Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6 (click to see context) from:
* CloningBlues: Is rather upset about the prospect of being a ReplacementGoldfish [[HumanWeapon Pony Weapon]] to Twilight Sparkle.
to:
* CloningBlues: CloneAngst: Is rather upset about the prospect of being a ReplacementGoldfish [[HumanWeapon Pony Weapon]] to Twilight Sparkle.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 4 (click to see context) from:
[[folder:Evefall]]
to:
Changed line(s) 7 (click to see context) from:
* EvilCounterpart: Appears to be on this path in regards to Twilight.
to:
* EvilCounterpart: EvilDoppelganger: Appears to be on this path in regards to Twilight.
Changed line(s) 33 (click to see context) from:
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Defects from Starfleet.]]
to:
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Defects [[spoiler:{{Defect|orFromDecadence}}s from Starfleet.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
The characters of the ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis''. Beware of '''spoilers'''!
to:
The characters of the ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis''. Beware of '''spoilers'''!
'''{{spoiler}}s'''!
----
[[foldercontrol]]
----
[[foldercontrol]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 37 (click to see context) from:
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[DesignatedHero Granted, it's not that big of a difference]], but here, his more morally questionable actions and traits are put in the spotlight.
to:
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[DesignatedHero Granted, it's not that big of a difference]], but here, his more morally questionable actions and traits are put in the spotlight. Also, he holds even more contempt for friendship than his canon counterpart.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 36 (click to see context) from:
* AbusiveParents: Poor Leilani, you know he's a bad father to her when he calls ''Starla'' the closest he has to a daughter.
to:
* AbusiveParents: Poor Leilani, you know he's a bad father to her when he calls ''Starla'' the closest he has to a daughter. He mostly abuses her for her disabilities.
Added DiffLines:
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Starla Shine]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: One of the primary antagonists of the fic, driven by her jealousy towards Twilight.
* AwfulWeddedLife: She and Lightning turn out to be incompatible. She leaves him after he starts growing feelings for the deceased Twilight.
* UndyingLoyalty: To Starfleet, she considers herself a role model for it and strives to be such.
* {{Yandere}}: She demonizes Twilight and, when somepony seems to be her, Starla tries to murder her because Lightning has feelings for her.
[[folder:Starla Shine]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: One of the primary antagonists of the fic, driven by her jealousy towards Twilight.
* AwfulWeddedLife: She and Lightning turn out to be incompatible. She leaves him after he starts growing feelings for the deceased Twilight.
* UndyingLoyalty: To Starfleet, she considers herself a role model for it and strives to be such.
* {{Yandere}}: She demonizes Twilight and, when somepony seems to be her, Starla tries to murder her because Lightning has feelings for her.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
No longer a trope.
Deleted line(s) 33 (click to see context) :
* YourCheatingHeart: Unsatisfied with his marriage to Starla, he begins to develop feelings for Twilight.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 9,15 (click to see context) :
[[folder:Lightning Dawn]]
* AdaptationalHeroism: He's considerably more distraught over Twilight's death than in canon, [[spoiler:and also defects from Starfleet]].
* AwfulWeddedLife: He and Starla turn out to be incompatible, and after they divorce, he admits he treated her badly.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Defects from Starfleet.]]
* YourCheatingHeart: Unsatisfied with his marriage to Starla, he begins to develop feelings for Twilight.
[[/folder]]
* AdaptationalHeroism: He's considerably more distraught over Twilight's death than in canon, [[spoiler:and also defects from Starfleet]].
* AwfulWeddedLife: He and Starla turn out to be incompatible, and after they divorce, he admits he treated her badly.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Defects from Starfleet.]]
* YourCheatingHeart: Unsatisfied with his marriage to Starla, he begins to develop feelings for Twilight.
[[/folder]]
Added DiffLines:
* GenkiGirl: True to her character, Pinkie fits this trope, especially when compared to [[TheStoic Maud]].
* TokenGoodTeammate: Out of the Starfleet military assigned to Zebrica, Pinkie and Maud are among the few members who actually care about the zebras.
* TokenGoodTeammate: Out of the Starfleet military assigned to Zebrica, Pinkie and Maud are among the few members who actually care about the zebras.
Added DiffLines:
[[folder:Fluttershy]]
* DomesticAbuse: Suffers emotional abuse from Rhymey, who controls who she can be with and gets mad when she complains about it.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Rainbow Dash]]
* SurvivorsGuilt: Is devastated over Twilight's death, as well as her separation from her remaining friends.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Lightning Dawn]]
* AdaptationalHeroism: He's considerably more distraught over Twilight's death than in canon, [[spoiler:and also defects from Starfleet]].
