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* OnlySaneMan: Pyrrha is (so far) the only member of the group to not have a [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled backstory]] and personality to go with it, and is comes off as comparatively normal, despite her celebrity status.

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* OnlySaneMan: Pyrrha is (so far) the only member of the group to not have a [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled backstory]] and personality to go with it, and is comes off as comparatively normal, the more normal and mild-mannered member of her team, despite her celebrity status.
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* BrokenPedestal: It's only been occasionally referenced so far, but Cielo clearly does not hold warm feelings for his old mentor.

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* BrokenPedestal: It's only been occasionally referenced so far, but Cielo clearly does not hold warm feelings for his old mentor. Being better than him seems to be a primary motivator for Cielo.
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* OriginalCharacter: Of the four protagonists, three of them are completely original characters. Good thing, too. Imagine how terrible things would be if these guys were ''actually'' present in canon.
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* {{Adorkable}}: She's been trying her damnedest to one-up Jack in [[SnarkToSnarkCombat in a game of wits]]. It's worked with mixed results. Her slip ups make her come off endearingly dorky. Even Jack thinks so.
* ButtMonkey: Not ''nearly'' as much as Cards, but the fic's summary does ''not'' indicate a bright future for Pyrrha's sanity.
* OnlySaneMan: Pyrrha is (so far) the only member of the group to not have a [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled backstory]] and personality to go with it, and is comes off as comparatively normal, despite her celebrity status.


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* ButtMonkey: [[PlayedForLaughs Played mostly for laughs]], but she surpasses Jaune in this area. If something bad happens to ''someone'', it's bound to be Cards.
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* DeadpanSnarker: He ties with Cielo and Jaune as one of the snarkiest characters in the fic, and that's quite a feat, considering it's a [[WorldOfSnark world of snark.]]

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* DeadpanSnarker: He ties with Cielo and Jaune as one of the snarkiest characters in the fic, and that's quite a feat, considering it's they live in a a [[WorldOfSnark world of concentrated snark.]]
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* DeadpanSnarker: He ties with Cielo and Jaune as one of the snarkiest characters in the fic, and that's quite a feat, considering it's a [[WorldOfSnark world of snark.]]
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Cielo is rude, flippant, and just a little self-serving. However, he's shown going out of his way to protect Cards, both in combat and when she's being accosted by Chloe. He even rushes to help Pyrrha and Jack despite being able to easily use them as bait against the Handyman. Although in that case he was simply trying to disprove to himself the notion that he was too weak to save them.

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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Cielo is rude, flippant, and just a little self-serving. However, he's shown going out of his way to protect Cards, both in combat and when she's being accosted by Chloe. He even rushes to help Pyrrha and Jack despite being able to easily use them as bait against the Handyman. Although in that case he was simply trying to disprove to himself the notion that he was too weak to save them.them himself.
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* CovertPervert: Aside from coping a feel on Cielo, Cards is ''very'' interested in what Pyrrha meant when she mentioned getting a [[AccidentalInnuendo collar for Jack.]]

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* CovertPervert: Aside from coping a feel on Cielo, Cards is ''very'' interested in what Pyrrha meant when she mentioned getting a [[AccidentalInnuendo [[InnocentInnuendo collar for Jack.]]
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* CovertPervert: Aside from coping a feel on Cielo, Cards is ''very'' interested in what Pyrrha meant when she mentioned getting a [[AccidentalInnuendo collar for Jack.]]
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* AbusiveParents: Implied multiple times that Cards' mother abused her both emotionally and physically. That said, Cards seems to go [[WellDoneSonGuy out of her way to earn her mother's approval.]]

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* AbusiveParents: Implied multiple times that Cards' mother abused her both emotionally and physically. That said, Cards seems to go [[WellDoneSonGuy out of her way to earn her mother's approval.]]
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* AbusiveParents: Implied multiple times that Cards' mother abused her both emotionally and physically. That said, Cards seems to go [[WellDoneSonGuy out of her way to earn her mother's approval.]

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* AbusiveParents: Implied multiple times that Cards' mother abused her both emotionally and physically. That said, Cards seems to go [[WellDoneSonGuy out of her way to earn her mother's approval.]]]
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* AbusiveParents: Very lightly touched upon, but an earlier chapter indicates that Cielo's grandfather was physically abusive.


