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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: First seen silently observing Chloe before coming to her rescue against Team Rocket, representing him ready to come to other people's rescue. His second moment is how he heavily denies that he's a huge ''[=LoliRock=]'' fan, as it depicts him to be dorky and into girly hobbies.
* FlowerMotifs: Astrantia flowers are about inner strength and resilience, which reflects his standing as a Rank 3 Cyber Warrior who can weather the storm despite not being on a Data Train.
* FlowerMotifs: Astrantia flowers are about inner strength and resilience, which reflects his standing as a Rank 3 Cyber Warrior who can weather the storm despite not being on a Data Train.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: His main attire is mostly black, but he's a heroic character and later becomes the third member of Team Neo.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: First seen silently observing Chloe before coming to her rescue against Team Rocket, representing him ready to come to other people's rescue. His second moment is how he heavily denies that he's a huge ''[=LoliRock=]'' fan, as it depicts him to be dorky and into girly hobbies.
* FlowerMotifs: Astrantia flowers are about inner strength and resilience, which reflects his standing as a Rank 3 Cyber Warrior who can weather the storm despite not being on a Data Train.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: First seen silently observing Chloe before coming to her rescue against Team Rocket, representing him ready to come to other people's rescue. His second moment is how he heavily denies that he's a huge ''[=LoliRock=]'' fan, as it depicts him to be dorky and into girly hobbies.
* FlowerMotifs: Astrantia flowers are about inner strength and resilience, which reflects his standing as a Rank 3 Cyber Warrior who can weather the storm despite not being on a Data Train.
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* FromTheMouthOfBabes: When he and Chloe see Tommy at the Cerise Institute, he remarks that Tommy is "Chloe's master". There is an awkward silence from everyone before Chloe clarifies that Tommy is her teacher in martial arts.
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* JustFriends: His relationship with Chloe is friends and nothing more, although that doesn't stop Goh from thinking something ''else'' is going on.
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[[folder:Shire]]
A Cyber Warrior in charge of surveillance.
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* AliceAllusion: Admitted by the author to be one of the Cheshire Cat given her large grin and the pink-purple coloration akin to the Disney animated version.
* KindHeartedCatLover: She hopes to have a purple-pink cat Pokémon as a partner.
* LittleBitBeastly: Described as having purple and pink cat ears.
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A Cyber Warrior in charge of surveillance.
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* AliceAllusion: Admitted by the author to be one of the Cheshire Cat given her large grin and the pink-purple coloration akin to the Disney animated version.
* KindHeartedCatLover: She hopes to have a purple-pink cat Pokémon as a partner.
* LittleBitBeastly: Described as having purple and pink cat ears.
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* BerserkButton: Played for laughs. He ''hates'' spoilers and is not happy when Chloe was about to give away two major twists to two ''Kamen Rider'' series he hasn't watched yet (specifically she was about to spoil [[spoiler:the deaths of both Kamen Rider Dragon Knight/Kit Taylor and Kamen Rider Fourze/Gentaro Kisaragi that coincidentally happened at Episode 31 in their shows, although they do come back to life later]]). In Chapter 12, he does ''not'' want to have any spoilers from ''Series/KamenRiderDragonKnight'', particularly in regards to Kamen Rider Sting and if he dies to General Xaviax.[[labelnote:Spoiler]]Sting doesn't get [[NeverSayDie vented]] by General Xaviax, but rather a HeroicSacrifice to save Kamen Rider Knight from Kamen Rider Strike's Final Vent. Then it turns out being "vented" puts a person in a state of suspended animation.[[/labelnote]]
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* BerserkButton: Played for laughs. He ''hates'' spoilers and is not happy when Chloe was about to give away two major twists to two ''Kamen Rider'' series he hasn't watched yet (specifically she was about to spoil [[spoiler:the deaths of both Kamen Rider Dragon Knight/Kit Taylor and Kamen Rider Fourze/Gentaro Kisaragi that coincidentally happened at Episode 31 in their shows, although they do come back to life later]]). In Chapter 12, he does ''not'' want to have any spoilers from ''Series/KamenRiderDragonKnight'', particularly in regards to Kamen Rider Sting and if he dies to General Xaviax.[[labelnote:Spoiler]]Sting doesn't get [[NeverSayDie vented]] by General Xaviax, but rather through a HeroicSacrifice to save Kamen Rider Knight from Kamen Rider Strike's Final Vent. Then it turns out being "vented" puts a person in a state of suspended animation.[[/labelnote]]
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* GreenThumb: He's known to take care of plants...said ''plants'' are of the more [[VideoGame/PlantsVsZombies aggressive kind.]] And he ends up finding himself unable to resist Chloe's Skiddo, which is a Grass-type.
