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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Beginning from when she was eleven years old, where Vita has some dark happenings in discreetly reveals to Geiger her past, most of mother found out Vita wasn't actually ''[[YourCheatingHeart her]]'' daughter, which are only hinted eventually caused such friction between Vita's parents they split up. Vita was dragged along for the next few years, constantly moving and forced to grow up too fast in some desperate attempt to help provide for Dad. The whole experience has left Vita ''severely'' embittered and way more cynical and depressed than any fourteen-year-old should be.
* DefrostingIceQueen: Vita is scared, defensive, and hostile toward the inhabitants of the Houses atso far.first, to the point where she can't even summon the energy to try and look out for Wiggy right after [[spoiler:her brother dies]], but the longer she stays, the more it settles into Vita she ''can't'' just turn away from all her problems anymore, resulting in Geiger finally starting to defrost her.
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* JadeColoredGlasses: As a consequence of having forced herself to grow up too fast after her parents split apart, Vita bitterly admits to Geiger that "I'm fourteen years old, and I've already seen myself working dead-end jobs until the day I die."
* KidHero:Her age isn't stated, but from the remarks implying Vita has been too young to get a job for the past few She's fourteen years old--albeit a ''lot'' more [[WiseBeyondTheirYears experienced and the general comments toward her, she can't be any older mature]] than sixteen.one would expect--and finds herself, however unwillingly at first, in the middle of a war she accidentally starts.
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* ReluctantHero: Vita wants absolutely ''nothing'' to do with Inoptica and the war between the Houses and just wants to go home, but she's pulled into the center of it -- [[spoiler:particularly after Volte dies and she's caught in the middle of a blooming war.]]
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* ReluctantHero: Vita wants absolutely ''nothing'' to do with Inoptica and the war between the Houses and just wants to go home, but she's pulled into the center of it -- [[spoiler:particularly after Volte dies and she's caught in the middle of a blooming war.]]]] Eventually, Vita ''does'' resolve to stop turning her back to everything and decides to join House Noon permanently to see some solution to the war through.
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* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Deconstructed. Vita's emotionally stunted and depressed as a result of having ''forced'' herself to grow up faster than she should have, with the overall effect it has on her giving her a cynical, dreary resignation to life at the tender age of fourteen.
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The Batlord, and the leader of House Noon.
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* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler: He goes out fighting Zeil in a savage fight, and dies to trust very plot relevant information to Vita.]]
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* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He goes out fighting Zeil in a savage fight, and dies to trust very plot relevant information to Vita.]]]]
* SmallRoleBigImpact: [[spoiler:Volte's actual page-time alive is relatively short and he doesn't get to know Vita very well, but his death kickstarts the war framing the story's conflict and he's hinted to be at the heart of some shady stuff behind the scenes.]]
* WalkingSpoiler: Difficult to discuss him without spoiler an early story twist.
* SmallRoleBigImpact: [[spoiler:Volte's actual page-time alive is relatively short and he doesn't get to know Vita very well, but his death kickstarts the war framing the story's conflict and he's hinted to be at the heart of some shady stuff behind the scenes.]]
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!!House Dusk
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The native house of the night-claws.
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* CastingAShadow: Seemingly their main powers. Their approach in the Wilt is always heralded by shadows, in which they can manifest in and out of to hunt down their prey.
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: Quite vampiric, alongside the day-vamps, but a ''lot'' more monstrous in appearance and with serpentine eyes meant to see in the dark.
* WeakenedByTheLight: The light severely burns them, to the point where it can leave them writhing in agony.
[[folder:Korva]]
The Pitchwraith, and the head of House Dusk.
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* TheGhost: Hitherto unseen.
* TheManBehindTheMan: Zeil claims Korva is as much in the plot to assassinate Volte and Psyka as he is, but several things fail to corrobate this--mostly the fact that Korva is reputed to be the ''complete'' opposite of Zeil's pragmatic, stab-you-in-the-back villainy, and his failure to show up at either the meeting or any of the ensuing aftermath.
