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"[X] is this" is Word Cruft, one of these uses of "about" is incorrect, and that's two examples in a row that use the word "epic".
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XkLIcOUwrLw Banner over the Citadel]], the epic track that plays as to retake Drezen from the demon hordes and is fittingly grand for the occasion.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H48B0qhEVGw&t=2533s The Fifth Crusade]] is this. There's something about majestic about this track and it's the perfect prelude to your epic awesomeness.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H48B0qhEVGw&t=2533s The Fifth Crusade]] is this. There's something about majestic about this track and it's the perfect prelude to your epic awesomeness.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XkLIcOUwrLw Banner over the Citadel]], the epic track that plays as while to retake Drezen from the demon hordes and hordes, is fittingly grand for the occasion.
* There's something majestic about [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H48B0qhEVGw&t=2533s The FifthCrusade]] is this. There's something about majestic about this track Crusade]], and it's the perfect prelude to your epic awesomeness.
* There's something majestic about [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H48B0qhEVGw&t=2533s The Fifth
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XkLIcOUwrLw Banner over the Citadel]], the epic track that plays as to retake Drezen from the demon hordes and is fittingly grand for the occasion.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XkLIcOUwrLw Banner over the Citadel]], the epic track that plays as to retake Drezen from the demon hordes and is fittingly grand for the occasion.occasion.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H48B0qhEVGw&t=2533s The Fifth Crusade]] is this. There's something about majestic about this track and it's the perfect prelude to your epic awesomeness.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H48B0qhEVGw&t=2533s The Fifth Crusade]] is this. There's something about majestic about this track and it's the perfect prelude to your epic awesomeness.
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"Flight of the Bumblebee" is a short form piece from a longer work (The Tale of Tsar Saltan). The title goes in quotes, not italics.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OAmVcjRPh0g The Hunger Eternal]] can best be described as ''Flight of the Bumblebee'' as if it was played by Cthulhu. A creepy and menacing piece fitting as the leitmotif for the Swarm that Walks. It is the theme that says: "You are the BigBad now!"
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OAmVcjRPh0g The Hunger Eternal]] can best be described as ''Flight "Flight of the Bumblebee'' Bumblebee" as if it was played by Cthulhu. A creepy and menacing piece fitting as the leitmotif for the Swarm that Walks. It is the theme that says: "You are the BigBad now!"
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* The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=On2w9VTPbB4 Aeon theme]] with its strict one-beat-per-second tempo and ticking-clock effect really drives home the concepts of time and law that define the path.
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* The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=On2w9VTPbB4 Aeon theme]] with its strict one-beat-per-second tempo and ticking-clock effect really drives home the concepts of time and law that define the path.path.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OAmVcjRPh0g The Hunger Eternal]] can best be described as ''Flight of the Bumblebee'' as if it was played by Cthulhu. A creepy and menacing piece fitting as the leitmotif for the Swarm that Walks. It is the theme that says: "You are the BigBad now!"
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XkLIcOUwrLw Banner over the Citadel]], the epic track that plays as to retake Drezen from the demon hordes and is fittingly grand for the occasion.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OAmVcjRPh0g The Hunger Eternal]] can best be described as ''Flight of the Bumblebee'' as if it was played by Cthulhu. A creepy and menacing piece fitting as the leitmotif for the Swarm that Walks. It is the theme that says: "You are the BigBad now!"
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XkLIcOUwrLw Banner over the Citadel]], the epic track that plays as to retake Drezen from the demon hordes and is fittingly grand for the occasion.
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Zapping Word Cruft. Just go straight to the examples that stand out, don't say they stand out.
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* The soundtrack is pretty high-quality throughout, but [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uITaghKWMMM Mythic Power]] stands out in particular, given that it is ''your own personal boss theme''. When it starts playing, you know some overconfident demon is about to have a very bad day.
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* The soundtrack is pretty high-quality throughout, but [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uITaghKWMMM Mythic Power]] stands out in particular, given that it is ''your own personal boss theme''. When it starts playing, you know some overconfident demon is about to have a very bad day.
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* The soundtrack is pretty high-quality throughout, but [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uITaghKWMMM Mythic Power]] stands out in particular, given that it is ''your own personal boss theme''. When it starts playing, you know some overconfident demon is about to have a very bad day.
* The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=On2w9VTPbB4 Aeon theme]] with its strict one-beat-per-second tempo and ticking-clock effect really drives home the concepts of time and law that define the path.
* The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=On2w9VTPbB4 Aeon theme]] with its strict one-beat-per-second tempo and ticking-clock effect really drives home the concepts of time and law that define the path.
