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* {{BFG}}: His huge FORCE Assault Rifle has over half a dozen firing modes, from a shrapnel gun that fires tens of thousands a round every second to beam weapons that slices an entire cliff-face in half with no effort at all.
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* {{BFG}}: His huge FORCE Assault Rifle has over half a dozen firing modes, from a shrapnel gun that fires tens of thousands a round every second to beam weapons that slices an entire cliff-face in half like it was made of butter. Ironically, it barely does him any good in the story proper, though knowing how to fight with no effort at all.one gives him a fighting chance in ''Fall'' against Moneta unloading all cylinders on his location.
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* BiblicalMotifs: In particular, the Sacrifice of Isaac by Abraham, but his name "Sol", a shortening of Solomon, could be a hidden one in itself; [[spoiler: Like Solomon, he makes it out the best of the situation by splitting the sacrifice down the middle; With his daughter moments from dying by MerlinSickness, he goes through with the Sacrifice of Rachel to the Shrike, but as a result, the baby is immediately saved by Severn[=/=]Keats #2 and Moneta (and arguably the Shrike, as it is made from Kassad, who was one of the closest to Sol on the adventure) after being cured from contact with the Shrike inside the Time Tombs.]]
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* ReformedButNotTamed: Deconstruction. He attempted to reform himself after a close encounter with the Shrike, including [[VaginaDentata mid-coitus with his mysterious lover]], but no one believed the man titled "The Butcher of Bressia" when he suddenly started joining anti-war protests. When he returns to battle, and especially once it's for a good cause, it's clear that war is where Kassad is at home.
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* AuthorAppeal: Dan Simmons initially created the idea of what would later become The Shrike as a sort of fairy-tale villain while teaching classes on that genre at his job as an English Literature professor. As a result, it effectively asks as the most wicked and disqueting FairyGodmother to the Pilgrims. It cursed one man's daughter, taught another about love, war and the InterplayOfSexAndViolence, and the Poet of the group considers the Shrike his ''muse''.
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* AuthorAppeal: Dan Simmons initially created the idea of what would later become The Shrike as a sort of inscrutable fairy-tale villain creature while teaching classes on that genre at his job as an English Literature professor. As a result, it effectively asks as the most wicked and disqueting FairyGodmother to the Pilgrims. It cursed one man's daughter, taught another about love, war and the InterplayOfSexAndViolence, and the Poet of the group considers the Shrike his ''muse''.
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* AuthorAppeal: Dan Simmons initially created the idea of what would later become The Shrike as a sort of fairy-tale villain while teaching classes on that genre at his job as an English Literature professor. As a result, it effectively asks as the most wicked and disqueting FairyGodmother to the Pilgrims. It cursed one man's daughter, taught another about love, war and the InterplayOfSexAndViolence, and the Poet of the group considers the Shrike his ''muse''.
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A Jewish scholar and kindly old university professor at a modest, but well-respected university on Barnard's World, an idyllic farming world. His daughter Rachel was an archaeologist student who, during an expedition to the Time Tombs on Hyperion, was afflicted with an illness dubbed the {{Merlin Sickness}} that caused her to age backwards, which he desperately hopes to cure. After having a dream about sacrificing his daughter to the Shrike similarly to the Biblical sacrifice of Isaac, he decides to do so in hopes it will cure her somehow.
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* [[spoiler: DyingMomentOfAwesome:]] Defeating [[spoiler: The Shrike]] in single combat while leading [[spoiler: the humanity of the future]] future against an army of it's duplicates]] screaming "FOR LIBERTY!" at the top of his lungs.
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A Jewish scholar. scholar and kindly old university professor at university on Barnard's World, an idyllic farming world. His daughter, Rachel, daughter Rachel was an archaeologist student who, during an expedition to the Time Tombs on Hyperion, was afflicted with an illness dubbed the {{Merlin Sickness}} that caused her to age backwards, which he desperately hopes to cure. After having a dream about sacrificing his daughter to the Shrike similarly to the Biblical sacrifice of Isaac, he decides to do so in hopes it will cure her somehow.
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* CoolOldGuy: Not nearly as old as Silenus or Weintraub, and his exact age is never really stated, but [[spoiler: Raul]] describes him as a man in his sixties, appearance-wise.
