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* TheMillstone: Due to most of the other tropes listed here, he's more of a hindrance to United Equestria's war effort than a help. [[spoiler:His death allows the far more competent Celestia and Luna to take over, and promptly make more progress in one chapter than Celestia had the entire story.]]

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* TheMillstone: Due to most of the other tropes listed here, he's more of a hindrance to United Equestria's war effort than a help. [[spoiler:His death allows the far more competent Celestia and Luna to take over, and promptly make more progress in one chapter than Celestia Celesto had the entire story.]]

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* XanatosGambit: [[spoiler:Warping Celesto and Conquest away to fight basically worked out for her no matter what happened.]]



* GeneralFailure: See TooDumbToLive below for why you do not want this guy commanding your army.

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* GeneralFailure: See TooDumbToLive below for why you do not want this guy commanding your army. [[spoiler:Which is made all too apparent when Conquest kills him and United Equestria's performance against Conquest instantly skyrockets.]]



* HumiliationConga: Once the facade he cast on Equestria starts to unravel, everything goes to hell for Celesto. He loses his soldiers, then his control over the masses, then his facade of godhood. [[spoiler:When he decides to unveil Serpentari, his forces get beaten back by the Equestrians and he gets beaten down by Lightning, [[TheDogBitesBack whom he'd subjected to years of neglect and emotional abuse]]. He runs with his tail between his legs to Canterlot, only to find Conquest waiting for him and the Orb of Reality stolen and turned on him by Celestia, who sends Celesto and Conquest to an isolated area to duke it out. He then gets humiliated in full view of all Equestria and killed by Conquest, [[ILoveTheDead who then screws his corpse]] [[DesecratingTheDead for good measure]].]]

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* HumiliationConga: Once the facade he cast on Equestria starts to unravel, everything goes to hell for Celesto. He loses his soldiers, then his control over the masses, then his facade of godhood. [[spoiler:When he decides to unveil Serpentari, his forces get beaten back by the Equestrians and he gets beaten down by Lightning, [[TheDogBitesBack whom he'd subjected to years of neglect and emotional abuse]]. He runs with his tail between his legs to Canterlot, only to find Conquest waiting for him and the Orb of Reality stolen and turned on him by Celestia, who sends Celesto and Conquest to an isolated area to duke it out. He then gets humiliated in full view of all Equestria and killed by Conquest, [[ILoveTheDead who then screws his corpse]] [[DesecratingTheDead for good measure]]. To make it even worse, Celestia and Luna promptly take over and do more in one chapter against Conquest than Celesto managed to the entire story.]]



* TheMillstone: Due to most of the other tropes listed here, he's more of a hindrance to United Equestria's war effort than a help.

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* TheMillstone: Due to most of the other tropes listed here, he's more of a hindrance to United Equestria's war effort than a help. [[spoiler:His death allows the far more competent Celestia and Luna to take over, and promptly make more progress in one chapter than Celestia had the entire story.]]


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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: [[spoiler:Humiliating, exposing, and killing Celesto instantly blows up in his face, as it lets Celestia and Luna take over. To say they're more competent than Celesto is a gigantic understatement.]]
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* ThePowerOfHate: Stated by him to be the one thing that gives him strength and attracts him to other worlds. It is for this reason that he comes to United Equestria in search of a new world to add to his list of conquered worlds, noting that United Equestria is dripping in hatred due to the incompetence and xenophobic actions of both the military and the country's ruler. [[spoiler:Notably, things only begin to seriously turn around on him after the Grand Ruler, the source of most of hate powering him is dead, meaning [[NiceJobFixingItVillain killing him off might not have been Conquest's brightest idea.]]]]

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* ThePowerOfHate: Stated by him to be the one thing that gives him strength and attracts him to other worlds. It is for this reason that he comes to United Equestria in search of a new world to add to his list of conquered worlds, noting that United Equestria is dripping in hatred due to the incompetence and xenophobic actions of both the military and the country's ruler. [[spoiler:Notably, things only begin to seriously turn around on him after the Grand Ruler, the source of most of the hate powering him him, is dead, meaning [[NiceJobFixingItVillain killing him off might not have been Conquest's brightest idea.]]]]
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* ThePowerOfHate: Stated by him to be the one thing that gives him strength and attracts him to other worlds. It is for this reason that he comes to United Equestria in search of a new world to add to his list of conquered worlds, noting that United Equestria is dripping in hatred due to the incompetence and xenophobic actions of both the military and the country's ruler.

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* ThePowerOfHate: Stated by him to be the one thing that gives him strength and attracts him to other worlds. It is for this reason that he comes to United Equestria in search of a new world to add to his list of conquered worlds, noting that United Equestria is dripping in hatred due to the incompetence and xenophobic actions of both the military and the country's ruler. [[spoiler:Notably, things only begin to seriously turn around on him after the Grand Ruler, the source of most of hate powering him is dead, meaning [[NiceJobFixingItVillain killing him off might not have been Conquest's brightest idea.]]]]

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* MilesToGoBeforeISleep: Dusk Shine wants to die due to his family and loyalties being in the past but only after Grand Ruler is taken down.

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* MilesToGoBeforeISleep: Dusk Shine wants to die due to his family and loyalties being in the past but only after Grand Ruler is taken down. [[spoiler:He accomplishes this in Chapter 21.]]
* RapidAging: [[spoiler:He removes his barding in the 21st chapter, causing him to age then fade away.]]

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* ShipTease: While she's technically PlatonicLifePartners with Lightning, there are a few hints of attraction.




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* VillainsNeverLie: One of Conquest's few redeeming qualities is his unfailing honesty; he never lies to anyone over the course of the story, and is always straightforward with his intentions, but is no less capable of staying ahead of them for it. This contrasts heavily with Grand Ruler, whose regime is built on nothing but lies.


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* ILetYouWin: While he is ultimately defeated by the Knights, Tirek suggests that he was holding back and that he would've wiped the floor with them had he been fighting at full strength.

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* SpannerInTheWorks: At the start of the story, Dark Conquest was assured that United Equestria was easy pickings, with the rest of the Elements broken and Starfleet utterly incompetent. Then Belle entered the picture, and by trying to help her, the Mane Five manage to pull themselves together and give Equestria the strength to fight back, irking Conquest to no end.



A purple unicorn mare with a mysterious past, who ''also'' bears a strong resemblance to the late Twilight Sparkle. Currently serving under Princess Luna. [[spoiler:In truth, Shining Spark is a pseudonym for the NotQuiteDead Twilight, retaining her identity and memories
while her heart and emotions reside in Belle Amie.]]

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A purple unicorn mare with a mysterious past, who ''also'' bears a strong resemblance to the late Twilight Sparkle. Currently serving under Princess Luna. [[spoiler:In truth, Shining Spark is a pseudonym for the NotQuiteDead Twilight, retaining her identity and memories
while her heart and emotions reside in Belle Amie.]]
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* TheDreaded: As the war drags on, they become very much feared by the forces of Dark Conquest, with various wild rumors of their exploits circulating in the ranks. The only reason they don't qualify for InUniverse MemeticBadass status is because they really ''are'' that badass.


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* EvilCounterpart: To Shining Spark. Both are the brains behind their respective sides, differing primarily in motivation. Kudos works solely to validate his own views of superiority, while Spark works to support her friends. While Kudos dismisses emotions such as compassion and empathy as being worthless and thus distances himself from them, Spark lacks emotions entirely and is trying to regain them.

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* IAmWho: A big part of Belle's character arc is her search for her memories and identity. [[spoiler:When confronted with the truth that she had none and was only part of Twilight Sparkle by Twilight herself, she... doesn't take it well.]]



* TomatoInTheMirror: [[spoiler:Twilight herself, in the guise of Spark, reveals to Belle that Belle is a part of her.]]



A purple unicorn mare with a mysterious past, who ''also'' bears a strong resemblance to the late Twilight Sparkle. Currently serving under Princess Luna.

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A purple unicorn mare with a mysterious past, who ''also'' bears a strong resemblance to the late Twilight Sparkle. Currently serving under Princess Luna.
Luna. [[spoiler:In truth, Shining Spark is a pseudonym for the NotQuiteDead Twilight, retaining her identity and memories
while her heart and emotions reside in Belle Amie.]]

* AchillesInHisTent: Spends most of her time doing research rather than fighting, despite being one of the Umbra Circle's more powerful front-liners.



* IdenticalStranger: She also bears some similarity to Twilight, noticeably having her coat color.

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* IdenticalStranger: She also bears some similarity to Twilight, noticeably having her coat color. [[spoiler:Actually being Twilight also helps.]]



* LiteralSplitPersonality: [[spoiler:For Twilight Sparkle, inheriting her logical nature and magical prowess.]]
* MysteriousPast: For all that's known of her backstory in-universe and out, she might as well have materialized on Luna's doorstep. [[spoiler:Apparently, that's exactly the case.]]

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* LiteralSplitPersonality: [[spoiler:For Twilight Sparkle, inheriting her logical nature and nature, magical prowess.prowess, and most importantly, her identity.]]
* MysteriousPast: For all that's known of her backstory in-universe and out, she might as well have materialized on Luna's doorstep. [[spoiler:Apparently, that's more or less exactly the case.case; Discord escorted what remains of Twilight's soul from the afterlife and created an artificial body for her spirit to reside in.]]



* SoulJar: [[spoiler:Her body was constructed by Discord to house the half of Twilight's soul that remains after her use of the soul separation spell.]]



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* AwesomeByAnalysis: [[spoiler:Demonstrates this remarkably well in her fight with Raven.]]
** [[spoiler:She points out all the holes in Raven's story about Celestia being involved in the death of her husband.]]
** [[spoiler:Also, she points out all the holes in Grand Ruler and Starfleet's logic about investigating Raven when she first showed up.]]
** [[spoiler:Lastly, she concludes that Raven is not actually a unicorn because she lacks a unicorn's skill in using magic.]]
* BadassBookworm: When she fights, she analyzes her opponent to find the best way to defeat them.
* DoomedMoralVictor: [[spoiler:Twilight dies knowing of Grand Ruler's true nature, and although it takes a while, her friends eventually carry on her work. She even states as much with her FamousLastWords.]]
* FaceDeathWithDignity: [[spoiler:Before Raven kills her with the Uniforce, Twilight says goodbye to her friends and apologizes that she won't be able to see them again.]]
* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: [[spoiler:The energy blast from the Uniforce left a giant hole from Twilight's chest to her backside.]]
* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler:Her eyes are closed and there is a smile on her face after Raven kills her with the Uniforce.]]
* MyDeathIsJustTheBeginning: [[spoiler:Tells Raven that even if she does kill her, it will "set off a spark that is going to bring out a miracle and save us all".]]

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* AwesomeByAnalysis: [[spoiler:Demonstrates Demonstrates this remarkably well in her fight with Raven.Raven.
** She points out all the holes in Raven's story about Celestia being involved in the death of her husband.
** Also, she points out all the holes in Grand Ruler and Starfleet's logic about investigating Raven when she first showed up.
** Lastly, she concludes that Raven is not actually a unicorn because she lacks a unicorn's skill in using magic.
* BackFromTheDead: She turns down FluffyCloudHeaven after death so that she could continue to be with her friends, and with the help of Discord, returns as Shining Spark. She eventually absorbs Belle into herself to come back for real.
* BadassBookworm: When she fights, she analyzes her opponent to find the best way to defeat them. Of course, she's no slouch in terms of raw power either; one of the first things she does upon her revival is to block a lethal spell from Conquest and then blast the ever-living crap out of him.
* CameBackWrong: Due to the soul separation spell, Twilight was initially revived with no emotions and no heart, with those residing in the amnesiac Belle. She didn't mind it too much, musing that living with no emotions gave her a new perspective.
* DoomedMoralVictor: Twilight dies knowing of Grand Ruler's true nature, and although it takes a while, her friends eventually carry on her work. She even states as much with her FamousLastWords.
* FaceDeathWithDignity: Before Raven kills her with the Uniforce, Twilight says goodbye to her friends and apologizes that she won't be able to see them again.
* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: The energy blast from the Uniforce left a giant hole from Twilight's chest to her backside.
* GoOutWithASmile: Her eyes are closed and there is a smile on her face after Raven kills her with the Uniforce, knowing that her soul separation spell worked and that she would be able to carry on.
* GuileHero: Twilight's intellect had an ''extremely'' profound influence on almost every aspect of the story. She saw through Celesto completely, had a counter-plan for his scheme to kill her that let her shrug off ''being killed'', while leaving enough behind for her friends to help destabilize Celesto's regime. Then, she continued to support them as Shining Spark while providing more information to help deal with Conquest ''and'' concealing her identity to avoid the notice of both Celesto and Conquest, all of which paid off big time. [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking She also beat Titan in a game of Go.
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** [[spoiler:She points out all the holes in Raven's story about Celestia being involved in the death of * MeaningfulRename: After her husband.]]
** [[spoiler:Also, she points out all the holes in Grand Ruler and Starfleet's logic about investigating Raven when she first showed up.]]
** [[spoiler:Lastly, she concludes that Raven is not actually a unicorn because she lacks a unicorn's skill in using magic.]]
* BadassBookworm: When she fights, she analyzes her opponent to find the best way to defeat them.
* DoomedMoralVictor: [[spoiler:Twilight dies knowing of Grand Ruler's true nature, and although it takes a while, her friends eventually carry on her work. She even states as much with her FamousLastWords.]]
* FaceDeathWithDignity: [[spoiler:Before Raven kills her with the Uniforce,
resurrection, Twilight says goodbye to her friends and apologizes that she won't be able to see them again.]]
* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: [[spoiler:The energy blast from
adopted the Uniforce left a giant hole from Twilight's chest to her backside.]]
* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler:Her eyes are closed and there is a smile on her face
pseudonym "Shining Spark" after Raven kills her with the Uniforce.]]
FacingTheBulletsOneLiner about her death setting off a spark of revolution.
* MyDeathIsJustTheBeginning: [[spoiler:Tells Tells Raven that even if she does kill her, it will "set off a spark that is going to bring out a miracle and save us all".]]



