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* In Chapter 5, Konata singing ''[[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya God Knows]]'' with the cosplay cafe's band. It got everyone on their feet and dancing to the beat, while at the same time, moving Kagami to tears.
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* In Chapter 5, Konata singing ''[[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya ''[[Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya God Knows]]'' with the cosplay cafe's band. It got everyone on their feet and dancing to the beat, while at the same time, moving Kagami to tears.
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* Konata and Kagami taking out a couple of teenage boys who shot at Konata with a paintball gun (before realizing it was paint, Kagami was scared an actual bullet had cut her down). The frightened hooligans ended up begging the cops to save their sorry asses from the girls out for revenge.
** Making it even more awesome was the crowd of about 15-20 people in front of the train station witnessing what happened. After the cops left, the crowd cheered and applauded for the girls.
** Making it even more awesome was the crowd of about 15-20 people in front of the train station witnessing what happened. After the cops left, the crowd cheered and applauded for the girls.
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* Konata and Kagami taking out giving a couple of teenage boys who shot at Konata them with a paintball gun their just desserts by giving them a well deserved beating (before realizing it was only red paint, Kagami was scared that an actual bullet had cut her down). struck Konata). The frightened hooligans ended end up begging the cops to save their sorry asses from the girls out for revenge.
girls' onslaught, much to the cops' amusement.
**Making it even more awesome Even better, there was the a crowd of about 15-20 people in front of the train station witnessing who saw what happened. After the cops left, the crowd cheered and applauded for the girls.
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* Konata and Kagami taking out a couple of teenage boys who shot at Konata with a paintball gun (before realizing it was paint, Kagami was scared an actual bullet had cut her down). Once the cops showed up, the The frightened hooligans begged them ended up begging the cops to save their sorry hides asses from the girls.girls out for revenge.
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* Konata and Kagami taking out a couple of teenage boys who shot at Konata with a paintball gun (before realizing it was paint, Kagami was scared an actual bullet had cut her down). Once the cops showed up, the boys hooligans begged them to save their sorry hides from the girls.
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* Konata and Kagami taking out a couple of teenage boys who shot ay Konata with a paintball gun (before realizing it was paint, Kagami was scared an actual bullet had cut her down). Once the cops showed up, the boys begged them to save their sorry hides from the girl.girls.
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** A crowd of about 15-20 people in front of the train station had witnessed what happened, and they cheered and applauded for the girls.
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** A Making it even more awesome was the crowd of about 15-20 people in front of the train station had witnessed witnessing what happened, and they happened. After the cops left, the crowd cheered and applauded for the girls.
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* Konata and Kagami taking out a couple of hooligans teenage boys who shoot shot ay Konata with a paintball gun (before realizing it was paint, Kagami was scared an actual bullet had cut her down).down). Once the cops showed up, the boys begged them to save their sorry hides from the girl.
** A crowd of about 15-20 people in front of the train station had witnessed what happened, and they cheered and applauded for the girls.
** A crowd of about 15-20 people in front of the train station had witnessed what happened, and they cheered and applauded for the girls.
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* In Chapter 5, Konata singing ''[[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya God Knows]]'' with the cosplay cafe's band. It got everyone on their feet and dancing to the beat, while at the same time, moving Kagami to tears.tears.
* Konata and Kagami taking out a couple of hooligans who shoot Konata with a paintball gun (before realizing it was paint, Kagami was scared an actual bullet had cut her down).
* Konata and Kagami taking out a couple of hooligans who shoot Konata with a paintball gun (before realizing it was paint, Kagami was scared an actual bullet had cut her down).
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* In Chapter 5, Konata singing ''[[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya God Knows]]'' with the cosplay cafe's band. It got everyone on their feet and dancing to the beat, while at the same time, moving Kagami to tears.
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* In Chapter 5, Konata singing ''[[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya God Knows]]'' with the cosplay cafe's band. It got everyone on their feet and dancing to the beat.beat, while moving Kagami to tears.
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* In Chapter 5, Konata singing ''[[HaruhiSuzumiya ''[[LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya God Knows]]'' with the cosplay cafe's band. It got everyone on their feet and dancing to the beat.
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