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* CoolOldGuy: Not nearly as old as Silenus or Weintraub, and his exact age is never really stated, but [[spoiler: Raul]] describes him as a man in his sixties, appearance-wise. Despite this, his physique is compared to that of a [[PantheraAwesome panther's]] in it's symmetry and size when he is first introduced.
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* CurbstompBattle: The Shrike is so immensely powerful that just about anyone who tries to stand to it gets completely steamrolled.
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* CurbstompBattle: The Shrike is so immensely powerful that just about anyone who tries to stand to it gets completely steamrolled. A few characters make it work for it in ''Endymion'' and beyond, but it still [[WrestlerInAllOfUs dropkicked Nemes for miles at one point]].
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* TheButcher: known as "The Butcher of Bressia" to some.
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* TheButcher: known as "The Butcher of Bressia" to some. This is mostly because the Hegemonia has a strict view in what a soldier is allowed to do as the Ousters he killed on Bressia crossed way more lines than him.
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* TheUnsmile: Silenius mentions that he isn't that morose but when he laughs his jowls moves in a way that looks like he is weeping.
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* LetsFightLikeGentlemen: He staunchly believes in the code of Neo Bushido, from which he dictates that "The essence of honor lay in the moment of combat between equals." [[spoiler: Becomes very ironic in hindsight when he defeats the Shrike, who is revealed to be himself in Rise of Endymion]].
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* LetsFightLikeGentlemen: He staunchly believes in the code of Neo Bushido, from which he dictates that "The essence of honor lay lies in the moment of combat between equals." [[spoiler: Becomes very ironic in hindsight when he defeats the Shrike, who is revealed to be himself in Rise of Endymion]].
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* CoolOldGuy: Not nearly as old as Silenus or Weintraub, and his exact age is never really stated, but he's implied to not quite be a spring chicken.
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* CoolOldGuy: Not nearly as old as Silenus or Weintraub, and his exact age is never really stated, but he's implied to not quite be [[spoiler: Raul]] describes him as a spring chicken.man in his sixties, appearance-wise.
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* LetUsFightLikeGentlemen: LetsFightLikeGentlemen: He staunchly believes in the code of Neo Bushido, from which he dictates that "The essence of honor lay in the moment of combat between equals." [[spoiler: Becomes very ironic in hindsight when he defeats the Shrike, who is revealed to be himself in Rise of Endymion]].
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* {{BFG}}: His huge FORCE Assault Rifle has over half a dozen firing modes, from a shrapnel gun that fires tens of thousands a round every second to beam weapons that slices an entire cliff-face in half with no effort at all.
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* LetUsFightLikeGentlemen: He staunchly believes in the code of Neo Bushido, from which he dictates that "The essence of honor lay in the moment of combat between equals." [[spoiler: Becomes very ironic in hindsight when he defeats the Shrike, who is revealed to be himself in Rise of Endymion]].
* LetUsFightLikeGentlemen: He staunchly believes in the code of Neo Bushido, from which he dictates that "The essence of honor lay in the moment of combat between equals." [[spoiler: Becomes very ironic in hindsight when he defeats the Shrike, who is revealed to be himself in Rise of Endymion]].
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* AbusiveFather: He created the Keats Cybrids, and ends up destroying one and repeatedly mocking the other.
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* AbusiveFather: AbusiveParents: He created the Keats Cybrids, and ends up destroying one and repeatedly mocking the other.
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* ColonelBadass: Singlehandedly put down a the New Prophet's Jihad of twenty-thousand with some creative use of laser satellites, mastered multiple forms of martial arts and survived atmospheric re-entry in half of a cockpit, among other things. And this is just before the story begins.
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* AbusiveFather: He created the Keats Cybrids, and ends up destroying one and repeatedly mocking the other.
* BenevolentAI: ...Sort of. He's part of the faction that's most partial to Mankind, but that faction still wants to use Mankind as processing power, which is somewhat better than getting exterminated or swept aside for the Ultimate Intelligence, according to him.
* {{Koan}}: Speaks almost entirely in the form of these. It borders on IceCreamKoan at times but nothing he says is without great substance or meaning, and so avoids falling into said trope.
* MrExposition: Possibly the biggest one in the entire series. When he explains the great dilemma of the Ultimate Intelligences, he talks for ''11'' pages without interruption.
* BenevolentAI: ...Sort of. He's part of the faction that's most partial to Mankind, but that faction still wants to use Mankind as processing power, which is somewhat better than getting exterminated or swept aside for the Ultimate Intelligence, according to him.