* SquishyWizard: [[spoiler:Her magic is powerful enough to utterly dominate Raven, but when it gets suppressed by Lightning, Raven quickly overwhelms her with brute force.]]
* WorfHadTheFlu: [[spoiler:The only reason Raven managed to kill her was because of Lightning Dawn disabling Twilight's magic; beforehand, Twilight was on the delivering end of a CurbStompBattle against Raven.]]

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* SplitPersonalityMerge: Twilight [[FusionDance fusing with Belle]] is a cross between this and SplitPersonalityTakeover. While Twilight's personality overrides that of Belle and erases her identity, Twilight also gets back her emotions and, more importantly, her bonds of friendship with those around her, both of which were held by Belle.
* SquishyWizard: [[spoiler:Her Her magic is powerful enough to utterly dominate Raven, but when it gets suppressed by Lightning, Raven quickly overwhelms her with brute force.]]
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* WalkingSpoiler: Twilight being dead is old news, but even in death, she manages to be full of surprises.
* WorfHadTheFlu: [[spoiler:The The only reason Raven managed to kill her was because of Lightning Dawn disabling Twilight's magic; beforehand, Twilight was on the delivering end of a CurbStompBattle against Raven.]]
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* OurHomunculiAreDifferent: With the help of Zecora, Rarity creates a homunculus made of clay and bark so that it can fight instead of her due to her pregnancy. It later becomes sentient, gaining its own personality and will independent of Rarity's.

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* OurHomunculiAreDifferent: With the help of Zecora, Rarity creates a homunculus made of clay and bark so that it can fight instead of her due to her pregnancy. It later becomes sentient, sapient, gaining its own personality and will independent of Rarity's.



* CompositeCharacter: He disguises himself as Goldwin, a character in the original story who was a statue given life. In this story, it seems that this is the reason Goldwin supposedly gained sentience. [[spoiler:Distraught, another character in the original series, also turns out to be Discord in disguise.]]

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* CompositeCharacter: He disguises himself as Goldwin, a character in the original story who was a statue given life. In this story, it seems that this is the reason Goldwin supposedly gained sentience.sapience. [[spoiler:Distraught, another character in the original series, also turns out to be Discord in disguise.]]

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* BigSisterInstinct: Starfleet doesn't exactly think highly of Raindrops's brother Snails, and are more than willing to have him "fixed". Raindrops is understandably not happy about this, and it forms a large part of her motivation.



* MartyrWithoutACause: Carrot Top has shades of this. She's fallen on hard times and has no living family and friends, so she thinks of herself as the most expendable of the bunch.



* CompositeCharacter: He disguises himself as Goldwin, a character in the original story who was a statue given life. In this story, it seems that this is the reason Goldwin supposedly gained sentience.

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* CompositeCharacter: He disguises himself as Goldwin, a character in the original story who was a statue given life. In this story, it seems that this is the reason Goldwin supposedly gained sentience. [[spoiler:Distraught, another character in the original series, also turns out to be Discord in disguise.]]



* NighInvulnerable: As a {{reality warp|er}}ing PhysicalGod and all. [[spoiler:Even Grand Ruler unleashing [[EarthShatteringKaboom Serpentari]] on him failed to actually do anything.]]



* PaperThinDisguise: [[spoiler:He managed to pass himself off as "Distraught" by simply [[PaletteSwap changing his color scheme]].]]



* BalefulPolymorph: [[spoiler:She, like the rest of the fairies, were Flutter Ponies transformed into palm-sized creatures by Grand Ruler.]]




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* {{Troll}}: A particularly malicious one, but Conquest nevertheless gets his kicks from deliberately getting his victims riled up at him in order to feed on their hatred. [[spoiler:When Celestia brushes him off, he actually [[VillainousBreakdown loses his cool]] briefly.]]



* BackFromTheDead: You may be noticing a trend.

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* BackFromTheDead: You may be noticing a trend. [[spoiler:Well, Titan's apparently not part of that trend, but still.]]


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* EldritchAbomination: He's presented as an embodiment of death itself. Titan describes him thusly:
--> “If Conquest represents the hatred one feels when viewing a world born from hate and anger, then he represents something darker. The death of an idea, when a world loses itself and what it set out to do. He goes from world to world, universe to universe, hunting out those worlds where their life just stopped and kills them, feeding on the death of that world. It’s why he follows Conquest, after all... what follows Conquest but Death.”
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* ItsAllAboutMe: If it goes against Starfleet's (read: his) ideals, he won't stand for it. He's so self absorbed he doesn't realize his own wife is cheating on him, or that his children aren't really his.

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* ItsAllAboutMe: If it goes against Starfleet's (read: his) ideals, he won't stand for it. He's so self absorbed self-absorbed, he doesn't realize his own wife is cheating on him, or that his children aren't really his.



* UndignifiedDeath: [[spoiler:Boy howdy. Celestia teleported him to a barren wasteland along with Dark Conquest, who proceeded to brutally beat him to an inch of his life while all of United Equestria watches. Dark Conquest also gleefully reveals that Celesto was actually an ordinary Equestrian unicorn whose godlike power and alicorn-like appearance came from two powerful artifacts he stole a millenia ago from his best friend, one of which was pilfered by Celestia herself right out of his own pocket shortly before in order to leave him completely helpless. After being outed as a complete fake who callously killed, brainwashed, and overall blighted countless lives for his own purely selfish, deluded reasons to his precious Unicornicopians, his broken body is crucified into the ground using his own three horns (two of them fake) and has his head literally kicked off his body. To add insult to well-deserved injury, Dark Conquest decides to spend an hour [[ILoveTheDead fucking Celesto's headless corpse]] while waiting for a meeting with Celestia.]]

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* UndignifiedDeath: [[spoiler:Boy howdy. Celestia teleported him to a barren wasteland along with Dark Conquest, who proceeded to brutally beat him to an inch of his life while all of United Equestria watches. Dark Conquest also gleefully reveals that Celesto was actually an ordinary Equestrian unicorn whose godlike power and alicorn-like appearance came from two powerful artifacts he stole a millenia millenium ago from his best friend, one of which was pilfered by Celestia herself right out of his own pocket shortly before in order to leave him completely helpless. After being outed as a complete fake who callously killed, brainwashed, and overall blighted countless lives for his own purely selfish, deluded reasons to his precious Unicornicopians, his broken body is crucified into the ground using his own three horns (two of them fake) and has his head literally kicked off his body. To add insult to well-deserved injury, Dark Conquest decides to spend an hour [[ILoveTheDead fucking Celesto's headless corpse]] while waiting for a meeting with Celestia.]]



* MilesToGoBeforeISleep: Dusk Shine want to die due to his family and loyalties being in the past but only after Grand Ruler is taken down.

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* MilesToGoBeforeISleep: Dusk Shine want wants to die due to his family and loyalties being in the past but only after Grand Ruler is taken down.
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* OffWithHisHead: [[spoiler:His death at the hands of Dark Conquest.]]
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* Undignified Death: [[spoiler:Boy howdy. Celestia teleported him to a barren wasteland along with Dark Conquest, who proceeded to brutally beat him to an inch of his life while all of United Equestria watches. Dark Conquest also gleefully reveals that Celesto was actually an ordinary Equestrian unicorn whose godlike power and alicorn-like appearance came from two powerful artifacts he stole a millenia ago from his best friend, one of which was pilfered by Celestia herself right out of his own pocket shortly before in order to leave him completely helpless. After being outed as a complete fake who callously killed, brainwashed, and overall blighted countless lives for his own purely selfish, deluded reasons to his precious Unicornicopians, his broken body is crucified into the ground using his own three horns (two of them fake) and has his head literally kicked off his body. To add insult to well-deserved injury, Dark Conquest decides to spend an hour fucking Celesto's headless corpse while waiting for a meeting with Celestia.]]

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* Undignified Death: UndignifiedDeath: [[spoiler:Boy howdy. Celestia teleported him to a barren wasteland along with Dark Conquest, who proceeded to brutally beat him to an inch of his life while all of United Equestria watches. Dark Conquest also gleefully reveals that Celesto was actually an ordinary Equestrian unicorn whose godlike power and alicorn-like appearance came from two powerful artifacts he stole a millenia ago from his best friend, one of which was pilfered by Celestia herself right out of his own pocket shortly before in order to leave him completely helpless. After being outed as a complete fake who callously killed, brainwashed, and overall blighted countless lives for his own purely selfish, deluded reasons to his precious Unicornicopians, his broken body is crucified into the ground using his own three horns (two of them fake) and has his head literally kicked off his body. To add insult to well-deserved injury, Dark Conquest decides to spend an hour [[ILoveTheDead fucking Celesto's headless corpse corpse]] while waiting for a meeting with Celestia.]]

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* MamasBabyPapasMaybe: [[spoiler:It is implied that her children (or child) may have actually been fathered by Discord.]]

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* MamasBabyPapasMaybe: [[spoiler:It is implied initially implied, and later confirmed that her children (or child) may have actually been fathered by Discord.]]



* BrokenPedestal: As it turns out, [[spoiler:pretty much ''all'' of them (save for perhaps Lightning and Rhymey) have become quite disillusioned with their lot in life, envying the friendship, heroism, and competence of the Elements of Harmony. This reaches a breaking point with Myte's death. Eventually, even Lightning goes through this when he realizes how awful he's been acting and how little Celesto cares about him.]]

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* BrokenPedestal: As it turns out, [[spoiler:pretty much ''all'' of them (save for perhaps Lightning and Rhymey) have become quite disillusioned with their lot in life, envying the friendship, heroism, and competence of the Elements of Harmony. This reaches a breaking point with Myte's death. Eventually, even Lightning goes through this when he realizes how awful he's been acting and how little Celesto actually cares about him.]]



* HumiliationConga: Once the facade he cast on Equestria starts to unravel, everything goes to hell for Celesto. He loses his soldiers, then his control over the masses, then his facade of godhood. [[spoiler:When he decides to unveil Serpentari, his forces get beaten back by the Equestrians and he gets beaten down by Lightning, [[TheDogBitesBack whom he'd subjected to years of neglect and emotional abuse]]. He runs with his tail between his legs to Canterlot, only to find Conquest waiting for him and the Orb of Reality turned on him by Celestia, who sends Celesto and Conquest to an isolated area to duke it out. He then gets humiliated in full view of all Equestria and killed by Conquest, [[ILoveTheDead who then screws his corpse]] [[DesecratingTheDead for good measure]].]]

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* HumiliationConga: Once the facade he cast on Equestria starts to unravel, everything goes to hell for Celesto. He loses his soldiers, then his control over the masses, then his facade of godhood. [[spoiler:When he decides to unveil Serpentari, his forces get beaten back by the Equestrians and he gets beaten down by Lightning, [[TheDogBitesBack whom he'd subjected to years of neglect and emotional abuse]]. He runs with his tail between his legs to Canterlot, only to find Conquest waiting for him and the Orb of Reality stolen and turned on him by Celestia, who sends Celesto and Conquest to an isolated area to duke it out. He then gets humiliated in full view of all Equestria and killed by Conquest, [[ILoveTheDead who then screws his corpse]] [[DesecratingTheDead for good measure]].]]



* ItsAllAboutMe: If it goes against Starfleet's (read: his) ideals, he won't stand for it. He's so self absorbed he doesn't realize his own wife is cheating on him.

