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* {{Adaptational Villainy}}

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* {{Adaptational Villainy}}Villainy}}: Maybe a little annoying, but certainly not villainous in the original.

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* {{Boisterous Bruiser}}

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* {{Boisterous Bruiser}}Bruiser}}: Decides he just has to take on a giant lizard mutt by himself for the fun of it.

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* {{The Fighting Narcissist}}
* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]

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* {{The Fighting Narcissist}}
Narcissist}}: Definitely fighting, and his introductory chapter was so darn narcissistic the author had difficulty writing it.
* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]Real}}: By Ania.]]

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* [[spoiler: AccidentalMurder]]: possibly. The author has [[{{ShrugOfGod}} never confirmed]] if he intended to [[spoiler: shoot Dardana at the bloodbath]] or was innocently testing out his crossbow.
* AdaptationalVillainy
* TheArcher
* BewareTheQuietOnes
* BlondGuysAreEvil

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* [[spoiler: AccidentalMurder]]: possibly. The author has [[{{ShrugOfGod}} [[ShrugOfGod never confirmed]] if he intended to [[spoiler: shoot Dardana at the bloodbath]] or was innocently testing out his crossbow.
* AdaptationalVillainy
AdaptationalVillainy: More neutral in ''Hetalia''.
* TheArcher
TheArcher: Or Crossbow-Shooter, as the case may be.
* BewareTheQuietOnes
BewareTheQuietOnes: Doesn't do much talking, but fine with killing.
* BlondGuysAreEvilBlondGuysAreEvil: Blonde and definitely not a hero.

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* EvilOrphan

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* EvilOrphanEvilOrphan: Hasn't had a morally-nurturing life after escaping the orphanage.

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]KilledOffForReal: by pinecones.]]

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* TheQuietOne
* TheStoic

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* TheQuietOne
TheQuietOne: See Beware the Quiet Ones.
* TheStoicTheStoic: Devoid of emotion other than vague annoyance.

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* {{Beware the Nice Ones}}

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* {{Beware the Nice Ones}}Ones}}: Very nice... But with a less than spotless story.

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* {{Crouching Moron Hidden Badass}}

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* {{Crouching Moron Hidden Badass}}Badass}}: Can be a goofball, but can also kick butt if it comes down to it.

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* {{Green Eyes}}

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* {{Green Eyes}}Eyes}}: Startlingly so, apparently, and with a bit of untrustworthiness to accompany it.

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
* {{Nice Guy}}

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
KilledOffForReal: By Ania.]]
* {{Nice Guy}}Guy}}: One of the least selfish characters in the series.
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* {{Action Girl}}
** {{Dark Action Girl}}

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* {{Action Girl}}
Girl}}: Comes with Career territory.
** {{Dark Action Girl}}Girl}}: See above.

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* {{Blood Knight}}
* {{Dark Chick}}

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* {{Blood Knight}}
Knight}}: Is actually rather obsessed with blood in particular.
* {{Dark Chick}}Chick}}: In the Career alliance.

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* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off For Real}}]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off For Real}}]]Real}}: By Thew's poison.]]

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* {{Nightmare Fetishist}}
* {{Pummeling The Corpse}}: Does this to [[spoiler: Peyton's]] corpse

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* {{Nightmare Fetishist}}
Fetishist}}: She views slaughter somewhat romantically.
* {{Pummeling The Corpse}}: Does this to [[spoiler: Peyton's]] corpsecorpse.

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* {{Action Girl}}
** {{Dark Action Girl}}

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* {{Action Girl}}
Girl}}: Definitely one of the fighters.
** {{Dark Action Girl}}Girl}}: Not a nice fighter, either.

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* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off For Real}}]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off For Real}}]]Real}}: By Gil.]]

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]KilledOffForReal: By Corianne.]]

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* [[spoiler: RedShirt]]

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* [[spoiler: RedShirt]]RedShirt: Doesn't play into the plot even in alternate endings.]]

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* [[spoiler: {{We Hardly Knew Ye}} ]]

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* [[spoiler: {{We Hardly Knew Ye}} See above.]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off For Real}}]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off For Real}}]]Real}}: By Philan.]]

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* [[spoiler: {{We Hardly Knew Ye}} ]]

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* [[spoiler: {{We Hardly Knew Ye}} Ye}}: Dies early on.]]

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* NiceGirl
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
* [[spoiler: RedShirt]]
* [[spoiler: {{Sacrificial Lamb}}]]

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* NiceGirl
NiceGirl: A little weird, but nice enough.
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
KilledOffForReal: By Alf.]]
* [[spoiler: RedShirt]]
RedShirt: Means nothing in the grand scheme of the story.]]
* [[spoiler: {{Sacrificial Lamb}}]]Lamb}}: Little characterisation, little screentime.]]

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* [[spoiler: {{We Hardly Knew Ye}} ]]

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* [[spoiler: {{We Hardly Knew Ye}} Ye}}: Dies before leaving the bloodbath.]]

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
* [[spoiler: RedShirt]]
* [[spoiler: {{Sacrificial Lamb}}]]
* [[spoiler: {{We Hardly Knew Ye}} ]]

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
KilledOffForReal: by Lude.]]
* [[spoiler: RedShirt]]
RedShirt: All she does is die.]]
* [[spoiler: {{Sacrificial Lamb}}]]
Lamb}}: See above.]]
* [[spoiler: {{We Hardly Knew Ye}} Ye}}: First death, no less. ]]

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* {{Children are Innocent}}

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* {{Children are Innocent}}Innocent}}: The youngest tribute and the most innocent.