[[folder:Zeil]]
The second-in-command of House Dusk, and a roving night-claw with a prejudice against the other Houses--Noon, in particular.
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* AffablyEvil: Slips closer to FauxAffablyEvil when he's confronting the rest of Noon and Midnight, but Zeil is courteous and usually jokes around with his cronies even in the middle of a hunt.
* BerserkButton: Volte insinuates Zeil was the one who murdered his beloved "Pye," and this seems to provoke Zeil beyond anything else that's been said to him before. [[spoiler:Enough so that it leads directly to his death.]]
* BoomHeadshot: [[spoiler:With a bow and arrow instead of a gun, but this is how Aile kills him.]]
* DecoyAntagonist: Zeil is introduced more or less the closest thing the story has to a tangible villain and is introduced as someone with a major role to come, [[spoiler:but he dies ten chapters in while taking Volte with him.]]
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Zeil's a murderous savage and known militant in the Houses, but he truly does care about his fellow night-claws. His vendetta stems from Noon's apparent murder of a night-claw named Pye--whose relationship with Zeil is unknown--and Volte accusing Zeil of simply using her death as a cheap excuse makes him ''[[BerserkButton flip]]''. Even Vita picks up there's no way Zeil could have murdered Pye himself.
* LennonSpecs: Wears a pair verbatim called "Lennon specs" in the story itself, to hide his real eyes and seemingly to help him see in the light.
* SmallRoleBigImpact: [[spoiler:Zeil is a minor antagonist in the scheme of things, but it's the successful execution of his plan to assassinate Volte that leads to the provocation of the ensuing war between Houses that frames the conflict for the rest of the story, long after his death.]]
* VillainousFriendship: Shares one with his CoDragons Aiken and Reva. He openly calls them "pals" and gets along with them plenty even in the middle of his hunts. It's hinted Pye used to be among his CoDragons as well, which explains a lot about his ensuing grief.
* WalkingSpoiler: Like Volte, it's hard to discuss him without revealing pertinent details about the plot.
[[folder:Aiken & Reva]]
Zeil's two cronies and members of his pack in House Dusk.
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* CoDragons: To Zeil, serving as his fellow pack members. It's hinted Pye used to be among them too.
* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: [[spoiler:Cut in half by Psyka in the six seconds that also claim Volte and Zeil.]]
* ThoseTwoBadGuys: Never seen apart, [[SatelliteCharacter and they in turn revolve around their boss]].
* VillainousFriendship: Share one that's entirely corrobated with Zeil.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Vita's actions result in [[spoiler: a practical war between Houses Noon and Dusk, without her having intended any of it.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Vita starts to regret her behavior with House Noon, especially [[spoiler: when her own trauma made her abandon Wigavat after Volte's death.]]
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* BrutalHonesty: He tells Vita in no uncertain terms how shitty of her it was to just retreat from House Noon after [[spoiler: Volte's death]].
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* NiceGirl: Wiggy is a very, very sweet girl, and shows concern for everyone she meets. [[spoiler: Even after losing her brother, she still takes time to show concern and kindness to Vita, even if Vita deserving it at the time is debatable.]]
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* TrueCompanions: One thing House Noon is shown to emphasize is brotherhood and family. Geiger says as such when introducing the tenats of the House and seems almost ''betrayed'' when Vita seems to ignore Volte's death, which causes such a vengeful stir in the rest of the House they're willing to go to war with Dusk over it.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Admits he has "trouble putting dots" on Vita since she's still too human for him to gauge.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Warped as Geiger's humanity has become, he's clearly pissed off something ''fierce'' by Vita's apparent apathy to Volte's death and Wiggy's ensuing reaction.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: As crude as his pranks are, he stops when it's clear they're causing Vita distress.
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The leader of House Noon.