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* AbusiveParents: Implied multiple times that Cards' mother abused her both emotionally and physically. That said, Cards seems to go [[WellDoneSonGuy out of her way to earn her mother's approval.]
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* BlondGuysAreEvil: Well, Blond Guys Are Morally Ambiguous in this case. That said, Jack is easily the most shifty member of team PINA and is heavily implied to be a [[spoiler: a mole for Roman Torchwick.]]

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* BlondGuysAreEvil: Well, Blond Guys Are Morally Ambiguous in this case. That said, Jack is easily the most shifty member of team PINA [[spoiler: and is heavily implied to be [[TheMole a [[spoiler: a mole mole]] for Roman Torchwick.]]
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* BlondGuysAreEvil: Well, Blond Guys Are Morally Ambiguous in this case. That said, Jack is easily the most shifty member of team PINA and is heavily implied to be a [[spoiler: TheMole a mole for Roman Torchwick.]]

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* BlondGuysAreEvil: Well, Blond Guys Are Morally Ambiguous in this case. That said, Jack is easily the most shifty member of team PINA and is heavily implied to be a [[spoiler: TheMole a mole for Roman Torchwick.]]
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* BlondGuysAreEvil: Well, Blond Guys Are Morally Ambiguous in this case. That said, Jack is easily the most shifty member of team PINA and is heavily implied to be a [[spoiler: {{TheMole a mole}} for Roman Torchwick.]]

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* BlondGuysAreEvil: Well, Blond Guys Are Morally Ambiguous in this case. That said, Jack is easily the most shifty member of team PINA and is heavily implied to be a [[spoiler: {{TheMole TheMole a mole}} mole for Roman Torchwick.]]
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* BlondGuysAreEvil: Well, Blond Guys Are Morally Ambiguous in this case. That said, Jack is easily the most shifty member of team PINA.

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* BlondGuysAreEvil: Well, Blond Guys Are Morally Ambiguous in this case. That said, Jack is easily the most shifty member of team PINA.PINA and is heavily implied to be a [[spoiler: {{TheMole a mole}} for Roman Torchwick.]]

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* TheKleptomaniac: He's ''introduced'' stealing a kitten. Jack has awfully sticky fingers and will steal anything of value that isn't nailed to the floor. And if it is, he'll just find away to steal the floor too.

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* TheKleptomaniac: He's ''introduced'' pick-pocketing Pyrrha Nikos... immediately after stealing a kitten. Jack has awfully sticky fingers and will steal anything of value that isn't nailed to the floor. And if it is, he'll just find away to steal the floor too.



* PoliticallyIncorrectHero: To an extent. He does make a few off-color remarks about Pyrrha. Though considering he only ever does this to Pyrrha, he's more than likely [[TheGadfly just teasing her.]]



* PoliticallyIncorrectHero: Same as Jack. Cielo doesn't seem to have much of an issue using racial slurs geared towards the Faunus or referencing old, outdated Mistrali aesops regarding them. Not that this extends solely to the Faunus, as he even refers to Northern Mistral as "inferior" to the south. That said, he doesn't seem to mean any of this in any serious capacity. Given his [[CloudCuckooLander personality]], he's probably just joking.

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* PoliticallyIncorrectHero: Same as Jack. Cielo doesn't seem to have much of an issue using racial slurs geared towards the Faunus or referencing old, outdated Mistrali aesops regarding them. Not that this extends solely to the Faunus, as he even refers to Northern Mistral as "inferior" to the south. That said, he doesn't seem to mean any of this in any serious capacity. Given his [[CloudCuckooLander personality]], he's probably just joking.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Cards is an over-eager praise junkie whose constant screw ups and faux pas only make her more cute. Even Cielo refers to her as a "better Jaune" after [[SubvertedTrope hearing]] her [[SmokingIsGlamerous cigarette story.]]

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* {{Adorkable}}: Cards is an over-eager praise junkie whose constant screw ups and faux pas only make her more cute. Even Cielo refers to her as a "better Jaune" after [[SubvertedTrope hearing]] her [[SmokingIsGlamerous [[SmokingIsGlamorous cigarette story.]]
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* {{Adorkable}}: Cards is an over-eager praise junkie whose constant screw ups and faux pas only make her more cute. Even Cielo refers to her as a "better Jaune" after hearing her [[SmokingIsCool cigarette story.]]

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* {{Adorkable}}: Cards is an over-eager praise junkie whose constant screw ups and faux pas only make her more cute. Even Cielo refers to her as a "better Jaune" after hearing [[SubvertedTrope hearing]] her [[SmokingIsCool [[SmokingIsGlamerous cigarette story.]]



