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StFan Since: Jan, 2001
#1: Aug 23rd 2014 at 9:41:39 AM

Mmmmhh... no picture for this one, no trace there was ever one...

I just stumbled on a possible one from Blue Milk Special: [1]

I'm suggesting not the whole strip, but panels 2, 3 & 4, or maybe only 2 & 4.

What do you guys thinks?

Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
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#2: Aug 23rd 2014 at 10:47:51 AM

Nice suggestion. I think #2&4 works quite well. 3 adds some context, but I don't know if it's needed.

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AnotherDuck No, the other one. from Stockholm Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Mu
No, the other one.
#3: Aug 23rd 2014 at 11:11:42 AM

I kind of think it is needed, since there's a disturbance in the flow otherwise.

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Rethkir A Trusted Friend in Science and Ponies from the gap between dimensions Since: Mar, 2013
#4: Aug 23rd 2014 at 11:19:55 AM

Agreed with the duck, I am. 2, 3, & 4, out best option is.

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StFan Since: Jan, 2001
#5: Aug 24th 2014 at 4:08:09 PM

If we use 2, 3 and 4 as page image, how should we organize the panels?

The three side-by-side would be too large, so we have the option of 2 on top and 3-4 in a second row, or 2-3 on a top row and 4 centered below.

Personnally, I think panels 2-3 together on top would be best, as it suggest a "pause" before 4.

edited 24th Aug '14 4:09:54 PM by StFan

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#6: Aug 24th 2014 at 6:38:03 PM

+1 for all three...not sure about an arrangement right now.

Rethkir A Trusted Friend in Science and Ponies from the gap between dimensions Since: Mar, 2013
#7: Aug 24th 2014 at 8:46:12 PM

I figure we might as well have all 4 if we're gonna go vertical.

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#8: Aug 24th 2014 at 9:21:30 PM

[up] If that's the whole strip, we can't use it without permission.

m8e from Sweden Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
#9: Aug 24th 2014 at 9:27:55 PM

2 & 4 is enough. We shouldn't really use 75% of a strip either.

Rethkir A Trusted Friend in Science and Ponies from the gap between dimensions Since: Mar, 2013
#10: Aug 24th 2014 at 9:46:03 PM

I decided to get a little creative with the panel arrangement by merging part of 3 into 4.

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AnotherDuck No, the other one. from Stockholm Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Mu
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#11: Aug 25th 2014 at 12:13:34 AM

Actually quite good. Nothing to be done about the whitespace?

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Rethkir A Trusted Friend in Science and Ponies from the gap between dimensions Since: Mar, 2013
#12: Aug 25th 2014 at 5:11:39 AM

Here's a redo.

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doubleyouteeeff Political ends as sad remains will die from (Hudson) River running right on over my head Since: Dec, 2014 Relationship Status: Owner of a lonely heart
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#13: Aug 25th 2014 at 5:19:43 AM

An attempt to do something about the whitespace:

[nja]

edited 25th Aug '14 5:20:07 AM by doubleyouteeeff

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AnotherDuck No, the other one. from Stockholm Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Mu
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Rethkir A Trusted Friend in Science and Ponies from the gap between dimensions Since: Mar, 2013
#15: Aug 25th 2014 at 5:50:07 AM

Well, that's quite a conundrum. My redone version also fixes the border on the left. I cropped Obi-Wan's lower half. So,something combining the two would be best.

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AnotherDuck No, the other one. from Stockholm Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Mu
No, the other one.
#16: Aug 25th 2014 at 5:53:32 AM

As long as it doesn't become blurrier.

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Rethkir A Trusted Friend in Science and Ponies from the gap between dimensions Since: Mar, 2013
#18: Aug 25th 2014 at 5:19:46 PM

Fixed the borders and blurred the background transition between Obi Wan's frame and Yoda's

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AnotherDuck No, the other one. from Stockholm Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Mu
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#21: Aug 25th 2014 at 5:58:03 PM

That's a good compromise [tup]

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Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
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#22: Aug 25th 2014 at 6:02:32 PM

You guys are good. You're beyond good. That last version is magnificent!

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Willbyr Hi (Y2K) Relationship Status: With my statistically significant other
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#24: Aug 26th 2014 at 6:45:59 AM

The last version is great; I've gone ahead and put it up. Caption or no?

Also, should we move the page quote to the example and find something else, or leave it be?

Telcontar In uffish thought from England Since: Feb, 2012
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#25: Aug 28th 2014 at 1:57:41 AM

Since they are about the same thing but they don't work together like a few images/quotes do, I'm for changing the quote. The Teen Wolf one in the example section is great.

Caption or no caption is fine with me.

That was the amazing part. Things just keep going.

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