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* OneHundredPercentAdorationRating: He's utterly beloved by House Noon and the otherDay Vampsday-vamps. They're willing to slaughter all of Dusk to avenge him.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Warped as Geiger's humanity has become, he's clearly pissed off something ''fierce'' by Vita's apparent apathy to Volte's death and Wiggy's ensuing reaction.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: As crude as his pranks are, he stops when it's clear they're causing Vita distress.
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The leader of House Noon.
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* OneHundredPercentAdorationRating: He's utterly beloved by House Noon and the other
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* ReluctantHero: Vita wants absolutely ''nothing'' to do with Inoptica and the war between the Houses and just wants to go home, but she's pulled into the center of it -- [[spoiler:particularly after Volte dies and she's caught in the middle of a blooming war.]]
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-->''[[InnerMonologue You're not ready. But what other choice do you have?]]''
A teenage girl who wishes for a more exciting and interesting life. She gets her wish, though perhaps not in the way she would like...
* AmbiguousDisorder: It's never named explicitly, but Vita is clearly suffering from some sort of depression given the lack of motivation she shows back on Earth, constant self-beratement and ambiguously suicidal thoughts.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: 'Yearning for a life beyond making ends meet' leads Vita into quite the disturbing situations...
* BreakTheCutie: Vita goes through ''hell'' in Inoptica, ending up terrorized and pursued with no way to make sense of the situation.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Vita has some dark happenings in her past, most of which are only hinted at so far.
* FantasticRacism: Vita is royally freaked out by the inhabitants of the Houses and considers them 'freaks' at first.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: ''Constantly''. Vita can't seem to make one move without lambasting herself for it in her inner monologue.
* IJustWantToBeSpecial: As a result of living a life of making ends meet, Vita wants something special to happen to her and to be more than just a girl working dead end jobs...it comes true in all the wrong ways.
* KidHero: Her age isn't stated, but from the remarks implying Vita has been too young to get a job for the past few years and the general comments toward her, she can't be any older than sixteen.
* MissingMom: Vita's mom is implied to be quite 'absent.'
* PerpetualFrowner: Vita is never shown smiling, not even during sewing where she's quite intent and focused. Aile even notes it's a goal of hers to get Vita to smile.
* ThePessimist: Vita tends to assume the worst of ''every'' scenario and her mind is constantly dreaming up new, awful scenarios for her in the future based on her decisions.
* TheQuietOne: Almost the entirety of the first three chapters go without any verbal comment from her. Even when she's in the company of others, Vita tends to say little compared to the others in the Houses. She tends to talk the most when she's flustered or panicked.
* TraumaCongaLine: Vita goes through hell in Inoptica. From being pursued by horrific monsters, hunted by Zeil and cronies and [[spoiler: witnessing a horrible slaughter she feels responsible for with Volte dying practically in her arms.]]
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: 'Yearning for a life beyond making ends meet' leads Vita into quite the disturbing situations...
* BreakTheCutie: Vita goes through ''hell'' in Inoptica, ending up terrorized and pursued with no way to make sense of the situation.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Vita has some dark happenings in her past, most of which are only hinted at so far.
* FantasticRacism: Vita is royally freaked out by the inhabitants of the Houses and considers them 'freaks' at first.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: ''Constantly''. Vita can't seem to make one move without lambasting herself for it in her inner monologue.
* IJustWantToBeSpecial: As a result of living a life of making ends meet, Vita wants something special to happen to her and to be more than just a girl working dead end jobs...it comes true in all the wrong ways.
* KidHero: Her age isn't stated, but from the remarks implying Vita has been too young to get a job for the past few years and the general comments toward her, she can't be any older than sixteen.
* MissingMom: Vita's mom is implied to be quite 'absent.'
* PerpetualFrowner: Vita is never shown smiling, not even during sewing where she's quite intent and focused. Aile even notes it's a goal of hers to get Vita to smile.
* ThePessimist: Vita tends to assume the worst of ''every'' scenario and her mind is constantly dreaming up new, awful scenarios for her in the future based on her decisions.
