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* Is Vaemond's obsession with disinheriting Lucerys really the righteous promotion of the true Velaryon bloodline, as he claims? Or does he just want Driftmark for himself? It's worth noting that under Westerosi law, even if it were proven that Laenor's children were bastards, Laena's children would still rightfully inherit Driftmark before Vaemond, but Vaemond promotes his own claim before theirs and still refuses to accept Lucerys as heir when Rhaenys announces that he and Jacaerys are to marry Baela and Rhaena, which would still carry on the Velaryon bloodline. Alternatively, is Vaemond a sexist who believes male heirs should always take precedence, and would be happy to allow Baela to inherit Driftmark if she was a boy? The fact that he accuses Viserys of breaking the law by naming Rhaenyra his heir and publicly calls Rhaenyra a whore gives the impression that he doesn't have great respect for women or their inheritance rights.
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* Is Vaemond's obsession with disinheriting Lucerys really the righteous promotion of the true Velaryon bloodline, as he claims? Or does he just want Driftmark for himself? It's worth noting that under Westerosi law, even if it were proven that Laenor's children were bastards, Laena's children would still rightfully inherit Driftmark before Vaemond, but Vaemond promotes his own claim before theirs and still refuses to accept Lucerys as heir when Rhaenys announces that he and Jacaerys are to marry Baela and Rhaena, which would still carry on the Velaryon bloodline. Alternatively, is Vaemond a sexist who believes male heirs should always take precedence, and would be happy to allow Baela to inherit Driftmark if she was were a boy? The fact that he accuses Viserys of breaking the law by naming Rhaenyra his heir and publicly calls Rhaenyra a whore gives the impression that he doesn't have great respect for women or their inheritance rights.
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* Is Vaemond's obsession with disinheriting Lucerys really the righteous promotion of the true Velaryon bloodline, as he claims? Or does he just want Driftmark for himself? It's worth noting that under Westerosi law, even if it were proven that Laenor's children were bastards, Laena's children would still rightfully inherit Driftmark before Vaemond, but Vaemond promotes his own claim before theirs and still refuses to accept Lucerys as heir when Rhaenys announces that he and Jacaerys are to marry Baela and Rhaena, which would still carry on the Velaryon bloodline.
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* Is Vaemond's obsession with disinheriting Lucerys really the righteous promotion of the true Velaryon bloodline, as he claims? Or does he just want Driftmark for himself? It's worth noting that under Westerosi law, even if it were proven that Laenor's children were bastards, Laena's children would still rightfully inherit Driftmark before Vaemond, but Vaemond promotes his own claim before theirs and still refuses to accept Lucerys as heir when Rhaenys announces that he and Jacaerys are to marry Baela and Rhaena, which would still carry on the Velaryon bloodline. Alternatively, is Vaemond a sexist who believes male heirs should always take precedence, and would be happy to allow Baela to inherit Driftmark if she was a boy? The fact that he accuses Viserys of breaking the law by naming Rhaenyra his heir and publicly calls Rhaenyra a whore gives the impression that he doesn't have great respect for women or their inheritance rights.
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* Is Criston a tragic heartbroken figure who was used and tossed aside or a sad, pathetic man with a madonna-whore complex who can't take rejection?
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* Is Criston a tragic heartbroken figure who was used and tossed aside by a woman who didn't love him as much as he did her or a sad, pathetic man with a madonna-whore complex who develops a vendetta against an ex who never made him any promises, and her children, because he can't take rejection?