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* Undignified Death: [[spoiler:Boy howdy. Celestia teleported him to a barren wasteland along with Dark Conquest, who proceeded to brutally beat him to an inch of his life while all of United Equestria watches. Dark Conquest also gleefully reveals that Celesto was actually an ordinary Equestrian unicorn whose godlike power and alicorn-like appearance came from two powerful artifacts he stole a millenia ago from his best friend, one of which was pilfered by Celestia herself right out of his own pocket shortly before in order to leave him completely helpless. After being outed as a complete fake who callously killed, brainwashed, and overall blighted countless lives for his own purely selfish, deluded reasons to his precious Unicornicopians, his broken body is crucified into the ground using his own three horns (two of them fake) and has his head literally kicked off his body. To add insult to well-deserved injury, Dark Conquest decides to spend an hour fucking Celesto's headless corpse while waiting for a meeting with Celestia.]]
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* GodGuise: It becomes gradually more apparent he's not as god-like as he portrays himself as being, and in fact ''requires'' ponies to believe in him to have power at all. [[spoiler:He's also not a WingedUnicorn as he presents himself, his wings are fakes existing to simulate flight and stroke his ego.]]

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* GodGuise: It becomes gradually more apparent he's not as god-like as he portrays himself as being, and in fact ''requires'' ponies to believe in him to have power at all. [[spoiler:He's also [[spoiler:All his power comes from magical artifacts and he's not even a WingedUnicorn as he presents himself, his wings are fakes existing to simulate flight and stroke his ego.ego. Without all of that, he's nothing more than a normal unicorn.]]

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* ShockAndAwe: Gains lightning-based abilities by tapping into the Speed Force.



* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Sure, this as applied to her Element was already established in ''[=FiM=]'' canon, but here it's taken a step further by letting her [[spoiler:NoSell Conquest's attempt to cripple Starfleet and the Elements with a SupernaturalFearInducer ''and'' [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu hurt him for the first time in the story]] by singing]].

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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Sure, this as applied to her Element was already established in ''[=FiM=]'' canon, but here it's taken a step further by letting her [[spoiler:NoSell Conquest's attempt to cripple Starfleet and the Elements with a SupernaturalFearInducer ''and'' [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu hurt him for the first time in the story]] by singing]]. Heck, Mysterious even recognizes her as Conquest's AchillesHeel.



* BackFromTheDead: Through means currently unknown, he has come back to life. [[spoiler:Although the memory manipulation carried out on the Equestrian population brings up the possibility that he, along with many of those brought back, simply never died in the first place.]]

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* BackFromTheDead: Through means currently unknown, he has come back to life. [[spoiler:Although the memory manipulation carried out on the Equestrian population brings up the possibility that he, along with many of those brought back, simply never died [[spoiler:Except he wasn't dead in the first place.place, and was only FakingTheDead; after all, it's not easy to kill a RealityWarper of his caliber.]]



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* BoomerangBigot: [[spoiler:He dislikes the Equestrians, but he himself is one.]]



* ClothesMakeTheSuperman: [[spoiler:His powers come from the Tri-Horned Crown and Orb of Reality, which allow him to [[MassHypnosis brainwash others en masse]] and [[RealityWarper make changes to reality that not even Discord can reverse]]; without them, he's little more than a normal unicorn. Even his wings are simply mechanical replicas.]]



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%%* HumiliationConga:* HumiliationConga: Once the facade he cast on Equestria starts to unravel, everything goes to hell for Celesto. He loses his soldiers, then his control over the masses, then his facade of godhood. [[spoiler:When he decides to unveil Serpentari, his forces get beaten back by the Equestrians and he gets beaten down by Lightning, [[TheDogBitesBack whom he'd subjected to years of neglect and emotional abuse]]. He runs with his tail between his legs to Canterlot, only to find Conquest waiting for him and the Orb of Reality turned on him by Celestia, who sends Celesto and Conquest to an isolated area to duke it out. He then gets humiliated in full view of all Equestria and killed by Conquest, [[ILoveTheDead who then screws his corpse]] [[DesecratingTheDead for good measure]].]]



* PsychopathicManchild: He's been explicitly compared in-story to a child playing a game, preferring to flip the board rather than obey the rules when they don't sit well with him.
* SmugSnake: It's made abundantly clear over the course of the story that, despite being arrogant and convinced of his godhood and superiority, Celesto is little more than a gibbering moron [[spoiler:who just happens to have two of Meadowbrook's artifacts on his side]].



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* HappilyMarried: To Starla Shine.

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* HappilyMarried: To Starla Shine. [[SubvertedTrope Except they're not]] and barely know the first thing about each other. [[spoiler:Ultimately, they decide they're better off as just friends and break up.]]



* HappilyMarried: To Lightning Dawn. However, she eventually comes to realize that it's not quite as happy as she initially thought.

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* MiseryBuildsCharacter: Her imprisonment by Dark Conquest was ''not'' a happy time, but she pulls through and becomes a stronger person with some help from Dementia.
* MoralityPet: To Dementia, of all people. [[spoiler:Given that Dementia is actually her mother, Galaxia Shine, this makes a lot more sense.]]



* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: She eventually becomes attached to Dementia, who is about the only one to show her any kindness during her captivity.

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* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: She eventually becomes attached to Dementia, who is about the only one to show her any kindness during her captivity. [[spoiler:Despite everything they've been through, Galaxia's love for her daughter still holds strong.]]



* CaptainObvious: According to Krysta, she insists on stating the obvious [[TheGadfly to get a rise out of Lightning]].



* EvilCounterpart: To Pinkie Pie, of all ponies. Both can be fairly silly, have quite a sense of humor, and do what they do primarily for enjoyment. However, Pinkie is driven to make the ponies around her laugh and smile, while Conquest strives to make everyone miserable for his own amusement. Additionally, Pinkie represents [[FunPersonified the Element of Laughter]], while Conquest embodies ThePowerOfHate.



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* ActionMom: [[spoiler:Galaxia Shine was no slouch back in her day, and after reuniting with her daughter Starla, she still holds her own in a fight.]]



* MamaBear: [[spoiler:Dementia's protective attitude towards Starla - especially with regards to Dark Conquest - stems from her being Starla's mother. When she regains her memories and realizes that Dark Conquest most likely knew all along, she goes ''ballistic''.]]

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* MamaBear: [[spoiler:Dementia's protective attitude towards Starla - especially with regards to Dark Conquest - stems from her being Starla's mother. When she regains her memories and realizes that Dark Conquest most likely knew all along, she goes ''ballistic''. On a somewhat lighter note, she's also not very pleased with Lightning treating her daughter like crap during their marriage.]]



* BadassBookworm: He's an intelligent planner and go player who can also hold his own against the Knights of Harmony.



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* OutOfFocus: He's gotten very little focus throughout the story, to the point where he's only made a few minor appearances. Even Mysterious, Dementia, and Rep-Stallion, who were formerly his minions, have gotten more focus.

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* OrcusOnHisThrone: In contrast to most of Conquest's generals, who are itching to get into the action, Titan prefers to sit back and watch things unfold. [[spoiler:He's got a good reason, though; after all, he can't very well contribute to destroying his own world.]]
* OutOfFocus: He's gotten very little focus throughout the story, to the point where he's only made a few minor appearances. Even Mysterious, Dementia, and Rep-Stallion, who were formerly his minions, have gotten more focus. This is rectified later on.



* GreaterScopeVillain: While Dark Conquest terrorizes the heroes, the Necromancer works behind the scenes and has his own plans, and is implied to be a far greater threat.



* PersonOfMassDestruction: Single-handedly destroys the fairy world Illuminoth in the space of an ''hour''.

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!Main Characters

[[folder:Belle Amie]]

A grey unicorn mare with a severe case of amnesia and a striking resemblance to the late Twilight Sparkle. Found by Pinkie Pie, she has now become friends with the Mane Five (plus Spike).

* {{Adorkable}}: Due largely to her bookishness and lack of self-confidence.
* AmnesiacHero: As mentioned above, she has no memories about her past. In fact, the Mane Five end up giving her the name Belle Amie because she can't remember her original one.
* BadassNormal: Standing up to [[spoiler:King Sombra and ''taking him down'']] with no magic of her own whatsoever is definitely badass. [[spoiler:In fact, her lack of magic is the reason it worked in the first place, meaning that he couldn't do very much to her.]]
* GadgeteerGenius: Judging by the fact that she put together a device for tracking down the source of the magic drain on Equestrians.
* HumbleHero: Despite being [[TheSmartGuy The Smart Girl]] of the group and playing a crucial role in [[spoiler:Conquest's first major defeat]], she doesn't think very highly of herself.
* IdenticalStranger: To Twilight Sparkle.
* LiteralSplitPersonality: [[spoiler:For Twilight Sparkle, embodying her heart and friendship with the other Elements.]]
* {{Knighting}}: [[spoiler:She is knighted along with the Mane Five in recognition of her role in Conquest's first major defeat.]]
* MysteriousPast: Her amnesia doesn't help in this regard.
* [[NonActionGuy Non-Action Girl]]: While technically part of the Mane Five, Belle is not shown in combat situations like the others.
* ReplacementGoldfish: Due to so many people either pointing out how similar she looks to or outright mistakes her for Twilight Sparkle, Belle Amie actually thinks the Mane 5 view her as one for Twilight. Rainbow Dash, however, tells her otherwise.
* SixthRanger: Shortly after meeting the Mane Five, she is welcomed into the group.
* [[TheSmartGuy The Smart Girl]]: Has taken up this role within the Elements Of Harmony.
* TheStrategist: Her prediction of Dark Conquest's attack on Phillydelphia matches his actual strategy [[TwoScenesOneDialogue almost to a T.]]
* UnSorcerer: By her own admission, she's actually rather inept with magic, despite being a unicorn.
* YourDaysAreNumbered: [[spoiler:She only has a short time to live, as she's missing half of her being (which also explains her amnesia).]]

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[[folder:Shining Spark]]

A purple unicorn mare with a mysterious past, who ''also'' bears a strong resemblance to the late Twilight Sparkle. Currently serving under Princess Luna.

* BadassBookworm: Essentially serves as the secretary for [[LaResistance Luna's Rebellion]], yet proves herself to be no slouch in the magic department.
* BrutalHonesty: Spark isn't one for beating around the bush. When something comes to mind, she says it.
* EmotionlessGirl: Getting emotional isn't exactly her forte. [[spoiler:As in, she literally ''cannot feel emotion'', although she can pretend.]]
* IdenticalStranger: She also bears some similarity to Twilight, noticeably having her coat color.
* IJustWantToHaveFriends: Unfortunately, her work in the Resistance forces her to stay in the shadows.
* LaResistance: Part of the Umbra Circle and is responsible for coining the name.
* LiteralSplitPersonality: [[spoiler:For Twilight Sparkle, inheriting her logical nature and magical prowess.]]
* MysteriousPast: For all that's known of her backstory in-universe and out, she might as well have materialized on Luna's doorstep. [[spoiler:Apparently, that's exactly the case.]]
* NumberTwo: To Princess Luna.
* TheSoulless: [[spoiler:Shining Spark's true nature. She describes herself as half a pony and is aiming to retrieve her heart.]]
* TheSpock: She comes off as rather aloof and coldly logical.
* SuddenNameChange: She's been referred to both as ''Bright'' Spark and ''Shining'' Spark, and it's not certain which one is meant to be her real name. Older drafts also gave her the name "Shining Magic". However, the author seems to have settled on "Shining Spark".
* YourDaysAreNumbered: [[spoiler:As of the story's events, she has six months to locate her heart before she ceases to exist. She even has a counter [[ExactTimeToFailure keeping track of the time she has left]].]]

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!!The Elements of Harmony

The five (formerly six) brave ponies protecting former Equestria from danger with the power of their friendship, they now serve under Starfleet as a primary line of defense for United Equestria. Members include Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rarity, and the late Twilight Sparkle.

[[folder:Tropes applying to all members]]

* AwesomeButImpractical: Their Valkyrie modes are impressive looking and provide a boost of power, but are also very clunky to handle. They have no problem giving it up permanently due to the impracticality and because it came from Grand Ruler.
* BadassCrew: They're very well versed in combat, and manage to hold off a small army of Conquest's followers.
* DudeWheresMyRespect: Despite their accomplishments, the FantasticRacism ingrained in the Unicornicopians means the Elements don't get any sort of respect or gratitude from them. Very much averted on the Equestrian side.
* FiveManBand
** TheLeader: Applejack
** TheLancer: Rainbow Dash
** TheHeart: Fluttershy
** [[TheBigGuy The Big Girl]]: Pinkie Pie
** TheChick: Rarity, Glarity
** TheSixthRanger[=/=][[TheSmartGuy The Smart Girl]]: Belle Amie
* HurtingHero: ''All'' of them to different degrees, due to Twilight's death.
* HypercompetentSidekick: Unlike Starfleet, they know how to get the job done. Celestia goes as far as to state that they're the only reason Starfleet's still around.
* {{Knighting}}: [[spoiler:They are knighted by Celestia as recognition of their triumph in Phillydelphia, the first major victory of the war.]]
* ThePowerOfFriendship: Wouldn't be the Elements without it.
* TrueCompanions: True to their origin, they're incredibly close friends. [[spoiler:Most of Starfleet actually envies them for it.]]

