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* Every nation on Earth banding together and unanimously declaring war upon Equestria and Celestia, particularly if you've read other TCB stories where it essentially seemed like the humans were complacently letting the ponies take over Earth and basically wipe them all out, all the while the ponies are being painted as the good guys.
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* Every nation on Earth banding together and unanimously declaring war upon Equestria and Celestia, particularly if you've read other TCB stories where it essentially seemed like the humans were complacently letting the ponies take over Earth and basically wipe them all out, all the while the ponies are being painted as the good guys.
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* When [[spoiler:the barrier finally goes down]] after sustained bombardment.
* "The Longest Day" confirms that [[spoiler:humanity reclaimed South Africa]] and are on their way to [[spoiler:winning the war]].
* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see [[spoiler:Celestia run like hell when the united forces of humanity came bearing down on her nation.]]
* In "Aftermath: Part II", Celestia ''finally'' gets a WhatTheHellHero lecture from [[spoiler:Queen Molyneux of Gryphus, calling her out for her AssimilationPlot]]. What's more, it's made '''very''' clear that [[spoiler:now that the griffons -- and soon, the rest of the world -- know what she's capable of, her OmniscientMoralityLicense is as good as gone and she ''will'' answer for her crimes]].
* "The Longest Day" confirms that [[spoiler:humanity reclaimed South Africa]] and are on their way to [[spoiler:winning the war]].
* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see [[spoiler:Celestia run like hell when the united forces of humanity came bearing down on her nation.]]
* In "Aftermath: Part II", Celestia ''finally'' gets a WhatTheHellHero lecture from [[spoiler:Queen Molyneux of Gryphus, calling her out for her AssimilationPlot]]. What's more, it's made '''very''' clear that [[spoiler:now that the griffons -- and soon, the rest of the world -- know what she's capable of, her OmniscientMoralityLicense is as good as gone and she ''will'' answer for her crimes]].
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* When [[spoiler:the the barrier finally goes down]] down after sustained bombardment.
* "The Longest Day" confirms that[[spoiler:humanity humanity reclaimed South Africa]] Africa and are on their way to [[spoiler:winning winning the war]].
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* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see[[spoiler:Celestia Celestia run like hell when the united forces of humanity came bearing down on her nation.]]
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* "The Longest Day" confirms that
* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see
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** Heck, ''many'' moments in this story are only as good as they are because they're a deconstruction of common TCB themes, and we finally get to see consequences given to the ponies.
** Heck, ''many'' moments in this story are only as good as they are because they're a deconstruction of common TCB themes, and we finally get to see consequences given to the ponies.
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* Every nation on Earth banding together and unanimously declaring war upon Equestria and Celestia, particularly if you've read other TCB stories...
** Heck, ''many'' moments in this storystories where it essentially seemed like the humans were complacently letting the ponies take over Earth and basically wipe them all out, all the while the ponies are only being painted as the good as they are because they're a deconstruction of common TCB themes, and we finally get to see consequences guys.
** The RousingSpeech given by UN diplomat Ellen Rowe. It successfully convinces humanity tothe ponies.put their differences aside to defeat this alien enemy.
** Heck, ''many'' moments in this story
** The RousingSpeech given by UN diplomat Ellen Rowe. It successfully convinces humanity to
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* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see [[spoiler: Celestia run like hell when the united forces of humanity came bearing down on her nation.]]
* In "Aftermath: Part II", Celestia ''finally'' gets a WhatTheHellHero lecture from [[spoiler:Queen Molyneux of Gryphus, calling her out for her AssimilationPlot]]. What's more, it's made '''very''' clear that [[spoiler:now that the gryphons -- and soon, the rest of the world -- know what she's capable of, her OmniscientMoralityLicense is as good as gone and she ''will'' answer for her crimes]].
* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see [[spoiler: Celestia run like hell when the united forces of humanity came bearing down on her nation.]]
* In "Aftermath: Part II", Celestia ''finally'' gets a WhatTheHellHero lecture from [[spoiler:Queen Molyneux of Gryphus, calling her out for her AssimilationPlot]]. What's more, it's made '''very''' clear that [[spoiler:now that the gryphons -- and soon, the rest of the world -- know what she's capable of, her OmniscientMoralityLicense is as good as gone and she ''will'' answer for her crimes]].
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* "The Longest Day" confirms that [[spoiler: humanity [[spoiler:humanity reclaimed South Africa]] and are on their way to [[spoiler: winning [[spoiler:winning the war]].
* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see[[spoiler: Celestia [[spoiler:Celestia run like hell when the united forces of humanity came bearing down on her nation.]]