* AwfulWeddedLife: He and Starla turn out to be incompatible, and after they divorce, he admits he treated her badly.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Defects from Starfleet.]]
* YourCheatingHeart: Unsatisfied with his marriage to Starla, he begins to develop feelings for Twilight.
[[/folder]]
* DomesticAbuse: Suffers emotional abuse from Rhymey, who controls who she can be with and gets mad when she complains about it.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Rainbow Dash]]
* SurvivorsGuilt: Is devastated over Twilight's death, as well as her separation from her remaining friends.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Lightning Dawn]]
* AdaptationalHeroism: He's considerably more distraught over Twilight's death than in canon, [[spoiler:and also defects from Starfleet]].
* AwfulWeddedLife: He and Starla turn out to be incompatible, and after they divorce, he admits he treated her badly.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Defects from Starfleet.]]
* YourCheatingHeart: Unsatisfied with his marriage to Starla, he begins to develop feelings for Twilight.
[[/folder]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1 (click to see context) from:
The characters of the ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis''. Beware of '''spoilers'''!
to:
The characters of the ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis''. Beware of '''spoilers'''!'''spoilers'''!
[[folder:Evefall]]
* AmbiguouslyGay: Notably, some of her interactions with Raven show her admiring the latter's beauty and thinking she's cute.
* CloningBlues: Is rather upset about the prospect of being a ReplacementGoldfish [[HumanWeapon Pony Weapon]] to Twilight Sparkle.
* EvilCounterpart: Appears to be on this path in regards to Twilight.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Lightning Dawn]]
* AdaptationalHeroism: He's considerably more distraught over Twilight's death than in canon, [[spoiler:and also defects from Starfleet]].
* AwfulWeddedLife: He and Starla turn out to be incompatible, and after they divorce, he admits he treated her badly.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Defects from Starfleet.]]
* YourCheatingHeart: Unsatisfied with his marriage to Starla, he begins to develop feelings for Twilight.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Twilight Sparkle]]
* AllLovingHero: It's this trait that [[{{Pun}} sparked]] Lightning's character development, and also what attracted him post mortem.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Comes back to life through Eve, only in her original pony form.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Pinkie Pie]]
* AllLovingHero: She triggers Kitty's HeelFaceTurn by offering to forgive her and give her a second chance at friendship.
* BreakingTheFellowship: Is separated from her friends to work with the zebras by Starfleet at the beginning of the fic.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Grand Ruler Celesto]]
* AbusiveParents: Poor Leilani, you know he's a bad father to her when he calls ''Starla'' the closest he has to a daughter.
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[DesignatedHero Granted, it's not that big of a difference]], but here, his more morally questionable actions and traits are put in the spotlight.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Here, he's one of Titan's creations, along with Raven.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Evefall]]
* AmbiguouslyGay: Notably, some of her interactions with Raven show her admiring the latter's beauty and thinking she's cute.
* CloningBlues: Is rather upset about the prospect of being a ReplacementGoldfish [[HumanWeapon Pony Weapon]] to Twilight Sparkle.
* EvilCounterpart: Appears to be on this path in regards to Twilight.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Lightning Dawn]]
* AdaptationalHeroism: He's considerably more distraught over Twilight's death than in canon, [[spoiler:and also defects from Starfleet]].
* AwfulWeddedLife: He and Starla turn out to be incompatible, and after they divorce, he admits he treated her badly.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Defects from Starfleet.]]
* YourCheatingHeart: Unsatisfied with his marriage to Starla, he begins to develop feelings for Twilight.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Twilight Sparkle]]
* AllLovingHero: It's this trait that [[{{Pun}} sparked]] Lightning's character development, and also what attracted him post mortem.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Comes back to life through Eve, only in her original pony form.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Pinkie Pie]]
* AllLovingHero: She triggers Kitty's HeelFaceTurn by offering to forgive her and give her a second chance at friendship.
* BreakingTheFellowship: Is separated from her friends to work with the zebras by Starfleet at the beginning of the fic.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Grand Ruler Celesto]]
* AbusiveParents: Poor Leilani, you know he's a bad father to her when he calls ''Starla'' the closest he has to a daughter.
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[DesignatedHero Granted, it's not that big of a difference]], but here, his more morally questionable actions and traits are put in the spotlight.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Here, he's one of Titan's creations, along with Raven.]]
[[/folder]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
The characters of the ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis''. Beware of '''spoilers'''!