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* HappilyAdopted
* {{Heartwarming Orphan}}

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* HappilyAdopted
HappilyAdopted: Although technically she wasn't adopted until Switz hit eighteen.
* {{Heartwarming Orphan}}Orphan}}: Ridiculously sweet, even soon after her parents' death.

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* [[spoiler: {{Kill the Cutie}}]]
* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Kill the Cutie}}]]
Cutie}}: Dies late in the story.]]
* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]Real}}: By Russia's hands.]]

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* {{Nice Girl}}

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* {{Nice Girl}}Girl}}: Thinks sweet, acts sweet.

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* [[spoiler: {{Sacrificial Lion}}]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Sacrificial Lion}}]]Lion}}: One of the last tributes to die, thanks to her brother's protection.]]

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* {{Action Girl}}

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* {{Action Girl}}Girl}}: And how. No real weaponry needed.

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* {{Beware the Nice Ones}}

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* {{Beware the Nice Ones}}Ones}}: She's generally amiable, but if you push her buttons...

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* {{Determinator}}

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* {{Determinator}}{{Determinator}}: Keeps going just because she can.

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* [[spoiler: {{Final Girl}}]]
* {{Frying Pan of Doom}}

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* [[spoiler: {{Final Girl}}]]
Girl}}: The Victor of the Games.]]
* {{Frying Pan of Doom}}Doom}}: Receives one from sponsors and uses it appropriately.

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* [[spoiler: {{Her Heart Will Go On}}]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Her Heart Will Go On}}]]On}}: She survives, but her fiancé/husband doesn't.]]

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* {{Plucky Girl}}

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* {{Plucky Girl}}Girl}}: Not necessarily cheerful the whole time, but doesn't think much about giving up.

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* {{Pyrrhic Victory}}

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* [[spoiler: {{Pyrrhic Victory}}Victory}}: Wins the Games, but after Austria's death.]]

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* {{Single Woman Seeks Good Man}}

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* {{Single Woman Seeks Good Man}}Man}}: Austria's not exactly the {{Badass}} of the series...

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* [[spoiler: {{Sole Survivor}}]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Sole Survivor}}]]Survivor}}: According to the Hunger Games rules.]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Survivors Guilt}}]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Survivors Guilt}}]]Guilt}}: The SoleSurvivor after failing to save her fiancé.]]

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* {{Violently Protective Girlfriend}}

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* {{Violently Protective Girlfriend}}Girlfriend}}: To Austria.

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* FragileFlower

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* FragileFlowerFragileFlower: She never claims to be tough.

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* [[spoiler: KillTheCutie]]
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
* NiceGirl
* [[spoiler: {{Off With Her Head}}]]

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* [[spoiler: KillTheCutie]]
KillTheCutie: Not too cheerful, but on the cuter side.]]
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
KilledOffForReal: By Japan.]]
* NiceGirl
NiceGirl: Doesn't think for a moment about living at the cost of her brother's life.
* [[spoiler: {{Off With Her Head}}]]Head}}: Japan's method of execution.]]

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* [[spoiler: Kill The Cutie]]
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* [[spoiler: RedShirt]]
* [[spoiler: {{Sacrificial Lamb}}]]
* [[spoiler: {{We Hardly Knew Ye}} ]]

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* [[spoiler: Kill The Cutie]]
Cutie: Quite innocent, now dead.]]
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
KilledOffForReal: Via asthma attack.]]
* [[spoiler: RedShirt]]
RedShirt: Doesn't mean much more than a KickTheDog moment for Corianne.]]
* [[spoiler: {{Sacrificial Lamb}}]]
Lamb}}: Just there to fill up the bloodbath.]]
* [[spoiler: {{We Hardly Knew Ye}} Ye}}: The only real glimpse of her life is her 750 words in her introductory chapter. ]]

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* [[spoiler: KillTheCutie]]
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* [[spoiler: KillTheCutie]]
KillTheCutie: One of the perkier characters to die.]]
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]KilledOffForReal: By Vivi.]]

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* [[spoiler: RedShirt]]
* [[spoiler: SacrificialLion]]

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* [[spoiler: RedShirt]]
RedShirt: Since Philan doesn't live, either, her death doesn't amount to much.]]
* [[spoiler: SacrificialLion]]SacrificialLamb: Dies too early to be important.]]

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* [[spoiler: WeHardlyKnewYe]]

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* [[spoiler: WeHardlyKnewYe]]
WeHardlyKnewYe: Dies before we get to know her.]]

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* AllGirlsLikePonies

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* AllGirlsLikePoniesAllGirlsLikePonies: At whatever cost...

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* DumbBlonde

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* DumbBlondeDumbBlonde: Blonde, and not too acquainted with logic.

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* GenderFlip
* GenkiGirl
* [[spoiler: KillTheCutie]]
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
* LikeIsLikeAComma
* ThePollyanna
* [[spoiler: SacrificialLamb]]

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* GenderFlip
GenderFlip: to the male Poland in ''Hetalia''.
* GenkiGirl
GenkiGirl: Always chipper.
* [[spoiler: KillTheCutie]]
KillTheCutie: See Genki Girl and Killed Off for Real.]]
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
KilledOffForReal: By a pony, of all things.]]
* LikeIsLikeAComma
LikeIsLikeAComma: To the point the author apologised for her POV's.
* ThePollyanna
ThePollyanna: Death games? Who cares—I, like, found a pony!
* [[spoiler: SacrificialLamb]]SacrificialLamb: Never has much impact on the story.]]