* TheQuietOne: Almost the entirety of the first three chapters go without any verbal comment from her. Even when she's in the company of others, Vita tends to say little compared to the others in the Houses. She tends to talk the most when she's flustered or panicked.
* TraumaCongaLine: Vita goes through hell in Inoptica. From being pursued by horrific monsters, hunted by Zeil and cronies and [[spoiler: witnessing a horrible slaughter she feels responsible for with Volte dying practically in her arms.]]
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* AmbiguousDisorder: It's never named explicitly, but Vita is clearly suffering from some sort of depression given the lack of motivation she shows back on Earth, constant self-beratement and ambiguously suicidal thoughts.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: 'Yearning for a life beyond making ends meet' leads Vita into quite the disturbing situations...
* BreakTheCutie: Vita goes through ''hell'' in Inoptica, ending up terrorized and pursued with no way to make sense of the situation.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Vita has some dark happenings in her past, most of which are only hinted at so far.
* FantasticRacism: Vita is royally freaked out by the inhabitants of the Houses and considers them 'freaks' at first.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: ''Constantly''. Vita can't seem to make one move without lambasting herself for it in her inner monologue.
* IJustWantToBeSpecial: As a result of living a life of making ends meet, Vita wants something special to happen to her and to be more than just a girl working dead end jobs...it comes true in all the wrong ways.
* KidHero: Her age isn't stated, but from the remarks implying Vita has been too young to get a job for the past few years and the general comments toward her, she can't be any older than sixteen.
* MissingMom: Vita's mom is implied to be quite 'absent.'
* PerpetualFrowner: Vita is never shown smiling, not even during sewing where she's quite intent and focused. Aile even notes it's a goal of hers to get Vita to smile.
* ThePessimist: Vita tends to assume the worst of ''every'' scenario and her mind is constantly dreaming up new, awful scenarios for her in the future based on her decisions.
* TheQuietOne: Almost the entirety of the first three chapters go without any verbal comment from her. Even when she's in the company of others, Vita tends to say little compared to the others in the Houses. She tends to talk the most when she's flustered or panicked.
* TraumaCongaLine: Vita goes through hell in Inoptica. From being pursued by horrific monsters, hunted by Zeil and cronies and [[spoiler: witnessing a horrible slaughter she feels responsible for with Volte dying practically in her arms.]]
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!!Aile
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A member of House Midnight who finds Vita and becomes a guide to her in the dangers of Inoptica.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: 'Yearning for a life beyond making ends meet' leads Vita into quite the disturbing situations...
* BreakTheCutie: Vita goes through ''hell'' in Inoptica, ending up terrorized and pursued with no way to make sense of the situation.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Vita has some dark happenings in her past, most of which are only hinted at so far.
* FantasticRacism: Vita is royally freaked out by the inhabitants of the Houses and considers them 'freaks' at first.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: ''Constantly''. Vita can't seem to make one move without lambasting herself for it in her inner monologue.
* IJustWantToBeSpecial: As a result of living a life of making ends meet, Vita wants something special to happen to her and to be more than just a girl working dead end jobs...it comes true in all the wrong ways.
* KidHero: Her age isn't stated, but from the remarks implying Vita has been too young to get a job for the past few years and the general comments toward her, she can't be any older than sixteen.
* MissingMom: Vita's mom is implied to be quite 'absent.'
* PerpetualFrowner: Vita is never shown smiling, not even during sewing where she's quite intent and focused. Aile even notes it's a goal of hers to get Vita to smile.
* ThePessimist: Vita tends to assume the worst of ''every'' scenario and her mind is constantly dreaming up new, awful scenarios for her in the future based on her decisions.
* TheQuietOne: Almost the entirety of the first three chapters go without any verbal comment from her. Even when she's in the company of others, Vita tends to say little compared to the others in the Houses. She tends to talk the most when she's flustered or panicked.
