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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#73326: Dec 9th 2016 at 6:36:39 PM

Alrighty, so here's my writeup for Dishonored 2.

The Setting

Dishonored is set in a steampunk-type world, primarily in the nation of Dunwall ruled by the benevolent Empress Jessamine Kaldwin. Now, the city is undergoing a horrible plague that Jessamine is trying to combat...it turns out the plague was deliberately spread to kill the poor by her royal spymaster Hiram Burrows. To cover his tracks, Jessamine is murdered and her daughter kidnapped, Jessamine's royal protector (and lover) Corvo Attano is framed...rescued by loyalists who aim to depose Burrows, Corvo is rescued and recruited...and also gifted with supernatural powers by a mysterious, otherworldly being known as The Outsider who likes to...stir the pot every so often and grant interesting people powers just to see what they do with them.

Now, canonically, Corvo sames Jessamine's daughter Emily (his daughter as well), and restores her to the throne...15 years later? Emily is ruling best she can, when the Duke from the nation of Serkonos arrives and...introduces Emily to a woman claiming to be her aunt: Jessamine's illegitimate sister, the witch Delilah Copperspoon, who enacts a brutal coup and claims the throne for herself. Either Corvo or Emily escape while the other is frozen in stone, and begin to strive to depose Delilah and recover the Dunwall throne.

Who Is She?

Delilah Copperspoon, or Delilah Kaldwin. Illegitimate sister of Jessamine by the Emperor. As a little girl, Delilah was visited by her father frequently, but he refused to take her to court, constantly breaking his promises to her. However, Delilah found a friendship with her half-sister...until one day, Jessamine broke something expensive and blamed her for it. Delilah and her mother were thrown out into the streets. Before long, they entered a debtor's prison and Deilah's mother sickened and died. Delilah found odd jobs, eventually becoming a maid in a brothel where she took to painting on the side of the walls. She was discovered by a genius painter and inventor named Anton Sokolov who took her as an apprentice.

It was here Delilah delved into research of the Void and was granted powers of her own. Striving for more out of life, Delilah formed a coven of witches known as the Brigamore Witches, infiltrating the Dunwall underworld, plotting to take that which she felt had been denied her...

What's She Done?

Delilah first appears in the first Dishonored DLC, Knife of Dunwall and Brigamore Witches where you play as Empress Jessamine's murderer, Daud, who has grown to have horrible doubts about his actions for what it's done to the city. Delilah infiltrates the underworld, manipulating and destroying those in her way while having her witches torture others in horrific ways (one is implicitly forced to cannibalize his comrades).

Delilah also plans to steal Emily's body: tearing her soul out and replacing it with her own. However, Daud, in an act of heroism unknown to all but himself and Delilah, sabotaged her ritual, sending her into the void to drift forever. The fate she'd intended for her niece...

Except Delilah's willpower and cunning was second to none. She fought her way back from the Void, and several of her old allies, including her lover/second in the witches, Breanna Ashworth, performed a dark ritual to return her to the material world. To protect her own life, Delilah removed her own spirit and hid it away safely in the Duke of Serkonos' private vault...and set about to undermine her niece. One of their group was a kind doctor the Duke had tricked into testing an experimental serum on herself, giving rise to a monstrous split personality. Delilah directed her to begin murdering critics and enemies of Emily, leading to dark whispers that Emily was having them murdered.

Then Delilah attacked, slaughtering servants and maids in the castle, while turning many others to living stone, including Corvo/Emily depending on who you play as (for simplicity sake, I'm going to assume Emily is the PC). Delilah also has Anton Sokolov abducted and tortured by the group's inventor, Jindosh.