* {{Koan}}: Speaks almost entirely in the form of these. It borders on IceCreamKoan at times but nothing he says is without great substance or meaning, and so avoids falling into said trope.
* MrExposition: Possibly the biggest one in the entire series. When he explains the great dilemma of the Ultimate Intelligences, he talks for ''11'' pages without interruption.
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* RobotPsychopath: It behaves in an almost playfully murderous manner towards several of it's victims, forcing great trauma, both psychical and mental, upon them. [[spoiler: There may be some merit to this, as the Shrike is an agent from the far future sent by the Ultimate Intelligence to draw out the Empathy of the Human Godhead, which is most easily done by broadcasting agony through fatline throughout the ''entire universe''.]]
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* RobotPsychopath: RoboticPsychopath: It behaves in an almost playfully murderous manner towards several of it's victims, forcing great trauma, both psychical and mental, upon them. [[spoiler: There may be some merit to this, as the Shrike is an agent from the far future sent by the Ultimate Intelligence to draw out the Empathy of the Human Godhead, which is most easily done by broadcasting agony through fatline throughout the ''entire universe''.]]
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* NighInvulnerability: The Shrike ''can'' in fact be killed, but it's... shall we say, ''extremely fucking unlikely''.
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* NighInvulnerability: The Shrike ''can'' in fact be killed, but it's... shall we say, ''extremely fucking unlikely''. To note, [[spoiler: Kassad]] empties an entire arsenal's worth of what could easily be considered superweapons on the Shrike and does little more than ScratchDamage. [[spoiler: He still wins, however]].
* NoisyRobots: Generally averted, as in it is dead fucking silent normally, but [[spoiler: Kassad opening a can of whoop-ass on it]] actually makes it ''roar'' at him, which sounds like a mix of a dragon and a fusion engine.
* NoisyRobots: Generally averted, as in it is dead fucking silent normally, but [[spoiler: Kassad opening a can of whoop-ass on it]] actually makes it ''roar'' at him, which sounds like a mix of a dragon and a fusion engine.
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* BloodKnight: Moneta even remarks that he ''loves'' war in an almost romantic fashion. He participated in antiwar protests for a while after his encounter with the Shrike, but returns to his violent ways in the book proper, and for the better.
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* ColonelBadass: Is a colonel and skilled fighter.
* [[spoiler: DyingMomentOfAwesome:]] defeating [[spoiler: The Shrike]] in combat.
* LivingLegend: He becomes this by [[spoiler: defeating the Shrike in single combat]].
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* ColonelBadass: Is Singlehandedly put down a colonel the New Prophet's Jihad of twenty-thousand with some creative use of laser satellites, mastered multiple forms of martial arts and skilled fighter.
survived atmospheric re-entry in half of a cockpit, among other things. And this is just before the story begins.
* CoolOldGuy: Not nearly as old as Silenus or Weintraub, and his exact age is never really stated, but he's implied to not quite be a spring chicken.
* [[spoiler: DyingMomentOfAwesome:]]defeating Defeating [[spoiler: The Shrike]] in combat.
* LivingLegend: He was already this before the story began, but becomesthis LegendaryInTheSequel by [[spoiler: defeating the Shrike in single combat]].
* CoolOldGuy: Not nearly as old as Silenus or Weintraub, and his exact age is never really stated, but he's implied to not quite be a spring chicken.
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* {{Badass}}: Extremely so. Kassad more or less walked in from an action movie and never really stopped acting like it.
* BeyondTheImpossible: [[spoiler: Defeating the Shrike in single combat is supposed to be this, with Moneta even warning him that he'll die like the millions of others that have tried and failed. Kassad puts his foot down and essentially says "fuck that" and defeats it anyway in a cataclysmic battle spanning the past, present and future, ultimately dying in the process]].
* BeyondTheImpossible: [[spoiler: Defeating the Shrike in single combat is supposed to be this, with Moneta even warning him that he'll die like the millions of others that have tried and failed. Kassad puts his foot down and essentially says "fuck that" and defeats it anyway in a cataclysmic battle spanning the past, present and future, ultimately dying in the process]].