* CowardlyLion: Her overall lack of courage and combat experience means that she tends to spend most of her fights in a partially paralyzed in fear. That said, she's capable of courageous acts once she manages to psyche herself up. So far, she's played a crucial role in every major fight.

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* CowardlyLion: Her overall lack of courage stones and combat experience means that she tends to spend most of her fights in a partially paralyzed in fear. That said, she's capable of courageous acts once she manages to psyche herself up. So far, she's played a crucial role in every major fight.
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* CowardlyLion: Her lack of nerve and combat experience means that she tends to spend most of her fights in a partially paralyzed in fear. That said, she's capable of courageous acts once she manages to psyche herself up. So far, she's played a crucial role in every major fight.

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* CowardlyLion: Her overall lack of nerve courage and combat experience means that she tends to spend most of her fights in a partially paralyzed in fear. That said, she's capable of courageous acts once she manages to psyche herself up. So far, she's played a crucial role in every major fight.
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* DeadpanSnarker: It seems like every other line form him is some kind of snarky comment.

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* DeadpanSnarker: It seems like every other line form from him is some kind of snarky comment.



* NiceGirl: Probably the nicest character next to Pyhrra and Ruby. The only things that keep her from the OnlySaneMan alongside Pyrrha are her insecurities and occasional [[OpenMouthInsertFoot slip of the tongue.]]

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* NiceGirl: Probably the nicest character next to barring Pyhrra and Ruby. The only things that keep her from the OnlySaneMan alongside Pyrrha are her insecurities and occasional [[OpenMouthInsertFoot slip of the tongue.]]
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* TheKleptomaniac: He's ''introduced'' stealing a kitten. Jack has awfully sticky fingers and will steal anything of value that isn't nailed to the floor. And if it is, he'll just find away to steal the floor too.

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* MrFanservice: An in-universe example. At least [[AmoralAfrikaner Chloe]] seems to think so. Even Cielo calls him ''Manlius Maximus''.



* MrFanservice: An in-universe example. At least [[AmoralAfrikaner Chloe]] seems to think so. Even Cielo calls him ''Manlius Maximus''.



* MrFanservice: Though it isn't nearly as emphasized as Jack, Cielo is apparently quite fit enough from the way Cards feels him him up.


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* MrFanservice: Though it isn't nearly as emphasized as Jack, Cielo is apparently quite fit enough from the way Cards feels him him up.
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* {{Hunk}}: At least [[AmoralAfrikaner Chloe]] seems to think so. Even Cielo calls him ''Manlius Maximus''.

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* {{Hunk}}: MrFanservice: An in-universe example. At least [[AmoralAfrikaner Chloe]] seems to think so. Even Cielo calls him ''Manlius Maximus''.



* {{Hunk}}: Though it isn't nearly as emphasized as Jack, Cielo is apparently quite fit enough from the way Cards feels him him up.

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* {{Hunk}}: MrFanservice: Though it isn't nearly as emphasized as Jack, Cielo is apparently quite fit enough from the way Cards feels him him up.

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* KnifeNut: [[{{Literature/Worm}} Given who he's an expy of]], it makes sense that his weapon of choice would be knives.

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* KnifeNut: [[{{Literature/Worm}} Given who he's an an expy of]], it makes sense that his weapon of choice would be knives.


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* {{Hunk}}: Though it isn't nearly as emphasized as Jack, Cielo is apparently quite fit enough from the way Cards feels him him up.
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* Hunk: At least [[AmoralAfrikaner Chloe]] seems to think so. Even Cielo calls him ''Manlius Maximus''.
* KnifeNut: [[{{Literature/Worm}} Given who he's an expy of]], it makes sense that his weapon of choice are knives.

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* Hunk: {{Hunk}}: At least [[AmoralAfrikaner Chloe]] seems to think so. Even Cielo calls him ''Manlius Maximus''.
* KnifeNut: [[{{Literature/Worm}} Given who he's an an expy of]], it makes sense that his weapon of choice are would be knives.
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* KnifeNut: Given who he's an [[Literature/Worm expy]] of, it makes sense that his weapon of choice are knives.

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* KnifeNut: [[{{Literature/Worm}} Given who he's an [[Literature/Worm expy]] of, an expy of]], it makes sense that his weapon of choice are knives.

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