Emily steadily eliminates Delilah's allies and uncovers her plans. On return to Dunwall..it's become a blackened, burnt out horror. When the religious order, the Overseers stood against her, Delilah massacred them, and has executed tons of people, corpses strewn over the streets or hanging from nooses everywhere. Delilah then reveals her true scheme: to 'repaint' the world in a ritual that will create it anew and Mind Rape every living thing into worshiping her forever...Emily either kills her there, or in the nonlethal options, sabotages her ritual, trapping Delilah in an illusionary world where she lives out her fantasy forevermore, as an adored god-empress, as the world goes on without her.

Heinous by the standard of the story?

Oh, god yes. Delilah's body count is enormous. The only one who comes close is Lord Regent Hiram Burrows and his revolting 'kill the poor' plague...and the Outsider himself if you view the plague's...expansion beyond the poor as his private little joke. Neither counts, as the Lord Regent has one redeeming quality, and the Outsider is an alien being who is just as liable to help or harm. Delilah is obsessed with creating The World As It Should Be with her on top. The kingdoms of the earth are nothing but sacrifices to her for her whims. It's to the point where the Outsider, usually a disinterested, mocking figure is actively trying to screw Delilah over before she supplants him as even he's getting spooked by her.

So, yeah, pass here.

Redeeming Qualities and Freudian Excuse?

Now HERE'S the problem...now, the story goes out of its way to discuss that Delilah's backstory does not absolve or excuse her for her monstrosity. She and Emily are both illegitimate royal bastards who have fought for what they have, bt while Emily takes her lessons to mean that nobody has a right to rule because they were born to it, and that true rulership is service to the people, Delilah has developed a god-complex where she deserves to rule over people and receive their love whether they want to give it to her or not.

However, Delilah's backstory is awful. She was an innocent little girl blamed in a moment of weakness by a spoiled little brat for something and thrown into the streets even though her father could easily have provided for them. (Emily notes that for all the stories of her grandfather's nobility and service to his people, she's disgusted by his broken promises and callousness, and even by her mother's selfishness as a child), and had to endure her mother dying, scraping from the bottom in horrible conditions to become the evil witch she came. Now, it's telling Delilah's perfect world doesn't involve her mother coming back, but just being adored by everyone she rules over as slaves...but there are moments when her spirit comments icily that while Jessamine lies in the royal tomb, her mother's bones rot in an anonymous grave because Delilah couldn't afford a coffin. It's possible, and suggested that some of this is filtered through Delilah's completely unreliable narration and self-serving need for self-pity, but the Outsider implies that it's true and Jessamine's soul wonders if it's her fault Delilah became what she did. It's even the source of her name: Jessamine was born with the figurative silver spoon in her mouth. Delilah only ever had a copper one.

Furthermore, Delilah's interactions with Breanna and Luca Abele, the Duke of serkonos are...questionable. She's affectionate towards Breanna outwardly, along with Luca...however, when Breanna is disabled by being depowered, Delilah is angry you've removed Breanna because you took away something 'beautiful' from her and then coolly says she'll never speak to Breanna again because she's too pitiful as a shade of her former self. However, when you fight Delilah at the end, she snarls you'll "pay for what you did to breanna!" So, take that as you will. Furthermore, Breanna is the only witch who gets this since when she plans to steal Emily's body, Delilah sends her strongest witches after Daud...specifically so he'll kill them and she doesn't have to worry about them backstabbing her when she's in a ten year old's body.

Finally, her feelings to Jessamine are very complex. She loathes her sister on one hand, and shows no sympathy towards Jessamine's death. However, the Outsider crafted an item called The Heart and stuck Jessamine's soul inside it, which helps 'guide' the heroes. When Emily gets Delilah's spirit, Jessamine's own spirit is released. Delilah says later, in seeming sincerity, she's glad her sister has found peace in death.

Conclusion?

At the end, Delilah is a monster. A remorseless monster, who kills countless people all for a world where she can reign supreme. She's got a horrible entitlement complex, she's horrifically cruel and has the most grandiose plans in the setting.