* TraumaCongaLine: Vita goes through hell in Inoptica. From being pursued by horrific monsters, hunted by Zeil and cronies and [[spoiler: witnessing a horrible slaughter she feels responsible for with Volte dying practically in her arms.]]
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* ActionGirl: The most action oriented female character in Inoptica thus far.
* BigDamnHeroes: She shows up to rescue Vita from Zeil with a solid warning to Zeil if he puts a toe out of line.
* CutenessProximity: She finds the addition of Wigavat to an otherwise solemn area quite pleasing.
* GoodIsNotSoft: Aile is pleasant, kind and helpful, and will happily put a shaft through the enemy's skull if she has to.
* ImprobableAimingSkills: Aile is probably the best shot in Optica with a bow and can hit anything, at any distance.
* LittleBitBeastly: Like most people in Inoptica. Aile seems to have some birdlike qualities, namely her downy hair.
* NiceGirl: Surprisingly pleasant and kind to Vita.
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A member of House Midnight who finds Vita and becomes a guide to her in the dangers of Inoptica.
* ActionGirl: The most action oriented female character in Inoptica thus far.
* BigDamnHeroes: She shows up to rescue Vita from Zeil with a solid warning to Zeil if he puts a toe out of line.
* CutenessProximity: She finds the addition of Wigavat to an otherwise solemn area quite pleasing.
* GoodIsNotSoft: Aile is pleasant, kind and helpful, and will happily put a shaft through the enemy's skull if she has to.
* ImprobableAimingSkills: Aile is probably the best shot in Optica with a bow and can hit anything, at any distance.
* LittleBitBeastly: Like most people in Inoptica. Aile seems to have some birdlike qualities, namely her downy hair.
* NiceGirl: Surprisingly pleasant and kind to Vita.
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The youngest member of House Noon and Volte's little sister.
* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: The death of her beloved elder brother has her screaming in the most aggrieved manner Vita has ever, or ''will'' ever hear.]]
* CheerfulChild: For her situation, Wiggy is an adorably perky little thing.
* TheCutie: Despite looking like a humanoid bat at times, Wiggy wears a dress, acts adorable and is sweet to just about everyone.
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: The death of her beloved elder brother has her screaming in the most aggrieved manner Vita has ever, or ''will'' ever hear.]]
* CheerfulChild: For her situation, Wiggy is an adorably perky little thing.
* TheCutie: Despite looking like a humanoid bat at times, Wiggy wears a dress, acts adorable and is sweet to just about everyone.
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-->''[[InnerMonologue You're not ready. But what other choice do you have?]]''
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* OneHundredPercentApprovalRating: He's utterly beloved by House Noon and the other Day Vamps
* AFatherToHisMen: An elder brother more like, but Volte cares greatly for his followers who respect him in turn.
* BigBrotherInstinct: One of his main goals is protecting his young sister Wigavat.
* TheLeader: The head of House Noon with all that implies.
* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler: He goes out fighting Zeil in a savage fight, and dies to trust very plot relevant information to Vita.]]
* WingedHumanoid: He has batlike wings, much like his sister.
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-->''[[InnerMonologue You're not ready. But what other choice do you have?]]''
A teenage girl who wishes for a more exciting and interesting life. She gets her wish, though perhaps not in the way she would like...
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* AFatherToHisMen: An elder brother more like, but Volte cares greatly for his followers who respect him in turn.
* BigBrotherInstinct: One of his main goals is protecting his young sister Wigavat.
* TheLeader: The head of House Noon with all that implies.
* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler: He goes out fighting Zeil in a savage fight, and dies to trust very plot relevant information to Vita.]]
* WingedHumanoid: He has batlike wings, much like his sister.
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-->''[[InnerMonologue You're not ready. But what other choice do you have?]]''
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* ThePessimist: Vita tends to assume the worst of ''every'' scenario and her mind is constantly dreaming up new, awful scenarios for her in the future based on her decisions.