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* ValleyGirl

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* ValleyGirl
ValleyGirl: Quite fond of "like" and "totally" in particular.
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* {{Adaptational Villainy}}

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* {{Adaptational Villainy}}Villainy}}: Certainly not an outright villain in ''Hetalia''.

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* {{Attention Whore}}

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* {{Attention Whore}}Whore}}: Really likes to be in the spotlight.

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* {{Hot Blooded}}
* {{Its All About Me}}
* {{Jerkass}}

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* {{Hot Blooded}}
Blooded}}: Goes out of his way to spark a battle with a Career.
* {{Its All About Me}}
Me}}: One of the more arrogant tributes, to say the least.
* {{Jerkass}}{{Jerkass}}: See below.

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* {{Glory Hound}}

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* {{Glory Hound}}Hound}}: Goes naturally with his self-centred attitude.

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* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]Real}}: By Veta.]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Rasputinian Death}}]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Rasputinian Death}}]]Death}}: His skull is coming apart in pieces before his cannon fires.]]

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* {{Small Name Big Ego}}
* {{The Sociopath}}

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* {{Small Name Big Ego}}
Ego}}: Someone from a non-Career district still vying for the sponsors and the kills.
* {{The Sociopath}}Sociopath}}: See Lack of Empathy.

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* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]Real}}: By Chia.]]

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* [[spoiler: RedShirt]]
* [[spoiler: {{Sacrificial Lamb}}]]

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* [[spoiler: RedShirt]]
* [[spoiler: RedShirt / {{Sacrificial Lamb}}]]Lamb}} / WeHardlyKnewYe]]

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* [[spoiler: {{We Hardly Knew Ye}}]]

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* [[spoiler: {{We Hardly Knew Ye}}]]

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* {{Deadpan Snarker}}
* {{Distressed Dude}}

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* {{Deadpan Snarker}}
Snarker}}: Comes naturally from exasperation with Poal.
* {{Distressed Dude}}Dude}}: Does more running than fighting.

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* {{Killed Off for Real}}
* {{Nice Guy}}
* {{Non Action Guy}}

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* {{Killed Off for Real}}
Real}}: [[spoiler: By Russia.]]
* {{Nice Guy}}
Guy}}: Doesn't seem to accept killing others as an option, and stays with Poal.
* {{Non Action Guy}}Guy}}: See Distressed Dude.

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* {{The Stoic}}

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* {{The Stoic}}
Stoic}}: Doesn't have many emotional highs or lows.
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* {{Adorkable}}
* ApologeticAttacker: To Turk, even when [[spoiler: she's fighting for her life.]]
* BadassBystander: Interferes in the fight between Holland and the bear muttation [[spoiler: just in time to save the girl's life.]]
* BigDamnHeroes: She jumps in and attacks the polar bear’s AchillesHeel just when it’s about to kill Holland, [[spoiler: giving her time to finish it off.]]
* CanadaEh

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* GenderFlip

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* GenderFlipDamselInDistress: Throughout the Games, apart from the aforementioned BigDamnHeroes moment.
* FragileFlower: Is close to tears when Holland tells her they're not friends.
* FragileSpeedster: Not the best fighter, but she can outrun a bear and the Careers (though they ''were'' distracted by fighting Cuba.)
* GenderFlip: Nyotalia Canada.
* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Is blonde and one of the sweetest tributes in the series.

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: By Turk.]]
** [[spoiler: KillTheCutie]]

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* TrueCompanions: was edging towards with with Cuba.

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* TrueCompanions: was edging towards with with Cuba.TookALevelInBadass: The aforenentioned BigDamnHeroes moment.
* TrueCompanions: Was edging towards with with Cuba.

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* DoomedByCanon: In ''The Hunger Games'', District 12 has only ever had four victors (three in the canon series, one established by Journey's other fics), so you pretty much know she's going to die.

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* DoomedByCanon: BigOlUnibrow: Amantius notes that she has one.
* [[spoiler: DoomedByCanon]]: In ''The Hunger Games'', District 12 [[spoiler: has only ever had four victors (three in the canon series, one established by Journey's other fics), fics)]], so you pretty much know [[spoiler: she's going to die.]]
* ForgottenFallenFriend: [[spoiler: To Romania,]] although she does mention her twice briefly.

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* WeHardlyKnewYe

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* WeHardlyKnewYe
[[spoiler: RedShirt / SacrificialLamb / WeHardlyKnewYe]]
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* AllWorkVsAllPlay: the all play to Ermine’s all work.

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* AccidentalMurder: Italo [[spoiler: slips Ermine some poison,]] wanting to see how it will work and not realizing that [[spoiler: it will kill his friend.]]
* AllWorkVsAllPlay: the The all play to Ermine’s all work.

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* [[ManipulativeBastard Manipulative Bitch]]: Uses her good looks, intelligence and seeming harmlessness to twist the other Careers around her finger. She also takes advantage of their various BerserkButtons to [[spoiler: goad them into a confrontation which only she and Amantius survive.]]

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* [[ManipulativeBastard Manipulative Bitch]]: Uses her good looks, intelligence and seeming harmlessness to twist the other Careers around her finger. She also takes advantage of their various BerserkButtons [[{{BerserkButton}} Berserk Buttons]] to [[spoiler: goad them into a confrontation which only she and Amantius survive.]]