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* GreenThumb: He's known to take care of plants...said ''plants'' are of the more [[VideoGame/PlantsVsZombies aggressive kind.]] And he ends up finding himself unable to resist Chloe's Skiddo, which is a Grass-type. For this reason, Hop decides that his first Pokémon will be a Budew.
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* DevelopmentGag: Patra explaining where her sister got the name for her bear trip is actually from the author herself also having debates on whether to call them Ziggy, then Zagreus, and then a combination of the two.
* {{Keet}}: Calling him hyperactive is an understatement, as it's near impossible to keep him still for long periods of time.
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* ArbitrarySkepticism: Goh finds something suspicious over Daten, Ryu's Digimon, when Ryu insists that Daten is just a Ditto who loves different transformations, even though Ryu points out how Goh regularly fights a talking Meowth.
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* ArbitrarySkepticism: Goh finds something suspicious over Daten, Ryu's Digimon, when Ryu insists that Daten is just a (talking) Ditto who loves different transformations, even though transformations. Ryu points out how Goh finds this weird when he regularly fights a talking Meowth.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Had Goh let Chloe take care of the Quagsire instead of fighting with her, Chloe wouldn't have flung her Poké ball and accidentally caught Suicune by mistake.
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* TheTeamNormal: When compared to Ash (who has Aura powers) and Chloe (who has a telekinetic weapon and implied sixth sense), Goh is the normal one of the Cerise Institute trio as his main skill is his ability to (usually) a capture Pokémon with a single Poké ball without missing.
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* TheTeamNormal: When compared to Ash (who has Aura powers) and Chloe (who has a telekinetic weapon and implied sixth sense), Goh is the normal one of the Cerise Institute trio as his main skill is his ability to (usually) a capture Pokémon with a single Poké ball without missing. Lampshaded by Gunning, who even questions if Goh uses tech or is blessed with magic.
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* FatalFlaw: Single-mindedness, particularly to friendship. Like in the anime, Goh has a skewed idea of what "Friendship" means after the incident with Tokio. Even after moving on from it, he gets prickly in regards to Chloe being friends with other Trainers but also how she's deliberately keeping secrets from him, blowing up when Chloe says she's trying to capture a Quagsire to impress Tommy's father (so she can get an application to be a Pokémon Ranger).
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* HypocriticalHumor: Dislikes Hop for how he was able to become friends with Chloe so quickly all while ignoring how he and ''Ash'' became friends just as quick.
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* HypocriticalHumor: {{Hypocrite}}: Dislikes Hop for how he was able to become friends with Chloe so quickly all while ignoring how he and ''Ash'' became friends just as quick.quick. Also hates how Chloe is keeping secrets from him in regards to the friends he's made, while ignoring that he never told Chloe about Tokio for years on end.
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* NewFriendEnvy: Is shown to have hints of jealousy towards Hop in how he and Chloe just ''instantly'' clicked despite him never hearing about him before. Chloe reassures him that she and Goh will always be friends no matter what.
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* NewFriendEnvy: Is shown to have hints of jealousy towards Hop in how he and Chloe just ''instantly'' clicked despite him never hearing about him before. Chloe reassures him that she and Goh will always be friends no matter what. This reaches a boiling point during the Suicune expedition as he prevents Chloe from tending to Suicune by nothing the secrets Chloe's kept from him from the last four friends she's met (Tommy, Yuri, Juliana, and Hop).