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->''We of Noon, we of day; we of fire, and the ray\\
We the embers in the gust; we the dancers in the rust; we of iron will and trust\\
We unshackled, and evermore; we once chained and nevermore''
The native House of the day-vamps.
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* DaywalkingVampire: True to the name "day-vamp," the residents of House Noon appear to have openly vampiric traits, like fangs and claws -- and in the case of Volte and Wiggy, full-out bat wings -- but all of them are at their strongest during the daytime.
[[spoiler:Vita Lynere]]
-->''[[ThePessimist You're not ready. But what other choice do you have?]]
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* AmbiguousDisorder: It's never named explicitly, but Vita is clearly suffering from some sort of depression given the lack of motivation she shows back on Earth, constant self-beratement and ambiguously suicidal thoughts, she's suffering from some sort of depression.
* AmbiguousDisorder: It's never named explicitly, but Vita is clearly suffering from some sort of depression given the lack of motivation she shows back on Earth, constant self-beratement and ambiguously suicidal thoughts, she's suffering from some sort of depression.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: ''Constantly''. Vita can't seem to make one move without lambasting herself for it in her inner monologue.
* KidHero: Her age isn't stated, but from the remarks implying Vita has been too young to get a job for the past few years and the general comments toward her, she can't be any older than sixteen.
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* PerpetualFrowner: Vita is never shown smiling, not even during sewing where she's quite intent and focused. Aile even notes it's a goal of hers to get Vita to smile.
* TheQuietOne: Almost the entirety of the first three chapters go without any verbal comment from her. Even when she's in the company of others, Vita tends to say little compared to the others in the Houses.
* TheQuietOne: Almost the entirety of the first three chapters go without any verbal comment from her. Even when she's in the company of others, Vita tends to say little compared to the others in the Houses.
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* BreakTheCutie: Vita goes through ''hell'' in the Mirror World, ending up terrorized and pursued with no way to make sense of the situation.
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* BreakTheCutie: Vita goes through ''hell'' in the Mirror World, Inoptica, ending up terrorized and pursued with no way to make sense of the situation.
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A young woman who wishes for a more exciting and interesting life. She gets her wish, though perhaps not in the way she would like...
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A young woman teenage girl who wishes for a more exciting and interesting life. She gets her wish, though perhaps not in the way she would like...
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'''Be aware of spoilers.'''
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!!Vita
A young woman who wishes for a more exciting and interesting life. She gets her wish, though perhaps not in the way she would like...
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: 'Yearning for a life beyond making ends meet' leads Vita into quite the disturbing situations...
* BreakTheCutie: Vita goes through ''hell'' in the Mirror World, ending up terrorized and pursued with no way to make sense of the situation.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Vita has some dark happenings in her past, most of which are only hinted at so far.
* FantasticRacism: Vita...is royally freaked out by the inhabitants of the Houses and considers them 'freaks' at first.
* IJustWantToBeSpecial: As a result of living a life of making ends meet, Vita wants something special to happen to her and to be more than just a girl working dead end jobs...it comes true in all the wrong ways.
* MissingMom: Vita's mom is implied to be quite 'absent.'
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'''Be aware of spoilers.'''
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[[folder:Main Characters]]
!!Vita
A young woman who wishes for a more exciting and interesting life. She gets her wish, though perhaps not in the way she would like...
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: 'Yearning for a life beyond making ends meet' leads Vita into quite the disturbing situations...
* BreakTheCutie: Vita goes through ''hell'' in the Mirror World, ending up terrorized and pursued with no way to make sense of the situation.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Vita has some dark happenings in her past, most of which are only hinted at so far.
* FantasticRacism: Vita...is royally freaked out by the inhabitants of the Houses and considers them 'freaks' at first.
* IJustWantToBeSpecial: As a result of living a life of making ends meet, Vita wants something special to happen to her and to be more than just a girl working dead end jobs...it comes true in all the wrong ways.
* MissingMom: Vita's mom is implied to be quite 'absent.'
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