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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7nIQ1yoCCc Zavodila]], notable for being the most well-known part of the mod and ranking #37 on the ''Billboard'' charts once. You shouldn't have argued with Sarvente when you had your chance, because now her Russian friend Ruv is about to make you regret it! He has his ways to leave a solid impression on you, with a [[BassoProfundo profound Russian bass]] that quakes the ground. Prepare to get blue-balled quite a few times if this is your first attempt.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7nIQ1yoCCc Zavodila]], notable for being the most well-known part of the mod and ranking #37 on the ''Billboard'' charts once. You shouldn't have argued with Sarvente when you had your chance, because now her Russian friend Ruv is about to make you regret it! He has his ways to leave a solid impression on you, with a [[BassoProfundo profound Russian bass]] bass that quakes the ground. Prepare to get blue-balled quite a few times if this is your first attempt.
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That's not how to construct a "not only... but also" sentence. If deleting everything from "not only" to "but also" renders the sentence nonsensical, it isn't put together correctly.
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While most of the game wasn't very well received, it makes up for it not just for its characters and story, but also the bangers created by Mike Geno.
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While most of the game wasn't very well received, it makes up for it with not just for its characters and story, but also the bangers created by Mike Geno.Geno.
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While most of the game wasn't very well received, it makes up for it not just for its characters and story, but also the bangers created by Mike Geno.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6DpML_za7tg Parish]]. It's your first encounter with Sarvente, and she's sure trying to make a good impression on you! Her cute song perfectly combines upbeat themes with flute and voice, guaranteed to cheer you up.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6DpML_za7tg Parish]]. It's your first encounter with Sarvente, and she's sure trying to make a good impression on you! Her cute song perfectly combines upbeat themes with flute and her organ/flute-like voice, guaranteed to cheer you up.
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"Climatic" means "relating to climate". That's not an appropriate word to use here.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS3k41vOYF0 Casanova]]. April Fools, Selever is here! He may not be the guy with any respect to spare, but he definitely has an audacious tune to share. While the charting is ridiculously hard and the ending is anti-climatic, you'll be satisfied once you make it through.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS3k41vOYF0 Casanova]]. April Fools, Selever is here! He may not be the guy with any respect to spare, but he definitely has an audacious tune to share. While the charting is ridiculously hard and the ending is anti-climatic, anti-climactic, you'll be satisfied once you make it through.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBZ2cMSwaNs Gospel]]. The grand finale of your musical duel, Sarvente sure has prepared something special for you. May God have mercy on your soul, because she won't!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS3k41vOYF0 Casanova]]. April Fools, Selever is here! He may not be the guy with any respect to spare, but he definitely has an audacious tune to share.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS3k41vOYF0 Casanova]]. April Fools, Selever is here! He may not be the guy with any respect to spare, but he definitely has an audacious tune to share.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBZ2cMSwaNs Gospel]]. The Gospel]], the grand finale of your musical duel, duel with the duo ([[EasyModeMockery unless you are playing on Normal or Easy]]). Sarvente sure has prepared something special for you.you, and it is going to be one tough chart to pass even on your first try. May God have mercy on your soul, because she won't!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS3k41vOYF0 Casanova]]. April Fools, Selever is here! He may not be the guy with any respect to spare, but he definitely has an audacious tune to share. While the charting is ridiculously hard and the ending is anti-climatic, you'll be satisfied once you make it through.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS3k41vOYF0 Casanova]]. April Fools, Selever is here! He may not be the guy with any respect to spare, but he definitely has an audacious tune to share. While the charting is ridiculously hard and the ending is anti-climatic, you'll be satisfied once you make it through.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7nIQ1yoCCc Zavodila]], notable for being the most well-known part of the mod and ranking #37 on the ''Billboard'' charts once. You shouldn't have argued with Sarvente when you had your chance, because now her Russian friend Ruv is about to make you regret it! He has his ways to leave a solid impression on you, with a [[BassoProfundo profound Russian bass]] that shakes ground and breaks bones.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7nIQ1yoCCc Zavodila]], notable for being the most well-known part of the mod and ranking #37 on the ''Billboard'' charts once. You shouldn't have argued with Sarvente when you had your chance, because now her Russian friend Ruv is about to make you regret it! He has his ways to leave a solid impression on you, with a [[BassoProfundo profound Russian bass]] that shakes ground and breaks bones.quakes the ground. Prepare to get blue-balled quite a few times if this is your first attempt.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7nIQ1yoCCc Zavodila]], notable for ranking #37 on the ''Billboard'' charts once. You shouldn't have argued with Sarvente when you had your chance, because now her Russian friend Ruv is about to make you regret it! He has his ways to leave a solid impression on you, with a [[BassoProfundo profound Russian bass]] that shakes ground and breaks bones.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7nIQ1yoCCc Zavodila]], notable for being the most well-known part of the mod and ranking #37 on the ''Billboard'' charts once. You shouldn't have argued with Sarvente when you had your chance, because now her Russian friend Ruv is about to make you regret it! He has his ways to leave a solid impression on you, with a [[BassoProfundo profound Russian bass]] that shakes ground and breaks bones.