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* SuperStrength: He's capable of lifting a heavy bookshelf with one hand without any strain.
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* SuperStrength: He's capable of lifting a heavy bookshelf with one hand without any strain. He first proved his strength to Professor Oak by lifting a hospital bed with Professor Oak in it.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: When he introduces himself to Ash and Goh, he says he's from "Chloe's school", completely unaware that Goh ''also'' goes to that school. He then admits that he didn't know much about Goh since he's frequently skipping class for research expeditions.
* JustFriends: His relationship with Chloe is friends and nothing more, although that doesn't stop Goh from thinking something ''else'' is going on.
* JustFriends: His relationship with Chloe is friends and nothing more, although that doesn't stop Goh from thinking something ''else'' is going on.
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** His Pokémon include a Smoliv, Appletun, Kommo-o, and Tropius. Smoliv because of Tommy ''Olive''r, Appletun is a green dragon, Kommo-o for being a Pokémon who knows martial arts, and Tropius for the Brachius zord from ''Dino Thunder''.
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** His Pokémon include a Smoliv, Appletun, Kommo-o, and Tropius. Smoliv because of Tommy ''Olive''r, Appletun is a green dragon, Kommo-o for being a Dragon Pokémon who knows martial arts, and Tropius for the Brachius zord from ''Dino Thunder''.
* AlternateSelf: He's an alternate version of the Ryu in ''Fanfic/InfinityTrainSeekerOfCrocus''.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: In ''Seeker of Crocus'', his Digimon pal Daten is nearly squished by a tray thrown by Aoi. (His) Gloria notes this could be avoided if he shoves Daten into a bag, to which he points out that he didn't because the bag he wanted to purchase had people give one star reviews for "not being able to keep their Nebbies in place".[[note]]It's a reference to ''VideoGame/PokemonSunAndMoon'' in which Nebby (Cosmog) constantly escaped Lillie's bag.[[/note]]
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: In ''Seeker of Crocus'', his Digimon pal Daten is nearly squished by a tray thrown by Aoi. (His) Gloria notes this could be avoided if he shoves Daten into a bag, to which he points out that he didn't because the bag he wanted to purchase had people give one star reviews for "not being able to keep their Nebbies in place".[[note]]It's a reference to ''VideoGame/PokemonSunAndMoon'' in which Nebby (Cosmog) constantly escaped Lillie's bag. And yes, when a real-life version of Lillie's bag was revealed, people ''did'' leave one-star reviews related to the meme.[[/note]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: His name is the Japanese word for "dragon" and his father ''is'' one.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: MeaningfulName: His name is the Japanese word for "dragon" dragon, and he reveals his father ''is'' is one.
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* MeaningfulName: Her name is similar to the Japanese word ''ashi'', which translates to "Foot'. Fittingly, she fights with kicks.
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* AlliterativeName: All three members follow alliteration: '''C'''hloe '''C'''erise (and her alias, '''C'''olette '''C'''adieux), '''H'''op '''H'''osta, and '''A'''lain ''A'''strantia.
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* AlliterativeName: All three members follow alliteration: '''C'''hloe '''C'''erise (and her alias, '''C'''olette '''C'''adieux), '''H'''op '''H'''osta, and '''A'''lain ''A'''strantia.'''A'''strantia.
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** Chloe: She's an energetic long-haired female gamer implied to have a special ability (Miko is immune to memory erasure whereas Chloe has a sixth sense) whose little sibling becomes a SecretKeeper (Lexi for Miko, Parker for Chloe). The fact that she has feelings for Hop also gives her traits of Zahra, who secretly crushes on Five.
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** Chloe: She's an energetic long-haired female gamer implied to have a special ability (Miko is immune to memory erasure -- although it's ambiguous as to whether or not it's a natural immunity or whether it was due to her falling unconscious before the erasure kicked in -- whereas Chloe has a vague sixth sense) sense that may or may not be connected to the serpent tattoo on her shoulder) whose little sibling becomes a SecretKeeper (Lexi for Miko, Parker for Chloe). The fact that she has feelings for Hop also gives her traits of Zahra, who secretly crushes on Five.