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* KillItWithWater: Removes the fallen tree that’s been blocking the river, sending a flood towards the pursuing careers. [[spoiler: This winds up washing Anglynn into a crack and causing her to die of hypothermia.]]

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* KillItWithWater: Removes the fallen tree that’s been blocking the river, sending a flood towards the pursuing careers. [[spoiler: This winds up washing Anglynn into a crack crack]] and causing her to [[spoiler: die of hypothermia.]]

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* TookALevelInBadass: She mostly hides on her own for the first part of the Games … then she unleashes a river against the Careers, [[spoiler: killing one of them]], defeats a polar bear muttation with Nada's help, and [[spoiler: kills most of the [[{{FanNickname}} Ottoman Alliance]] in the climax.]]

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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Her dynamic with Nada, she being the tomboy.
* TookALevelInBadass: She mostly hides on her own for the first part of the Games … then she unleashes a river against the Careers, [[spoiler: killing one of them]], defeats a polar bear muttation with Nada's help, and [[spoiler: kills most of the [[{{FanNickname}} Ottoman Alliance]] Alliance]]]] in the climax.]]
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* [[spoiler: SuddenSequelDeathSyndrome]]: The version of Liechtenstein in Brutal, Liet, [[spoielr: lasted nearly all the way through the Games.]] Here, [[spoiler: she’s killed at the bloodbath.]]

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* [[spoiler: SuddenSequelDeathSyndrome]]: The version of Liechtenstein in Brutal, Liet, [[spoielr: [[spoiler: lasted nearly all the way through the Games.]] Here, [[spoiler: she’s killed at the bloodbath.]]

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* ActionGirl
* GenderFlip
* MoreDeadlyThanTheMale

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* ActionGirl
AccidentalMurder: Italo [[spoiler: slips her some poison,]] wanting to see how it will work and not realizing that [[spoiler: it will kill his friend.]]
* GenderFlip
ActionGirl: One of the series' most prominent non-villainous examples.
* MoreDeadlyThanTheMaleAllWorkVsAllPlay: The all work to Italo's all play.
* [[spoiler: BreakTheBadass]]: A long, slow process, beginning with her fear of not being able to protect her allies and culminating in [[spoiler: her Despair Event Horizon after Italo’s death.]]
* DeclarationOfProtection: Takes her allies' wellbeing very seriously.
* DespairEventHorizon / HeroicBSOD: After [[spoiler: Italo dies.]]
* DirtyBusiness: She doesn’t want to kill [[spoiler: Zavann]] when she finds [[spoiler: him]] lying unconscious on the ground, but [[spoiler: can’t think of any reason the Capitol wouldn’t punish her for sparing him.]]
* DrillSergeantNasty: Attempts to whip Italo into a competent ally this way.
* EvilMeScaresMe: Preoccupied with the fear that she’ll become a murderer, in spite of – or [[{{HeWhoFightsMonsters}} because of]] – her devotion to her allies.
* ExtremeMeleeRevenge / NoKillLikeOverkill: There’s a reason why [[spoiler: her killing of Cisca is listed under Nightmare Fuel.]]
* FailureToSaveMurder: Some of her troubled inner dialogue hints that she’ll see herself as a murderer if Italo or Riben die when she could have protected them.
* GenderFlip: She's Nyotalia Germany.
* GeniusBruiser: A formidable fighter as well as a very strategic, logical thinker.
* GermanicDepressives / GermanicEfficiency: Much like her Hetalia counterpart, she's German, uncompromisingly strict and depressing.
* TheHero / TheBigGuy: Serves as this in the alliance with Italo and Ermine.
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: Courtesy of Italo's AccidentalMurder.]]
* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: Has this dynamic with Italo.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Done subtly. She attempts to push away the remorse she feels after [[spoiler: killing Zavann]], but is noticeably unsettled. Later, in Italo’s POV, she is seen obsessively sorting out containers – a routine she uses to calm herself down and clear her mind in moments of guilt.
** Subverted with [[spoiler: Cisca's death.]] Ermine seems shocked at the violent extremes to which she went, but still feels [[spoiler: Cisca]] deserved it, and is more concerned with [[spoiler: Italo’s death]] than anything else.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Saving Riben from – and killing – two giant fox mutts.
* NeckSnap: [[spoiler: Kills Zavann this way.]]
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: To four Careers at once to protect her allies. In a much darker twist, [[spoiler: she does the same to Cisca later.]]
* NotSoStoic: Initially appears completely stern and serious-minded, but as the Games wear on, she begins to display more fear, guilt, and self-doubt, culminating in [[spoiler: a RoaringRampageOfRevenge]] and finally [[spoiler: a HeroicBSOD.]]
* OddFriendship: Scatterbrained, fun-loving Italo and intelligent, no-nonsense Ermine.
* PerfectPoison: averted; [[spoiler: it takes her at least a day to die from the poison Italo gave her.]]
* PowerTrio / TwoGuysAndAGirl: With Italo and Ermine.