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[[folder:Rainbow Dash]]

* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: [[spoiler:Is placed in charge of her own air division after her actions in Phillydelphia.]]
* BadassGay: Bisexual, actually. Harboring feelings for Fluttershy doesn't hamper her ass-kicking ability any.
* BoisterousBruiser: Perhaps unsurprisingly.
* CannotSpitItOut: She really, ''really'' wants to be Fluttershy's special somepony, helped by her belief that Fluttershy deserves someone better than [[WhatDoesSheSeeInHim Rhymey]], but can't work up the courage to tell her for fear that it might damage their friendship. [[DramaticIrony Ironically, it would probably be better for both parties if she did just spit it out]], although she's getting there.
* {{Expy}}: She possesses SuperSpeed, the ability to create "speed mirages", [[{{Vibroweapon}} the ability to vibrate her molecules to weaken or destroy objects]], and a HyperactiveMetabolism. This practically makes her a dead ringer for [[ComicBook/TheFlash The Flash]]. She even mentions reading a book about a superhero named [[ShoutOut "Buried Alien"]]. There's also that her speed powers come from her connection to the "Speed Force".
* LightningBruiser: Still the fastest flyer in Equestria and packs a mean punch as well.
* [[OneManArmy One Mare Army]]: Takes down an impressive number of mooks single-handedly in Vanhoover.
* RageWithinTheMachine: Harbors a ''very'' strong dislike of Starfleet, which she doesn't bother to hide from her friends.
* RequiredSecondaryPowers: She has a HyperactiveMetabolism in order to get the energy she needs to use her SuperSpeed. This also means it is very difficult for her to get drunk.
* SuperSpeed: One of her defining abilities. She boasts being faster than Unicornicopians, and considering she managed to break the "top speed 9000" limit Starfleet gave her, she can definitely back up her claims. [[spoiler:She manages to save Fluttershy and Rhymey from Raven firing the Uniforce at the them from ''point blank range''.]]
* {{Vibroweapon}}: Can vibrate the molecules in her body to weaken or destroy objects. She demonstrates this ability by [[spoiler:breaking Rhymey's sword.]]

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[[folder:Pinkie Pie]]

* BreakTheCutie: While all of Twilight's friends and family were hurt by her death, Pinkie is shown to have been the one who took it the worst and has needed therapy to help her.
* ConfusionFu: When push comes to shove, Pinkie's policy is "anything goes". When sparring with Artie after he points this out, she subdues him with a paintbrush... by ''tickling'' him with it.
* GenkiGirl: But of ''course''.
* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Sure, this as applied to her Element was already established in ''[=FiM=]'' canon, but here it's taken a step further by letting her [[spoiler:NoSell Conquest's attempt to cripple Starfleet and the Elements with a SupernaturalFearInducer ''and'' [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu hurt him for the first time in the story]] by singing]].
* ImprobableWeaponUser: Carries an entire HyperspaceArsenal of various party goods refashioned as weaponry.
* ManicPixieDreamGirl: She tries to play this for Starfleet in general, but particularly to Artie.
* StepfordSmiler: While she's still as cheery as ever, it's clear that Twilight's passing hurt her ''badly''.

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[[folder:Applejack]]

* AnArmAndALeg: Loses both wings, which she gained from Starfleet, in battle against an enemy boar commander. It doesn't even slow her down.
* TheDeterminator: Oh, so ''very'' much. Even [[spoiler:being crushed halfway to death by Raven]] doesn't stop her from fighting back or [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu verbally flipping off Dark Conquest]].
* TheLeader: Took on the mantle of leading the Elements of Harmony after Twilight's death.
* NiceGirl: She's perfectly willing to befriend members of Starfleet.
* [[OneManArmy One Mare Army]]: Like Rainbow Dash, Applejack can easily hold her own against incredible odds.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The fic gives her the full name Abbigail Jacqueline III.
* TeamMom: More or less describes herself as this.
* WorthyOpponent: Recognized as one by Rep-Stallion.
* YouAreInCommandNow: Technically "I Am In Command Now" as she took on the leader role of her own volition, but the idea is the same.

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[[folder:Fluttershy]]

* ActualPacifist: She never partakes in any fighting whatsoever.
* AwfulWeddedLife: Her marriage with Rhymey is... Let's just say she's regretting her decision.
* AwesomeMcCoolname: Her full name is revealed to be Fluttershy ''Firewing''.
* BadassPacifist: Drives off Dementia without lifting a hand to defend herself, by effectively dropping a BreakingSpeech on her.
* MeatVersusVeggies: Being [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]], she's not very comfortable with the idea of eating meat. Rhymey doesn't see a problem.
* TheMedic: Eventually takes on this role. Her redesigned armor also allows her to heal her friends in the middle of combat.
* SilkHidingSteel: [[spoiler:Rhymey actually resents her for this, wanting to take out the "steel" part.]]
* WarriorTherapist: See BadassPacifist above. Notably, her words seem to have actually sunk in.

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[[folder:Rarity]]

* {{Ambadassador}}: She has no problem marching straight into Diamond Dog territory to negotiate an alliance. It helps that the aftermath of their first encounter is still fresh in their memory.
* ArcherArchetype: Proves herself quite capable with a bow.
* ActionMom: [[spoiler:Shortly after giving birth to her and Spike's daughter Crystal Clarity, she returns to the front lines and assists in defeating Titan.]]
* TheFashionista: It's a given. Of particular note is that she redesigns the Elements' armor [[NonUniformUniform to better fit the respective wearer]]. She eventually succeeds in this regard in Chapter 17, courtesy of {{Mithril}} donated to her by the Diamond Dogs for all her assistance.
* HappilyMarried: With [[InterspeciesRomance Spike]].
* PregnantBadass: She doesn't let a little thing like carrying a baby stop her from fighting for Equestria. However, she does eventually retreat from the front lines for her unborn child's sake.
* SilkHidingSteel: Every bit a ProperLady, but also a competent warrior in her own right.

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[[folder:Twilight Sparkle]]
* AwesomeByAnalysis: [[spoiler:Demonstrates this remarkably well in her fight with Raven.]]
** [[spoiler:She points out all the holes in Raven's story about Celestia being involved in the death of her husband.]]
** [[spoiler:Also, she points out all the holes in Grand Ruler and Starfleet's logic about investigating Raven when she first showed up.]]
** [[spoiler:Lastly, she concludes that Raven is not actually a unicorn because she lacks a unicorn's skill in using magic.]]
* BadassBookworm: When she fights, she analyzes her opponent to find the best way to defeat them.
* DoomedMoralVictor: [[spoiler:Twilight dies knowing of Grand Ruler's true nature, and although it takes a while, her friends eventually carry on her work. She even states as much with her FamousLastWords.]]
* FaceDeathWithDignity: [[spoiler:Before Raven kills her with the Uniforce, Twilight says goodbye to her friends and apologizes that she won't be able to see them again.]]
* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: [[spoiler:The energy blast from the Uniforce left a giant hole from Twilight's chest to her backside.]]
* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler:Her eyes are closed and there is a smile on her face after Raven kills her with the Uniforce.]]
* MyDeathIsJustTheBeginning: [[spoiler:Tells Raven that even if she does kill her, it will "set off a spark that is going to bring out a miracle and save us all".]]
* PosthumousCharacter: Killed by Raven before the events of the story.
* SquishyWizard: [[spoiler:Her magic is powerful enough to utterly dominate Raven, but when it gets suppressed by Lightning, Raven quickly overwhelms her with brute force.]]
* WorfHadTheFlu: [[spoiler:The only reason Raven managed to kill her was because of Lightning Dawn disabling Twilight's magic; beforehand, Twilight was on the delivering end of a CurbStompBattle against Raven.]]

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!!Other Equestrians

[[folder:Spike]]
* HappilyMarried: With [[InterspeciesRomance Rarity]].
* HeIsAllGrownUp
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[[folder:Glarity]]
* {{Golem}}: She starts out as one of these controlled by Rarity to fight on the front lines in Rarity's stead during her pregnancy.
* ItCanThink: Through currently unknown means, Glarity has gained a personality and will of its own.
* OurHomunculiAreDifferent: With the help of Zecora, Rarity creates a homunculus made of clay and bark so that it can fight instead of her due to her pregnancy. It later becomes sentient, gaining its own personality and will independent of Rarity's.
* {{Portmanteau}}: Her name is a combination of "golem" and "Rarity".
* RemoteBody: For Rarity, allowing her to continue fighting while pregnant without putting herself in danger. Even after developing her own will, Glarity is still dependent on Rarity's magic to function [[spoiler:until Rarity permanently surrenders a portion of it so that Glarity can live on her own]].
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:After the birth of Rarity's child, Glarity acknowledges that she has served her purpose and has to be shut down permanently. However, Rarity [[DefiedTrope disagrees]] and permanently severs the link between them, allowing Glarity to become fully independent.]]
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[[folder:Queen Celestia]]

The ruler of former Equestria, now queen of United Equestria and wife to Grand Ruler Celesto. Still clings to her policy of friendship and peace, which contrasts with that of her husband's.

* AwfulWeddedLife: It's been shown that her marriage to Celesto is anything but a happy one. In fact, in Chapter 1, Luna notes that she and Celesto have had a grand total of thirty arguments ''in the past month''.
* BigGood: Celesto may be the ruler of United Equestria in name, but it's Celestia that's the main force of good.
* BurningWithAnger: Twice in the twelfth chapter: [[spoiler:The first time was when she learned that Celesto had used her image on Lightning Dawn to blame Twilight for her own death and the second time was when she learned of all the various miscarriages of justice.]]
* EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses: Still prefers to go by [[PrincessesRule her old title of princess]], even though she's now a queen.
* GoodAdulteryBadAdultery: [[spoiler:Her relationship with Discord is played rather sympathetically. It's shown there's very little love in her and Celesto's relationship, which exists more or less for political reasons. In addition, Celestia has lost all love for her husband, now that she knows what kind of pony he's like a few years after getting married to him.]]
* TheHighQueen: She doesn't want to be called "Queen".
* MamasBabyPapasMaybe: [[spoiler:It is implied that her children (or child) may have actually been fathered by Discord.]]
* TheMentor: Has started providing guidance to Lightning Dawn as the tragedies pile up for him.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Unlike her husband, she has no qualms about listening to others and shows a willingness to accept help from other nations and species in the war against Dark Conquest.
* WarriorPrincess: When the chips are down, Celestia ''will'' take to the field personally with a FlamingSword. Also, while she is technically a "queen", she prefers her old title of "princess".
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[[folder:Princess Luna]]

The co-regent of former Equestria, now part of United Equestria, and younger sister of Princess Celestia. The leader of a [[RagtagBunchOfMisfits small rebellious force]] that seeks to dethrone Grand Ruler Celesto and reinstate Celestia to the throne.

* DreamWalker: Just like in the canon Friendship Is Magic, Luna has the ability to look into the dreams of others and interact with them in said dreams. She, however, cannot look into the dreams of those from Starfleet due to keeping their minds sealed off.
* TheLeader: Of the resistance.
* MySisterIsOffLimits: Shows herself to not be too welcome to the idea of Celestia and Discord being together in a relationship. Granted, Luna hasn't forgiven Discord for all the chaos he's caused for Equestria in the past.
* [[PhysicalGod Physical Goddess]]
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: She's plotting to overthrow a tyrant ''and'' contributing to the war against Conquest, and can kick plenty of ass in her own right too.

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[[folder:The Umbra Circle]]

A resistance movement against the Grand Ruler, led by Princess Luna. Aside from plotting against him, they also serve as a reserve force for the Elements if they are unavailable. Current members include Shining Spark, Trixie Lulamoon, Carrot Top, Cheerilee, Raindrops, Lyra Heartstrings, Ditzy Doo, Discord, and [[spoiler:Dyno]].

* ActionMom: Ditzy Doo/Derpy Hooves is the mother of [[FandomNod Dinky Doo and Sparkler/Amethyst Star]].
* AmazonBrigade: Save for Discord [[spoiler:and Dyno]], they're all female.
* BadassCrew: They more than hold their own against Dark Conquest's forces.
* BadassGay: Lyra Heartstrings is romantically involved with Bon Bon. She comments how they didn't have to face prejudice for this until [[PoliticallyIncorrectVillain Starfleet]] came along.
* BadassTeacher: Cheerilee.
* BeneathSuspicion: A primary reason why those particular members were chosen by Luna: Starfleet simply doesn't pay much attention to them.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Invoked with their choice of name. They're a heroic group who nonetheless sticks to the shadows.
* EgocentricTeamNaming: Narrowly subverted, given that most of the ideas came from Trixie. Fortunately, Spark steps in and proposes the currently accepted name.
* FiveManBand:
** TheLeader: Princess Luna
** TheLancer: Trixie Lulamoon, Discord
** {{The Smart G|uy}}irl: Shining Spark, Cheerilee
** {{The Big G|uy}}irl: Raindrops, Carrot Top
** TheChick: Ditzy Doo, Lyra Hearstrings
** TheSixthRanger: [[spoiler:Dyno]]
* LaResistance
* RagtagBandOfMisfits: So a {{Physical God}}dess, the embodiment of chaos, a unicorn with a MysteriousPast, a stage magician, a schoolteacher, a musician, a farmer, a Wonderbolt cadet, [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Derpy]] walk into a bar...
* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Inverted. Everyone barring Discord [[spoiler:(and later Dyno)]] is female.
* TeamMom: Ditzy Doo.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: [[ObnoxiousInLaws Luna and Discord]] do not like each other much, but work together by Celestia's wishes. It's mostly one-sided on Luna's behalf, though.
* ThouShaltNotKill: They're never seen killing their enemies, simply incapacitating them in other ways.
* TwoGirlsToATeam: Inverted. [[spoiler:Once Dyno joins the team, he and Discord are the only male members.]]

