Works fine for me.

Sherzo: Well, I'd like a few more 'yays' before I go through with it, lest it be immediately reverted back.

Yes, go right ahead. The opening block is annoying as hell to try to read.

Editing done. I'm sorry if what I wrote isn't exactly funny and I know there's some areas that could use some sprucing up, but TBH there isn't too much to this trope. I do think I've made it more readable, though. I left some of the swearing in the picture caption and the example Index (not the examples themselves, I never thought of editing those). If anyone wants to change that, they're welcome to it.