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* [[{{HeWhoFightsMonsters}} She Who Fights Monsters]]: Her protectiveness towards her allies intensifies in obsession until [[spoiler: she kills Cisca in a manner far more sadistic than was merited.]]
* ShipTease: Exactly how she feels about Italo is never stated. She clearly cares deeply for him beneath her harsh exterior, to the point of [[spoiler: going into a HeroicBSOD over his death]] and saying he is all she is fighting for. Riben states that she “loved him,” but doesn’t elaborate.
** WordOfGod has stated that Ermine “didn’t think about it too much,” but that a romantic interpretation of her feelings is definitely an option.
* SugarAndIcePersonality: Treats Italo with uncompromising severity, but shows great affection for him deep down. She’s also quite kind to Riben.
* SuperOCD: She organizes supplies to calm herself down in stressful situations. This later comes back in an extremely disturbing way when she [[spoiler: kills Cisca, removing her teeth, eyes and fingers in a neat, symmetrical fashion.]]
* ToughLove: All the time towards Italo. For all the times she criticizes him, it's clearly done to help him survive.
* VillainCorner: Starts to fear she is entering it [[spoiler: when she worries she might murder her allies.]]
* WomenAreWiser: Acts as TheSmartGuy in her alliance, compared to the ditzy Italo.

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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Her dynamic with Holland, she being the girly girl.
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* BrutalHonesty: She makes it perfectly clear to Nada that, even though they’re allies, they’re not friends and she’ll still kill her if necessary.

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* BrutalHonesty: She makes it perfectly clear to Nada that, even though they’re allies, they’re not friends and she’ll still kill her if necessary.
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* [[spoiler: SoleSurvivor]]

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* [[spoiler: SoleSurvivor]]SoleSurvivor]]: Not only does he [[spoiler: win the Games]], but he's the only Hetalia character to appear in the series [[spoiler: and not die even once.]]

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* [[spoiler: DeathByIrony]]: Her district token, which is supposed to bring her luck, [[spoiler: ends up killing her when she drops it on a landmine.]]

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* WeHardlyKnewYe

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: She drops her ball token during her introductory scene, and later does so in the arena, [[spoiler: causing the landmines to go off and kill her.]]
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: She drops her token on the landmine before the Games even begin.]]
* WeHardlyKnewYe
[[spoiler: KillTheCutie]]: She's definitely a cutie, stated to be the shortest tribute and impressing the audience with her ballet moves. [[spoiler: And she definitely dies.]]
* [[spoiler: RedShirt / SacrificialLamb / WeHardlyKnewYe]]: [[spoiler: Is the first tribute in ''Unsurvivable'' to die.]]
* TeensAreShort: Yana states that she's the shortest tribute of the bunch.

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* ActionGirl: to an extent.
* GenderFlip

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* ActionGirl: To an extent. She manages to bite her way out of Rica's grip at the bloodbath, holds up well enough against Turk for him to view her as an extent.
equal, and [[spoiler: battles Holland near the climax of the Games.]]
* GenderFlipCuteLittleFangs: Her front teeth are unusually sharp.
* DeadpanSnarker: Applies snark to both Turk's eccentricities and Egypt's stoicness.
* DesignatedGirlFight: Briefly tussles with Rica at the bloodbath, and [[spoiler: fights Holland at the end.]]
* GenderFlip: Fem!Romania.
* InformalEulogy: Gives a darkly humorous one to [[spoiler: Yana.]] “May we all be reminded of [[spoiler: her]] last volatile dance whenever we see blood on snow.”
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: Holland stabs her in the throat.]]

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* TheTrickster

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* TheTrickster
PowerTrio / TwoGuysAndAGirl: With Turk and Egypt.
* [[spoiler: SlashedThroat]]: [[spoiler: Dies this way at Holland's hands.]]
* StrangeGirl: Has many eccentricities, from a slight bloodlust to an irreverent snark.
* TheTrickster: She pranks a sleeping Turk on one of the first nights by putting his jacket on backwards and telling him he must have done it in his sleep. [[{{WhatAnIdiot}} He buys it.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: Minor version; she asks Turk if his branding of Egypt was really necessary.
* WorthyOpponent: Turk considers her this after she held her own in a fight, leading to him welcoming her into his alliance.

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* ActionGirl
* GenderFlip

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* ActionGirl
ActionGirl: Develops into one as the Games go on and it becomes more and more necessary to fight her opponents.
* GenderFlip
BraidsOfAction: It’s remarked in one of the earlier chapters that she wears her hair in braids, and she’s certainly an Action Girl, especially towards the end of the story.
* BrutalHonesty: She makes it perfectly clear to Nada that, even though they’re allies, they’re not friends and she’ll still kill her if necessary.
* EmotionlessGirl / TheStoic: Rarely, if ever, displays strong emotion, even during an emotional farewell with her family.
* FreestateAmsterdam: She represents the Netherlands, and according to backstory, used to buy marijuana off the Black Market.
* GenderFlip: Fem!Holland.
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: By Turk.]]
* KillItWithWater: Removes the fallen tree that’s been blocking the river, sending a flood towards the pursuing careers. [[spoiler: This winds up washing Anglynn into a crack and causing her to die of hypothermia.]]
* OnlySaneWoman: Maintains a serious, pragmatic outlook on the Games throughout.
* TookALevelInBadass: She mostly hides on her own for the first part of the Games … then she unleashes a river against the Careers, [[spoiler: killing one of them]], defeats a polar bear muttation with Nada's help, and [[spoiler: kills most of the [[{{FanNickname}} Ottoman Alliance]] in the climax.]]