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[[folder:Trixie Lulamoon]]

A major member of the resistance and friend to Shining Spark, formerly masquerading as an assistant to Abracadabra.

* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve: Some of her illusion magic works on this principle, in that the subject of the spell must accept it for the spell's effects to linger.
* ItsPersonal: Has an ax to grind with Raven for killing Twilight Sparkle, whom Trixie saw as a FriendlyRival.
* LaResistance: Part of Luna's resistance movement.
* LargeHam: Definitely has her moments. She just wouldn't be THE GREAT AND POWERFUL TRIXIE otherwise.
* MasterOfIllusion: Casting illusions is her specialty - to the point where she can mask the location of ''an entire city''.
* MyGreatestFailure: [[spoiler:Takes the death of Myte badly, given that she and the other resistance members were sent to protect Starfleet.]]
* ThirdPersonPerson: Given that she's ''The Great and Powerful Trixie''.

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[[folder:Discord]]

The quirky and fun-loving Spirit of Chaos, now once again among the living.

* AtLeastIAdmitIt: Stated by him in the second chapter when Celestia mentions how Celesto tried to cut the education budget in favor of a higher military budget behind her back.
* BackFromTheDead: Through means currently unknown, he has come back to life. [[spoiler:Although the memory manipulation carried out on the Equestrian population brings up the possibility that he, along with many of those brought back, simply never died in the first place.]]
* CompositeCharacter: He disguises himself as Goldwin, a character in the original story who was a statue given life. In this story, it seems that this is the reason Goldwin supposedly gained sentience.
* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: It's not easy to describe him as good, but it is shown that he and Celestia have a strange yet wondrous sex life.
* HeelFaceTurn: Just like in Friendship Is Magic, Discord is now working with the heroes, specifically Luna's Rebellion. As he notes in Chapter 2, his reasons for turning good are due to him seeing friendship as something chaotic and thus worth a try.
* ObnoxiousInLaws: While technically not in-laws, both he and Luna are shown to not get along too well. The only reason the two of them work together is for Celestia's sake.
* TheOneGuy: So far, he's the only major male player of the rebels. [[spoiler:Until Dyno came along.]]
* RealityWarper: As befitting the Spirit of Chaos.

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!!Starfleet

The warriors of former Unicornicopia, now part of United Equestria, led by Lightning Dawn. They lead the fight against Dark Conquest. Their main members consist of Lightning Dawn, Starla Shine, Buddy Rose, Artie, Rhymey, Dyno, and Myte.

[[folder:Tropes applying to all members]]
* BadCopIncompetentCop: The two things they're most frequently doing seem to be persecuting Equestrians and getting curb-stomped by Conquest.
* BrokenPedestal: As it turns out, [[spoiler:pretty much ''all'' of them (save for perhaps Lightning and Rhymey) have become quite disillusioned with their lot in life, envying the friendship, heroism, and competence of the Elements of Harmony. This reaches a breaking point with Myte's death. Eventually, even Lightning goes through this when he realizes how awful he's been acting and how little Celesto cares about him.]]
* CreateYourOwnVillain: Quite a bit of Dark Conquest's army consists of those sentenced to prison planets for crimes such as [[FelonyMisdemeanor speaking out against Grand Ruler Celesto or thinking enemies can be redeemed]], now seeking revenge against them.
* CripplingOverspecialization:
** They have exactly one specialty: dealing with a singular MonsterOfTheWeek, while the civilians hide behind shields so they don't get caught in the crossfire. This doesn't really help them in all-out war against Dark Conquest, who deliberately stays away from this particular tactic.
** [[spoiler:The Space Ponies have genes that increase their physicality, however they can only boost one physical attribute at a time, making them largely ineffective against Dark's Conquest diverse army.]]
* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype:
** Of the DesignatedHero. For supposed "heroes", they commit plenty of villainous acts and ''that's exactly how they're seen'' with numerous characters calling them out that they do little if anything to prove that they're actually heroic. Dark Conquest [[AtLeastIAdmitIt even states that unlike Starfleet, he's not trying to act like the hero despite his actions proving otherwise]]. In short, they're as much {{Designated Hero}}es InUniverse as they are out universe.
** They also deconstruct SuperiorSpecies, [[spoiler:it is revealed by Dr. Emil Kudos that Space Ponies have genes that can give them temporary boosts in power, but only in one certain category (strength, speed or durability) at a time. Due to Dark Conquest's army having such diverse creatures, the Space Ponies' power boosts are largely ineffective.]]
* TheDividual: Story-wise, the majority of them are treated as a single character, and most of them are interchangeable with each other. Which, admittedly, isn't too far off from the source material. Later chapters are defying this by working towards building up their individual characters.
* DwindlingParty: Dark Conquest plans to hunt down every single member of Starfleet, one by one. [[spoiler:He's succeeded in taking out Myte and Buddy Rose, crippling Artie, and [[HazyFeelTurn swaying Rhymey to his side]].]]
* FantasticRacism: Starfleet has a very high opinion of Unicornicopians (which make up most of Starfleet) and have a very low opinion of those from other races, as they do in the source material.
* FiveManBand:
** TheLeader: Lightning Dawn
** TheLancer: Rhymey Ward
** TheSmartGuy: Dyno and Mite
** TheBigGuy: Artie Bristles
** TheChick: Buddy Rose, Starla Shine
* {{Flat Character}}s: As pointed out by Dementia in-story, there's very little to them personality-wise. They do get CharacterDevelopment later on, though.
* GoodFeelsGood: What most of them come to realise through the Mane Five extending their friendships to them.
* HeelFaceTurn: Most members of Starfleet are gradually brought around to the ways of old Equestria from the tyrannical dogma of the Grand Ruler.
* [[HeroWithBadPublicity Heroes With Bad Publicity]]: Unlike in the source material, it is shown Starfleet is disliked by a majority of the population of United Equestria, with many thinking that there's little to nothing heroic about them.
* LackOfEmpathy / AMillionIsAStatistic: They show little concern for the deaths of civilians in the war. [[spoiler:They hardly even bat an eye at Myte's death - with the exception of Dyno.]]
* TheWorfEffect: They get defeated soundly during their first clash with Dark Conquest's forces, demonstrating just how dangerous Conquest is.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: A rare example of a ([[NominalHero nominally]]) heroic side subscribing to this ideal, although it's not necessarily fatal. If someone is no longer useful to them, or if they never were in the first place, Starfleet has no problem abandoning them.[[TakeThat This is most likely intended as a jab at the tendency of Mykan's characters to be]] PutOnABus if he can't come up with ways to use them, as is the case with Cookie Dough and Inquirius (the former of which gets KilledOffForReal by Conquest, who calls them out on this).

[[/folder]]

[[folder:Grand Ruler Celesto]]

The militaristic ruler of former Unicornicopia, now United Equestria. Dedicated to maintaining the ways of Unicornicopia and enforcing them on others.

* AdaptationalVillainy: This fic removes Grand Ruler's ProtagonistCenteredMorality and brings the less-savory implications of his ''Starfleet Magic'' portrayal to the forefront. It also [[spoiler:depicts him {{Mind Rap|e}}ing his subjects into accepting him as leader and being TheManBehindTheMan to at least two ''Starfleet Magic'' villains]].
* BerserkButton: The mere concept of friendship and redemption seems to be one.
** Also despises anything that, to him, makes Unicornicopians look bad compared to the "inferior" races.
* BigGood: {{Subverted|Trope}}. While he may be in charge of United Equestria it's rather obvious that there's hardly anything "good" about him.
* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: As far as he's concerned, you're either with him or you're evil. No exceptions.
* TheCaligula: Shown to be authoritarian, unlikable and thoroughly ineffective.
* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve: Celesto's powers are fuelled by ponies believing in him; when that belief is taken away, he starts to weaken.
* ControlFreak: He is positively ''hellbent'' on clinging to power in United Equestria, his own people be ''damned''.
* {{Cuckold}}: His wife Celestia is shown to be having an affair with Goldwin [[spoiler:AKA Discord]], and so far he is completely unaware of it. Granted though, from what we can see of his personality, it's rather understandable as to why Celestia would cheat on him.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: He genuinely ''doesn't seem to get'' what the Equestrians have against him.
* FantasticRacism: Has a very low opinion of anyone who's not a Unicornicopian, to the point of ''[[UngratefulBastard refusing help from other countries]] [[TooDumbToLive even when it's obvious he needs it]].''
* FascistButInefficient: His ruling style is, unlike the source material, shown to be this.
* GeneralFailure: See TooDumbToLive below for why you do not want this guy commanding your army.
* HateSink: He's definitely not portrayed in a flattering manner.
* IllegalGuardian: Takes Lightning Dawn in just to exploit his power and make him into a living weapon, rather than raise him as an actual son.
* InsistentTerminology: It's not "military expansion", it's "offering protection to other races in exchange for making them adopt his ways".
* ItsAllAboutMe: If it goes against Starfleet's (read: his) ideals, he won't stand for it. He's so self absorbed he doesn't realize his own wife is cheating on him.
* {{Jerkass}}: Damn straight.
* TheManBehindTheMan: [[spoiler:Emil Kudos was acting on his orders all along in ''Starfleet Magic IV'', and he brainwashed Raven into hating Celestia, making him directly responsible for Twilight's death.]]
* TheMillstone: Due to most of the other tropes listed here, he's more of a hindrance to United Equestria's war effort than a help.
* ANaziByAnyOtherName: Grand Ruler's regime to shown to be very fascist. Under it, there are [[SarcasmMode delights]] such as internment camps, censorship of the press, state-sponsored racism, constant focus on the military, re-education facilities, correctional facilities for "undesirables" and the arresting and imprisonment on far-off prison planets of anyone and everyone who publicly voices their dissent for the government.
* OrwellianEditor: It's shown that he tends to engage in modifying the memories of his citizens and soldiers, such as telling them that the Elements of Harmony were ineffective against Dementia, Rep-Stallion and Mysterious when, in actuality, they defeated them and were forced to surrender when a spirit threatened harm upon their families.
%%* ParodySue:
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Where to begin?
* TheSociopath: Celesto fits most of the qualities. He shows no empathy for others, is fully willing to lie and deceive, does not form meaningful attachments to anyone, and is very self-centered.
* TooDumbToLive: Celesto seems to be a walking checklist of ways ''not'' to fight a war.
** He's more concerned about training his troops around the clock than he is about basically everything else, such as actually feeding them.
** He maintains that the enemy is disorganized and has no plan of attack, even when confronted with evidence that the enemy's attacks form a clear pattern.
** He refuses aid from allied countries in the belief that Starfleet can overcome the threat on their own, even as they clearly fail to do so and countless ponies die.
** When finding out that [[spoiler:rogue Unicornicopians have joined the enemy side]], he immediately censors this information in an attempt to keep Starfleet's reputation clean and throws the pony who returns with this important information into a prison camp for his effort.
** He sends assassins after [[spoiler:the five ponies that are literally the entire reason United Equestria is still in the war. Thankfully, they fail, mainly because the Elements are a lot smarter than Celesto and his hit squad.]]
* UngratefulBastard: His response to the news of Starfleet being saved by Equestrians? [[KickTheDog Slap Lightning for delivering the news]] and spin the story to make it seem that their intervention [[spoiler:''got Myte killed'']]. Not to mention that his response to other nations for offering to lend aid effectively amounts to "GetOut".
* VillainousBreakdown: His composure breaks down entirely when [[spoiler:the Knights' defeat of Titan is broadcast to all of Equestria, thus discrediting him. He then responds by initiating operation "Board Wipe"... which certainly doesn't imply anything good.]]

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[[folder:Lightning Dawn]]

Student to Grand Ruler and leader of Starfleet.

