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** She is also the only female of the group (who all grew up in conservative fanatical sexist theocracy) who actually had consensual sex and has willingly shown herself to a man before, being pregnant. All the other girls are either virgins [[spoiler: or a rape victim, who is even more unlikely to do it, because of trauma]].
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** Well, Jackrum ''is'' being honest. ''She'' is most certainly not an anything ''man''...
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** Well, Jackrum ''is'' being honest. ''She'' ''He'' is most certainly not an anything ''man''...
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** Later when the squad is camping, Blouse calls Jackrum out for directing Wazzer to steal food from William de Worde's cart, which Jackrum calmly defends by citing military rules classifying it as "plundering" from an enemy resource and therefore legitimate. Blouse responds by actually ''pulling out a copy of the military rulebook'' and looking it up, then carries on to look up the bogus rule Jackrum invented on the spur of the moment to evade his forced retirement. Just when Polly thinks it's going to come to a fight, Blouse snaps the book shut and congratulates a nonplussed Jackrum on his encyclopaedic knowledge of the rules--he caught Jackrum lying, Jackrum ''knows'' he's been caught and subsequently Jackrum knows he's being ''allowed'' to get away with it, putting him on the backfoot.
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** Later when the squad is camping, Blouse calls Jackrum out for directing Wazzer Shufti to steal food from William de Worde's cart, which Jackrum calmly defends by citing military rules classifying it as "plundering" from an enemy resource and therefore legitimate. Blouse responds by actually ''pulling out a copy of the military rulebook'' and looking it up, then carries on to look up the bogus rule Jackrum invented on the spur of the moment to evade his forced retirement. Just when Polly thinks it's going to come to a fight, Blouse snaps the book shut and congratulates a nonplussed Jackrum on his encyclopaedic knowledge of the rules--he caught Jackrum lying, Jackrum ''knows'' he's been caught and subsequently Jackrum knows he's being ''allowed'' to get away with it, putting him on the backfoot.