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* BreakTheCutie: See DespairEventHorizon.
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
KillTheCutie]]
* ChildrenAreInnocent: One of the youngest tributes in the Games, she never even considers harming the competition.
* [[spoiler: CruelAndUnusualDeath]]: [[spoiler: is beaten to death with a wok, of all things.]]
* DespairEventHorizon: Completely gives up and waits for death after [[spoiler: Yao hits her the first time.]]
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: by Yao.]]
* [[spoiler: RedShirt / SacrificialLamb / WeHardlyKnewYe]]
* [[spoiler: SuddenSequelDeathSyndrome]]: The version of Liechtenstein in Brutal, Liet, [[spoielr: lasted nearly all the way through the Games.]] Here, [[spoiler: she’s killed at the bloodbath.]]

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* {{Adorkable}}: What else can you call someone who spends most of her time discussing science and geeky hobbies with her best friend?
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]KilledOffForReal]]: by [[spoiler: a lightning strike.]]
* [[spoiler: KillTheCutie]]

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* TrueCompanions: Was becoming this with Zavann before [[spoiler: they both died]].

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* TrueCompanions: Was becoming this with Zavann before [[spoiler: before they both died]].
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* BlondesAreEvil: [[{{ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin}} Has blonde hair and is an antagonist.]]

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* {{Distressed Dude}}: Is certainly not an ActionGuy.

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* {{Distressed Dude}}: Is certainly not an ActionGuy.action guy.

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* AdaptationalVillainy

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* AdaptationalVillainyAdaptationalVillainy: France isn't bad in Hetalia.

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* BlondesAreEvil
* TheChessmaster

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* BlondesAreEvil
BlondesAreEvil: Like most of the characters, not truly evil, but certainly an antagonist.
* TheChessmasterTheChessmaster: Justified; she is the only untrained Career and thus must use wit and manipulation to ensure her survival.

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* TheDarkChick

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* TheDarkChickTheDarkChick: She serves as this in the ''Unsurvivable'' career pack.

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* EvilIsSexy: Uses this to twist Amantius around her finger.

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* GenderFlip

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* GenderFlipGenderFlip: She's Nyotalia France.

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
* [[ManipulativeBastard Manipulative Bitch]]

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: by Ermine.]]
* [[ManipulativeBastard Manipulative Bitch]]Bitch]]: Uses her good looks, intelligence and seeming harmlessness to twist the other Careers around her finger. She also takes advantage of their various BerserkButtons to [[spoiler: goad them into a confrontation which only she and Amantius survive.]]

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* [[spoiler: RasputinianDeath]]

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* [[spoiler: RasputinianDeath]]RasputinianDeath]]: She went through a scary amount of damage before [[spoiler: finally dying.]]

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** DarkActionGirl
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* TheArcher
* BlondesAreEvil

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* ActionGirl
ActionGirl: Of TheArcher variety.
** DarkActionGirl
DarkActionGirl: Like most of the female villains.
* AdaptationalVillainy
AdaptationalVillainy: England is one of the protagonists of Hetalia.
* TheArcher
TheArcher: Adopts the Fanon interpretation of England being skilled with bows and arrows.
* BlondesAreEvil BlondesAreEvil: [[{{ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin}} Has blonde hair and is an antagonist.]]

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* GenderFlip

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* GenderFlipGenderFlip: She's Nyotalia England.

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: As a result of Holland's actions]] although WordOfGod states that [[spoiler: Cisca meant to steer her towards the crack she fell into.]]

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* AnnoyingArrows: Subverted; she barely notices when [[spoiler: Anglynn shoots her]] at first, but then [[spoiler: collapses and dies from the pain of it.]]
* AmicableExes: One of the ex-boyfriends who comes to visit her after the reaping acts quite kindly to her and shows concern over what will happen in the Games.
* DudeMagnet: Apparently has a long string of ex-boyfriends, [[{{AmicableExes}} two]] [[{{JerkAss}} of whom]] come to visit her after the reaping.
* FauxActionGirl: Stated during the reaping that she would “do her share of tail-kicking,” and went into a glorious PervertRevengeMode on her ex-boyfriend, but [[spoiler: was killed unceremoniously during the bloodbath.]]
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: By Anglynn.]]
* PervertRevengeMode: To the ex-boyfriend who tries to forcibly kiss her after the reaping.

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* [[spoiler: WeHardlyKnewYe]]

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* [[spoiler: WeHardlyKnewYe]]
RedShirt / SacrificialLamb / WeHardlyKnewYe]]: [[spoiler: is killed off quite early on.]]

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* ActionGirl
** DarkActionGirl
* AdaptationalVillainy
* BareYourMidriff
* BatterUp
* BerserkButton: Do NOT call her fat.

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* ActionGirl
ActionGirl: Of the BoisterousBruiser variety.
** DarkActionGirl
DarkActionGirl: She's a villain, so...
* AdaptationalVillainy
AdaptationalVillainy: America's not a bad guy in Hetalia.
* BareYourMidriff
ArchEnemy: To Ivan.
* BatterUp
BareYourMidriff: Her reaping outfit.
* BatterUp: Uses a baseball bat as a weapon.
* BerserkButton: Do NOT call her fat. Or insinuate that she messed up a hunt. ''Especially'' if you're Ivan.
* BigBad: Leader of the ''Unsurvivable'' career pack, although she vies with Ivan for this title.

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* GenderFlip
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
* NoGuyWantsAnAmazon: According to her intro. She doesn't really mind though.