* BreakTheHaughty: The story is not at all kind to him with the revelations it throws out, bringing him down from an arrogant jerk to a whimpering wreck.
* CommandingCoolness: His rank. The "coolness" part, however, is called into question.
* DeathByOriginStory: His family was killed and [[DoomedHometown his homeworld destroyed]] before he was taken in by Celesto. [[spoiler:In fact, Celesto ordered their deaths himself to exploit this trope and make Lightning seem like more of a heroic character.]]
* EtTuBrute: His reaction to [[spoiler:being attacked by rogue Unicornicopians fighting for Conquest]].
* FailureHero: Pointed out in-story by Dyno in Chapter 8. Specifically, he notes how Lightning Dawn is supposed to have tremendous amounts of power and yet is unable to truly save anyone when it matters, such as in the cases of Twilight Sparkle and [[spoiler:Myte. Both of whom, incidentally enough, died at the hands of Raven.]] This only gets worse as the story goes on, with [[spoiler:Buddy Rose biting the dust, also courtesy of Raven and Artie nearly dies at the hands of Dark Conquest.]]
* HappilyMarried: To Starla Shine.
* HeroicBSOD: He finally breaks when [[spoiler:the {{Red Shirt}}s assigned to his team are killed, believing himself to be useless.]]
* IJustWantToHaveFriends: Starts to show shades of this as [[spoiler:his teammates either start dying or flat-out quit]] and he finds himself increasingly alone with very few people who actually care about him.
* ILetGwenStacyDie: Specifically, letting Twilight die. [[spoiler:Although he didn't just let her die: he basically pulled the trigger by disabling her magic while she was fighting Raven as a ManchurianAgent under Celesto's orders, and [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone is aghast at it]].]]
* {{Jerkass}}: Rarely has anything positive to say and acts rather unlikable to several ponies.
* JerkassFacade: His jerkish tendencies are a result of his attempts to live up to the beliefs Grand Ruler indoctrinated in him. In reality, he's just as much a victim of Celesto's cruelty as anyone else.
* KnightInSourArmor: Over time, he begrudgingly develops respect for the Equestrians, not that he would ever admit to such a thing (largely because of [[TheCaligula Grand]] [[FantasticRacism Ruler]]).
* TheLeader: For Starfleet. Nominally, also for the Elements of Harmony.
* LeeroyJenkins: Pretty much [[DeconstructedCharacterArchetype torn to pieces with him]]. It's actually pointed out by both the Elements of Harmony and the villains that his tendency to rush headlong into dangerous situations tends to make problems faced by the heroes much worse than they should be, such as putting Twilight Sparkle into the situation that lead to her death or him [[CurbStompBattle getting severely and mercilessly beaten]] by Dark Conquest.
* ManchurianAgent: [[spoiler:Lightning is horrified to discover he disabled Twilight's magic during her battle with Raven due to some trigger of Celesto's.]]
* MiseryBuildsCharacter: Goes through absolute ''hell'' during the events of the story ranging from [[CurbStompBattle getting soundly beaten by the villains with barely any effort on their part]] to realizing that hardly anyone likes him before finally improving himself.
* MyGreatestFailure: Letting Starla get kidnapped in this story was his second one. His first was letting Raven kill Twilight [[spoiler:and being unknowingly complicit in her death]].
* OnlyFriend: He and Krysta were this to each other before Lightning was taken in by Celesto. With Starfleet falling apart and Krysta's world destroyed, they become this once again.
%%* ParodySue:
* TookALevelInKindness: He eventually comes to his senses from Celesto's influence and becomes a better person, but not before being ''thoroughly'' broken.
* WellDoneSonGuy: Towards Grand Ruler. Too bad Grand Ruler doesn't give a shit about him.

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[[folder:Starla Shine]]

The wife of team leader Lightning Dawn. Kidnapped by Dark Conquest shortly before the war.

* TheChick: Of Lightning Dawn's team, as she herself notes.
* DamselInDistress: She's kidnapped by Dark Conquest early on and spends most of the story as one. [[spoiler:Eventually, she escapes his clutches and ends up in the universe of Berserk, which was conquered by Dark Conquest.]]
* GrewASpine: Thanks to Dementia's support, she's gradually become more independent and less a doormat. [[spoiler:As of chapter 14, she's officially done taking crap from Conquest. [[MomentOfAwesome She laters attacks Dark Conquest and escapes his clutches,]] although she later ends up on one of the worlds Dark Conquest has conquered instead of United Equestria.]]
* HappilyMarried: To Lightning Dawn. However, she eventually comes to realize that it's not quite as happy as she initially thought.
* HeelRealization: [[spoiler:Has one in Chapter 8 when she notices how she is unable to muster up but a few memories about Myte when she learns of his death.]]
* MoralityPet: To Dementia, of all people.
* RapeAsDrama: '''''Dear God.'''''
* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: She eventually becomes attached to Dementia, who is about the only one to show her any kindness during her captivity.
* SatelliteLoveInterest: {{Deconstructed|CharacterArchetype}}. [[spoiler:As mentioned in HeelRealization above, she barely remembers anything of her teammates that aren't her husband. This is because her life revolved around Lightning Dawn and nothing else.]]
* SexSlave: Yeah, Dark Conquest is that kind of villain.

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[[folder:Dyno and Myte]]

The identical twin explosive experts of Starfleet. [[spoiler:After Myte's death, Dyno's disillusionment with Starfleet drives him to become a member of the Umbra Circle resistance movement.]]

* AngstySurvivingTwin: [[spoiler:Dyno, after Raven kills Myte.]]
* CharacterDevelopment: Dyno is among the first of the Mykan-original characters to receive something of a personality, as it's shown neither he nor Myte enjoy being heroes nor do they enjoy living by Grand Ruler's gospel.
* DefectorFromDecadence: [[spoiler:Dyno essentially quits Starfleet shortly after Myte bites it due to how unheroic they truly are, their views on friendship and their LackOfEmpathy towards the death of one of their own.]] Granted, he and his brothers had already begun to grow dissatisfied with being in Starfleet.
* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:Dyno joined up with the Umbra Circle to get back at Starfleet for writing off his brother's death, among their other crimes. Even the Circle themselves are surprised.]]
* IdenticalTwinIDTag: Dyno has a scar under his right ear and Myte has a slightly nasal voice, as Pinkie Pie points out.
* IJustWantToBeNormal: They both want to retire from Starfleet and settle down to have a normal life.
* IJustWantToHaveFriends: Dyno confides to Applejack that they don't really know the slightest thing about their comrades in Starfleet beyond the superficial, and envy the bond that the Mane Six have.
* NeckSnap: [[spoiler:Myte is killed this way, courtesy of Raven.]]
* PlayingWithFire: Both of the brothers have access to fire-elemental magic.
* SacrificialLamb: [[spoiler:Myte ends up as this.]]
* TokenMinority: The two brothers' schtick in the original was essentially being 'latino' ponies that blew things up and were twin brothers with fire based powers.
* WeHardlyKnewYe: [[spoiler:Everything we know about Myte, we get from Dyno's exposition. Myte himself gets about two appearances, which do little to develop his character, before he dies.]]

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[[folder:Rhymey Ward]]

A swordsman serving under Starfleet. Married to Fluttershy.

* AdaptationalVillainy: This incarnation of Rhymey is [[AxCrazy less stable]] and more of a ManipulativeBastard and all-round jerk than his original depiction. [[spoiler:Additionally, he's shown leading the holocaust of Lightning's homeworld and personally killing his family.]]
* ArrogantKungFuGuy: Unlike most of the other members of Starfleet, he fully subscribes to their brand of FantasticRacism.
* AxCrazy: Any semblance of sanity he had goes out the window after [[spoiler:he gets forced out of Fluttershy's life]].
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Early on, he at least acts relatively civil, contrasting ''sharply'' with his true nature. To wit, [[spoiler:he's the only member of Lightning Dawn's team that never actually went through memory modification or brainwashing, because he's THAT willing to murder enemies that surrendered already in cold blood to make Starfleet, and himself, look like heroes.]]
* ControlFreak: It's limited to Fluttershy, but he's almost as bad in this department as ''Grand Ruler himself''.
* CrazyJealousGuy: Emphasis on "crazy".
* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype: Of TheLancer. He resents being second to Lightning Dawn due to his belief that Lightning did not do anything to earn his position.
* DirtyCoward: He might be smug and confident against anyone he thinks he can defeat, but when the tables are turned on him, Rhymey folds extremely quickly. [[spoiler:As demonstrated when Fluttershy breaks free from his mind control and [[BreakingSpeech shouts him down]], prompting Rhymey to make a run for it only to be blocked by Raven, at which point he's reduced to pathetically begging for his life.]]
* DomesticAbuse: His treatment of Fluttershy is a textbook example of emotional abuse with a side of MindRape.
* TheDragon: Celesto's personal right-hand man, even moreso than Lightning.
* DreamWalker: Part of his repertoire of mind-based powers is the ability to enter and influence others' minds, as he does with Fluttershy. Fortunately for her (and unfortunately for him), he has to contend with [[PhysicalGod Princess Luna]].
* EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas: His mother is one of the two people he actually cares about, the other being Fluttershy (for a certain definition of "cares").
* TheFriendNobodyLikes: [[spoiler:Once he joins Conquest's ranks, his colleagues waste no time making their disdain for him known. Emil Kudos looks down on him due to FantasticRacism, Raven hates him on principle, and even Conquest enjoys belittling and insulting him. Given that he doesn't care about allegiances, only who can give him what he wants, [[KickTheSonOfABitch it's just as well]].]]
* GreenEyedMonster: He hates Lightning out of jealousy. He descends from a long line of perfect Starfleet warriors, and as such, Rhymey feels that he deserves to be in Grand Ruler's favor and serve as his right-hand man. Then Lightning Dawn came along and, as far as Rhymey is concerned, stole all that glory for himself.
* HateSink: It's quite telling that even the author couldn't come up with a way to convincingly make him sympathetic and settled for making him one of these instead.
* HumiliationConga: Chapter 16. To wit: [[spoiler:his plan to ruin the Knights' reputation backfires on him, Fluttershy defeats his strongest mind magic and delivers him a devastating TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Raven [[CurbStompBattle casually defeats]] and almost kills him and the only reason she doesn't is that Fluttershy's [[SarcasmMode oh-so-useless]] [[HeartIsAnAwesomePower kindness]] stops her long enough for him to be saved by ''Rainbow Dash'' (who then proceeds to beat Raven and force her to run. And Dash was injured by her battle with the Aerophants too). When he's in a cell awaiting trial, Celesto arrives and declares him a failure who could have never gotten Lightning's place simply because he had ''worked'' for it and wouldn't have fit his narrative, and his mother disowns him]].
* ItsAllAboutMe: Everything he does is for himself. When things don't go his way, [[SanitySlippage he doesn't take it too well]].
* HazyFeelTurn: [[spoiler:He goes from serving Celesto to serving Conquest, and it's hard to tell which of them is worse.]]
* {{Jerkass}}: Early on, it was hard to tell whether he's unpleasant or just [[InnocentlyInsensitive oblivious]]. His scrap with Rainbow Dash pretty much confirms that he's the former, and he just gets worse from there.
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: [[spoiler:He pretty much cannonballs off of it when Fluttershy kicks him out, becoming a complete and utter asshole even towards his own teammates and then plotting to ''murder his own family'' just to gain back the power and prestige he lost]].
* KickTheSonOfABitch: [[spoiler:[[{{Patricide}} He kills his own father]], though given that his father isn't any better than he is, it's not like anyone is going to miss him.]]
* LikeFatherLikeSon: [[spoiler:He gets his abusive and bloodthirsty nature from his father.]]
* LovingAShadow: His relationship with Fluttershy in a nutshell. He only sees her as a prize and not an actual living being, which Rainbow Dash calls him out on. [[TakeThat This is likely a jab at how Mykan sees the female in fictional relationships as only an object to be won by the male.]]
* MasterSwordsman: Subverted. While he wields a sword, he doesn't really get much done with it. Additionally, while he does eventually hold his own against Rainbow Dash, it's only after she breaks his weapon (with her bare hands no less) and by throwing out {{Stupidity Inducing Attack}}s at her.
* MindRape: He's something of an expert in this department.
* OedipusComplex: [[spoiler:He murders his father and gets almost creepily intimate with his mother.]]
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: [[spoiler:He drops the whole "speaking in rhyme" shtick when he reveals his true colors to Fluttershy.]]
* RhymesOnADime: All the time. It's actually a form of FunctionalMagic that allows him to perform influence others' minds.
* SingleTargetSexuality: He's a Fluttershy-sexual.
* SmugSnake: Very, ''very'' smug, but his plans are thwarted at every turn, and he's nowhere near as powerful as he thinks he is. The only opponent he's seen defeating is [[spoiler:Lightning]], who isn't even all that powerful a fighter to begin with.
* StayInTheKitchen: To the '''extreme'''. [[spoiler:He wants to mold Fluttershy into an ExtremeDoormat to have absolute control over her.]]
* StupidityInducingAttack: He used one on the Elements of Harmony when they first met, causing them to mistake him for Fluttershy. It's also implied that he used something similar to make Fluttershy fall in love with him.
* TokenEvilTeammate: Surprisingly enough, he's one to Starfleet. While the others are either pressed into service or have their own reasons for serving, Rhymey doesn't have their redeeming qualities or motivations other than serving Grand Ruler. [[spoiler:And even then, he doesn't actually care about Starfleet at all, only the benefits that come with his position. He eventually joins Dark Conquest's ranks.]]
* VillainRespect: [[spoiler:Surprisingly, Rhymey at least has some respect for Twilight because he feels that she earned her position as Celestia's student.]]
* UndyingLoyalty: [[EvilVirtues To Starfleet]]. Even when Lightning's own belief in their superiority starts to waver, Rhymey's doesn't. [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope However]], he only sucks up to Grand Ruler for all the benefits he gets out of it.]]

