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* FilleFatale: Invoked, when she and Akira are trying to sell loot from Kamoshida's palace to Iwai at Untouchable, he offers them less than they would like, so she acts this way to try and get him to raise his offer. This has no effect on him whatsoever and he makes it pretty clear he likes older woman
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* FilleFatale: Invoked, when she and Akira are trying to sell loot from Kamoshida's palace to Iwai at Untouchable, he offers them less than they would like, so she acts this way to try and get him to raise his offer. This has no effect on him whatsoever and he makes it pretty clear he likes older womanwomen.
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* TheCasanova: Both enforced and discussed. During his first clinical trail for Takemi he starts flirty and singing to her, much to her amusement, though its pretty clear he acted that way because of the drugs she had given him. Then in a later chapter while he's babysitting Kaoru, they meet up with Takemi who jokes about Akira's love life, much to Akira's annoyance, which makes him believe Akira is very much this trope, prompting Kaoru to take notes.
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* OutdatedOutfit: Its noted by a few characters that she dresses as if it's still the 90s.
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* TheAlcoholic: Unlike in the canon where she was a HardDrinkingPartyGirl, it becomes very apparent to people such as Akira and Takemi that she has a drinking problem, the latter outright giving her a card for an alcoholic anonymous group.
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* DamselOutOfDistress: When kidnapped by her fiancée Sugimura and locked in his car, she goes to use the metaverse app to escape (knowing already that Sugimura has a palace and that palace is his car), and after several attempts to find the right keyword, she finally succeeds and escapes to the metaverse.
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* AbusiveParents: His abuse of Yusuke and his other apprentices gets much more focus here than canon. Suffice to say, it isn't pretty.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: As stated above, compared to the game and anime, Akira here suffers from more paranoia and anxiety, and is prone to suffering panic attacks when he feels overwhelmed.
* ShooTheDog: Starts to have a budding romance with Makoto early on in the story, but when she starts to get to close to figuring out he's a Phantom Thief, he's forced to try to cut ties with her.
* ShooTheDog: Starts to have a budding romance with Makoto early on in the story, but when she starts to get to close to figuring out he's a Phantom Thief, he's forced to try to cut ties with her.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Compare to his video game, manga, and anime counterparts; this version of the main protagonist is written to be more angered in letting out his frustrations.
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