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* DeadpanSnarker: Despite his gentle nature he's not above his fair share of jokes.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: After reluctantly sacrificing his daughter to the Shrike at her own suggestion, Keats brings his child back to him, and Moneta, who is then revealed to be Rachel from the future, brings him with her into the distant happy future.]]
* GoodParents: He and his wife are (and in the latter's case, were) this to an extreme. Extremely supportive of his daughter, friendly with her ex-boyfriend, and even with their predicament of her aging backwards he is thankful of just being with her.
* NiceGuy: Gentle, supporting and overall just an extremely kindhearted old man.
* OffingTheOffspring: The Shrike is cruelly attempting to make Sol re-enact Abraham's sacrifice of Isaac to God through ominous dreams. [[spoiler: He ends up going through with it, but Keats brings the baby Rachel back to him after the Merlin Sickness has been cured.]]
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* SirSwearsALot: The second-most so after Silenus, the best of example of which being her defiantly chewing out Ummon after [[spoiler: The first Keats cybrid is destroyed]].
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Has red GlowingEyesOfDoom.
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!!Ummon
An ArtificialIntelligence who speaks in koans.
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!!Ummon
An ArtificialIntelligence who speaks in koans.
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* CurbstompBattle: The Shrike is so immensely powerful that just about anyone who tries to stand to it gets completely steamrolled.
* HumanoidAbomination: The Shrike has a vaguely humanoid shape, but that's where any common ground ends.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: The Shrike favors this method of killing so much that it has it's own special tree to impale it's victims upon, hence the name 'Shrike' after the bird that does the same.
* MultiArmedAndDangerous: It has four equally dangerous arms.
* NighInvulnerability: The Shrike ''can'' in fact be killed, but it's...shall we say, ''extremely fucking unlikely''.
* OneManArmy: The Shrike is capable of slaughtering thousands with ease, at will.
* PhysicalGod: It isn't quite omnipotent, but the Shrike is still a time-travelling super-being operating on a different level from humanity altogether. It's worshipped and feared.
* SpikesOfVillainy: It's general design.
* TimeStandsStill: One of it's many abilities.
* CurbstompBattle: The Shrike is so immensely powerful that just about anyone who tries to stand to it gets completely steamrolled.
* HumanoidAbomination: The Shrike has a vaguely humanoid shape, but that's where any common ground ends.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: The Shrike favors this method of killing so much that it has it's own special tree to impale it's victims upon, hence the name 'Shrike' after the bird that does the same.
* MultiArmedAndDangerous: It has four equally dangerous arms.
* NighInvulnerability: The Shrike ''can'' in fact be killed, but it's...shall we say, ''extremely fucking unlikely''.
* OneManArmy: The Shrike is capable of slaughtering thousands with ease, at will.
* PhysicalGod: It isn't quite omnipotent, but the Shrike is still a time-travelling super-being operating on a different level from humanity altogether. It's worshipped and feared.
* SpikesOfVillainy: It's general design.
* TimeStandsStill: One of it's many abilities.
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!The Pilgrims
[[folder:The Priest]]
!!Father Lenar Hoyt
A Roman Catholic priest in his early 30s, in a universe where Catholicism has shrunk to a shadow of its former self, claiming only a few thousand followers.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Soldier]]
!!Colonel Fedmahn Kassad
A colonel in the Hegemony of Man's FORCE military, of Palestinian descent from Mars.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Poet]]
!!Martin Silenus
A foul-mouthed poet. Born on Earth before its destruction, he is incredibly old. Like Keats, he is working on an unfinished epic poem.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Scholar]]
!!Sol Weintraub
A Jewish scholar. His daughter was afflicted with an illness dubbed the "Merlin Sickness" that caused her to age backwards: she gets younger as time progresses.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Detective]]
!!Brawne Lamia
A private detective. Her name derives from a combination of Fanny Brawne, the love of John Keats, and the eponymous creature of his Lamia and Other Poems. Brawne is the daughter of Senator Byron Lamia, once a friend of CEO Meina Gladstone's, who "apparently" committed suicide when Brawne was a child.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Consul]]
!!The Consul
The Consul is the former planetary governor of Hyperion. He is for much of the first novel enigmatic, observing and recording the stories of the other Shrike Pilgrims but reluctant to record his own. He is one of the few thousand individuals amongst the hundred and fifty billion Hegemony citizens to own his own private starship.