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The phrase "flute voice" doesn't make sense grammatically.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6DpML_za7tg Parish]]. It's your first encounter with Sarvente, and she's sure trying to make a good impression on you! Her cute song perfectly combines upbeat themes with flute voice, guaranteed to cheer you up.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6DpML_za7tg Parish]]. It's your first encounter with Sarvente, and she's sure trying to make a good impression on you! Her cute song perfectly combines upbeat themes with flute and voice, guaranteed to cheer you up.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6DpML_za7tg Parish]]. It's your first encounter with Sarvente, she's sure trying to make a good impression on you! Her cute song perfectly combines upbeat themes with flute voice, guaranteed to cheer you up.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6DpML_za7tg Parish]]. It's your first encounter with Sarvente, and she's sure trying to make a good impression on you! Her cute song perfectly combines upbeat themes with flute voice, guaranteed to cheer you up.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7nIQ1yoCCc Zavodila]]. You shouldn't have argued with Sarvente when you had your chance, because now her Russian friend Ruv is about to make you regret it! He has his ways to leave a solid impression on you, with a [[BassoProfundo profound Russian bass]] that shakes ground and breaks bones.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7nIQ1yoCCc Zavodila]].Zavodila]], notable for ranking #37 on the ''Billboard'' charts once. You shouldn't have argued with Sarvente when you had your chance, because now her Russian friend Ruv is about to make you regret it! He has his ways to leave a solid impression on you, with a [[BassoProfundo profound Russian bass]] that shakes ground and breaks bones.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS3k41vOYF0 Casanova]]. April Fools, Selever is here! He may not be the guy with any respect to spare, but he definitely has an audacious tune to share.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS3k41vOYF0 Casanova]]. April Fools, Selever is here! He may not be the guy with any respect to spare, but he definitely has an audacious tune to share.share.
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Examples don't get blank lines between them, don't format entries as "[Title]: [Description]" (this isn't a trope list), and ending every sentence with exclamation points is overkill. Dialling it back a bit.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6DpML_za7tg Parish]]: It's your first encounter with Sarvente, she's sure trying to make a good impression on you! Her cute song perfectly combines upbeat themes with flute voice, guaranteed to cheer you up!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3AjmBa31jA Worship]]: Things are starting to gain tempo, cause Sarvente has not yet shown you all she has to offer, and is certainly not giving up! Be prepared for a fast-paced melodic song that reveals hidden depths!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7nIQ1yoCCc Zavodila]]: You shouldn't have argued with Sarvente when you had your chance, because now her russian friend Ruv is about to make you regret it! He has his ways to leave a solid impression on you, with a [[BassoProfundo profound russian bass]] that shakes ground and breaks bones!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBZ2cMSwaNs Gospel]]: The grand finale of your musical duel, Sarvente sure has prepared something special for you. May God have mercy on your soul, because she won't!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS3k41vOYF0 Casanova]]: April fools, Selever is here! He may not be the guy with any respect to spare, but he definitely has an audacious tune to share!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3AjmBa31jA Worship]]: Things are starting to gain tempo, cause Sarvente has not yet shown you all she has to offer, and is certainly not giving up! Be prepared for a fast-paced melodic song that reveals hidden depths!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7nIQ1yoCCc Zavodila]]: You shouldn't have argued with Sarvente when you had your chance, because now her russian friend Ruv is about to make you regret it! He has his ways to leave a solid impression on you, with a [[BassoProfundo profound russian bass]] that shakes ground and breaks bones!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBZ2cMSwaNs Gospel]]: The grand finale of your musical duel, Sarvente sure has prepared something special for you. May God have mercy on your soul, because she won't!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS3k41vOYF0 Casanova]]: April fools, Selever is here! He may not be the guy with any respect to spare, but he definitely has an audacious tune to share!