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[[folder:Buddy Rose]]

* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: [[spoiler:[[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe "Make a wish!"]]]]
* IJustWantToBeNormal: [[spoiler:Myte's death]] sparks a bit of MortalityPhobia in him, causing him to want to quit Starfleet.
* {{Retirony}}: [[spoiler:Before the battle in Phillydelphia, he confesses his fear of death and desire to leave Starfleet to spend more time with his cousin. Unsurprisingly, he doesn't make it.]]
* WeHardlyKnewYe: [[spoiler:Like Myte, Buddy didn't get the chance to undergo much CharacterDevelopment before kicking the bucket.]] {{Subverted|Trope}} in the rewrite which allows him to show more character, particularly him being the father figure to his cousin, Daphne Dil.
* WhipItGood: His WeaponOfChoice.

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[[folder:Artie Bristles]]

* TenMinuteRetirement: [[spoiler:After officially calling it quits on Starfleet, he returns anyway to help fight the good fight.]]
* CareerEndingInjury: [[spoiler:Artie's hands become burnt to the bone when he shields Pinkie from a fireball with his own body. However, Pinkie helped him salvage his artistic career by teaching him to paint with his feet before he then moved on to telekinesis, and he hopes to eventually return to active service.]]
* FriendToAllChildren: As he demonstrates with the Cake children.
* IJustWantToBeBadass: The reason he joined up with Starfleet in the first place is so that he can be a hero. It's not really living up to his expectations, though.
* NiceGuy: Easily one of the more amiable members of Starfleet, and is quick to befriend the Mane Five.
* OddFriendship: With Pinkie Pie.
* {{Retirony}}: [[spoiler:Subverted, but only ''just''. After originally announcing his resignation, he comes back for one more fight, and ends up having to [[TakingTheBullet take a fireball for Pinkie]]. He barely survives.]]
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler:Artie calls it quits and leaves Starfleet after tearing into Lightning Dawn for not giving a shit about his colleagues.]]

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[[folder:Krysta]]
* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: [[spoiler:A fairy in the original, a transformed Flutter Pony here.]]
* BreakTheCutie: Not only is her status as the fairy queen not treating her too well, but [[spoiler:she also has to deal with her people being exterminated by the Necromancer and raised as zombies, while Starfleet simply refuses to help]]. She's also revealed to be in the middle of something of an identity crisis.
* TheChainsOfCommanding: She sees her queenship as a burden, as she doesn't feel like she belongs among her people, her husband doesn't care for her on a personal level, and just wishes to return to adventuring with Lightning.
* FullFrontalAssault: [[spoiler:Her Flutter Pony form doesn't come with clothes and averts BarbieDollAnatomy, but when fending off the zombified hordes of her own people, it's not really a hindrance.]]
* TheLoad: [[DeconstructedCharacterArchetype And aware of it]], and she's not too happy about it. [[spoiler:[[TookALevelInBadass Once she regains her true Flutter Pony powers, on the other hand...]]]]

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!Antagonists
[[folder:Dark Conquest]]

Warlord and tyrant whose empire spans several planets. He has come to United Equestria with the intent of sundering and conquering the world as he has done to several others.

* AtLeastIAdmitIt: While by all means a rapist, murderer, world-sunderer, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking and writer of bad fanfiction]] [[TakeThat of shows he hates]], he notes that he, unlike Starfleet, is actually straightforward with being evil.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Powerful enough to have assembled his forces, powerful enough to keep them in line and powerful enough to hold his own against Lightning Dawn in one-on-one combat.
* BigBad: So far, almost every single bad thing that happens in the story is completely and utterly his fault.
* CardCarryingVillain: Actively takes pride in being a world conqueror, serial rapist and murdering a-hole.
* TheChessmaster: Conquest's seen his share of... well, conquests, so naturally he's learned a few tricks along the way, allowing him to stay one step ahead of the heroes most of the time. It doesn't help that Grand Ruler's a bumbling idiot to begin with.
* ChildByRape: According to him in Chapter 8, his mother raped his father and thus, conceived him.
* DarkIsEvil: In name and appearance.
* EmbarrassingMiddleName: His full name is apparently Dark '''Ignatius''' Conquest, which would be embarrassing [[FunWithAcronyms even if it didn't make his initials spell out "DIC".]] Conquest, being [[CardCarryingVillain Conquest]], doesn't particularly mind, but it's understandable why it doesn't show up very often.
* EqualOpportunityEvil: Shows himself willing to welcome anybody of any race into his army, though this is partially due to many of them suffering mistreatment at the hands of Starfleet. In addition, despite being a serial rapist he has no problem having two of his six high-ranking generals being women, and even allows women to fight in his army. [[spoiler:The diversity of his army's physical states, skills and abilities also allows to him to effectively counter Starfleet's power-boosting genes, [[CripplingOverspecialization since they only increase one physical attribute at a time]].]]
* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: He genuinely seems to find the various atrocities he commits amusing. Even some of his compatriots beg to differ.
* EvilIsHammy: Manages to convey this even in a text-based medium.
* EvilRedhead: Emphasis on "evil".
* FauxAffablyEvil: Comes off as polite and cheerful when talking to others, yet it's made clear to anyone that spends a few seconds with him just how much of a vile, twisted monster he truly is.
* {{Foil}}: To Grand Ruler, being {{Evil Overlord}}s opposing each other who happen to be opposites in almost every other way.
** Grand Ruler is overtly dickish, ''incredibly'' racist, and trusts a small number of followers to get everything done. Conquest, on the other hand, puts on a facade of civility and has a large army composed of many races.
** Grand Ruler is a BadBoss that sits back and manipulates those under his control to do his bidding, while Conquest isn't afraid to get his hands dirty, rarely lies to his minions' faces, and generally treats them well enough.
** Grand Ruler is inflexible and obstinately opposed to change, while Conquest strategically adapts to his enemies.
** Finally, Grand Ruler is borderline TooDumbToLive while Conquest is incredibly GenreSavvy.
* GalacticConqueror: As mentioned above, he has invaded and declared himself ruler over several planets.
* GenreSavvy: Practically played for laughs. For whatever reason, he knows story telling conventions to the point where he could almost pass for a Troper.
* HeroKiller: [[spoiler:He disembowels Cookie Dough.]] In addition, he's also fought against several heroes from the worlds he's visited and conquered. Needless to say, many, if not all of them, fell by his hands.
* HumanoidAbomination: A sinister, world-destroying figure that runs on ThePowerOfHate? Dark Conquest fits the bill.
* IHaveYourWife: Kidnaps Starla Shine in the very first chapter and enjoys lording it over Lightning Dawn. Granted, no one else actually knows about Starla's fate.
* {{Jerkass}}: And that's putting it ''lightly''.
* KnightOfCerebus: Whenever he appears on the story, whether via holographic image or in-person, you can expect things to get really dark and serious for the heroes really quick. However, he often brings [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor his own brand of humor]] to the table.
* LaughablyEvil: Yes, he's an unrepentant bastard, but he's just so over-the-top that it's hard not to laugh along with him from time to time.
* LogicalWeakness: [[spoiler:Because he draws power from hate, [[GoodHurtsEvil Pinkie Pie's optimistic singing causes him physical harm]].]] Also a WeaksauceWeakness, but at least it's a sensible one.
* OutsideContextProblem: What is shown to be the most dangerous thing about him is the fact that he does not act like previous enemies that Starfleet has fought against. To wit:
** Instead of following the MonsterOfTheWeek format that his predecessors have done to death, he instead prefers to send battalions of his troops to invade the cities while also cutting off both the shields and the town's method of contacting Starfleet, noting Starfleet fully expects the former and is completely unprepared for the latter.
* ThePowerOfHate: Stated by him to be the one thing that gives him strength and attracts him to other worlds. It is for this reason that he comes to United Equestria in search of a new world to add to his list of conquered worlds, noting that United Equestria is dripping in hatred due to the incompetence and xenophobic actions of both the military and the country's ruler.
* {{Pride}}: ''Big time''. When called out for taking his sweet time taking over Equestria, he responds that he wants to savor their hatred as he believes there's no way they can match up to him.
* PsychopathicManchild: He seems to view the atrocities he commits as some sort of twisted game.
* RapePillageAndBurn: What he and his armies due to populated areas they visit.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: For such a depraved individual, he generally treats his own followers surprisingly well. At the very least, he can be more reasonable than Grand Ruler - ''if and only if'' you're on his side.
* SerialRapist: In [[MindRape more ways than one]].

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[[folder:Dementia, Mysterious, Rep-Stallion]]

Formerly servants of Titan until their demise, this trio has been raised from the dead by Dark Conquest and now serve under him as generals.

* AdaptationNameChange: [[spoiler:They had different names in their past lives.]]
** [[spoiler:Dementia used to be Galaxia Shine.]]
** [[spoiler:Mysterious used to be Blackened Myst.]]
** [[spoiler:Rep-Stallion used to be Swift Blade.]]
* AdaptationOriginConnection: [[spoiler:Before becoming Titan's minions, they used to be Unicornicopians before being put to death by Harry Ward.]]
* AdaptationalHeroism: They're generic villains in ''Starfleet Magic'', but are made much more sympathetic here.
* AffablyEvil: See TokenGoodTeammate below. Aside from working for Dark Conquest, they don't necessarily seem that bad.
* BackFromTheDead: Much to Starfleet's dismay.
* CameBackStrong: Before, Starfleet could handle them easily. Now, the roles are reversed.
* DeadpanSnarker: Mysterious has his moments.
-->'''Starla''': Oh, I can handle that. [[ItMakesSenseInContext Where's the hopscotch table?]]\\
'''Mysterious''': Your leader's judgment when it comes to strategy leaves much to be desired.
* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:All three made these with Titan when near death. He revives them in their new forms, at the cost of their memories.]]
* EmergencyTransformation: [[spoiler:Titan turned them into their current forms when they were each at near death.]]
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Dementia and Rep-Stallion are both adverse to [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil rape]], while Dementia also WouldntHurtAChild.
* FreudianTrio: Mysterious is the Superego, Dementia's the Id, and Rep-Stallion is the Ego.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:As mentioned by Titan, the three of them, whether they know it or not, are more closely aligned with the good guys than they are with Dark Conquest. They officially turn on him in chapter 16.]]
* HiddenDepths: Dementia collects plushies and is a closet geek, much to Starla's surprise.
* LizardFolk: Rep-Stallion. [[spoiler:As it turns out, this is because he's a kirin just like Rarity and Spike's daughter, Crystal Clarity.]]
* MamaBear: [[spoiler:Dementia's protective attitude towards Starla - especially with regards to Dark Conquest - stems from her being Starla's mother. When she regains her memories and realizes that Dark Conquest most likely knew all along, she goes ''ballistic''.]]
* [[NotSoHarmlessVillain Not-So-Harmless Villains]]: In the source material, they were a minor threat at best. In this story, it can be said that they are no longer minor threats. [[spoiler:Granted, they do turn on Dark Conquest in Chapter 16.]]
* OutOfFocus: In contrast to the source material, where the three had roughly equal screentime, Dementia received much more spotlight than the other two early on. Later chapters give more attention to Mysterious and Rep-Stallion, but Dementia remains the most prominent member of the trio.
* ReincarnationRomance: [[spoiler:Rep-Stallion continues his previous life's relationship with Inquerius.]]
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:[[LukeIAmYourFather They're all related in some way to Starfleet characters:]]]]
** [[spoiler:Dementia is Starla's mother.]]
** [[spoiler:Mysterious is Brain's brother.]]
** [[spoiler:Rep-Stallion is Inquerious' fiancé.]]
* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: It starts out largely as pity and PetTheDog, but Dementia eventually develops one with Starla. [[spoiler:And it makes sense why, as Dementia is Starla's mother.]]
* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Dementia's name is occasionally spelled "Dimentia", with different chapters alternating between the spellings.
* TheStoic: While Mysterious is just as capable of emoting as the other two, he doesn't do it much.
* TerribleTrio: Although not quite as terrible as some of the others on their side.
* {{Token Good Teammate}}s: Compared to the other generals, the three of them are shown to be decidedly less evil, as they are mentioned to not only have zero kills, it is also shown that Dementia has a soft spot for children and shares with Rep-Stallion an utter disgust for rape and Mysterious was willing to let a few innocent civilians escape.
* VillainousFriendship: They genuinely see each other as TrueCompanions. They also seem to be bonding with, of all people, Starla, starting with Dementia.
* WalkingSpoiler: The further along the story goes, the more is revealed about them.
* WhatIsThisFeeling: They're artificial constructs, and therefore were never intended to have emotions. The fact that they somehow ''do'' baffles all three of them. [[spoiler:And so it turns out, they are not artificial constructs, but Unicornicopians before their transformations into their current forms.]]

