protective side also demonstrated his protectiveness shows in a flashback when he first showed Ryusaki, Ryusaki sees his sister Mei. He noticed that Ryusaki was ogling his sister too much for the first time, as he catches the lieutenant staring at Mei and warned warns him to stop staring.who he’s “ogling”.
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Mei Kihara is the protagonist of "My Dear Cold Blooded King." She is currently training in the Blood Core and was formally an assistant court physician in the Blood King's palace. She is also the temporary cover fiancée for the «Blood King».
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Mei Kihara is the protagonist of "My Dear Cold Blooded King." She is currently training in the Blood Core and was formally an assistant court physician in the Blood King's palace. She is also the temporary cover fiancée for the «Blood King».
Blood King.
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* HeroicSacrifice: Sacrifices himself so that his men can survive[[spoiler:...or so the lie went. He really died trying to bring down Kozuke, whom he feared with his obsession would try to go after his little sister. Still a heroic death, though.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: Sacrifices himself Died in battle so that his men can could survive[[spoiler:...or so the lie went. He really died trying to bring down Kozuke, whom he feared with his obsession would try to go after his little sister. Still a heroic death, though.]]
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Osamu Asukai is a Prince and the younger brother of Asukai Katsu and Ryusaki Hayate.
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Osamu Asukai is a Prince and the younger brother of Katsu Asukai Katsu [[spoiler: and Ryusaki Hayate.
Hayate Ryusaki.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: Sacrifices himself so that his men can survive...survive[[spoiler:...or so the lie went. He really died trying to bring down Kôzuke, Kozuke, whom he feared with his obsession would try to go after his little sister. Still a heroic death.
death, though.]]
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* DefiantCaptive: Played with. [[spoiler: While he has tried to escape the palace at least once, during which he meets Mei for the first time, he eventually feigned complacency in order to bide his time.]]
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* DefiantCaptive: Played with. [[spoiler: While he has tried to escape the palace at least once, during which he meets Mei for the first time, he eventually feigned complacency compliance in order to bide his time.]]
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* {{Yandere}}: Kozuke is also notably obsessive when it comes to Mei to the point of being a borderline Yandere, in doing such as "marking" her, threatening her to stay away from other men and showing his own control over her. Additionally, he "baits" her with information he knows she wants more than anything and keeps look-alikes of Mei as concubines.
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* {{Yandere}}: Kozuke is also notably obsessive when it comes to Mei to the point of being a borderline Yandere, in doing Yandere. He demonstrates such qualities as "marking" her, threatening her to stay away from other men and showing his own control over her. Additionally, he "baits" her with information he knows she wants more than anything and keeps look-alikes of Mei as concubines.
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The Hebi Gang (蛇) is an anarchist group lead by Kozuke and rose to power roughly six years ago. They seek to tear the Blood King off his throne and replace him with the "true king."
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The Hebi Gang (蛇) is an anarchist group group, lead by Kozuke and Kozuke, which rose to power roughly six years ago. They seek to tear the Blood King off his throne and replace him with the "true king."
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[[folder: “Yuuta”/[[spoiler: Katsu Asukai]]]]
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[[folder: “Yuuta”/[[spoiler: Yuuta/[[spoiler: Katsu Asukai]]]]
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One of the first people Mei meets upon moving into the palace. Despite a hostile first meeting between him and Mei, the two are quick to take an interest in each other, despite the latter's suspicions. Their relationship is further complicated when it's revealed that [[spoiler: he is Katsu Asukai, the current Blood King]].
One of the first people Mei meets upon moving into the palace. Despite a hostile first meeting between him and Mei, the two are quick to take an interest in each other, despite the latter's suspicions. Their relationship is further complicated when it's revealed that [[spoiler: he is Katsu Asukai, the current Blood King]].
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[[folder: “Yuuta”/[[spoiler: Katsu Asukai]]
Asukai]]]]
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* [[spoiler: ActionPolitician]]: The [[spoiler: ruling Blood King]] and no slouch when it comes to swordsmanship, especially given how many people he's seen cutting down.
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* [[spoiler: ActionPolitician]]: ActionPolitician: The [[spoiler: ruling Blood King]] and no slouch when it comes to swordsmanship, especially given how many people he's seen cutting down.
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* [[spoiler: HeroicBastard: Is the eldest son to the previous Blood King and a concubine. That being said, this doesn't stop him from trying to exert his authority to work towards what he sees as the greater good.]]
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* [[spoiler: HeroicBastard: [[spoiler: Is the eldest son to the previous Blood King and a concubine. That being said, this doesn't stop him from trying to exert his authority to work towards what he sees as the greater good.]]