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[[folder:The Templar]]
!!Het Masteen
The most mysterious of all seven pilgrims. He is a Templar—a nature priest of sorts—who captains the Treeship Yggdrasill that brings the pilgrims to Hyperion. Treeships are living trees that are propelled by ergs (an alien being that emits force fields) through space. The ergs also generate the containment fields (force fields) around the tree that keep its atmosphere intact. There are only five treeships in existence including Yggdrasill.
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!The Hegemony of Man
[[folder:Gladstone]]
!!Meina Gladstone
The CEO of the Hegemony of Man and Commander in Chief, former senator, residing on Tau Ceti Center.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Severn]]
!!Joseph Severn/John Keats
The second of two "cybrid" reincarnations of the poet, "Severn" updates CEO Gladstone on the fates of the Hyperion pilgrims.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Kolchev]]
!!Senator Gabriel Kolchev
[[/folder]]
!Other Characters
[[folder:The Shrike]]
!!The Shrike
A menacing and immensely powerful creature of uncertain origin and motives which appears throughout the narrative, often in a seemingly antagonistic role. It is known for impaling people on a massive tree made of metal, whose branches are massive thorns. It is named after the "Shrike" bird which impales insects and small animals on the thorns of a tree. The pilgrims expect to find the Shrike in the Time Tombs, which are the ultimate destination of their journey, but as they tell their individual tales it becomes clear that the creature is already deeply connected to each of them.
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[[folder:Moneta]]
!!Moneta
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Sad King Billy]]
!!Sad King Billy
[[/folder]]
!The Pilgrims
[[folder:The Priest]]
!!Father Lenar Hoyt
A Roman Catholic priest in his early 30s, in a universe where Catholicism has shrunk to a shadow of its former self, claiming only a few thousand followers.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Soldier]]
!!Colonel Fedmahn Kassad
A colonel in the Hegemony of Man's FORCE military, of Palestinian descent from Mars.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Poet]]
!!Martin Silenus
A foul-mouthed poet. Born on Earth before its destruction, he is incredibly old. Like Keats, he is working on an unfinished epic poem.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Scholar]]
!!Sol Weintraub
A Jewish scholar. His daughter was afflicted with an illness dubbed the "Merlin Sickness" that caused her to age backwards: she gets younger as time progresses.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Detective]]
!!Brawne Lamia
A private detective. Her name derives from a combination of Fanny Brawne, the love of John Keats, and the eponymous creature of his Lamia and Other Poems. Brawne is the daughter of Senator Byron Lamia, once a friend of CEO Meina Gladstone's, who "apparently" committed suicide when Brawne was a child.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Consul]]
!!The Consul
The Consul is the former planetary governor of Hyperion. He is for much of the first novel enigmatic, observing and recording the stories of the other Shrike Pilgrims but reluctant to record his own. He is one of the few thousand individuals amongst the hundred and fifty billion Hegemony citizens to own his own private starship.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Templar]]
!!Het Masteen
The most mysterious of all seven pilgrims. He is a Templar—a nature priest of sorts—who captains the Treeship Yggdrasill that brings the pilgrims to Hyperion. Treeships are living trees that are propelled by ergs (an alien being that emits force fields) through space. The ergs also generate the containment fields (force fields) around the tree that keep its atmosphere intact. There are only five treeships in existence including Yggdrasill.
[[/folder]]
!The Hegemony of Man
[[folder:Gladstone]]
!!Meina Gladstone
The CEO of the Hegemony of Man and Commander in Chief, former senator, residing on Tau Ceti Center.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Severn]]
!!Joseph Severn/John Keats
The second of two "cybrid" reincarnations of the poet, "Severn" updates CEO Gladstone on the fates of the Hyperion pilgrims.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Kolchev]]
!!Senator Gabriel Kolchev
[[/folder]]
!Other Characters
[[folder:The Shrike]]
!!The Shrike
A menacing and immensely powerful creature of uncertain origin and motives which appears throughout the narrative, often in a seemingly antagonistic role. It is known for impaling people on a massive tree made of metal, whose branches are massive thorns. It is named after the "Shrike" bird which impales insects and small animals on the thorns of a tree. The pilgrims expect to find the Shrike in the Time Tombs, which are the ultimate destination of their journey, but as they tell their individual tales it becomes clear that the creature is already deeply connected to each of them.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Moneta]]
!!Moneta
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Sad King Billy]]
!!Sad King Billy
[[/folder]]