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* ComedicSociopathy: Done quite a bit with Durga punishing people for [[DisproportionateRetribution mild offenses]]. Her first indication that [[GrownBeyondHerProgramming she's not just a basic combat AI]] is [[HumilationConga falsifying a relationship to destroy a rude IRS Agent's marriage, falsifying fake bribes to tank his reputation]], and then [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill sending in a SWAT team on him]] in the middle of his audit.
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* ComedicSociopathy: Done quite a bit with Durga punishing people for [[DisproportionateRetribution mild offenses]]. Her first indication that [[GrownBeyondHerProgramming [[GrewBeyondTheirProgramming she's not just a basic combat AI]] is [[HumilationConga [[HumiliationConga falsifying a relationship to destroy a rude IRS Agent's marriage, falsifying fake bribes to tank his reputation]], and then [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill sending in a SWAT team on him]] in the middle of his audit.
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%%* AsianAndNerdy: Hiroyuki.
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* ComedicSociopathy: Done quite a bit with Durga punishing people for [[DisproportionateRetribution mild offenses]]. Her first indication that [[GrownBeyondHerProgramming she's not just a basic combat AI]] is [[HumilationConga falsifying a relationship to destroy a rude IRS Agent's marriage, falsifying fake bribes to tank his reputation]], and then [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill sending in a SWAT team on him]] in the middle of his audit.
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%%* FeminineWomenCanCook:
%%** Sophia, as opposed to LethalChef Kamal.
%%** Gladys, in contrast to BloodKnight Gilly.
%%** Sophia, as opposed to LethalChef Kamal.
%%** Gladys, in contrast to BloodKnight Gilly.
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** Gladys, the retired vet who's the closest thing to a mom figure for Jan, in contrast to BloodKnight Gilly.
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* ChildProdigy: Yasmine is [[spoiler: chosen for the Sparta program due to this, but then washed out, then used to become Melissa.]]
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* ChildProdigy: At six years old, Yasmine is [[spoiler: chosen for the Sparta program due already knew several languages and was an expert at backgammon. [[spoiler:Even after dying from botched augmentations at age 14, she's brilliant enough to this, but then washed out, then have her brain be used to become create the Smart [=AI=] Melissa.]]
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%%* ChildProdigy: Yasmine.
%%* ChivalrousPervert: Jersey.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Thin does this to Jan.
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* TheIllegal: Sophia illegally immigrated to Earth.
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* TheIllegal: Sophia illegally immigrated to Earth. This is noted to be not unusual as the Covenant began glassing outer colonies, sending more and more war refugees trying to get into Earth, despite long waiting times. Kamal himself is sneeringly mistaken for one, [[{{Eurabia}} with plenty of subtext that not only is it based on real-life racism towards refugees from the then-current War on Terror, it's also heavily implied the jerks are plain old racists sneering at an Arab-descended Muslim for being a refugee.]]
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%%* AttemptedRape: Jan saves a random victim from Gene.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Thin Kinkle's ultimate revenge on Jan is [[spoiler:the Cupid's Knife, a machine that violently tortures a victim any time they feel anything but genuine love for their torturer, in a bid to make her "his".]]
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Renamed to Clone Angst, cutting non-examples, ZCEs, and no-context potholes.
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* CloningBlues: Yasmine was replaced by a flash clone, and her brother's research into the area (as part of a feasibility study for one of Aiden's crazy schemes) is how he ends up realizing the truth.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Thin does this to Jan.
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