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[[folder:Fratello]]

Princess Cadance's older brother, corrupted by a suit of PowerArmor and destroyed by Starfleet. Later brought back to life to serve as one of Dark Conquest's generals.

* AdaptationalHeroism: He dies before he can be redeemed in ''Starfleet Magic'' [[spoiler:but here, not too long after he's BackFromTheDead, [[LoveRedeems Cadance manages to free him from his armor's influence]]]].
* BackFromTheDead
* CainAndAbel: The Cain to Cadance's Abel. [[spoiler:Until she purifies him.]]
* CyberneticsEatYourSoul: Due to the effects of the armor brainwashing and controlling him. [[spoiler:Cadance, however, shows his soul is still there, even if he didn't think so.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Courtesy of Cadance absorbing the evil in him into herself, thus bringing back the old him.]]
* LoveRedeems: [[spoiler:Contrary to what the Grand Ruler believes, as Cadance demonstrated.]]
* OneManArmy: Takes on the entire Crystal Empire ''alone''.

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[[folder:Titan]]

One of Starfleet's earliest nemeses, revived to serve under Dark Conquest.

* AdaptationSpeciesChange: [[spoiler:He's an Equestrian. Specifically, an alicorn.]]
* AdaptationalAttractiveness: [[spoiler:His current appearance is just a disguise. He's an Equestrian and a non-anthropomorphic one at that.]]
* AdaptationalHeroism: He was just a GenericDoomsdayVillain in ''Starfleet Magic'', but here, he has much more redeeming qualities [[spoiler:and it is all but spelled out that he is Celestia and Luna's father, which is confirmed in Chapter 17]].
* AffablyEvil: He takes good care of those placed in his charge by Conquest, and is polite and well-spoken despite being a villain. [[spoiler:Mainly because he isn't one.]]
* BackFromTheDead: You may be noticing a trend.
* TheChessmaster: He convinced Fratello to attack the Crystal Empire of his own accord, and while he hasn't been seen making any real schemes, he's seen modelling maneuvers in the war on a board for TabletopGame/{{Go}}. [[spoiler:Surely enough, when he does act, he offers support to both sides - with the Equestrian side getting the major benefits.]]
* DragonWithAnAgenda: It's implied that he's got his own plans separate from those of Conquest. Confirmed in Chapter 13.
* FailureGambit: [[spoiler:He fights and is defeated by the Knights of Harmony in a battle televised across Equestria, unveiling Grand Ruler as a fraud. This also allows him to reunite with Celestia and Luna after they take him in, although they don't recognize him.]]
%%* GoodAllAlong:
* LastOfHisKind: [[spoiler:He's one of the few Equestrians who was not forcibly converted into an anthropomorphic pony.]]
* LukeIAmYourFather: [[spoiler:Celestia and Luna's father was also named Titan. It's all but spelled out that this is not a coincidence. It is confirmed that he is their father in Chapter 17.]]
* OutOfFocus: He's gotten very little focus throughout the story, to the point where he's only made a few minor appearances. Even Mysterious, Dementia, and Rep-Stallion, who were formerly his minions, have gotten more focus.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:In ''Starfleet Magic'', he did not seem to have any blood ties to Celestia and Luna. Here, it's all but spelled out that he's the princesses' father. Confirmed in Chapter 17.]]
* SmartPeoplePlayChess: He's an intelligent schemer who enjoys playing Go.
* SoProudOfYou: [[spoiler:To his daughters, Celestia and Luna when he is reunited with them.]]
* WalkingSpoiler: When we finally do learn about him, let's just say that there's much more than meets the eye.

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[[folder:Raven]]

Another old nemesis of Starfleet, given new life by Dark Conquest.

* ArrogantKungFuGuy: Incredibly sure of her own abilities, and very much a braggart.
* AwesomeButImpractical: The Uniforce; it launches a very devastating attack, but it leaves the user exhausted after one use. [[spoiler:As evidenced in her encounter with [[LightningBruiser Rainbow Dash]], after Raven uses the Uniforce, she is {{Speed Blitz}}ed by Rainbow.]]
* AxCrazy: ''Yes.'' She even thinks Mysterious, Dementia and Rep-Stallion are ''too soft'' for not having a single kill to their collective names, and takes great pleasure in beating the living daylights out of Dyno and Myte.
* BackFromTheDead: Like all of Conquest's generals.
* BloodKnight: She absolutely revels in the chance to do battle with Starfleet.
* BrokenBird: Given that [[spoiler:she was taken away from her husband, tortured by a mad scientist, and then had her memories forcibly rewritten so that she would hate Celestia over a non-existent crime]], she is ''very'' broken.
* DarkActionGirl: One of the most competent fighters on the villains' side.
* TheDragon: Fits the bill more than any of Conquest's other generals. She's perfectly comfortable with approaching him, and he seems to respect her strength.
* TheDreaded: Raven is feared by Trixie and the other members of [[LaResistance Luna's Rebellion]], given that she is the one who killed Twilight Sparkle. [[spoiler:So far, it is unknown as to whether or not [[DesignatedHero Starfleet]] will fear her, given that she murders Myte in Chapter 8.]]
* AGodAmI: Almost says this verbatim with regards to her ability to wield the Uniforce.
* GravityMaster: She has the ability to intensify gravity in an area to crush an enemy. [[spoiler:While she attempts to take Applejack down this way, it doesn't work.]]
* HeroKiller: Offed Twilight Sparkle prior to the events of the story. She goes on to kill [[spoiler:Myte and Buddy Rose]] during it.
* IveComeTooFar: [[spoiler:Even if Raven knows that her hatred for Celestia is fake, it's become all she knows, and she feels TrappedIntoVillainy just to make something of it.]]
* KnightOfCerebus: The story was anything but light but by the time Chapter 8 ends, she proceeds to makes it darker when [[spoiler:she [[NeckSnap gruesomely kills]] Myte.]]
* MindRape: [[spoiler:''Twice'' in her backstory. Emil Kudos first tried to make her forget her husband via ColdBloodedTorture, then Grand Ruler stepped in and warped her memories.]]
* ThePowerOfHate: She's solely driven by her hatred of Celestia. As such, she highly values her memories, as they're all she has. However...
* TheReveal: In one of the later chapters, [[spoiler:Raven's memories are hinted at being fake in the first place, making her a victim of the most extensive memory modification seen in the story.]] What isn't revealed is WHO made her into what she is right now. [[spoiler:Her hatred of Celestia is as fake as her entire current identity is.]]
** It's later revealed that [[spoiler:her memories were modified by the efforts of Emil Kudos and Grand Ruler, the latter of whom also gave her the golden horn.]]
* SmugSnake: While Raven isn't exactly a pushover, she's also not as godlike as she'd have you believe. Her victories are all against Starfleet, who get [[TheWorfEffect worfed]] on a regular basis anyway; when she goes up against the Mane Six, she gets thrashed. [[spoiler:Especially the case with Twilight Sparkle; while Raven brags about having killed her, she glosses over how Twilight was [[CurbStompBattle curbstomping her]], and that she only gained the upper hand when Lightning disabled Twilight's magic.]]
* UnskilledButStrong: [[spoiler:As Twilight notes in their fight, Raven uses powerful attacks, but lacks the finesse of a unicorn. Twilight concludes that Raven is not actually a unicorn.]]
* WeUsedToBeFriends: She was a friend of [[spoiler:Pinkie Pie]] before her... incident. [[spoiler:Hints of her old friendship still remain, as when she showed up to warn Pinkie that Conquest will be gunning for them, she behaved much more cordially than usual and a memory of their past resurfaced.]]
* WifeBasherBasher: Raven doesn't exactly like Starfleet in general, but she harbors a particular dislike for Rhymey due to his mistreatment of Fluttershy.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: While she may be violent, dangerous, and bloodthirsty, there's no indication that she was any of those before [[spoiler:Emil Kudos "volunteered" her for his experiments]].

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[[folder:The Necromancer]]

A mysterious figure working alongside Dark Conquest, and his primary benefactor.

* DarkIsEvil: The first time we see him actually going out into the field, he commits genocide against the fairies. [[CaptainObvious Yes, he's evil.]]
%%* TheDragon: Closest to Dark Conquest
* {{Necromancer}}: He prefers to be known as one, and given that he brought a number of Starfleet's enemies BackFromTheDead, he's got the abilities to back it up.
* NonActionGuy: The Necromancer doesn't do much in the story aside from destroying the fairy world and turning its population into zombies (and even that's mostly done off-page); Dark Conquest does most of the heavy lifting.
* NoNameGiven: Not even a nickname. Even "the Necromancer" doesn't count as an actual moniker so much as the only way to really identify him beyond pronouns, based on a line from his own dialogue.
* PersonOfMassDestruction: Single-handedly destroys the fairy world Illuminoth in the space of an ''hour''.
* PragmaticVillainy: He takes issue with Dark Conquest attacking cities on a whim, considering it "playing their hand too soon" and giving United Equestria the opportunity to formulate a defense. It's equal parts this trope and genuine worry that his friend might end up biting off more than he can chew (a possibility that Conquest [[ArrogantKungFuGuy emphatically denies]]).
* TouchOfDeath: Anything living that he comes into contact with withers and dies in short order.
* VillainousFriendship: He affirms Conquest as his OnlyFriend. Conquest returns the sentiment.

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[[folder:Dusk Shine]]

Dusk Shine was a member of the royal guard along with Celesto a millennium ago. He now seeks to overthrow him.

* ClothesMakeTheSuperman: His barding (a type of armor for horses) heals his wounds and halts his aging but only so long as he wears it.
* DecompositeCharacter: He is a separate character from King Sombra.
* MilesToGoBeforeISleep: Dusk Shine want to die due to his family and loyalties being in the past but only after Grand Ruler is taken down.
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[[folder:The Doctor (All spoilers unmarked)]]

Dr. Emil Kudos conducted many experiments on ponies and other creatures, including Raven and his sister Ragamuffin, under the direction of Grand Ruler. After his "defeat" in ''Starfleet Magic IV'', he found himself in the company of Dark Conquest and dedicated his work to a new leader.

* CainAndAbel: Given what his experiments entail, he's presumably the Cain to Ragamuffin's Abel.
* EvilGenius: His intelligence is his main contribution to Conquest's forces, as he doesn't take the field personally.
* FantasticRacism: A shameless, unabashed earth pony supremacist.
* FauxAffablyEvil: Kudos is almost unfailingly polite, even as he performs his "[[ColdBloodedTorture experiments]]" and preaches earth pony supremacy. Particularly chilling is him being entirely formal and even-tempered while describing how he killed Applejack's parents and planned to do the same to her siblings.
* ForScience: His sole motivation, although his definition of "science" seems to be "proving the supremacy of earth ponies beyond any reasonable doubt".
* HazyFeelTurn: Defected to Dark Conquest from Grand Ruler for the opportunity to experiment on Unicornicopians.
* KnightOfCerebus: The story is ''anything'' but light and has its share of despicable individuals when he first appears. Emil Kudos manages to be vile ''even by those standards''. He's also one of Conquest's few minions with no redeeming qualities.
* LackOfEmpathy: He only cares about his own twisted experiments and views, with zero regard for the feelings of others.
* MadScientist: He conducts highly unethical experiments to modify the bodies of living ponies, including his own sister, and has absolutely no moral qualms.
* TheManBehindTheMonsters: He created the assassins sent by Grand Ruler to dispatch the Elements of Harmony, the Cardinals under the Dark King, and was partially responsible for turning Raven into the AxCrazy, Celestia-hating BloodKnight she is now.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: His experiments would be inhumane even if he wasn't a raving {{Fantastic Racis|m}}t; the fact that this forms the basis of his "research" just serves to make him look even worse.
* SinisterSurveillance: He is constantly keeping Applejack under surveillance, as he planned for her to be one of his experiments.
* TheSociopath: He has no morals, no empathy, and no care for anything other than his own FantasticRacism.
* TermsOfEndangerment: He's the only character that refers to Applejack as "Abbigail", and given what he did to her family, it's ''not'' endearing.
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Often seen eating jelly beans.
* WalkingSpoiler: Basically everything about him is either a spoiler for this fic or one for ''Starfleet Magic''.
* WouldHurtAChild: Once put a unicorn foal under a faucet to see how long it could hold its breath. Fortunately, the foal's parents were around to save it.
* YouKilledMyFather: He murdered Applejack's parents as part of what he described as his greatest experiment. This trope kicks in when he reveals it to her.

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