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: The three have a close bond, despite having a bit of difference in age: Chloe is 10, Hop is 14 and Alain is 18.
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: The three have a close bond, despite having a bit of difference in age: Chloe is 10, Hop is 14 and Alain is 18.presumably in his early twenties.
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** Chloe's main weapon is a rapier-pistol. The rapier is fast and has good reach, which helps Chloe get in a good hit without having to be too close since she's not a fighter.
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** Chloe's main weapon is a rapier-pistol. The rapier is fast and has good reach, which helps Chloe get in a good hit without having to be too close since she's not a fighter.the most inexperienced of the three.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: While she was energetic, curious and playful in the anime, in the fanfic she's ready to get into a fight at a moment's notice.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: While she was energetic, curious and playful in the anime, in the fanfic she's ready to get into a fight at a moment's notice.notice due to her experience on ''[=ReFusion=]''.
* DramaPreservingHandicap: With the Eevee Partner Moves, it'd be a snap for her to get rid of any obstacles. To prevent this from being too overpowered, the moves are specifically kept in a brooch, and Chloe can only use three at a time. Plus, Chloe has chosen not to reveal them out in the open for fear of people questioning how Eevee got her moves.
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* WeakButSkilled: She doesn't have the ability to evolve -- whether due to uncertainty of who she wants to evolve to or she just can't -- but she has a variety of moves that she can use to make up for this.
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* WeakButSkilled: She doesn't have the ability to evolve -- whether due to uncertainty of who she wants to evolve to or she just can't -- but she has a variety of STAB moves that she can use to make up for this.
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* AnimalMotifs: Goats. His mother is a general for Capricorn House and ''Orchid Observer'' later reveals that he has a Skiddo, which is a goat-like Pokémon. In ''Descendant's Shadow'' he can't help but want to ride on the back of Chloe's Skiddo.
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* AnimalMotifs: Goats. His mother is a general for Capricorn House and ''Orchid Observer'' later reveals that he has a Skiddo, which is a goat-like Pokémon. In ''Descendant's Shadow'' he can't help but want to ride on the back of Chloe's Skiddo.
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* OnlyInItForTheMoney: He's a Cyber Warrior so he can donate the money to his village back home.
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* OnlyInItForTheMoney: He's a Cyber Warrior so he can donate the money from his job to his village back home.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Professor Oak tells Chloe that he's involved in the Rune Masquerade in some way. [[Fanfic/ArcanumUniverseScarletHeists If only he knew...]]
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Professor Oak tells Chloe that he's involved in the Rune Masquerade in some way. [[Fanfic/ArcanumUniverseScarletHeists If only he she knew...]]
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Both are oblivious to their boss's secret life as a GentlemanThief and his daughter's new drive in fighting viruses through video games.
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* ActorAllusion: When Goh drags Chloe out of the Cerise Institute, after Ryu states that he hates mint chocolate chip ice cream, which Chloe loves, [[Creator/ZenoRobinson he]] shouts, [[WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse "Byeeee!"]]
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* ActorAllusion: When Goh drags Chloe out of the Cerise Institute, after Ryu states that he hates mint chocolate chip ice cream, which Chloe loves, [[Creator/ZenoRobinson he]] shouts, shouts to Professor Cerise, [[WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse "Byeeee!"]]
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: He captured an Onix in Chapter 14.
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** When she sees Daten (who is a Digimon although Chloe and Ryu insist they're a Ditto), she remarks on calling them a "digi-pal" before leaving it at that. Is she just giving them a nickname or does she ''know'' about Digimon?
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** When she sees Daten (who is a Digimon although Chloe and Ryu insist they're a Ditto), she remarks on calling them a "digi-pal" before leaving it at that. Is she just giving them a nickname or does she ''know'' about Digimon?Digimon and is secretly telling them she's on their side?