But...at the end, Delilah had a horrific backstory, and she seems genuinely traumatized by it. Her awful upbringing has left her with a drive to never be helpless ever again, and a thirst for power. As bad as she is...she never really knew what it was like to be happy. It's worth noting Jessamine eventually became a wise, kind empress who loved her people, but Delilah wasn't really given the chance to better herself. She had a life of pain, misery and sadness, and for all her crimes, living out her fantasy harmlessly in her own world while the world itself moves on without her...might be what's best.

So, between this, and her ambiguous care for others, I think Delilah is ultimately too multi-dimensional and in the end, too tragic a villain to qualify here. Even at the end, it's said she could have genuinely bettered the world and the loss of potential is a tragic thing.

edited 9th Dec '16 6:42:01 PM by Lightysnake

VeryMelon Since: Jul, 2011 Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
#73327: Dec 9th 2016 at 6:42:30 PM

I never once thought Delilah would count. Good effort post though.

OccasionalExister Since: Jul, 2012
#73328: Dec 9th 2016 at 6:46:09 PM

I'd agree she doesn't count as she sounds too complex and tragic.

LordXavius Doesn't even like this username from many fandoms Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: Crazy Cat Lady
Doesn't even like this username
#73329: Dec 9th 2016 at 6:54:21 PM

Yeah, [tdown] for Delilah. Monstrous, but with too much depth to fully qualify. Very well-written character (in a very well-written game, I'd heartily recommend both Dishonoreds to anyone who thinks this all sounds interesting).

doineedaname from Eastern US Since: Nov, 2010
erazor0707 The Unknown Unknown from The Infinitude of Meh Since: Dec, 2014 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
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#73331: Dec 9th 2016 at 7:08:54 PM

[tdown] Delilah. She's an example of a three-dimensional, if heinous villain.

A cruel, sick joke is still a joke, and sometimes all you can do is laugh.
Scraggle Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#73332: Dec 9th 2016 at 7:14:39 PM

A no on Deliah... sort of a shame as she's real nasty.

Ferot_Dreadnaught Since: Mar, 2015
#73333: Dec 9th 2016 at 7:33:02 PM

Just to be clear on this, the reason Disney and Cartoon Network pages get Monster entries but not Nintendo is that D and CN groups their villains to an extent Nintendo doesn't? The only time and place Nintendo has grouped them that I know of is Smash Bros. How have D and CN's groupings been stronger?

Klavice Since: Jan, 2011
#73334: Dec 9th 2016 at 7:52:04 PM

Disney's an obvious one. All the stories share the same universe (confirmed by Kingdom Hearts) while CN I'm not sure about. Steven Universe definitely isn't in the same realm as Adventure Time or Regular Show. (Maybe the latter, but AT is way too bizarre to be in the same universe as SU) Then again, Nickelodeon has a page too iirc, and none of the stories share the same universe.

Also Nintendo seems kinda pointless now that I think about it. About 75% of the examples would be from Pokemon or Fire Emblem and both of those series already have a dedicated page.

Finally, I understand I can't just research a villain. I've tried getting examples by with just research and they didn't go so well. Guess someone else will have to do Final Fantasy XV after all. I'm still planning to do Breath of the Wild though.

edited 9th Dec '16 7:54:14 PM by Klavice

HamburgerTime Since: Apr, 2010
#73335: Dec 9th 2016 at 8:01:15 PM

No to Delilah. Backstory too sad.

Scraggle Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#73336: Dec 9th 2016 at 8:01:31 PM

Kingdom Hearts is not evidence all Disney stories are a conjoined universe. KH is an adaptation of sorts, not the actual flesh-and-blood material. Outside of some mutual cameos and some wild speculation, there's literally no canon evidence every Disney film is connected outside of the say of something like House of Mouse... even if they were all part of the same universe, without the use of a DC/Marvel-esque multiverse there'd be so many continuity and canon issues it would be absolutely nightmarish to sort through.