* In "Aftermath: Part II", Celestia ''finally'' gets a WhatTheHellHero lecture from [[spoiler:Queen Molyneux of Gryphus, calling her out for her AssimilationPlot]]. What's more, it's made '''very''' clear that [[spoiler:now that thegryphons griffons -- and soon, the rest of the world -- know what she's capable of, her OmniscientMoralityLicense is as good as gone and she ''will'' answer for her crimes]].
* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see
* In "Aftermath: Part II", Celestia ''finally'' gets a WhatTheHellHero lecture from [[spoiler:Queen Molyneux of Gryphus, calling her out for her AssimilationPlot]]. What's more, it's made '''very''' clear that [[spoiler:now that the
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* In ''Aftermath "Aftermath: Part II'', II", Celestia ''finally'' gets a WhatTheHellHero lecture from [[spoiler:Queen Molyneux of Gryphus, calling her out for her AssimilationPlot]]. What's more, it's made '''very''' clear that [[spoiler:now that the gryphons -- and soon, the rest of the world -- know what she's capable of, her OmniscientMoralityLicense is as good as gone and she ''will'' answer for her crimes]].
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** Heck, ''many'' moments in this story are only as good as they are because it's a deconstruction of TheConversionBureau, and we finally get to see consequences given to the ponies.
** Heck, ''many'' moments in this story are only as good as they are because it's a deconstruction of TheConversionBureau, and we finally get to see consequences given to the ponies.
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* Every nation on earth Earth banding together and unanimously declaring war upon Equestria and Celestia, particularly if you've read other TCB stories...
** Heck, ''many'' moments in this story are only as good as they are becauseit's they're a deconstruction of TheConversionBureau, common TCB themes, and we finally get to see consequences given to the ponies.
** Heck, ''many'' moments in this story are only as good as they are because
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* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see [[spoiler: Celestia run like hell from the forces of humanity united.]]
* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see [[spoiler: Celestia run like hell from the forces of humanity united.]]
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* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see [[spoiler: Celestia run like hell when the united forces of humanity came bearing down on her nation.]]
* In ''Aftermath Part II'', Celestia ''finally'' gets a WhatTheHellHero lecture from [[spoiler:Queen Molyneux of Gryphus, calling her out for her AssimilationPlot]]. What's more, it's made '''very''' clear that [[spoiler:now that the gryphons -- and soon, the rest of the world -- know what she's capable of, her OmniscientMoralityLicense is as good as gone and she ''will'' answer for hercrimes]].
* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see [[spoiler: Celestia run like hell from the forces of humanity united.]]crimes]].
* In ''Aftermath Part II'', Celestia ''finally'' gets a WhatTheHellHero lecture from [[spoiler:Queen Molyneux of Gryphus, calling her out for her AssimilationPlot]]. What's more, it's made '''very''' clear that [[spoiler:now that the gryphons -- and soon, the rest of the world -- know what she's capable of, her OmniscientMoralityLicense is as good as gone and she ''will'' answer for her
* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see [[spoiler: Celestia run like hell from the forces of humanity united.]]
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* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see [[spoiler: Celestia run like hell from the forces of humanity united. Granted, some of us wanted to see Equestria smashed into a pancake, but it was still satisfying nonetheless.]]
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* In ''Aftermath Part II'', Celestia ''finally'' gets a WhatTheHellHero lecture from [[spoiler:Queen Molyneux of Gryphus, calling her out for her AssimilationPlot]]. What's more, it's made '''very''' clear that [[spoiler:now that the gryphons -- and soon, the rest of the world -- know what she's capable of, her OmniscientMoralityLicense is as good as gone and she ''will'' answer for her crimes]].crimes]].
* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see [[spoiler: Celestia run like hell from the forces of humanity united. Granted, some of us wanted to see Equestria smashed into a pancake, but it was still satisfying nonetheless.]]
* For those who read so many other TCB fanfics where Celestia has the moral right, and no matter what the humans do, the ponies are superior, it was very, very, ''very'' satisfying to see [[spoiler: Celestia run like hell from the forces of humanity united. Granted, some of us wanted to see Equestria smashed into a pancake, but it was still satisfying nonetheless.]]
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* In ''Aftermath Part II'', Celestia ''finally'' gets a WhatTheHellHero lecture from [[spoiler:Queen Molyneux of Gryphus, calling her out for her AssimilationPlot]]. What's more, it's made '''very''' clear that [[spoiler:now that the gryphons -- and soon, the rest of the world -- know what she's capable of, her OmniscientMoralityLicense is as good as gone and she ''will'' answer for her crimes]].
* In ''Aftermath Part II'', Celestia ''finally'' gets a WhatTheHellHero lecture from [[spoiler:Queen Molyneux of Gryphus, calling her out for her AssimilationPlot]]. What's more, it's made '''very''' clear that [[spoiler:now that the gryphons -- and soon, the rest of the world -- know what she's capable of, her OmniscientMoralityLicense is as good as gone and she ''will'' answer for her crimes]].
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