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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5RzTntWuP1w The opening theme]] gives the rocky feel, reminding viewers of the previous Batman shows as this version is not dark or very comedic.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5RzTntWuP1w The opening theme]] gives the has a rocky feel, reminding viewers of the previous Batman shows shows, as this version is not neither dark or nor very comedic.
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* [[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5RzTntWuP1w The opening theme]] gives the rocky feel, reminding viewers of the previous Batman shows as this version is not dark or very comedic.
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* [[[https://www.[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5RzTntWuP1w The opening theme]] gives the rocky feel, reminding viewers of the previous Batman shows as this version is not dark or very comedic.
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%%* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5RzTntWuP1w The opening theme]] sounds ''incredible''.
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* Black Canary's song, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P8CXOUALagg If Only]]" and its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sXeYXDqgQk reprise]]. What really sells it Grey Delisle's soft, tearjerking vocals.
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* Black Canary's song, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P8CXOUALagg If Only]]" and its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sXeYXDqgQk reprise]]. What really sells it Grey Delisle's is Creator/GreyDeLisle's soft, tearjerking vocals.
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* Black Canary's song, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P8CXOUALagg If Only]]" and its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sXeYXDqgQk reprise]]. Grey DeLisle 's buttery-soft vocals just ''sell'' it.
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* Black Canary's song, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P8CXOUALagg If Only]]" and its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sXeYXDqgQk reprise]]. What really sells it Grey DeLisle 's buttery-soft vocals just ''sell'' it.Delisle's soft, tearjerking vocals.
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* Black Canary's song, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P8CXOUALagg If Only]]" and its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sXeYXDqgQk reprise]]. Grey DeLisle's buttery-soft vocals just ''sell'' it.
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* Black Canary's song, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P8CXOUALagg If Only]]" and its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sXeYXDqgQk reprise]]. Grey DeLisle's DeLisle 's buttery-soft vocals just ''sell'' it.
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* "Mayhem of the Music Meister" features the eponymous villain singing almost non-stop catchy {{Villain Song}}s or Black Canary singing gentle, wistful melodies. One highlight is "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yHY9USNC_Fk Drives us Bats]]".
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* "Mayhem of the Music Meister" features the eponymous villain singing almost non-stop catchy {{Villain Song}}s or Black Canary singing gentle, wistful melodies. One highlight is "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yHY9USNC_Fk Drives us Bats]]".Bats]]".
* Black Canary's song, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P8CXOUALagg If Only]]" and its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sXeYXDqgQk reprise]]. Grey DeLisle's buttery-soft vocals just ''sell'' it.
* Black Canary's song, "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P8CXOUALagg If Only]]" and its [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sXeYXDqgQk reprise]]. Grey DeLisle's buttery-soft vocals just ''sell'' it.
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-eJM4GiuoKQ Grey and Blue]]", Vigilante's song about Batman, is as insanely awesome as the fight it accompanies with Batman taking on 5 mobsters single-handedly (Though Vigilante helps with a sniper), and using no gadgets apart from a single batarang.
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-eJM4GiuoKQ Grey and Blue]]", Vigilante's song about Batman, is as insanely awesome as the fight it accompanies with Batman taking on 5 five mobsters single-handedly (Though (though Vigilante helps with a sniper), and using no gadgets apart from a single batarang.
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-eJM4GiuoKQ Grey and Blue]]", Vigilante's song about Batman, is insanely awesome.
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* "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-eJM4GiuoKQ Grey and Blue]]", Vigilante's song about Batman, is as insanely awesome.awesome as the fight it accompanies with Batman taking on 5 mobsters single-handedly (Though Vigilante helps with a sniper), and using no gadgets apart from a single batarang.