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* GenderFlip
BloodKnight: Though much less mentally cracked as some of the series' other examples, she clearly takes great joy in fighting and killing.
* Eagleland: Type II; she reinforces the [[{{JerkAss}} negative]] [[{{ItsAllAboutMe}} stereotypes]] [[{{BigEater}} of Americans.]]
* EvilVsEvil: In her fight against Ivan. Neither is noticeably more sympathetic, so it's up to the readers to decide what they want the outcome to be. [[spoiler: Rica ends up killing Ivan before being killed by Yao, who is then killed by Amantius.]]
* GenderFlip: Nyotalia America.
* HairTriggerTemper: The slightest mention of Ivan can send her into a rage.
* HotBlooded
* ImprobableWeaponUser: See BatterUp above.
* {{Jerkass}}: Her selfish, controlling behavior results in much of the pack resenting her.
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: By Yao.]]
* NoGuyWantsAnAmazon: According to her intro. She doesn't really mind though. Amantius also passes over her as being "not really pretty."
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Kills [[spoiler: Taner and Ivan]] this way with her bat. She also [[spoiler: dies this way when Yao cracks her skull open with a wok.]]

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* SuddenSequelHeelSyndrome: America was good in Horrible and is now a villain.

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* DoomedByCanon: Her token is a wooden ball. [[Literature/TheHungerGames The book]] mentions an old tribute who died from dropping her wooden ball. Do the math.

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* DoomedByCanon: [[spoiler: DoomedByCanon]]: Her token is a wooden ball. [[Literature/TheHungerGames The book]] mentions an old tribute who [[spoiler: died from dropping her wooden ball. ball.]] Do the math.
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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]KilledOffForReal: At the hands of Russia.]]

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* [[spoiler: SacrificialLion]]SacrificialLion: One of the last tributes to die.]]

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* BrainyBrunette

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* BrainyBrunetteBrainyBrunette: His one sellable trait is knowing edible plants.

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* ElegantClassicalMusician

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* DistressedDude
DistressedDude: Veta has a history of finishing fights for him.
* ElegantClassicalMusicianElegantClassicalMusician: While a broke orphan, he's at his best playing piano.

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]KilledOffForReal: At Gil's hands.]]

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* {{Megane}}

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* {{Megane}}{{Megane}}: Picked up glasses from the street at some point.

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* NonActionGuy

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* NonActionGuyNonActionGuy: Not a fighter.

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* StoicSpectaclesStoicSpectacles: Has glasses and doesn't tend to express much emotion.

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* BreakTheCutie / CorruptTheCutie

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* BreakTheCutie / CorruptTheCutieCorruptTheCutie: As happens to most cuties in the series.

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* CuteAndPsycho

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* CuteAndPsychoCuteAndPsycho: Stays cheerful while dreaming of cutting up people.

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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor
* FaceHeelTurn
* FaceOfAnAngelMindOfADemon
* FreudianExcuse
* FromNobodyToNightmare

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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor
EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: Slicing children to ribbons is ''fun''!
* FaceHeelTurn
FaceHeelTurn: After [[spoiler: Ukraine's death]].
* FaceOfAnAngelMindOfADemon
FaceOfAnAngelMindOfADemon: Seems innocent enough from the outside, apart from that giant knife...
* FreudianExcuse
FreudianExcuse: Has a history of being bullied.
* FromNobodyToNightmareFromNobodyToNightmare: He refused to go to any battle stations before the Games but ends up [[spoiler: getting to second place]].

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* InsaneEqualsViolent

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* InsaneEqualsViolentInsaneEqualsViolent: He wouldn't hurt a fly until after he snaps.

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
* LaughingMad / GigglingVillain

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]
KilledOffForReal: by Veta.]]
* LaughingMad / GigglingVillainGigglingVillain: Or at least Cheerfully Humming Villian.

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* NightmareFuelStationAttendantNightmareFuelStationAttendant: Eager to slice and dice.

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* ObliviouslyEvil
* PowerBornOfMadness
* PsychopathicManchild
* PutTheLaughterInSlaughter
* RussianGuySuffersMost

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* ObliviouslyEvil
ObliviouslyEvil: Never considers how much he's hurting people.
* PowerBornOfMadness
PowerBornOfMadness: Not a threat until after he snaps.
* PsychopathicManchild
PsychopathicManchild: Keeps his innocent optimism despite running about looking for victims.
* PutTheLaughterInSlaughter
PutTheLaughterInSlaughter: Out to kill with a big smile.
* RussianGuySuffersMostRussianGuySuffersMost: Certainly psychologically.

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* UsedToBeASweetKid
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds

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* UsedToBeASweetKid
UsedToBeASweetKid: Never did anything against other tributes or bullies before.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorldsWoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: After [[spoiler: his sister is killed]], he's out to kill everyone.
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* AffablyEvil: Remains eerily good-natured, even when ordering Sui and Tina to look for victims or [[NightmareFuel advancing slowly on them with a cleaver.]]

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* AffablyEvil: Remains eerily good-natured, even when ordering Sui and Tina to look for victims or [[NightmareFuel advancing slowly on them with a cleaver.]]
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* [[spoiler: DeathByDisfigurement]]: One of the most beautiful tributes, [[spoiler: she dies in one of the most [[{{HighOctaneNightmareFuel}} disturbing ways.]]]]

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* [[spoiler: DeathByDisfigurement]]: One of the most beautiful tributes, [[spoiler: she dies in one of the most [[{{HighOctaneNightmareFuel}} disturbing ways.]]]]]]
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* {{Adaptational Villainy}}

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* {{Adaptational Villainy}}Villainy}}: Not exactly the "hero" from ''Hetalia''.

