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* Anything where Alice doesn't sit by as TheWoobie, and tries to takes charge of her life, whether from [[CallingTheOldManOut letting Kev have it for his abusive behavior]] ([[EstablishingCharacterMoment especially the first time]], [[GoodIsNotNice where the author didn't expect somebody with the "Good" trait to be even physically capable of doing that]]), [[{{Determinator}} to trying her best to work hard at school and her part-time job at the grocer.]] The part where she gets a promotion at said job was probably one of the biggest for her In-Universe, especially for somebody with her low self-esteem - the way she keeps celebrating, and otherwise express nothing but pure, unadulterated joy was enough to completely startle the author.
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* Anything Any time where Alice doesn't sit by as TheWoobie, and tries to takes charge of her life, whether from [[CallingTheOldManOut letting Kev have it for his abusive behavior]] ([[EstablishingCharacterMoment especially the first time]], [[GoodIsNotNice where the author didn't expect somebody with the "Good" trait to be even physically capable of doing that]]), [[{{Determinator}} to trying her best to work hard at school and her part-time job at the grocer.]] The part where she gets a promotion at said job was probably one of the biggest for her In-Universe, especially for somebody with her low self-esteem - the way she keeps celebrating, and otherwise express nothing but pure, unadulterated joy was enough to completely startle the author.author.
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* Anything where Alice doesn't sit by as TheWoobie, and tries to takes charge of her life, whether from [[CallingTheOldManOut letting Kev have it for his abusive behavior]] ([[EstablishingCharacterMoment especially the first time]], [[GoodIsNotNice where the author didn't expect somebody with the "Good" trait to be even physically capable of doing that]]), [[{{Determinator}} to trying her best to work hard at school and her part-time job at the grocer.]] The part where she gets a promotion at said job was probably one of the biggest for her In-Universe, especially for somebody with her low self-esteem - the way she keeps celebrating, and otherwise express nothing but pure, unadulterated joy was enough to completely startle the author.