* DecompositeCharacter: Most Chloes in the ''Blossomverse'' have a love of nightmares, but this trait is given to Talia.
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* StealthPun: She writes fantasy stories and bonds with Chloe's Alcremie. She's a fan of ''fairy'' tales.
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* StealthPun: She writes fantasy stories and bonds with Chloe's Alcremie.Alcremie, a Fariy-type. She's a fan of ''fairy'' tales.
* BerserkButton: Call him "Flaky" at your own risk. Narration points out that his fists were trembling when Chloe called him that.
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* BetterAsFriends: Chloe spits out how she only sees him as a friend and nothing more. Tommy reciprocates, albeit making a joke how he sees the two as master and ''sensei''.
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* BetterAsFriends: Chloe spits out how she only sees him as a friend and nothing more. Tommy reciprocates, albeit making a joke how he sees the two as master and ''sensei''.student.
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** His father's full name is Jasper Doryuo Flouros. Take the first letters away and you get JDF, or '''J'''ason '''D'''avid '''F'''rank. Moreover, Jasper Flouros is a Pokémon ''Ranger'', who is part of the Truehart group, a reference to Tommy's twin brother David Trueheart and adoptive father Sam Trueheart.
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** His father's full name is Jasper Doryuo Flouros. Take the first letters away and you get JDF, or '''J'''ason '''D'''avid '''F'''rank. Moreover, Jasper Flouros is a Pokémon ''Ranger'', who is part of the Truehart group, a reference to [[Series/PowerRangersZeo Tommy's twin brother David Trueheart and adoptive father Sam Trueheart.]]
* AscendedExtra: Only has one line in the anime, the story has him be the catalyst that gets Chloe on the road to being a Pokemon Ranger/
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: His needling over Chloe is what makes Chloe blurt out how she wants to become a Pokémon Ranger, and subsequently taking the steps to enroll in an academy.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: His needling over Chloe is what makes Chloe blurt out how she wants to become a Pokémon Ranger, and subsequently taking the steps to enroll in an a Ranger academy.
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The son of one of Cerise's friends, who is forced on the Laxton Farm's trip on threat of homework.
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The son of one of Cerise's friends, who is forced on the Laxton Farm's trip on threat of homework. Later appears in ''Infinity Train: Seeker of Crocus''.
* BrilliantButLazy: He can think of solutions out of the box but he hates doing his homework, only going to Laxton's farm under threat of extra tutoring.
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* FauxHorrific: He can either go out for farming or his father can take away his games and force him to extra tutoring. He ''immediately'' goes for the former.
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* FauxHorrific: He can either go out for farming or his father can take away his games and force him to into extra tutoring. He ''immediately'' goes for the former.
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* TheGhost: Mentioned many times throughout the story but never seen. Justified in that he's in Galar whereas the story usually is focused either in Vermillion City or on ''[=ReFusion=]''. He finally makes an appearance in Chapter 14.
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* TheGhost: PlayingWithFire: His signature Pokemon is his Charizard.
* UnseenNoMore: Mentioned many times throughout the story but never seen. Justified in that he's in Galar whereas the story usually is focused either in Vermillion City or on ''[=ReFusion=]''. He finally makes an appearance in Chapter 14.
* UnseenNoMore: Mentioned many times throughout the story but never seen. Justified in that he's in Galar whereas the story usually is focused either in Vermillion City or on ''[=ReFusion=]''. He finally makes an appearance in Chapter 14.
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** Author notes reveal that the names of his Ranger group are [[Series/PowerRangersDinoThunder Connor, Ethan, Kira, and Trent]]. Hayley refers to the ''Dino Thunder'' Mission Control and calls him "Dr. F" just like Tommy Oliver was called "Dr. O".
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** Author notes reveal that the names of his Ranger group are [[Series/PowerRangersDinoThunder Connor, Ethan, Kira, and Trent]]. Hayley refers to the ''Dino Thunder'' Mission Control Control, and she calls him "Dr. F" just like Tommy Oliver was called "Dr. O".