Beyond that, I think Disney and CN still having their own pages is more of a grandfather clause than anything else.

edited 9th Dec '16 8:03:57 PM by Scraggle

username2527 Since: Nov, 2013
#73337: Dec 9th 2016 at 8:03:42 PM

edited 9th Dec '16 9:15:16 PM by username2527

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#73338: Dec 9th 2016 at 8:09:21 PM

So what's the purpose of having CN and Disney if it's proven that they don't share universes? I initially thought it had something to do with there being a surplus of examples that were enough to warrant its own page. That idea was brought up when a page was considered for Nickelodeon. If I remember correctly, there were only 5 examples from Nick.

But other than that, I would lean towards the idea of being a grandfather clause.

edited 9th Dec '16 8:42:36 PM by AustinDR

LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#73339: Dec 9th 2016 at 8:59:00 PM

Has anyone else besides me played the Hong Kong expansion of Shadowrun Returns? We decided Dr. Holmes/The Emerald City Ripper from the first game didn't count due to heinous issues stemming from the tabletop game, but I believe the Big Bad from Hong Kong likely crosses over that line quite nicely.

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VeryMelon Since: Jul, 2011 Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
#73340: Dec 9th 2016 at 9:41:07 PM

Found this under Magi: Labyrinth of Magic.

[[Sinbad]] after reaching the Scared Palace and becoming God. [[Sinbad]]used the Ruhk to brainwash the entire world into peace. He now seeks to go higher and to do requires him to sacrifice the entire world. Made worse by the fact they're all happy to die for him.

I went ahead and deleted it.

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#73341: Dec 9th 2016 at 9:53:05 PM

Yeah, Sinbad doesn't count at all, as bad as he's gotten.

G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#73342: Dec 9th 2016 at 9:54:28 PM

Well [tdown] to Delilah

You know its kind of like comparing Lusamine. both are easily heinous individuals but have enough tragic factors to disqualify them

Karxrida The Unknown from Eureka, the Forbidden Land Since: May, 2012 Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
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#73343: Dec 9th 2016 at 10:11:04 PM

Kind of late, but might as well throw in my [tdown] for KH Frollo.

I wonder if putting the KH Disney villains on the "never again" list would be a good idea. I feel like they've come up a lot recently and have been repeatedly shot down.

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ANewMan A total has-been. Since: Apr, 2013 Relationship Status: Don't hug me; I'm scared
A total has-been.
#73345: Dec 9th 2016 at 10:29:42 PM

Did KH!Frollo come up? Personally I'd say he's still the most heinous Disney villain even in KH and might have been a keeper had Xehanort and his crimes not been such a huge presence that eclipsed him in that very game.

AmbarSonofDeshar Since: Jan, 2010
#73346: Dec 9th 2016 at 10:53:35 PM

Barring a massive departure from its usual style none of the Disney villains in KH will ever count.

Agree with a moratorium on Criminal Minds.

Easy "no" to Delilah; reminds me of Robert Quarles or Rau Le Creuset in that sense.

DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#73347: Dec 10th 2016 at 12:30:24 AM

[tdown] Delilah

My effortpost schedule has changed. Tomorrow I'll be watching Phenomena.

edited 10th Dec '16 1:23:02 AM by DemonDuckofDoom

MiraiYuji Since: Dec, 2015
#73348: Dec 10th 2016 at 3:40:05 AM

[tdown]Delilah. She really sounds like an interresting villain.

edited 10th Dec '16 3:40:27 AM by MiraiYuji

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#73349: Dec 10th 2016 at 4:41:54 AM

I too think Cartoon Network and Disney were grandfathered in (just like the subpages with only 5 entries), but damned if I'm gonna make the mods merge them with the main pages (ESPECIALLY the former) [lol]


Besides the MK group, here's what else is pending:

edited 10th Dec '16 4:44:49 AM by ACW

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#73350: Dec 10th 2016 at 5:01:29 AM

There was also Devour; Silverblade 2 needs to do the writeup on Satan.

edited 10th Dec '16 5:03:23 AM by AustinDR


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