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* {{Boisterous Bruiser}}

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* {{Attention Whore}}
Whore}}: Obnoxiously so.
* {{Big Eater}}
Eater}}: He goes through several days' rations for the entire Career pack quite efficiently on his own.
* {{Blond Guys are Evil}}
Evil}}: Or, Very Light Brunette Guys are Evil.
* {{Boisterous Bruiser}}Bruiser}}: Loud and as eager for a fight as any other Career.

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* {{Dumb Muscle}}Muscle}}: One chapter title is "Conclusion: Alf's Still an Idiot."

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* {{Its All About Me}}
* {{Jerkass}}
* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]

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* {{Its All About Me}}
ItsAllAboutMe: Although he is tagged as the main character from the ''Hetalia'' part of the crossover.
* {{Jerkass}}
{{Jerkass}}: Comes with the loud-and-selfish bit.
* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]Real}}: He's killed off for real.]]

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* {{Small Name Big Ego}}
* {{Unskilled but Strong}}
* {{Villainous Glutton}}

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* {{Small Name Big Ego}}
Ego}}: Egotastic, from a family of no particular repute [[spoiler: that's certainly not given any more because of his Games.]]
* {{Unskilled but Strong}}
Strong}}: Goes for the kill with his bare hands.
* {{Villainous Glutton}}Glutton}}: A notorious BigEater and TheBrute.

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* {{Adaptational Villainy}}

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* {{Adaptational Villainy}}Villainy}}: Germany's not exactly the bad guy of ''Hetalia''.

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* {{Blond Guys are Evil}}Evil}}: Has light blonde hair and no qualms about killing.

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* {{Glory Seeker}}

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* {{Germanic Depressives}}/{{Germanic Efficiency}}
Efficiency}}: Will not put up with slackery, and is a version of Germany.
* {{Glory Seeker}}Seeker}}: He is a Career, after all.

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* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]Real}}: He dies at Russia's hands.]]

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* {{Perpetual Frowner}}

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* {{Perpetual Frowner}}Frowner}}: Given his teammates, not that surprising.

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* {{Proud Warrior Race Guy}}Guy}}: Trained [[WordofGod from birth]] to be a Career.

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* {{The Stoic}}

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* {{The Stoic}}Stoic}}: His emotions are neutral and angry.

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* {{Adorkable}}

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* {{Adorkable}}{{Adorkable}}: Bespectacled and shy.

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* {{Buttmonkey}}{{Buttmonkey}}: He certainly doesn't go through the Games easily.

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* {{Distressed Dude}}Dude}}: Is certainly not an ActionGuy.

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* [[spoiler: {{Dropped a Bridge on Him}}]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Dropped a Bridge on Him}}]]Him}}: Dies very suddenly.]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]Real}}: He dies via wolf pack.]]

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* {{Non Action Guy}}

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* {{Non Action Guy}}Guy}}: His kill certainly has nothing to do with his physique.

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* {{Only Sane Man}}

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* {{Only Sane Man}}Man}}: When he interacts with Ciano and Alf, this isn't hard to achieve.

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* {{Shrinking Violet}}Violet}}: He apparently can't ask a girl out without panicking and running away.

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Seeker}}: Honour is his number one priority.
* [[spoiler: {{Go Out With a Smile}}]]Smile}}: He's quite happy when Lude says it's been an honour to fight with him.]]

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Real}}: By his own sword.]]
* {{Master Swordsman}}Swordsman}}: His WeaponOfChoice is a katana.

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* {{The Stoic}}Stoic}}: Doesn't do much smiling or yelling.

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BadassBystander: Actually takes action at the bloodbath.
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* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]Real}}: At Alf's hands.]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Sacrificial Lamb}}]]
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* [[spoiler: {{Sacrificial Lamb}}]]
Lamb}}: The first ''Hetalia'' character to die.]]
* [[spoiler: {{We Hardly Knew Ye}}]]
Ye}}: Doesn't get much screentime before he dies.]]

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* {{Cheerful Child}}Child}}: Is described as acting like a five-year-old.

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* {{Distressed Dude}}Dude}}: Doesn't have much strength.

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* {{Keet}}
* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]

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* {{Fragile Speedster}}
Speedster}}: Not strong, yet flees like crazy.
* {{Horrible Judge of Character}}
Character}}: Yes, let's go make friends with the all-business tribute trained to kill you.
* {{Keet}}
{{Keet}}: Cheerful despite being in the Hunger games.
* [[spoiler: {{Killed Off for Real}}]]Real}}: At Lude's hands.]]

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* {{Lovable Coward}}Coward}}: Flees from everything... adorably.

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* {{Non Action Guy}}

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* {{Non Action Guy}}Guy}}: Not the strong type.

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Eater}}: Refuses to eat cooked snake when he can request pasta.
* {{The Pollyanna}}Pollyanna}}: Is in the Hunger Games but stays perky.

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* [[spoiler: {{Sacrificial Lion}}]]Lion}}: Dies later on in the story.]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Too Happy to Live}}]]Live}}: Always cheerful, until just before his death.]]
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* [[{{CoolBigSis}} CoolBigBro]]: implied to be this to his little sister, Bella.

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* The Brute

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* Buttmonkey: among the careers.

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* [[spoiler: DeathByDisfigurement]]: One of the most beautiful tributes, [[spoiler: she dies in one of the worst[[{{NightmareFuel}}ways.most [[{{HighOctaneNightmareFuel}} disturbing ways.]]]]
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: She seems like a [[{{DumbBlonde}} ditzy]] Ms.Fanservice. It's an act.

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