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* [[spoiler: ChildhoodMarriagePromise: In a flashback scene in Episode 057, Kozuke promises to marry Mei once they're older, and make her his "princess."]]
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* [[spoiler: ChildhoodMarriagePromise: [[spoiler: In a flashback scene in Episode 057, 57, Kozuke promises to marry Mei once they're older, and make her his "princess."]]
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* LikeASonToMe: Thinks of both, Sanjirou Kihara (Mei's father) as this and Kôzuke [[spoiler: (Murakami Yuuta)]].
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* LikeASonToMe: Thinks of both, Sanjirou Kihara (Mei's father) as this and Kôzuke alongside [[spoiler: (Murakami Yuuta)]].
Kozuke, also known as Yuuta Murakami.]]
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Yuuta is one of the first people Mei meets upon moving into the palace. Despite a hostile first meeting between him and Mei, the two are quick to take an interest in each other, despite the latter's suspicions. Their relationship is further complicated when it's revealed that [[spoiler: he is Katsu Asukai, the current Blood King]].
Yuuta is one of the first people Mei meets upon moving into the palace. Despite a hostile first meeting between him and Mei, the two are quick to take an interest in each other, despite the latter's suspicions. Their relationship is further complicated when it's revealed that [[spoiler: he is Katsu Asukai, the current Blood King]].
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[[folder: Yuuta/[[spoiler: Katsu Asukai]]]]
Yuuta is oneAsukai]]
One of the first people Mei meets upon moving into the palace. Despite a hostile first meeting between him and Mei, the two are quick to take an interest in each other, despite the latter's suspicions. Their relationship is further complicated when it's revealed that [[spoiler: he is Katsu Asukai, the current Blood King]].
Yuuta is one
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Kozuke is the leader of the Hebi Gang. He rose to power roughly six years ago and is referred to as "Master," by his underlings. He [[spoiler: was once childhood friends with Katsu, Ryusaki and Shibisaki and Mei's childhood sweetheart. Now, he wishes to overthrow the king and take Mei as his own.]]
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Kozuke is the leader of the Hebi Gang. He rose to power roughly six years ago and is referred to as "Master," by his underlings. He [[spoiler: was once childhood friends with Katsu, Ryusaki Katsu and Shibisaki and as well as Mei's childhood sweetheart. Now, he wishes to overthrow the king and take Mei as his own.]]
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* DefiantCaptive: During his time as a hostage in the palace, he made multiple attempts to escape, finally succeeding and during this escape would have his fateful first meeting with Mei.
* EvilFormerFriend: Is this to [[spoiler: most males of the cast.]]
* EvilFormerFriend: Is this to [[spoiler: most males of the cast.]]
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* DefiantCaptive: During his time as a hostage in Played with. [[spoiler: While he has tried to escape the palace, he made multiple attempts to escape, finally succeeding and palace at least once, during this escape would have his fateful which he meets Mei for the first meeting with Mei.
time, he eventually feigned complacency in order to bide his time.]]
* EvilFormerFriend: Is this to [[spoiler:most males of the cast.Katsu and Shibisaki.]]
* EvilFormerFriend: Is this to [[spoiler:
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Yuuta Murakami]]]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: Sacrifices himself so that his men can survive.
survive...or so the lie went. He really died trying to bring down Kôzuke, whom he feared with his obsession would try to go after his little sister. Still a heroic death.
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A mysterious figure that serves as Kozuke's personal muscle.
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* LikeASonToMe: Thinks of both, Sanjirou Kihara (Mei's father) as this.
this and Kôzuke [[spoiler: (Murakami Yuuta)]].
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Katsu]]
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* EvilFormerFriend: Is this to [[spoiler: Katsu.most males of the cast.]]
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Kozuke is the leader of the Hebi Gang. He rose to power roughly six years ago and is referred to as "Master," by his underlings. He [[spoiler: was once Katsu's childhood friend and Mei's childhood sweetheart. Now, he wishes to overthrow the king and take Mei as his own.]]
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Kozuke is the leader of the Hebi Gang. He rose to power roughly six years ago and is referred to as "Master," by his underlings. He [[spoiler: was once Katsu's childhood friend friends with Katsu, Ryusaki and Shibisaki and Mei's childhood sweetheart. Now, he wishes to overthrow the king and take Mei as his own.]]
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* EvilRedhead: Has bright red hair and has the worst intentions for both Mei and [[spoiler: Katsu.]]
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* EvilRedhead: Has bright red hair and has the worst intentions for both Mei and [[spoiler: Katsu.]]Redhead? Check. Evil? Check.