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6DpML_za7tg Parish]]: Parish]]. It's your first encounter with Sarvente, she's sure trying to make a good impression on you! Her cute song perfectly combines upbeat themes with flute voice, guaranteed to cheer you up!
up.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3AjmBa31jAWorship]]: Worship]]. Things are starting to gain tempo, cause 'cause Sarvente has not yet shown you all she has to offer, and is certainly not giving up! Be prepared for a fast-paced melodic song that reveals hidden depths!
depths.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7nIQ1yoCCcZavodila]]: Zavodila]]. You shouldn't have argued with Sarvente when you had your chance, because now her russian Russian friend Ruv is about to make you regret it! He has his ways to leave a solid impression on you, with a [[BassoProfundo profound russian Russian bass]] that shakes ground and breaks bones!
bones.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBZ2cMSwaNsGospel]]: Gospel]]. The grand finale of your musical duel, Sarvente sure has prepared something special for you. May God have mercy on your soul, because she won't!
won't!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS3k41vOYF0Casanova]]: Casanova]]. April fools, Fools, Selever is here! He may not be the guy with any respect to spare, but he definitely has an audacious tune to share!share.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3AjmBa31jA
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7nIQ1yoCCc
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBZ2cMSwaNs
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS3k41vOYF0
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6DpML_za7tg Parish]]: It's your first encounter with Sarvente, she's sure trying to make a good impression on you! Her cute song perfectly combines upbeat themes with flute voice, guaranteed to cheer you up!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3AjmBa31jA Worship]]: Things are starting to gain tempo, cause Sarvente has not yet shown you all she has to offer, and is certainly not giving up! Be prepared for a fast-paced melodic song that reveals hidden depths!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7nIQ1yoCCc Zavodila]]: You shouldn't have argued with Sarvente when you had your chance, because now her russian friend Ruv is about to make you regret it! He has his ways to leave a solid impression on you, with a [[BassoProfundo profound russian bass]] that shakes ground and breaks bones!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBZ2cMSwaNs Gospel]]: The grand finale of your musical duel, Sarvente sure has prepared something special for you. May God have mercy on your soul, because she won't!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS3k41vOYF0 Casanova]]: April fools, Selever is here! He may not be the guy with any respect to spare, but he definitely has an audacious tune to share!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3AjmBa31jA Worship]]: Things are starting to gain tempo, cause Sarvente has not yet shown you all she has to offer, and is certainly not giving up! Be prepared for a fast-paced melodic song that reveals hidden depths!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7nIQ1yoCCc Zavodila]]: You shouldn't have argued with Sarvente when you had your chance, because now her russian friend Ruv is about to make you regret it! He has his ways to leave a solid impression on you, with a [[BassoProfundo profound russian bass]] that shakes ground and breaks bones!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBZ2cMSwaNs Gospel]]: The grand finale of your musical duel, Sarvente sure has prepared something special for you. May God have mercy on your soul, because she won't!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AS3k41vOYF0 Casanova]]: April fools, Selever is here! He may not be the guy with any respect to spare, but he definitely has an audacious tune to share!
